There is a saying in Song Qi's "Jade House Spring, Better Spring in Dongcheng" in Song Dynasty: "Man Chun, the branch of red apricot". Later critics admired the word "Noisy". Liu Tiren's "Seven Annotations on the Class" said: "The branches of red apricots are noisy in spring, and the word" Noisy "is unparalleled throughout the ages." Because the word "Noisy" vividly expresses the vivid scenery of spring, evokes readers' infinite reverie, that is, what is the meaning of spring with red apricot branches, and finally makes people think of the full meaning of spring from a small perspective. Thereby highlighting the realm of the whole word. Therefore, in modern times, Wang Guowei commented on this word in "The Thorn on Earth": "There is a word' noisy', and the realm is all out."
There is a saying in Zhang Xian's "Fairy": "Clouds break through the moon."
The word "Nong" came out completely, and the author Zhang Xian grasped the word "Nong" to emphasize its role in creating artistic conception, thus making the whole sentence vivid, lively and fresh, melting feelings into it and personifying the scenery, thus creating an aesthetic realm with ambiguous artistic conception and blending scenes. It has reached the highest level of word refinement, that is, "warning with one word can make the whole sentence strange" and "doing it in one word can make the realm come out".
In the Tang Dynasty, Ren Fan spent the night at Jinzifeng Temple in Taizhou, and wrote a poem on the temple wall, "The new autumn is extremely cool, and the crane turns to truffle and falls off its clothes. The front peak reflects a river, and the monk opens a green bamboo building. " After walking dozens of miles, he felt that "half a river" was more appropriate and realistic than "one river". I hurried back to the temple to revise it, but when I got there, I found that someone had changed the word "one" to "half".
The story of "4 scrutiny" has a long history. Once, the poet Jia Dao rode a lame donkey to visit his friend Li Yu. He searched for poems along the way and finally got two sentences: "Birds live in trees by the pool, and monks knock at the door on the moon." After reciting it several times, he tried to change "push" to "knock". He hesitated, so he deliberately made a gesture on the donkey's back, which caused people on the road to laugh and be surprised. Just when he was fascinated, the lame donkey ran into Han Yu's car, then the chief executive of Chang 'an. After learning this story, Han Yu not only failed to cure his sin, but also thought with him. Finally, he thinks the word "knock" is better. Later generations used the metaphor of deliberation to repeatedly consider words and phrases and ponder over them.
The third one is shorter-it can be used.