At noon, there are no clouds in Wan Li, the weather is sultry, the trees are listlessly rolling their leaves, and the birds are taking a nap in the trees. But the children jumped into the cool stream one by one, and there was a "water fight". "Bang, bang" splash with laughter, watching them play so fiercely, as if in a real battlefield! The joy of children's play also melted into the air, adding a little fun to the sultry noon.
A wisp of light smoke floated lightly from the chimney, and the dusk was not as sultry as noon, but slightly warm in the refreshing wind. Looking up at the sky, I saw the red sunset glow dyed most of the sky red. It's beautiful: look! A fierce tiger is chasing a rabbit, when a good horse appears, running on the boundless grassland ... The colors of the sky are also changing: crimson and orange ... as if it were the wonderful magic of the magic master, it is dizzying.
The sun left the sky reluctantly. The beautiful moon scatters a piece of Yin Hui on the earth, and the gentle moonlight is as calm as water and sprinkled on people's faces. The beautiful sky is like a blue carpet inlaid with countless shiny "little diamonds". The twinkle of the little star's eyes is so cute that people will soon be in a sweet dream. ...
The scenery in the countryside is like a painting, moving and freehand, so beautiful that people want to stay!
2. Imitate the composition of the wheat spoon, woo, woo, woo ... "
In the field, what sounds and children's nasal sounds pass over the thick green wheat leaves? A cry, a response, high and low, so cheerful, so soft.
By the lake, there are children mowing grass everywhere. A white bamboo shirt with a cool hat and colorful headscarves. That red face, covered with a layer of crystal fine sweat, like a rose covered with dew.
A few days ago, the fields were light yellow and green, and the buds were just beginning to bloom. In a blink of an eye, there are thick shade trees everywhere. The golden rape flowers withered and produced many tender pods; Black-and-white beancurd withered and grew a small finger-like pod; The snow-white radish faded and produced bitter fleabane seeds. The wheat field has changed into a dazzling light yellow new dress. Each straw holds a full ear of wheat, and the evenly brushed ear of wheat is like a line on the score, and a ear of wheat is a beating note.
The grass by the lake is fat and tender. As long as you pull it with your hand, the bamboo basket will soon be full. Boys ran to the grass slope, somersaults, vertical dragonflies and wrestling competitions. The grass is soft and elastic, and stronger than the mats in the city gymnasium. It's a natural playground!
Tired of playing and thirsty, I don't know who called, so everyone gathered in "Mao Mao Town". It is a kind of grass similar to thatch. The top of the grass is covered with green leaves and looks bulging. Peel off the leaves, gently pull out the ears and stems, put the stems in your mouth to chew and suck, and a sweet and cool taste will soon seep out from the tip of your tongue!
"Blare, blare, blare ..."
Who blew the cheerful and soft wheat whistle again? Suddenly, it rang everywhere, and you called me, one after another. The cheerful whistle came from far away in the southeast wind that set off the wheat wave ...
3. Imitate Mai Shao's 300 composition "Woo-hoo-hoo ..."
In the field, what sounds and children's nasal sounds pass over the thick green wheat leaves? A cry, a response, high and low, so cheerful, so soft.
By the lake, there are children mowing grass everywhere. A white bamboo shirt with a cool hat and colorful headscarves. That red face, covered with a layer of crystal fine sweat, like a rose covered with dew.
A few days ago, the fields were light yellow and green, and the buds were just beginning to bloom. In a blink of an eye, there are thick shade trees everywhere. The golden rape flowers withered and produced many tender pods; Black-and-white beancurd withered and grew a small finger-like pod; The snow-white radish faded and produced bitter fleabane seeds. The wheat field has changed into a dazzling light yellow new dress. Each straw holds a full ear of wheat, and the evenly brushed awn of wheat is like a line on the score, and a ear of wheat is a beating note.
The grass by the lake is fat and tender. As long as you pull it with your hand, the bamboo basket will soon be full. Boys ran to the grass slope, somersaults, vertical dragonflies and wrestling competitions. The grass is soft and elastic, and stronger than the mats in the city gymnasium. It's a natural playground!
Tired of playing and thirsty, I don't know who called, so everyone gathered in "Mao Mao Town". It is a kind of grass similar to thatch. The top of the grass is covered with green leaves and looks bulging. Peel off the leaves, gently pull out the ears and stems, put the stems in your mouth to chew and suck, and a sweet and cool taste will soon seep out from the tip of your tongue!
"Blare, blare, blare ..."
Who blew the cheerful and soft wheat whistle again? Suddenly, it rang everywhere, and you called me, one after another. The cheerful whistle came from far away in the southeast wind that set off the wheat wave ...
4. Imitate Mai Shao's composition of about 250 words. Parrots like to stop on trees, and a pair of small meat claws hold the branches tightly. Its color is very bright. The feathers on its head are like yellow headscarves embroidered with gray patterns. The feathers on its back are like light green coats, and the feathers on its abdomen are like golden shirts. It is small and exquisite, with a curved and sharp mouth under a pair of bright and flexible eyes. Parrots are loud and clingy. It stopped gently on the branch again. It stared at the fruit on the tree motionless, ready to bite open the seed coat with a pliers-like mouth. The parrot found the target, flew like an arrow, grabbed the seed, landed on the branch, gently bit open the seed shell with a pliers-like mouth, threw it aside and ate it with relish. Only the leaves are still shaking. I really want to catch a parrot. Grandpa looked at me and said, "I really want to catch a parrot." Sometimes you may hurt our lovely parrot because of your love. Do you think the parrot should be domesticated or released and let it live happily? "Listen to grandpa, my face is a little red, I gave up the idea. Whenever the parrot comes, I look at it from a distance, hoping it can stop on the branch for a while.
5. Imitate Mai Shao's 300 composition "Woo-woo, Woo-woo, Woo-woo ..." What sounds and children's nasal sounds pass over the thick green wheat leaves in the field? A cry, a response, high and low, so cheerful, so soft.
By the lake, there are children mowing grass everywhere. A white bamboo shirt with a cool hat and colorful headscarves.
That red face, covered with a layer of crystal fine sweat, like a rose covered with dew. A few days ago, the fields were light yellow and green, and the buds were just beginning to bloom.
In a blink of an eye, there are thick shade trees everywhere. The golden rape flowers withered and produced many tender pods; Black-and-white beancurd withered and grew a small finger-like pod; The snow-white radish faded and produced bitter fleabane seeds.
The wheat field has changed into a dazzling light yellow new dress. Each straw holds a full ear of wheat, and the evenly brushed awn of wheat is like a line on the score, and a ear of wheat is a beating note.
The grass by the lake is fat and tender. As long as you pull it with your hand, the bamboo basket will soon be full. Boys ran to the grass slope, somersaults, vertical dragonflies and wrestling competitions.
The grass is soft and elastic, and stronger than the mats in the city gymnasium. It's a natural playground! Tired of playing and thirsty, I don't know who called, so everyone gathered in "Mao Mao Town". It is a kind of grass similar to thatch. The top of the grass is covered with green leaves and looks bulging.
Peel off the leaves, gently pull out the ears and stems, put the stems in your mouth to chew and suck, and a sweet and cool taste will soon seep out from the tip of your tongue! "Hush, hush, hush ..." Who blew the cheerful and soft wheat whistle again? Suddenly, it rang everywhere, and you called me, one after another. The cheerful whistle came from far away in the southeast wind that set off the wheat waves.
6. Imitate a text of Mai Shao and write a 450-word composition. In my memory of growing up, there are unforgettable, happy and happy ... I remember most clearly the day of my eleventh birthday. I was so happy that day.
On my birthday, I got up early, put on new clothes and shoes, and skipped to school. Along the way, birds were chirping in the branches. They seem to say to me, "Happy birthday to you!" "
When I arrived at school, my deskmate Xiaohong gave me a prepared birthday present and said to me, "Happy birthday, Shi. This is my birthday present for you. " I accepted the gift with a smile and said to Xiaohong, "Thank you for the gift." When other students saw it, they all sent gifts to me and said, "Happy birthday!" " I will also be happy to say "thank you!" "Give them. .
Finally, after school, I took my classmates home. Mother took out the cake that had been prepared. The students laughed happily while singing birthday songs for me, and I also made my eleventh birthday wish in their blessings. ...
"Hoo!" After I blew out the candles, I began to cut the cake, and then I handed it to my classmates. "ah!" Xiao Ming put cream on my face when I was not paying attention, and I was not to be outdone. I put cream on his face ... "Ha ha ha ..." The birthday party ended in our laughter. Although Naxi's birthday has passed for a long time, the happiness of birthday has long been in my heart.
7. How to write "Mai Shao" (eight kinds of people's education edition) is a skimming.
The author describes the scene of harvest in the rural fields in midsummer, and the scene of children playing happily in it. The full text is full of rich life interest. The text takes the sound of the wheat whistle as a clue, and begins with a question, "'Boo-Boo-Boo-Boo-Boo-Boo-Boo-Boo ... What sound and the child's nasal sound pass over the thick green wheat leaves in the field? A shout, a response, high and low, so cheerful, so soft. "
Then I pointed out that the children were mowing the grass by the lake, and then focused on the natural environment where the children lived and their games in this natural casino. Finally, I ended up with a cheerful and soft wheat whistle again. "Who blew the cheerful and soft wheat whistle again? Suddenly, it rang everywhere, and you called me, one after another. The cheerful whistle travels far and far in the southeast wind that set off the wheat waves ... "The full text echoes from beginning to end, with smooth writing and long rhyme, suggesting that children's childhood life is also like the sound of a wheat flute, cheerful, soft, long and long.
The language in this paper is vivid and beautiful, and the metaphor and personification are vividly used. After careful reading, there are both artistic conception of painting and rhythm of music. 1. Appreciation in reading is appreciation, that is, seeing something because you like it and then explaining it.
Appreciation in reading a text is taste, and this taste has two meanings: one is willing to participate and actively participate. Not boring knowledge point analysis under the teacher's traction; Secondly, the reward is for analysis.
After reading the text repeatedly, you can appreciate the characteristics, methods and beautiful words of writing. Appreciation in reading articles makes Chinese learning interesting, and learning article writing methods can improve Chinese literacy in an all-round way. For example, in the third paragraph of Mai Shao, "that red face is covered with a layer of crystal sweat, just like the Chinese rose is covered with dew."
Comparing the children's red faces with a layer of crystal sweat to the Chinese rose covered with dew, it not only writes the children's cuteness, but also is very appropriate. Even the glittering and translucent sweat covered is counted, and it becomes "dewdrop coverage". The appreciation of this sentence can be as follows: Teacher: Please read this sentence and see what rhetorical methods are used. When students say a metaphor, ask and guide them to say that they compare their faces to Chinese roses. In this process, students can also analyze, but such analysis is by no means appreciation, because this process is only boring analysis, without the participation of joy, experience and emotion.
Class 2: Combine imagination and context to guide students to experience Chinese rose flowers. Read the text for the first time-Teacher: What do you think of Chinese rose? Name the students to answer.
Student: Beautiful, beautiful, colorful ... (At this time, students are just dealing with the teacher's problem) Teacher: You haven't seen the dewy rose carefully, have you? I'll see who looks at it most carefully (showing pictures of all kinds of Chinese roses). Have you seen it? What kind of roses? Student 1: exquisite rose, * * * rose. Student 2: Colorful Chinese roses.
Student 3: Colorful and charming Chinese rose. Student 4: Colorful, colorful roses.
Teacher: If you don't compare it like this, how can you compare it? Show the sentence pattern: there is a layer of crystal fine sweat hanging on that red face, as if. Health: ripe apples, roses, peppers ... Teacher: If you are a child, what kind of description do you like and why? Because of the foreshadowing, the students get vivid images of metaphors in the text through comparison.
On this basis, let the students find the rest of the figurative sentences in the text and consolidate how to use figurative methods in self-reading and self-seeking communication. In this clip, the teacher's role is to create an atmosphere, such as the presentation of Chinese rose pictures; There are methods to guide, such as letting students learn to connect with context and imagination; There are opportunities to create, such as giving students other metaphors to consolidate their cognition.
Second, the accumulation in reading refers to gathering and accumulation, which increases the quantity. Accumulate knowledge of guiding words, sentences, paragraphs and articles in reading and try to use them.
If appreciation in reading a text is an extension of intensive reading methods, and sometimes teachers' guidance is needed, then reading a text depends on students' own efforts and innovation to accumulate more. For example, after reading the fourth paragraph of the text, I focused on the sentence "golden rape flowers have withered and produced dense tender pods;" Black-and-white beancurd withered and grew a small finger-like pod; The snow-white radish flower has withered and produced a fluffy seed. "
After realizing the harvest, joy, joy and pride to be expressed in parallelism, let the students imagine what other harvest scenes will be. Can you follow the trend? After thinking, the students have a wonderful sequel: Health 6: Pink peach blossom has withered, pink peach green; Health 7: the pink cherry blossoms have withered and produced delicate red cherries; Health 8: Magnolia withers, leaving a green leaf full of vitality; Health 9: The watermelon on the ground bloomed and produced a big and red watermelon; ..... In such classroom reading, students are not only imitating the text form, but also accumulating. Accumulated personal experience, accumulated such a wonderful description, and built a bridge from writing to writing.
Third, practicing writing in reading. The new "Chinese Curriculum Standard for Primary Schools" reduces the difficulty of primary school students' writing: the first and second grades are called writing; Grades three to six are called exercises. Whether writing words or writing exercises, it shows that primary school composition is just practicing words.
There are many forms of practicing writing, such as copying words, trying fragments, filling gaps and enriching articles. What form of writing exercises should be adopted should be determined according to the characteristics of the text, the students' situation and the characteristics of grades and units.
"Mai Shao" has a beautiful form and echoes from beginning to end; The words are more beautiful, and rhetorical devices such as metaphor, parallelism and personification are properly used to create a beautiful atmosphere; Use onomatopoeic words at the beginning, fascinating and so on. It is difficult for students to learn so many writing methods at once. First of all, they can learn neat ways to write beautiful words and phrases about the countryside, such as "shout and answer", "cheerful and soft", "tired of playing and thirsty", "chewing and sucking" and "hush and hush", which are symmetrical and full of rhythm.
Some students wrote: "We dig bamboo shoots in a small bamboo forest, more than anyone else;" We're on the dirt road again.
8. In Class 24, Grade 4, Mai Shao imitated writing, and Confucius saw that "it is a pleasure to have friends from afar"; Mr. Wu Liu loves reading, "I am so happy that I forget to eat every time I know"; Drunk drunks don't care about wine, they care about mountains and rivers. Therefore, Mr. Qian Zhongshu put forward that "all happiness belongs to the spirit", which is regarded as the truth by the world, but when you think about it carefully, you feel that spiritual satisfaction is also flawed, and sometimes it even seems pale and powerless.
It is often seen that musicians who bring happiness are suffering in life. Hard-working scientists occasionally see their gray-haired selves in the mirror after their success, and new China often passes a trace of sadness. I often hear model workers say in an interview that although I work hard, I am psychologically happy! It is true that they all show amazing perseverance and noble quality when they take pleasure in suffering and change their endurance into enjoyment, but at the same time, it is not difficult to see that their happiness contains the consciousness of "self-denial".
9. Imitate Lesson 24 of Grade Four. Write a composition with Mai Shao. What is an interesting childhood? It is a cicada in the tree, a frog in the water, a short song of a shepherd's flute, and a companion's mystery. ...................... In short, childhood is carefree and happy.
Whenever I vividly recall the interesting stories of my childhood, my face always glows with ruddy luster. After all, the past is like the sound of flowing water in my heart. Once the generation was so eloquent that it was easy for ...................................................................................................................................................... to go up. As soon as grandma entered the room after feeding the pigs, I went to the pigsty, opened the door, went in and chose a pig to ride out. Grandma saw it and ran out to call me. I saw grandma and tried to stop those pigs, but I couldn't.
The pig ran into grandma's garden. The cucumbers and persimmons in it were trampled by pigs, and I was scratched by branches of fruit trees. This time, grandma caught the pig. After driving the pig into the nest, grandma said I was too naughty to even ride the pig. Another time was when I was seven years old. I just learned to ride a bike.
I was not very good at riding at that time. My mother and I rode bicycles to the square to play, where there was a lot of space. I got there by bike, riding faster and faster, and suddenly I saw an adult riding a bike in front of me. I couldn't stop because I rode too fast. I was about to hit it when my mother called me. I thought to myself, "I'll get hurt if I hit it, and I'm not good at riding." What if I tumble? " I don't know what to do.
Then I suddenly remembered: "It must be okay to jump out of the car." I jumped out of the car. I wasn't hurt, but my car was hit by that man. Whenever I recall these things, I always giggle, so sweet and so brilliant.
It seems that all fascinating memories are vividly reproduced. I continue to recall those poetic years and dreamy seasons when I was young. I think childhood is a tree without rings. It will never grow old and will never disappear. I was very naughty when I was a child. Let me tell you an interesting story about my childhood.
I remember one time I went home and saw my father sleeping in bed, so a "bad" idea suddenly came to my little head, that is, drawing "Facebook", not on paper, but on my father's face. I first found out the paint, pen and water, and then I carefully drew a big "king" on my father's forehead, and then I used khaki. This is a majestic tiger. After painting, I was happy for my "masterpiece" and felt sorry for my father's face being painted like this, because it was a pity that my father's beautiful face was painted like this. Just as I was looking at my "masterpiece" happily, my father suddenly woke up and looked at him blankly. I burst out laughing. Father looked at me inexplicably. Seeing the watercolor paint and water all over the floor and looking at my malicious smile, my father rushed to the bathroom to look in the mirror. When he found his face painted by me, he ran away without watercolor paint on his face. But I still remember.
Look! How naughty I was when I was a child! It's interesting to think of it until now! Childhood fun childhood dreams, colorful dreams; Childhood songs, happy songs; A string of childhood footprints; Childhood stories piled up like mountains. "Does this song remind you of your wonderful childhood? In those colorful years, many things happened, not as brilliant as the stars.
My childhood was wonderful, and there were many things worth remembering ... My aunt kept two chickens in her class as long as I can remember. I go to see the chickens in her class as soon as I have time. I don't know how long it took. After a long time, the hen laid eggs and the chicks were going to hatch inside. 265,438+0 days later, I heard a cock crow. Seeing this situation, I heard this voice. I feel sorry for the chicken. Help the chicken when neither the hen nor the rooster is at home.
The opportunity finally came ... that day, the hen went to find food for the chicken, and the naughty rooster was not at home and ran out to play. Take advantage of aunt's inattention, pick up an egg, hold it in your hand and gently touch it. She said solemnly, "Don't be afraid of chickens, you will come to the world soon."
After that, I never hesitated. I peeled an egg, and a chicken with no eyes was born before the heat disappeared. It looked at me and cried twice, as if to say, "Thank you for letting me come to this world as soon as possible." I was so happy that I peeled the second one, too When I peeled off the fourth one, the hen came back. When she saw me bullying the little snake, she bit me, and suddenly her blood flowed. I went to my aunt in tears. My aunt didn't say anything about me, but said sadly, "Little fool, the chicken won't be born until a certain time!" " If you send them like this, you will die. "
After listening to this, I hurried to see the chicken. Sure enough, all the chickens I "delivered" were dying, and all those who didn't "delivered" survived. I regret it very much, but it's too late ... Although it's been a long time and I'm still young and ignorant there, it's always pushing me forward, never back down.
Funny things about childhood Talking about my funny things, there are almost as many stars in the sky, including joys and sorrows, laughter and tears. Let's listen to my laughter.
That day, I went to celebrate my friend's birthday. Just after my birthday, my friend called us together and announced, "In order to make my birthday happy and all my friends have fun, let's play hide-and-seek to add some birthday atmosphere." "Oh yeah" I danced with joy.
The game started, and I couldn't find a safe place to hide. I just heard my friends counting: "9 1 92." I was about to count to one hundred, so I panicked and hid under the bed.
The creaking door opened and walked in front of me. My heart tightened and my feet left. After a long time, I heard.