Appreciation of the Text Guilin Landscape 1 Guilin Landscape vividly depicts a landscape painting with strange scenery and gorgeous colors with rich and varied expressions, and expresses love and praise for the magnificent rivers and mountains of the motherland.
First, a variety of techniques to draw beautiful scenery.
1。 Quote the opening, cleverly set the suspense. At the beginning, I quoted a famous sentence by Jin Wuyang, a poet in Qing Dynasty, which not only clarified the theme, but also explained the reasons for boating on Lijiang River and enjoying Guilin's landscape. Guilin is a world-famous and fascinating tourist destination, which makes readers feel suspense: what is the unique landscape of Guilin? Why do people have the reputation of being the best in the world?
2。 Comparative introduction and side comparison. When describing the beautiful scenery of Guilin, the author did not directly describe the landscape at the beginning, but adopted a relatively introduced expression technique to compare the uniqueness of the landscape from the side. You see, the magnificent sea is used to set off the calm of the Lijiang River, and compared with the mirror-like West Lake, the Lijiang River has a clear and green feature. The water in Lijiang River is really charming! Similarly, the mountains in Guilin are not as tall and majestic as Mount Tai, but are full of strange peaks and rocks, showing the characteristics of strange dangers; Not as red as Xiangshan, but bright and colorful, reflected in the water.
3。 Metaphor parallelism, frontal portrayal. In the main part, the author skillfully combines his own knowledge and association, and combines vivid metaphor with rigorous and smooth parallelism to give a positive description of Guilin landscape. Look, the green of Lijiang River is like a flawless jade. The wonders of Guilin Mountain-like an old man, like a giant elephant, like a camel; The beauty of Guilin Mountain-like a green barrier, like new shoots and so on. The author skillfully uses metaphors to vividly reproduce the various shapes and bright colors of Guilin Mountain, showing the static beauty of the mountain, giving people the feeling of seeing its shape and being there. You see, the water in Lijiang River is so quiet, so clear and so green. The mountains in Guilin are really strange, the mountains in Guilin are really beautiful and the mountains in Guilin are really dangerous. The main part adopts these two sets of parallelism, which vividly depicts the quiet and green Lijiang River and the beautiful and steep Shan Qi in Guilin, draws a wonderful picture with strange scenery and colorful colors, and writes a catchy and touching poem. A real word expresses admiration for the beautiful scenery, and a rigorous sentence pattern strengthens the intensity of expressing feelings.
4。 Care from beginning to end, seamless. At the end of the article, the mountains and the water complement each other, the air is misty, the mountains are covered with green trees and red flowers, and the river is dotted with bamboo rafts and boats, just like a wonderful landscape painting. Finally, people end their trip in a picture world with a poem, which not only summarizes the whole text, but also echoes the first paragraph, making the article seamlessly connected and giving people beautiful enjoyment.
Second, praise Guilin with true feelings.
1。 Describe the scenery and express admiration. Look, the mountains in Guilin are really strange. They rose one after another, unconnected with each other, like old people, like giant elephants, like camels, and the peaks were listed in various ways. The mountains in Guilin are really beautiful, like green barriers, like new bamboo shoots, brightly colored and reflected in the water; The mountains in Guilin are really dangerous. The dangerous peaks stand tall and the rocks are rugged, as if they would fall down carelessly. The author skillfully uses several rhetorical devices, such as metaphor, exaggeration and parallelism, to vividly depict the characteristics of Shan Qi, beauty and danger in Guilin, giving people a feeling of being explosive at the sight of its shape, and between the lines is heartfelt admiration.
2。 Interspersed with discussion, full of praise. Before describing the water of Lijiang River, the author said: I have seen the magnificent sea and enjoyed the mirror-like West Lake, but I have never seen such water as Lijiang River. This argument, with the magnificent sea and the mirror-like West Lake, shows that although these beautiful scenery are beautiful, they can't compare with the water of Lijiang River, showing how charming the water of Lijiang River is, which contains deep admiration.
3。 Quote from beginning to end to express praise. Quoting Guilin's landscape as the best in the world to praise, an "A" word describes the position of Guilin's beautiful scenery in the hearts of the world. The wonders of Guilin's landscape are the best in the world. The second volume of the first day of junior high school captured the reader's heart and made people yearn for and admire it. It's really a word, and it suddenly shines at the moment! Finally, I quoted the poem "Sailing on the Blue Waves", which summarized people's feelings after traveling in a world of pictorial and seeing Guilin's landscape. This is a wonderful finishing touch, full of the author's incomparable love and praise for the beautiful rivers and mountains of the motherland.
Text appreciation of Guilin Landscape 2 1, Guilin landscape is the best in the world.
First of all. The beauty of Guilin's landscape ranks first in the world. This is a poem that all poets in Qing Dynasty praised Guilin's landscape, which has been circulated for more than one hundred years. Here, the author borrows a well-known saying and always writes a note, deeply praising the unparalleled beauty of Guilin's landscape.
The water in Lijiang River is so quiet that you can't feel it flowing. The water in Lijiang River is very clear, and you can see the sand and stones at the bottom of the river. The water in Lijiang River is so green, as if it were a flawless jade.
This is a parallelism sentence with two semicolons in the middle. Divide this long sentence into three clauses, each clause expresses a feature, and the second half of each clause explains the contents of the first half concretely and vividly. "True" means true. "It's really quiet", "It's really clear" and "It's really green" express admiration for the quietness, clearness and greenness of the Lijiang River: "It's so quiet that you can't feel it flowing", "It's so clear that you can see the sand at the bottom of the river" and "It's like an flawless emerald", thus describing the quietness, clearness and greenness of the Lijiang River in detail.
The mountains in Guilin are really strange. They rise from the ground and are not connected with each other, like old people, like giant elephants, like camels, and the peaks are listed in various ways. The mountains in Guilin are really beautiful, like green barriers, like new bamboo shoots, brightly colored and reflected in the water; The mountains in Guilin are really dangerous. The dangerous peaks stand tall and the rocks are rugged. It seems that if you are not careful, you will fall.
This is a long sentence with two semicolons in the middle, which tells the three characteristics of Guilin Mountain: strangeness, beauty and danger. Its "strange" performance in two aspects:
First, "one after another, not connected with each other." Generally, the mountains are gradually rising from the ground and continuous, but the mountains in Guilin are not connected and all rise from the ground.
Second, "Qifeng lists many forms". The "show" of Guilin Mountain is characterized by beautiful mountains and clear waters and bright colors. Because Guilin is humid and warm with lush vegetation, the mountains are particularly green. The "danger" of Guilin Mountain is manifested in "dangerous peaks stand tall" and "rugged rocks". These towering peaks and overlapping rocks "seem to fall down carelessly", which highlights the "danger" of Guilin Mountain through people's feelings.
Sailing on the blue waves, people are traveling in a picture world.
The boat is sailing on the green river, and the people in the picture seem to be playing and watching.