100: 00, I beg you to help me change my poem, online and so on! ! Due in the afternoon

Hehe, this is a modern poem that rhymes. Not bad. I'll try not to change your rhyme. I hope you can be satisfied, and the most important thing is the teacher's satisfaction. I wish you progress in your study!

Dream sky

hazy sky

I have endless dreams.

My persistent struggle

Just for the yearning for blue.

Withered chrysanthemum

Desolate sadness

A rushing river

Looking for fragrant rice in childhood.

Lovely snail

With unremitting strength.

Stubborn me

Stick to your dream

I have a dream.

Embrace your own heaven.

There is no breath of genius.

Can't see the sight of luxury

have only

I am struggling to soar.

for dream

I am persistent and crazy.

Just for yourself.

The paradise I yearn for in my heart

for dream

I forgot my sadness.

Just for yourself.

Once stranded sunshine

for dream

I grew up like crazy.

Just for yourself.

Looking forward to glory

way of life

We should rely on incentives to help.

Excitation direction

We must rely on knowledge to carry forward.

Lack of knowledge

You have to work hard to brew.

The confusion of efforts

Look at the power of my dreams

for dream

I am persistent and crazy.

for dream

I forgot my sadness.

for dream

I grew up like crazy.

Just for yourself.

Looking forward to glory

hazy sky

I have endless dreams.

My persistent struggle

Just for the yearning for blue.