Keywords: 200 words in the first grade of Shigui Primary School
Word count: 200 words composition
This article applies to: the first grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This composition is about 200 words in grade one of primary school. The title is "Little Turtle (Grade Four)". Everyone is welcome to contribute.
small tortoise
Eat small fish
You can't catch it.
small tortoise
Find a way.
Drive the fish to the corner of the turtle tank
small tortoise
Really capable
After a while, the kung fu fish will be eaten up.
small tortoise
Like you
You are my good partner.
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The leaf green label is very distinctive in structure, and each paragraph begins with "Little Turtle", which is very suitable for reading. From the form of expression, it can reflect the rhythm of poetry.
Insufficient: The last paragraph is a bit abrupt? From the description of turtles eating fish in the last article to the final "You are my good partner", there is no exact causal relationship.
Tip: You can think about the fact that turtles eat fish. What inspiration can you give yourself?
It should not be difficult to improve the last paragraph accordingly. Come on!