How to test the composition? What should we pay attention to when correcting each other's compositions? brief and to the point

This is one of the most commonly used skills in topic examination. This method requires that every word in the title, the meaning of every word and the relationship between them should be carefully scrutinized and analyzed, and then integrated to grasp the theme of the article as a whole. ?

Each word in the title has its own specific meaning in a specific language environment. Therefore, when reviewing questions, we must make clear the specific meaning of this word and its relationship with other words. For example, the topic of "father" is to write about a contemporary of his father, and his father is not a person, but represents a group of people. If you don't know the meaning of the word father, then the composition is beside the point. Another example is the object of the sentence "A new thing happened in my class recently", which tells us that the composition is about a "thing". What kind of thing is it? It is not an ordinary trivial matter, nor an ordinary good thing, but a "fresh" thing. This new thing is not much, it is "one thing", and it didn't happen in the past, it happened "recently". At the same time, "my classroom" limits the space where things happen. When doing this topic, ignoring any word is easy to cause irrelevant words, so the examination of the topic should be comprehensively analyzed.

2. Methods of catching eyeballs

There are "literary eyes" in the text, "poetic eyes" in the poem and "inscriptions" in the title. The so-called "eye gaze" is the key to the composition topic. When examining the questions, I grasped the core and key points of the questions. In most cases, titles are often used as attributes or adverbials in titles, such as "our new monitor" and "new", but sometimes there are headwords as titles, such as "Mom smiled", in which "smile" is the title. When writing, you should capture the title according to the specific language environment.

3. Meaning extension method.

The words in some composition topics have some symbolic meanings besides superficial meanings. We should carefully look for some profound or symbolic meanings behind its literal meaning. Such topics are often based on some natural scenery, such as roads, grasslands, snowflakes, spring, morning glory, fallen leaves, etc., and are often related to people.

In addition, you can also use the hint marks given in the composition to examine the questions, that is, the so-called marking method or the thinking of seeking differences, that is, the so-called new method of turning an enemy into a friend. In short, there are many ways to examine questions. In the process of writing practice, we should pay attention to the needs of writing content and expressing ideas, and choose appropriate methods appropriately to write excellent works.

The specific approach is: first meet the meaning of the question. If it is a topic composition, it should focus on the topic. If it is a propositional composition, it is necessary to distinguish the types, the topic is the viewpoint, and it can be expanded in words; The topic is the topic, establish your own point of view; Metaphor is analogical and associates with social life. Then choose the angle. Topic composition, multi-angle, focusing on the overall situation, starting from small things, grasping a little depth; Propositional composition, ask a few "why" to your original point of view, find out the answer, and the new point of view established from this will have new ideas. If you still have time, you can go into the room and have a detailed inspection. No matter what style it is, we should delve into the original idea, and think about "different scenery" from the perspectives of "why" and "what else can we add", which will often find you.

Take the proposition composition "Open another window" as an example. Beginners only talk about "new discoveries can be made by opening another window", and the participants will concretize the contents of another window, while those who enter the house want to explore new ideas and profound meanings from the comparison between this window and another window.

In this sense, isn't the examination of questions opening a new window?

Three elements of topic composition examination

A comprehensive grasp of the topic materials

Now we say don't be embarrassed when examining questions, not that we don't want to examine questions. If the current topic composition provides us with a vast grassland where we can run freely, then the first element of examination is to fully grasp the center of the material and find out the reins to control the galloping horses in the material. Only in this way can we get the intention of the proposition right, examine the material at a certain height, grasp the center of the material when writing, and not lose sight of one thing. For example, there is such a problem:

Some people say that it doesn't matter what happens, don't get sick; Nothing matters. Never be short of money. Some people say that money is not everything, and there is nothing without money. Please write an article on the topic "I see money".

After we get such a topic, if we start writing without thinking, it is easy to talk about the role of money, and maybe money worship, which is quite different from the original intention of the proposer. The material tells us that money certainly plays a great role, but are these two "what some people say" correct and biased? This requires us to analyze the materials and grasp the center of the composition proposition from the overall height of the materials. These two "some people say" affirmed the role of money, but overemphasized it. It is inconvenient to have no money, but is money the only living condition for people? This persuasion represents many people's misunderstanding of money. The proposition intention of this topic composition is obviously to fully affirm the role of money, but also to clarify the correct attitude towards money, that is, to pursue money legally and use it correctly, so that money can bring happiness to oneself, family and society. This is to fully grasp the materials, so that the article can gallop freely within a reasonable range and not deviate from the proposition.

2. Carefully analyze the topic materials.

The choice of the correct composition entry point comes from the scientific analysis of the topic composition materials. If you want to succeed in your composition, you must make a scientific analysis of the composition materials before conception. It should be said that the title of a composition for entering a higher school embodies the painstaking efforts of many proposition experts, and every sentence and word in the material has many profound connotations. If you turn a blind eye, or skim, it is difficult to grasp the center of the article, and it is difficult to find the right starting point. Last year, the composition topic of Yangzhou senior high school entrance examination was a very successful topic:

"Attention everywhere is knowledge". If you pay attention everywhere in your life, observe carefully and think hard, then you can get a lot of knowledge. Please write an article on this topic in connection with your own reality.

If we want to grasp the center of the article well, we must analyze this material carefully. The materials tell us that learning knowledge comes not only from books, but also from life. The study of this knowledge is "ubiquitous", with a wide range and a large amount, which gives candidates a broad material space. It seems that everything can be written, and everything is suitable. In fact, there are several elements in this material that must be carefully analyzed: "everywhere" is only the first requirement and hint of the scope, and there is also "attention" below, which means that the materials appearing in the composition must be "carefully observed" by yourself in your life. If it is hearsay, you can't write a good article from books. There is also the following "diligent thinking". If you do things without thinking and rational thinking about this learning process, you can't deeply reflect on this process. In other words, you may not get the development level. Therefore, it is essential to study the materials carefully and analyze this link carefully.

3. Seriously study the composition requirements

After the above two exam sessions, if you think you have finished the exam, you are all wet. Many students have good writing knowledge and good materials, but they don't write as required, and the result is also sighing.

Now the composition requirements are very broad, and you can choose your style freely. But it doesn't mean there is no requirement! If you choose a narrative genre, you should honestly write according to the rules of narrative. If you choose an argumentative essay, you will have arguments, arguments and arguments, and write them down honestly. Don't confuse explanation with narration, and mix lyricism with discussion. Writing poetry should have image and artistic conception, and writing drama should have sharp contradictions and conflicts. Therefore, when reviewing questions, we should carefully study the composition requirements, read them carefully, give full play to our strengths in writing articles, and pay attention to strengths and avoid weaknesses, so as to write a good article that best reflects our composition level.

Finally, we should carefully look at the overall requirements of the composition. For example, the senior high school entrance examination in Yangzhou last year said, "Please write an article on this topic.". This "this" is all the contents reflected in the above materials, that is, "paying attention everywhere is learning" in life, and "life" and "learning" should be deducted, that is, learning knowledge in life. Even if the test paper requirements are so clear, there are still many candidates who don't talk about life, don't mention learning, and don't write observation and thinking. They started a new stove and became "off-topic compositions". It's a pity that they are rated below the passing mark, or only have comfort marks, so we should learn from them.