1, the announcer's introduction and summary at the beginning were so emotional that the whole recording was indistinguishable from beginning to end. I feel the same everywhere I hear it Introduce and summarize in a more natural tone.
2. The first note (steel partner) at the beginning of background music destroys the whole context, making people feel blown up and lack affinity;
3, the whole poem is recited, and the voice at the beginning is high, which leads to some explosions when you want to break through the climax later;
4. The announcer's reading mood is not in place yet, lacking a faint sense of parting and a little melancholy;
5. The coordination between recitation and background music is still insufficient, and the reciter is too close to the microphone;
6. In the process of reciting, the pronunciation of each word of the reader is too real, and there is no feeling of combining reality with reality, especially the pronunciation of the last word (the third sound) of each sentence is not enough;
7, the last sentence, that is the essence of the whole poem, but also the most emotional sentence, too hard!
The above is my humble opinion and unprofessional answer. If it is wrong, you can ignore it. I'm scared! - -!