1, knowledge goal: summarize the content of the article in concise language and talk about the author's point of view.
2. Ability goal: read the article and talk about your unique feelings and opinions on the basis of feeling the author's emotions.
3. Emotional goal: read the literary works of the two writers and form a correct aesthetic.
Teaching emphasis and teaching difficulty
1, teaching focus: experience the author's unique feelings and unique insights.
2. Teaching difficulties: understanding the knowledge of prose appreciation.
Teaching means and methods
1, teaching means: multimedia courseware
2. Teaching methods: discussion and teaching.
Preparation before class: read the text and get familiar with the basic content of the text.
Teaching hours: 1 class hour
The first class (10-2-38)
Teaching content and its process
I. Introduction to the author
1, xiaoxue
Born in 1935, formerly known as Yang, Bai nationality, Xizhou, Dali City, Yunnan Province. 1956 graduated from China Language and Literature Department of Wuhan University. 1952 began to publish works. He has published more than 20 works, including the poet's monograph "The Pastoral of Life-On Ai Qing's Poems", poetry collection "Spring of the Motherland", poetry collection "A Long Talk" and prose collection "snow sculpture Plum". Some of his works have been translated into English, French, Spanish, Italian, Burmese, Thai, Korean and other minority languages such as Kazakh, Uygur, Mongolian and Korean. He used to be the vice president of China Contemporary Literature Research Association, the vice president of China Poetry Society, and the winner of the special prize of Mondcarlo International Literature Prize in Italy.
2. Guo Moruo
1892 ~ 1978, formerly known as Kaizhen, pen names Guo, Maiang, etc. People from Leshan, Sichuan. China is an outstanding modern writer, poet, historian, playwright, archaeologist, ancient writer and famous social activist. 19 14 went to Japan to study medicine and engaged in literary and artistic activities after returning home. After 1924, he accepted Marxist thought and advocated revolutionary literature. After 1949, he became the chairman of the New China Federation of Literary and Art Circles and continued his literary creation. He has been responsible for the organization and leadership of scientific and cultural education for a long time and has made indelible contributions to the development of scientific and cultural education in China. He is knowledgeable and brilliant, which is another glorious banner on the cultural front in China after Lu Xun. 1978 died in Beijing. He has many works in his life, including poetry collection Goddess and historical drama Cai Wenji. And the existing complete works of Guo Moruo still exist in the world.
Second, study the text.
1, defining the structure of the article.
(1) discussion summary
(2) clarity
The full text is divided into two parts: The first part (1-2) introduces the characteristics and styles of prose. Part II (3-7): I think Egret is an intriguing essay.
2. Please draw the unique beauty of the egret in Egret.
(1) discussion summary
(2) clarity
"The coordination of pigments, the size of the body, everything is very suitable." "Snow-white fur, whole body ... One of them suddenly hates ink and laughs." Maybe some people will feel the fly in the ointment, ... no, the song is too sonorous. "
3. Find out the sentences that evaluate egrets.
(1) discussion summary
(2) clarity
A, this essay, with very wonderful and extremely concise words, describes the author's unique feelings and unique understanding of the egret, and brilliantly describes the egret's "beauty forgotten because of its ordinary."
Evaluate Egret in highly generalized terms. Very, very, unique, unique and wonderful use.
B, I think of the ancients' description, "Its writing is like rising to the first day, ... and entering the vast space."
Lessing said: "Don't let people see things, let people taste them and taste them again and again."
"Egret" is a good essay that makes people "taste again and again". It is "an exquisite poem" and "a prose poem that rhymes in the bones", with endless meanings.
The above three paragraphs quote Yao Nai, Lessing and Egret respectively to evaluate this article.
In a word, the author thinks this is a good article that can make people "memorable" It is a good prose with exquisite structure, fresh language, unique opinions and unique feelings.
The author focuses on the center, or gives examples, or quotes, or comments. This is a short and pithy literary review, which shows you the most exquisite part of this article.
4. Finally, I said that Egret is a good prose that makes people "taste" again and again. It is "an exquisite poem" and "a prose poem that rhymes in the bones", and every word has endless meanings. Can "reality" be removed? What does "rhyme in the bones" mean?
The word "reality" cannot be removed, and its feelings are much stronger than the beginning "Egret is an exquisite poem". After some description, the author thinks that Egret is really a poem with poetic beauty and artistic conception, and there is no doubt that the word "true" is used. "Rhyme in the bones" means that the beauty of egrets is from the inside out. After reading the beauty that is memorable and difficult to find, its beauty can only be realized by those who pay close attention to it.
5. If you choose two interesting paragraphs from the article and memorize them, what is your reason?
For example:
(1) I like Lu Xun's deep and cold, Ba Jin's natural and sincere, Mao Dun's simple and honest, Bing Xin's graceful and restrained, and I also like Lin Yutang's humorous and meaningful, Xu Zhimo's gorgeous and beautiful, Wang Zengqi's quiet and pure, and Qin Mu's erudition and wisdom.
This paragraph has a neat sentence pattern, which summarizes the styles of various writers' works, such as several treasures, very accurate words, rich vocabulary and catchy reading.
When a person stands fishing in a clear field, the whole field becomes a picture embedded in a glass frame. The size of the venue seems to be a dressing box designed by an artificial egret.
This is a very fresh ink painting. The author's imagination is very bold and his description is very vivid and interesting. It really gives people a feeling of appreciating poetry, which is very gentle, beautiful and subtle.
Third, complete supplementary exercises.
1, compose words as required.
(1) Gorgeous: gorgeous, gorgeous, bright and beautiful (2) Graceful: graceful, graceful, and sad.
(3) Simple and honest: simple and honest Chun Mei; (4) Clear: clear, clean and clear.
2. Xiaoxue believes that Guo Moruo expressed his unique feelings and understanding of egrets in his prose Egrets. The following sentences are all selected from the article Egret, and (c) best reflects the author's unique feelings and understanding of Egret.
1. Egret is an exquisite poem.
B, the coordination of pigments, the size of the body, everything is very suitable.
C However, the egret was forgotten for its beauty because of its routine.
D but isn't the egret itself a beautiful song? No, this song is too loud.
3. The author points out that Guo Moruo's prose is not only "bold, vigorous and magnificent", but also "gentle, graceful and subtle", and then says "I prefer his later prose". Try to make a brief comment on this discussion method.
This method of discussion not only shows the author's logical rigor, but also shows that in the appreciation of literary works, besides the general theoretical guidance, there are also problems of personal hobbies and personal appreciation habits, which further proves the objective facts of diversity and complexity.
4. Xiaoxue commented on Guo Moruo's prose "Egret", but mentioned the prose styles of several other famous artists. Is this an extra stroke of "rock the boat"? Why?
Not exactly. The author compares the characteristics of prose in the sense of "face" with the diversity and complexity of other writers' prose styles, and proves that prose is "the freest style without fixed format"
5. The article "Egret" says at the beginning that "Egret is an exquisite poem" and at the end that it is "a prose poem rhyming in the bones". Are there any contradictions between them? How did you meet?
No, the first metaphor is from the perspective of the physical beauty of egrets, and the second metaphor is from the perspective of the verve beauty of egrets. The combination of egret pigments and the size of the characters are suitable, so it is "an exquisite poem". The charm of egret lies in its extreme harmony with the countryside, which adds clarity to life in the countryside, so it is like "a prose poem rhyming in the bones".
6. The sixth paragraph of "Egret" describes the egret standing in a clear water field. How does it leave readers with rich imagination?
The sixth paragraph describes an egret standing in a clear water. This is an elegant ink painting. Egrets "fish" in clear water, but "field" has become a "dressing case" of the picture. In this painting, egrets bring beauty to rice fields, and the clear water makes Bai Lugeng beautiful. Whether the egrets decorate the fields or the sweet tolerance of egrets, they leave readers with rich imagination space.
7. In the seventh paragraph of Egret, it is written that Egret "stands alone on the top of a small tree", so the author asks a question: "People say it is a lookout, but is it really a lookout?" Tell me your opinion.
Judging from the author's tone, the egret is not "watching the whistle". It stands on the top of a small tree, which is very poetic and beautiful, and will definitely arouse people's reverie. Watching the whistle is just a daydream of mine.
8. Analysis of the role of quotations in the text.
This paper quotes the description of the ancients and emphasizes the artistic charm of a "gentle" style prose. The author quotes this passage to show that Guo Moruo's Egret is a prose with high realm and taste, and it is a kind of "soft and subtle" style besides Guo Moruo's "bold, vigorous and magnificent", which is intended to tell readers that if you want to feel the charm and artistic value of this prose, you must savor it carefully, otherwise you will not find the ripples on the water and the brilliance of pearls and jade, and you will not hear the vast sky.
9. Read the following article and answer the questions (about the essays "Moon Trace" and "Moon Trace")
(1) Read the essay "Moon Mark" and talk about the tone of "we" in the following sentence in the context.
A: We all ran out of the door, and it was in the yard. ...
It shows the urgency of "we" looking for the moon and the excitement after finding the moon.
B, everyone drinks. The moon is in everyone's heart.
Explain that everyone in "us" is very satisfied with the moon.
(2) The essay "Moon Scar" wrote grandma's words many times. Find out these words and think about it: under what circumstances did she say these words? What kind of expression role did it play in the article?
These words were said when the curiosity and novelty of "we" looking forward to, searching for and fighting for the moon could not be satisfied. In content, these words have played a role in stimulating children's interest, inspiring children's hearts and enlightening children's wisdom. Structurally, they play the role of threading the needle, paving the way for suspense and linking scenes.
(3) Xiaoqing's evaluation of Jia Pingwa's Moon Trace has repeatedly mentioned that this essay has created a "pure and transparent" realm. How to understand this? Please talk about your feelings in combination with the content of the article "Moon Mark".
It can be considered from the following three aspects: first, the moon marks create a pure, peaceful and harmonious atmosphere; Secondly, it describes the bright and human moon on the Mid-Autumn Festival night in Ming Che. Third, it deliberately shows the childlike innocence, simplicity and purity of children who feel that everything is fresh and often feel that nothing is satisfied.
Task:
Supplementary exercises 1, 3, 4 and 5