I created an original poem, please help me revise it.

Dark

Melancholic black music

Flowing all around

I was drunk

Stop Constantly confused

Knowing the filthiness of reality

But unable to resist

Wearing a mask all day long

Just like everyone else

I thought everything would be fine

But the reality

is always against you

There are fewer people and more ghosts and more real life

I What can I do

Painful, helpless

Empty, confused

Then die in despair

Forget everything in my life

< p>Hypocrisy, indifference

Nothing

Leaving with a smile

This hell of intrigue