(1) Repetition: Structurally, strengthen the language potential to make the first paragraph echo. From the content, it embodies the integrity, kindness and simplicity of Dayanhe, and better expresses the importance of adoptive mother to the author and her deep feelings for Dayanhe.
(2) parallelism: step by step, making the tone stronger, expressing great research and harmony (optimism, progress and diligence) step by step or accusing the old society of persecuting working women, and strongly hating this "unfair world".
Original (partial):
Dayanhe-my nanny
Dayanhe is my nanny.
Her name is the name of the village where she was born
She is a child bride,
Dayanhe is my nanny.
I am the son of the landlord;
I also grew up eating milk from Dayan River.
Son of Dayanhe.
Dayan and I raised a family by raising me.
I grew up on your milk,
Dayanhe, my nanny.
Along the river, I saw snow today, which reminds me of you:
Your grave is covered with snow,
Your closed former residence, the dead Wafi on the roof,
The ten-square-foot garden you pawned,
The mossy stone chair in front of your door,
Along the river, I saw the snow today, which reminds me of you.
You hold me in your arms with your big palm and touch me;
After you set up the stove,
After you took the charcoal ash off your apron,
When you taste the cooked rice,
After you put the black sauce bowl on the black table,
After you mended your son's clothes cut by thorns on the hillside,
When you have bandaged the child's hand cut by the firewood knife,
After you strangled the lice on your husband's shirt one by one,
After you picked up your first egg today,
You hold me in your arms with your big palm and touch me.
Extended data:
This is a poem dedicated to the nanny Dayan River. The poet described the ordinary, bumpy and unfortunate life of this ordinary China woman and expressed his heartfelt thanks to this great mother. Dayanhe is also the representative of thousands of Chinese mothers in Qian Qian. It is this vast land, and this great motherland is like a loving mother. Although she was humiliated, scarred and experienced vicissitudes, she never lost her maternal love and maternal love. Her brilliant poems are full of deep feelings. She sings repeatedly and cries like she is complaining.
The author Ai Qing (19 10 March 27th-1May 5th, 996) is a famous modern poet in China. Formerly known as Jiang Zhenghan,No. Haicheng, pen names Yiga, Kea, Lin Bi, etc. He is called "the first poet in China". Jinhua, Zhejiang China's modern poet. He is regarded as one of the representative poets of China's modern poetry.