1. Examples of some classic characters that can be used when writing essays for the college entrance examination
Don’t just look at those so-called high-scoring essays that are just about taking risks. In fact, look at those who took the college entrance examination. The top-notch Chinese students all have low scores in Chinese, but there are almost no full-score essays. Essay scores are subjective. The admirable aspect of the so-called full-score essays is the author's confidence in himself and the risk-taking in the article, so for ordinary people There is no need for readers to pursue this direction. Maybe you think I am talking nonsense. Let me give you an example. I graduated in 2006. Before that, I published a semi-literary book "The Death of Red Rabbit" in 02 or 03. Many people know that at that time There is a wave of retro craze across the country, but in terms of the ability to control words, can everyone do it? So the semi-full score in classical Chinese in the college entrance examination is almost the only example. If you want to talk about some knowledge about college entrance examination composition, you can leave me a message and we can communicate. I have never gotten a full score in composition, haha, six times The simulation was 58 once, 56 three times, 52 twice, and 45 in the college entrance examination. It was also because I wrote HIGH and talked about politics. I deserve it. If you have time and trust me, we can discuss it further. Anyway, I wish you the best. You succeed. 2. Classic character materials that are all-purpose positive and negative examples for high school compositions
1. Selected all-purpose discussion materials: Du Fu 1. From your sentence "When you are at the top of the mountain, you can see all the mountains and small mountains at a glance". Thanks to your broad mind, open-mindedness, and lofty ambitions, I understand that standing on the top of the mountain is the most natural and unrestrained, and the feeling of seeing all the mountains in front of you is happiness.
So from then on, I had the ambition of Lingyun, so in my own heart, I had a boldness full of confidence. 2. When the sentence "Sorrows come to the end of the road, we can't dig them out" comes to my eyes again and again. It seems that there is you in front of me, wearing clothes woven with resentment, and covering your face with sorrow. Your steps There is heaviness in your heart, depression in your behavior, and every expression of yours is full of helplessness and dissatisfaction with the world. What makes you sad is not your own embarrassment, but the hardship of people's lives; what worries you is not your own family. Three meals a day is the crisis of the entire country. Therefore, in my mind, the words "selfless" and "great" have quietly followed you.
I feel sorry for your great talents but cannot be reused, and I lament that your great ambition cannot be put into practice; since God has created you as a talented person, why do you make you sad and helpless? Died? Since you came into the world with extraordinary temperament, why did you die in a hurry just because of poverty? So sad for all! 3. He has been exiled all his life, exiled by life, and chased by suffering. Before he could even catch the last glimmer of the prosperous Tang Dynasty, he was blown by the chaotic autumn wind to the river bank where the trees were falling.
The emperor and Miyagi had gradually moved away while turning sideways. After ten years of residence, the late-blooming peonies have been diluted by years of rain.
When the blood and tears of the people finally merged into the flames of war, there were only staggering steps left in the world, wandering through the broken mountains and rivers. There were wanderings of hunger and illness, and the sorrow of being devastated by the journey.
The roof in a foreign land is filled with moonlight and dew. The dew has turned white from tonight, and the white hair is connected to the autumn grass. And Qiucao, Qiucao shrinks from the weight loss of a person.
Only the thatched cottage is waiting for him in Shu, the only habitat in the world, which will welcome the lonely soul of a wanderer in his destiny. He is no longer a poet, he is just a husband and a father, bearing the great sorrow of the new death of his child in the helpless tearful eyes of his wife.
And endure the fate, or the outcome of being manipulated by fate. A person who supported the dynasty with his body was injured by falling tiles in the hall. A person who loved the motherland all his life was always abandoned by the motherland.
Nothing can be saved anymore, including the tens of millions of buildings on the pen, they will also be destined to collapse. All the tears pour towards a ragged man, but he can no longer see the glory of an era.
In the end, it relies on singing, and ultimately it is lost in singing. 4. After reading your "Spring Night Joyful Rain", I discovered that there is still joy and joy in your life. Yes, you love life and every bit of nature, but the dark social world It just destroys your peaceful heart. The world does not allow you to have happiness. The war does not allow you to live freely. Everything cuts off the rope between you and happiness. It is extremely sad.
You are so far away yet so close, you are so mysterious yet so ordinary. You ended your life with misery, but you are continuing your life with poems and on the road of your life. , sorrow and pain have made your life path bumpy and thorny, but the mark you left in the history of literature is full of flowers and praises. Helplessness and resentment have destroyed your faith in life, but your immortal soul will always have youthful vitality because of your poems.
2. Qu Yuan, a selection of omnipotent discussion materials 1. The origin of the vast sea of ??poetry is Li Sao. Each of his poems is a full seed that will grow when sown into the soil. An orange tree, a green lotus, a pocket of Ganoderma lucidum, and an orchid carry the distant fragrance of two thousand years ago in his sleeves.
His poems are dripping blood/ and the bitterness of tears. A drop of it on the lips can keep people awake forever/ instead of fine wine/ making the troubled world drunk with miserable laughter... His poems are like fire/ but cannot burn through before dawn. That night was like a long trek in the thorn forest, twisting and turning to find a bright exit. He burned his liver and gallbladder into lamp oil, ground it into ink, and wrote down the dark spells of the old era.
His poetry was ridiculed and even besieged in that era, but now it has become a flag, flying and vivid over the human spirit. The descendants of the dragon said: The upper reaches of the blue ink is the Miluo River! 2. "I take a long breath to cover my tears, and mourn the hardships of the people's livelihood." Qu Yuan is such a poet, who is concerned about the country and the people.
"When the whole world is turbid, I am alone pure; when everyone is drunk, I am alone sober." Qu Yuan was such a historian with a strong belief.
"The blue clouds are dressed in white neon clothes, and I am raising my long arrow to shoot at the wolf." Qu Yuan was such a warrior with high fighting spirit.
"Yi Yu is kind in his heart, and even though he died nine times, he still has no regrets." Qu Yuan is such a hero, not afraid of ***.
No matter how history changes, no matter how the times change. From the moment Qu Yuan threw himself into the Miluo River, he was firmly solidified and precipitated in the hearts of the people of Chu State. It was destined that his soul would be refined and transcended, and would continue to be cut off and linger, and then sublimate into a great national spirit.
Today, "Qu Yuan" is no longer the same person who lived more than two thousand years ago. 3. Who can give me three universal material characters for college entrance examination essays, who should be used in all essays and be novel?
This is what I answered someone else half a month ago. I hope it will be helpful to you.
I won’t talk about the specific deeds, but let’s talk about the scope of application that I think it can be used. 1 I won’t talk about Turing’s deeds. You can check it yourself. Keywords: genius, creativity, adversity, humiliation, resistance.
Personally, I think it is more realistic than Beethoven, Zhang Haidi, Sima Qian and the like, which were badly used in the college entrance examination, and the materials are not difficult to find. In addition, some other things can be derived, such as Apple's LOGO, which is The apple he took a bite of was to commemorate him or something. 2 John Nash, not the Nash who played basketball. There is a movie "A Beautiful Mind" about him. You can probably watch the movie once.
Keywords: genius, creativity, challenging authority, love, loneliness, illness, etc. In addition, if you are interested, his research result "Prisoner's Dilemma" can also be put into the relationship between people, so you can also add some keywords: friendship, trust, betrayal, etc.
3 Although Guan Zhong is mentioned in Chinese language texts, there are not many written about him in the college entrance examination. There are many deeds, so just use them according to the occasion.
Keywords: friendship, trust, governance, reform, etiquette, hatred, greed, integrity, "conquering the enemy without fighting". 4. Essay on universal template for describing characters in fifth grade
My class teacher
My class teacher’s surname is Wu and her name is Mingzhu. She teaches us mathematics and everyone affectionately calls her "Teacher Wu". Teacher Wu has short hair, always has a smile on his face, and looks very kind.
My class teacher, Teacher Wu, works very hard. In order to distinguish the "grade" of students each time, Wu The teacher has really put a lot of effort into it. As long as you do it correctly and fairly, Teacher Wu will always award us with an "excellent".
Teacher Wu always works hard for us responsibly. Working. I remember one time, I was in a math class and I didn’t pay attention. The teacher asked me to do my homework, but I didn’t know how to do it. As a result, I did everything wrong. The teacher asked me to do it again, but the result was wrong again. At that time, I regretted that I didn’t concentrate on it. During the class, Teacher Wu was by my side and patiently tutoring me until I understood.
I still remember one time when I had a severe stomachache and lay on the table with a pale face. Teacher Wu quickly asked my classmates to help me to the school doctor's office. Unfortunately, the school doctor on duty asked for leave, so I had to hold my stomach and return to the classroom. Seeing this, Teacher Wu quickly took me to the office and poured me a glass of water, but I I vomited it out immediately. I had no choice but to call my mother to pick me up. While waiting for my mother, Teacher Wu patted my back and wiped my sweat. After waiting for a long time, my mother did not come. Teacher Wu Said: "Forget it, there is still some time before class, let me take you home!" Then he helped me go home.
Halfway through, I couldn't help but burst into tears. I secretly made up my mind that in the future, I will also be a teacher. Like Teacher Wu, I will not only teach students knowledge, but also care for them with my own love. 5. Celebrity materials that can be used in college entrance examination essays
“ "Zhaojun goes out of the fortress" is a historical event that happened in 33 BC.
Although it has been more than two thousand years, it is still widely circulated and famous throughout the ages. Zhaojun's departure not only played a certain role in consolidating and strengthening the unity and friendly relations between the Han and Hungarian peoples, but also left a profound impact on the subsequent development of Han-Hungarian relations and harmonious coexistence.
1. Zhaojun’s departure from the fortress was the result of the joint attention of both parties in Handian. According to historical records, before Zhaojun’s departure from the fortress, the relationship between Han and Hungary had turned from war to peace, and the faction that was antagonistic to the Han was also was eliminated. In the 18 years before her departure, the relationship between Han and Hungary had become peaceful.
For example: "Hu Hanxie and the Han envoys Han Chang and Zhang Meng made an alliance in Dongshan, Nuoshui, in the Xiongnu area. From now on, the Han and the Huns will be one family. They will never cheat or attack each other... The Han and the Huns dare to attack anyone who breaks the covenant. , The fate is unknown, so that all his children will be like allies."
Of course, Emperor Yuan of the Han Dynasty had a good marriage policy, and Hu Hanxie Shanyu attached himself to the Han Dynasty several times and expressed his intention to be the son-in-law of the Han Dynasty. All of them laid the political foundation for Zhaojun to go out and get married. However, the departure itself must be a political event for both parties. Their marriage relationship is essentially a political relationship, which is beyond reproach.
Hu Hanxie Shanyu named Zhaojun "Ninghu Kuo" ("If you talk to Hu, the country will be peaceful") is an example. From the pottery pieces and tiles unearthed from the Zhaowan Han Tomb in Baotou City, Inner Mongolia in 1954, which belong to the late Western Han Dynasty, such as "Chanyu Heqin", "Long Live Qianqiu", and "Changle Weiyang", we can also see the historical event of the Han and Hungarian invasion of Zhaojun. They all attach great importance to it and treat it as a national event.
2. Rizhaojun went out to sow the seeds of peace and friendship between Han and Hungary. After Zhaojun's death, her daughter and son-in-law continued to work hard for friendly exchanges between Han and Hungary according to their life aspirations. Although the policies on Han-Hungarian relations changed during the reign of Wang Mang, and the two sides deployed troops and generals, creating a tense situation, in the end it was Zhaojun's descendants who once again promoted the continued development of peaceful and friendly relations.
For example: Wu Zhuliu Chanyu died in 13 BC. Zhaojun’s son and son-in-law wanted to make peace with the Han Dynasty. However, these two people had always been friendly with Xian, so they broke up with each other and established Xian (Yu and Xian) Both are the younger brothers of Wuzhuliu) and are the Chanyus of Wureruo Shoes. After Wulei was established, he sent people to see the Han and Prince Wang Hui according to the wishes of Yun and Dang. Wang Mang also sent to the Xiongnu to congratulate the Shanyu of Wulei on his establishment. With the mediation of Yun and Dang, and the Shanyu's Through hard work, the tense Han-Hungarian relationship was brought back to light. Although it was not completely successful, it did its best.
3. The historical impact of Zhaojun’s expedition was far-reaching. Most of the subsequent negotiations on Han-Hungarian relations were completed through Zhaojun’s family kinship. The above-mentioned Wang Jian and Wang Sa were appointed as Heqinhou by Wang Mang in 15 AD because they were both Zhaojun's nephews, and the Huns' envoys were also the sons of the above-mentioned Yun and Dang. Official title, She is the name, and its pronunciation is: Ju).
After this, there were still relatives of Zhaojun, and Huhanxie Chanyu’s ancestral temple was active in the development of Han-Hungarian relations. This shows Zhaojun’s important historical position in Han-Hungarian relations and his posthumous influence. deep. Zhaojun's move out of the fortress is a model of national unity in the history of our country. It is deeply supported and has been passed down through the ages.
Her historical achievements will forever be recorded in the annals of the unity of the Chinese nation. In the winter of the fourth year of Taichu (101 BC) when Su Wu was a shepherd, the Xiongnu Chanyu died in Xiangli Lake. His younger brother Qie Tuanhou was established as the Chanyu. In order to reconcile with the Han Dynasty, he sent back the Han envoy Lu Chongguo and others who had been detained in the past.
In March of the first year of the Tianhan Dynasty (100 BC), Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty sent Zhonglang General Su Wu, Deputy Zhonglang General Zhang Sheng and Attaché Chang Hui as envoys to the Xiongnu to return the prisoners who had been detained. The Huns envoys sent Shanyu generous gifts of property. After Su Wu and others arrived at the Xiongnu, Yu Chang and others, who had surrendered to the Xiongnu, conspired with Zhang Sheng to kidnap Shanyu's mother, the Yan family, and return to the Han Dynasty.
After the incident, Su Wu was implicated. Su Wu did not want to be humiliated and failed to commit suicide. The Chanyu respected him and sent his Han minister Wei Lu to persuade him to surrender, but Su Wu remained unmoved.
So the Chanyu imprisoned Su Wu in a underground kiln and deprived him of food and drink, in order to force him to submit. Su Wu refused to die for several days.
The Huns thought he was a god, so they exiled him to an uninhabited place in the remote North Sea (today's Lake Baikal) to graze sheep. In the second year of the First Yuan Dynasty (85 BC), the Xiongnu Hu Yantang Chanyu was newly established and sent envoys to make peace with the Han Dynasty.
The Han Dynasty asked the Xiongnu to release Su Wu. In the sixth year of the First Yuan Dynasty (81 BC), Su Wu and nine others were welcomed back home by Han envoys. Su Wu detained the Xiongnu for 19 years and learned a lot about the border peoples. After returning home, he was appointed as a vassal state and was responsible for the affairs of ethnic minorities. He was unyielding and unyielding among the Xiongnu, and was regarded by later generations as one of the models for upholding national integrity.
Su Wu was born in Duling in the Han Dynasty (southeast of today's Chang'an County, Shaanxi Province) with the courtesy name Ziqing. During the reign of Emperor Wu, as a Zhonglang general, he sent an envoy to the Xiongnu with a talisman. Unexpectedly, the Shanyu used force to force him to surrender, but Su Wu refused to give in.
He also sent Wei Lu, a surrendered minister of the Han Dynasty, to lure Wu to surrender with the promise of "glory and wealth". Su Wu said, "How can you return to the land of the Han Dynasty if you humiliate your integrity and humiliate your life?" After saying that, he drew his sword and stabbed himself. Wei Lu hurriedly came forward. He couldn't stop him in time, and his martial energy lasted for a long time before he woke up.
Shanyu appreciated his integrity and wanted to recruit him, but he refused in the end, so he imprisoned Wu in a cellar without giving him food or drink. It was cold and snowy, and Su Wu was hungry and thirsty, so he swallowed the snow. After several days of immortality, the Huns were amazed and thought they were gods, so they moved to the ice-covered and uninhabited North Sea to herd sheep. They asked him to wait for the male sheep to produce milk before letting him return home without giving him food. When Su Wu was hungry, he would dig out the weeds and fruits gathered by wild rats to satisfy his hunger. He spent five or six years in this difficult and difficult situation. Once, Chanyu's brother went hunting in Beihai and found Su Wuzhi's noble character. He deeply respected and sympathized with him and gave him clothes and food.
After another three years, Shan Yu ordered Li Ling to go to Beihai to hold a banquet and music for Wu. He had a good drink with Wu and persuaded him: "You should wait humbly to return to the Han Dynasty. After all, it is not possible. The only way is here." In a deserted land, we are just suffering. Who can see how loyal you are?" Su Wu said: "My father and son have done nothing for the court, but they have been honored by the emperor and have been ranked among the generals and nobles. They have always wished in this life? I have done my best to serve my husband, and now that I have the opportunity to kill myself to repay him, I am really willing to serve the king as a minister, just like a son serving his father, and he has no hatred for his father. I hope not to talk about it anymore." Li Ling and Su Wu drank happily for several days, and then. Su Wu advised Su Wu: "I hope Ziqing will listen to Ling's advice."
Su Wu said: "I have been dead for a long time. If you must surrender, please end today's banquet and let me die." At this moment." Seeing Wu Zhicheng's determination, Li Ling sighed and said, "Oh, righteous man, Ling's crime is really as high as heaven." After saying this, he shed tears and met Su Wu. 6. A "universal composition" that can be used on any topic
1. When writing, you must learn to accumulate "reading thousands of volumes, writing as if you have a spirit", "it is difficult for a clever woman to make a meal without rice" and these summaries of the ancients, from Both positive and negative aspects illustrate the importance of "accumulation" in writing.
"Rely on accumulation in daily life, and rely on performance in the examination room." This is the common experience of students in the examination room. (1) In terms of language, a "vocabulary library" must be established.
Vocabulary is the cell of the article. Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups.
There are two ways to build a "vocabulary": the first is reading. You should read extensively books, newspapers and periodicals, and take notes on your reading. Excerpt some beautiful words, sentences, and passages in a specific book, or make reading cards.
The second is life. Usually, you should capture the vivid language spoken by the public and write down these words in a small notebook or card that you carry with you. In this way, over time, you will be able to speak well and write wonderfully in your compositions.
(2) It is necessary to strengthen the accumulation of materials. Materials are the flesh and blood of the article.
Because many students don’t pay attention to accumulating materials, they make up or plagiarize every time they write. The way to solve this problem is to accumulate materials.
If possible, you can bring a video camera and tape recorder to observe life in depth, actively participate in life, and record family life, campus life, and social life in a timely manner through sketching, diary writing, observation notes, etc. experiences in. When recording, you should grasp the details and grasp the characteristics of people, things, objects and scenery.
In this way, the articles written will have flesh and blood. (3) Strengthen ideological accumulation.
Point of view is the soul of the article. If the center of the article is not clear, or the intention is not profound, it often indicates that the author's thinking is superficial.
Therefore, it is necessary to establish a "think tank". There are two methods: first, think well.
"The more you think, the more you gain." You should think deeply at ordinary times and ask "why", "what" and "how" when encountering problems.
In this way, we can see the essence through the phenomenon. You should also record the "sparks" of your thinking and the conclusions of your thinking at any time.
The second step is to compile, that is, to excerpt famous quotes, aphorisms, etc. In short, we must strengthen the accumulation of compositions and establish three major writing warehouses: "vocabulary library", "material library" and "thought library". They must be regularly inventoried, sorted and classified into categories, and they must be continuously enriched and expanded.
2. To write a good composition, you must first learn to observe. When Mr. Lu Xun answered the question of "how to write a good article" by literary youths, he emphasized two points: first, read more, and second, practice more. “See more” here means observe more.
This shows that: to write good articles and master skilled article writing techniques, you must observe more and learn to observe. Observation is the necessary prerequisite and foundation for writing. The Russian novelist Chekhov earnestly warned beginners: "A writer must train himself to become an observer with a keen eye and never give up! - He must train himself until observation becomes a habit, as if it becomes second nature. ”
Turning observation into a habit and second nature is a skill that takes time to hone. It is very effective and a great skill. You should pay attention to the people, things, scenery, and objects around you to obtain the materials you need for your composition: you should become interested in things that may not seem big but are actually very meaningful, and pay attention to the causes, processes, and results; you should Pay attention to how the plants in the campus flower beds change their colors throughout the year, and learn to inquire deeply to understand the ins and outs of these changes; you have to go out into the society, contact more people, observe their words and deeds, and think about something at any time. Merge them into the long river of your own thoughts.
This is the process of observation. During the observation process, you should pay attention to the following points: (1) Observation should never be limited to "seeing with your eyes". Observation in a broad sense and with more practical significance means mobilizing all the five senses of a person: listening with ears, feeling with body, and more importantly, thinking with heart and brain, so that such observation will be more delicate and profound. .
(2) Pay attention to the good use of "bad pen" during the observation process. As the saying goes: A good memory is worse than a bad writing.
Many students see a lot every day and think a lot, but they are not good at writing it down at any time. This will make the observed material go to waste and many valuable things will be wasted. Wasted. (3) Pay special attention to perseverance in observation.
Don’t suffer from "brain fever". Three minutes of heat is not beneficial to writing a good composition. You must observe and think about life throughout every day of your life, so that you can write Come out with wonderful articles and excellent works. Learning to observe has a huge foundation and impetus for writing good compositions. Without observation, you will often find it difficult to write.
I hope you can learn to observe, continuously cultivate and improve your observation skills, and make great progress in your writing practice. 3. If the idea is high, the writing will be successful. To establish the idea is to establish the center and intention of the article.
So what issues should we pay attention to when writing an article? (1) The purpose of an article must be correct and correct. Correctness means ensuring that the feelings and thoughts of the article are correct, in line with the nature and laws of objective things, in line with my country’s basic political principles, in line with the basic moral requirements of people, and able to Give people positive inspiration. (2) The purpose of writing must be specific. "Composition is more important than specificity. Specificity makes skillful, and divergence makes people stupid."
No matter how complicated the matter is, the main idea cannot be scattered. If an article wants to explain this issue and that point of view at the same time, and rambles on, the purpose will inevitably be unclear.
In fact, if you want to cover everything, you will definitely miss the point. Moreover, an article can only have one center. Instead of "biting off more than you can chew", it is better to concentrate on expressing one center, even if it is through several things. To express the center, we must also adhere closely to the center of the text, with consistent goals, focusing on the connection point between the material and the center, so that all the power contained in the material is directed toward the center. (3) The purpose of the article must be novel. The most taboo thing about an article is to follow what others say. A novel perspective is the core of innovation in composition.
Novel ideas require jumping out of the old box, not following conventional thinking, habitual thinking or original mental stereotypes, but using a unique perspective to examine the alternative content contained in the topic and avoid Write what others often write, and write what others have not written. Even the same writing object can always be approached from many angles, as long as we break the stereotypes of thinking, stand at the height of the times, avoid the "conventional" and pursue the "different", think from multiple angles and sides, or associate, expand, or make analogies , or in the opposite direction, where people have not yet done anything, they can be colorful.