A good inscription can catch the reader's heart at once and leave a deep impression on people. The requirements for inscription are simple: short sentences and beautiful language; Light emotion, shallow philosophy.
Then, what kind of inscription can make people unforgettable and become the finishing touch of the article? There is only one answer: let the inscription paint the soul of the composition vividly! First, suspense attracts people to read inscriptions in the form of suspense, which can immediately arouse people's appetite for reading; If suspense is set to "wonderful" again, it will be thrown into calm water like a stone, which will arouse people's desire to read and trigger a wonderful artistic conception of imagination. Example 1: Write a composition on the topic of "Applause".
(Beijing senior high school entrance examination in 2003) I felt inferior, too, because I knew how ugly you were, but at that moment, I really cheered for you ... —— To disabled mothers Example 2: Write a composition on the topic of "book". A girl who likes reading and a girl who doesn't like reading.
I am such a two-color girl. Would you like to listen to the blue loneliness of a two-color girl? -Inscription Example 3: How can you forget the storm during the storm? Close your eyes and you will remember; The wind and rain are buried in my heart, but I can only talk with the help of paper and pen ...-Inscription Example 4: Write a composition with the topic of "hope". I am a poor student. Who am I afraid of? Nobody pays attention to me anyway.
You might as well express your true feelings in the article, and I hope you can listen to my heart. -Words to Yourself 2. The composition that really touches people's hearts is written by heart, and the inscription placed in the "impression" can only touch people's hearts and attract people's attention if it is really written with "heart" and "emotion".
Example 5: Writing on the topic of "communication". Today is my birthday, but my blessing is speechless. Today is your memorial day, and your tears are silent.
Let me make paper with my heart, write with my tears, and then remember the bits and pieces of our acquaintance. Write to a bosom friend Example 6: Write a composition on the topic of "maternal love" or "fatherly love".
(2003 entrance examination in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province) The kite ascended to heaven, and the silk thread could not help lingering; The geese fly south, but still turn back frequently. Years are easy to get old, and things are easy to change. In the lost years, what remains unchanged is the affectionate care of my mother.
-Words to Mother Example 7: Write a composition on the topic of "Believe in yourself". Don't complain about your fate, we are all the darlings of God. Don't be afraid that there are mountains outside, and there are people outside.
Believe in yourself: you are a mountain outside the mountain and a person outside the people. -About my inferiority complex yesterday. Example 8: Write a composition on the topic of "responsibility".
Tens of thousands of years ago, human beings ate and drank blood; Thousands of years ago, human beings slash and burn; Decades ago, man landed on the moon ... men told men that men need responsibility. -Inscription 3. Singing "anti-tune" is unexpected. As the saying goes: water is impermanent, and the text is uncertain.
Nowadays, calling for innovative spirit and encouraging individuality have increasingly become the main theme of composition. Innovation in the true sense is to be good at thinking about the same problem from different angles, different horizons and different levels, so as to gain different feelings and experiences, enrich the connotation of the composition and write original opinions.
Of course, the requirement of "anti-tune" in the inscription is also the organic unity of personality and norms. Example 9: Write a composition on the topic of "Dear Me".
(Guangdong senior high school entrance examination in 2003) Hehe! What's wrong with "two sides and three knives" I am an out-and-out "two-faced". -My selfie example attending: Write a composition on the topic of "Nature".
I would like to be a frog in the well, where it is cool and comfortable, and where it is hidden and safe. Come, come, come, please come with me and jump to the bottom of the well far away from human beings.
-A frog in a well warns the world. Fourth, explanation, that is, with the help of the postscript, explains the writing purpose, background or writing content of the article, so that readers can have a clearer understanding or macro grasp of the article. I want to send this document to my dear mother and all the loving mothers in the world.
-The inscription of "Motherly Love is priceless" points out the purpose of writing, and also lays an emotional tone for the full text, sincerely expressing love and gratitude for the mother, which moved the readers. Another example is the inscription of a masterpiece "Northerners and Southerners" with the theme of "friendship": the song of friendship between two ordinary people was sung to the extreme with a torch, and their personality was sublimated in this friendship.
This inscription summarizes the story of "friendship" between northerners and southerners written in the article, so that readers can have a preliminary grasp of the content written in the article. Fourthly, the inscription compiled by my father made me understand that what my father and I lack is not love, but communication, heart-to-heart communication.
-"Communication" inscription The earth gave birth to life, and life is precious, unique and fair to everyone. It is precisely because life is so precious that we should cherish it.
-"Caring for Life" Inscription When the ideal colorful wings beat the realistic air, I entered a delicate, hazy and rainy season. After swimming through my childhood dreams, I stood in the rain. 17 years old, with ups and downs, happiness and troubles.
-"My Happiness and Trouble" Inscription There were many evenings when I sang softly to the sunset; There have been countless dawns, and I told my thoughts to the morning glow. Teenagers are picturesque years, and teenagers are the season to fly amber dreams.
-"My future is not a dream" Inscription My father warmed my cold heart with maternal love; My father cared for my broken heart with motherly tenderness; My father healed my broken heart with my mother's hand ...-What is life engraved on family matters? In the eyes of children, life is to grow up quickly; In the eyes of adults, life is to make money to live; In the eyes of the elderly, life is healthy and long-lived. -"Life tells me" Inscription I have lost too many things, even the most important things in my life, such as honesty and self-confidence.
I should pick them up and take them on their way. -"Looking for Lost Things" Inscription One day several years ago, my friends and I were playing in heaven and were put into a sky-blue jar. From then on, my canned life began.
-"The Life of a Can" is engraved with a mother's love.
2. How to write subheadings in the composition? Using subheadings in writing can make articles separate and dense. The content is concise, the text is clean and pleasing to the eye, and the center is clear and prominent, which not only reduces the layout of transitional characters, but also reflects the author's humanistic quality. There are many forms of subheadings, so I will talk about several ways to draw subheadings skillfully.
First, metaphorical style
For example, the composition "Colorful Fragrance" in the senior high school entrance examination uses four subheadings: red carnation, white plum blossom, blue violet and black rose. Four subheadings use four different colors of flowers to compare four celebrities: Yue Fei, Qu Yuan, Li Bai and Lu Xun. The author organically combines the connotation and color of flowers with the main deeds of four historical celebrities, and has achieved a breakthrough effect, giving people a clear and distinct sense of structure and interpreting the theme of "life is like a flower, full of fragrance".
Second, the poetic style.
For example, there are three subheadings in the famous senior high school entrance examination "Walking with the Poet": "Picking chrysanthemums under the hedge, leisurely seeing Nanshan" and "Until I raise my cup, I ask the moon, bring my shadow and let us three"; "I hope that people will live for a long time and have a good scenery for thousands of miles." The article is ingenious and sharp-eyed. It chooses three ancient poets and their poems as its own writing materials, combines the extraordinary life experiences of poets with their famous sentences handed down from generation to generation, and shapes three great poets with independent personalities and vivid images.
Third, situational
For example, the excellent senior high school entrance examination "Cutting Happiness" used four subheadings: "Want Want Fruit and Milk", "Little Commander", "Long Jump on the Bund" and "Fish Hook". The little author absorbed several close-ups in the process of growing up, mobilized the accumulation of life, and screened out the pearl of happiness that permeated the father's love and maternal love. He used the unique technique of "cutting and pasting" to structure the full text. His writing is smart, his language is lively and fresh, his life is strong and his family is full of affection, which is intoxicating.
Fourth, contrast
For example, four subheadings are used in the excellent work "Ear picky eaters" in the senior high school entrance examination: "change 1: eat soft but not hard", "change 2: eat hemp but not spicy", "change 3: eat fat but not thin" and "change 4: eat or not eat". The little author has a deep vision and relies on his ears. Each subtitle satirizes the bad phenomena of bureaucracy, flattery, money first, bullying and being afraid of hard, and reveals the reason why the truth "disappears", which is rich in meaning and chewy.
Five, time.
For example, the famous "Happy Notes on Campus" in the senior high school entrance examination is the main part of the article, which consists of 1 (dou), 2 (such as love), 3 (meter), 4 (method), 5 (search), 6 (pull) and 7.
Six, series type
1. color series: for example, the sketch of the famous work "Life Review" in the senior high school entrance examination shows the richness of life with red, orange, yellow and green as subtitles.
2. Emotional connection: For example, Dad's joys and sorrows, which is a masterpiece of the senior high school entrance examination, is subtitled with joy, anger, sadness and joy, and takes emotion as the main line to connect various typical cases in dad's life, which is refreshing.
3. Poems and famous sentences are connected in series: For example, Water Sacrifice, a masterpiece of senior high school entrance examination, with the subtitle of "Scene 1: It rains in the Qingming Festival", "Scene 2: pedestrians on the road want to kill their souls", "Scene 3: Where is the restaurant" and "Scene 4: the shepherd boy points to Xinghua Village", depicts four landscapes about water and reveals the worrying theme of water pollution damage.
3. How to write a good subtitle composition subtitle composition is a common style, which is to divide an article into several relatively independent parts around the topic, and then add a concise and appropriate subtitle to them. Because of its clear structure and distinct levels, many candidates like to use it, but rarely write new ideas. How to make this subtitle composition novel and unique? I think we should pay attention to the following points:
First, the subtitle should focus on the center and reflect the thinking of writing.
Subtitle is the topic of each small part of the text, so we should grasp the key points and points of this part when drafting the title, which are reflected in the subtitle. Each subtitle should focus on the center and divide the topic into several parts, one by one, which will also give the reader a good impression of clear hierarchy and clear context, so that he can see the writing ideas at a glance. For example, the excellent composition "Choose a Happy Clear Sky" in the college entrance examination in 2002 is divided into three subheadings: "Choice means giving up", "Choice is a contest of will" and "Choice can warm up", all of which focus on the topic of "the choice of the soul" to reveal the main idea of the article.
Second, the subtitle should be logical and reflect the internal relations.
There are two common logical relationships between subheadings: coordinate relationship and hierarchical relationship.
The coordinate relationship reflects things from different angles and presents a horizontal connection. For example, there is an article called "Beating Festive Grass", which describes the stories of Lin and Xu Zhimo and his own childhood beating Festive Grass, and draws up a unique title for each part: meeting each other, falling in love with flowers, enjoying leisure and beating Festive Grass, and illustrates the center of "many unknown things can only be proved by practice" from four trivial aspects.
Hierarchical relationship is to organize subheadings with the development and change of things as clues, showing a vertical connection. For example, a masterpiece, Spring Knocks on the Door, with the subtitles of "Disappearing Spring", "Struggle with Spring", "Spring Awakening" and "Long-lost Spring", tells a touching story: a child who was hurt by his parents' divorce, from refusing "Spring" to being moved gradually, and finally integrating into spring, vividly shows the changes of the hero's spiritual world. Among them, "spring" and "door" are puns, which are intriguing.
Third, the subtitle should be in the same format, reflecting the beauty of neatness.
The structure of subheadings should be roughly the same, and the number of words should be equal. Generally, an article has three or four subheadings, so that several subheadings will form a parallel relationship, giving people a neat aesthetic feeling. For example, in the composition "The Choice of the Mind" written by a candidate in the college entrance examination in Henan Province in 2002, three subheadings were adopted, namely "Family ties are the most important", "Law is as heavy as a mountain" and "Prospering the country by blood", which revealed the essence of choice: family ties, legal dignity and national justice. The title format is neat, harmonious and beautiful.
I believe that as long as candidates pay attention to the above three aspects when writing subtitle compositions, they will be able to innovate and write new ideas.
Let's enjoy an excellent composition with subtitles.
Youth pass
Everyone has written the youth manifesto, and everyone understands it. The delicate heart contains many colorful dreams, and the crystal tears leave many colorful rainbows. ...
You are young because you are sincere.
Young us, full of energy, began to restless heart. How many romantic stories are hidden in our ignorant hearts, and we fantasize about the beauty of flowers and the moon ... Young people also know that it is even worse to neglect Tomb-Sweeping Day when we have been in love since ancient times! As a result, that heart gave birth to the power of forging ahead in passion, turned into silent steam, and slowly rose to the sky. ...
Because of family, we are distressed;
Because of distress, we choose to give up and choose to forge ahead.
You are confident because you are strong.
Young people are confident and even a little frivolous.
Full of confidence, we entered the black June;
With self-confidence, we step into the solemn holy land;
With self-confidence, we have chosen the path of life;
Write a satisfactory answer sheet for life, society and motherland with self-confidence.
Self-confidence comes from strength, indomitable struggle has achieved the great cause of self-confidence, indomitable struggle has achieved the great cause of self-confidence, and indomitable struggle has honed the self-confidence of the watcher.
Because of tenacity, we are confident;
Because of self-confidence, we will have a bright future ...
You are smart because you are relaxed.
Young people pursue chic because we are afraid of being bound; Young people pursue freedom because we are eager to fly into the free sky.
In the life of knowing how to relax and learning to relax, we fell down and got up in the face of difficulties and setbacks.
Because of relaxation, we are chic;
Because of chic, we have a beautiful youth.
Youth! A young pass!
In short, any new structural skill can be used by me. However, it must be noted that any form and any skill serve the content. Candidates should not focus on the fancy renovation of the form and ignore the basic writing rules. They should avoid grandstanding, only form and empty content.
4. How to write a composition with a subtitle? This is to love everything, and the grass grows and flourishes because of the love of spring rain; Willow is more and more delicate because of the caress of spring breeze; The stream is more and more brilliant because of the kiss of cloud love. It's hard to imagine what the world would be like without love. The last class in the afternoon of the camera is drawing to a close, and suddenly it is cloudy, dusty and raining cats and dogs. I'm worried. Will my mother pick me up? And the only thing I can do at this time is to wait. The second corridor of the lens was crowded with people, but the rain didn't stop at all. The air is filled with thick sweat, which makes people smell uncomfortable. I am very passive, walking in the front of the crowd, but being pushed around by my classmates. Some people walked proudly in the rain with umbrellas, others rushed out and disappeared in the rain ... I tried to call my mother and tell her the school newsletter, but there was a long queue. There are still three winds blowing in the camera, and the rain is still falling. I suddenly remembered a passage in an article, "Waiting is a bottomless pit", which strengthened my belief in rushing out. At that time, I had completely forgotten that there were still a few days before the final exam, that my mother had warned me from an early age that I was easy to catch a cold, and that I was helpless when I was sick and took medicine and injections. I only had one belief in my heart: Chong. Before I left the fourth shot, the students were impatient: "Are you going to rush or not?" Looking at the shadow in the rain, I look helpless and happy. I said, "Of course." But after I rushed out, I regretted it. I was soaked after three steps, so I had to run to a nearby supermarket in a panic. I didn't expect people everywhere. Camera five vaguely saw my mother's figure, and I rushed to my mother. Although my mother saw it, she quickly put up an umbrella for me. Looking at a wisp of white hair on my mother's forehead and a flower umbrella, I was filled with emotion. I think this is love!
5. How to write a composition subtitle is to organize a large number of materials in different categories, display materials in many ways or from many angles, express the theme, and write clearly. Can attract readers; Let readers have a general understanding of the main content of the article before reading the full text; Understand the content of the article more quickly and accurately in the reading process, and understand the writing intention; Read the complete article and leave a deeper impression.
It is best to have the same number of words and look neat. Subtitle must be centered.
note:
The selection of materials should be accurate.
Although an article needs several materials, these materials should show the theme from many angles and aspects, and you can't just choose a few to make up the number, nor can you choose the same content repeatedly. The selected materials are also required to be typical and novel, with individual characteristics, which can show the author's unique perspective and conception. The quantity of materials should be appropriate. The number of words in middle school students' compositions is generally limited, and 2~4 subtitles and small materials are generally suitable for subtitle compositions. There is no need to use subtitles if there are too few; Too many articles will either be general, empty and rigid, or the capacity is too large to meet the requirements. When training at ordinary times, you must not be greedy for materials. Because of the limitation of words, the materials used in subtitle composition can't be used evenly. Readers should sketch the familiar life, and write the fresh or most touching content in detail. Regardless of the details, we should pay attention to the description of the details, and avoid piling up materials and talking in general terms. In addition, subtitles should be artistic and suggestive. Subtitles should be related to each other, so that the content of the jump can be connected into an organic whole.
6. Add a subtitle to the following article. Finally, there is a glow. There are a few miserable little stars hanging in the light blue sky, which looks very lonely.
The sky is getting dark, and the earth is gradually covered by a hazy night. The moon quietly reveals its beautiful face, overlooking the boundless sea, vast plains and towering peaks.
Looking at it, he smiled, revealing a little silver line. In an instant, everything was wrapped in silver. The river in the community has been working hard all day. Are you tired, or are you slow? Listen! The evening breeze blew singing and made the river laugh. Otherwise, how can there be ripples on your face? Summer night is like an incomparably wide blanket, and the stars all over the sky are like sparkling gems decorated on this blanket.
The blue sky is so beautiful! Those twinkling stars are so calm and serene. It is like a pair of bright eyes and a shining silver lamp. It looks at me and shines on me, which makes me have many fantasies.
A star loomed in the east. Oh, it's a morning star. It is getting brighter and brighter. After a long time, the sun rose with dazzling light and loud howl.
7. Excellent composition with a subtitle to write a poem-the paradise of my life is like swimming fish and loving clear water, like white clouds with blue sky. I love poetry, especially writing poetry.
I think that is the paradise in my life-a kind of enjoyment, a kind of detachment and a kind of aftertaste. I liked reading poetry when I was very young.
"There is no doubt in the mountains and rivers, and there is another village in the dark." I read about the joy of being caught in adversity and lost in regaining light. "It's a feeling of parting in my heart if I don't stop cutting." I read about the constant sadness of the dead king.
"In the past, a few romantic figures, look at the present." I realized the verve of * * *.
In an activity class, the teacher asked each student to perform a program, and other students sang and danced, which was fun! And there is nothing I can do! It's finally my turn. My face is as red as fire and as hot as usual, and my heart is pounding.
I stepped onto the platform, and my mind was in a mess. "Teacher, he can write poetry!" I don't know who shouted. The teacher gently asked me to recite one, and I was relieved to hear it, so I recited one effortlessly, and the teachers and classmates kept applauding.
I tasted the sweetness for the first time. Later, the teacher told me that my poems were very good, and she encouraged me to read and write more, which made me more confident.
For the first time in my life, I think writing poetry will be my specialty! I finally have my own bright spot. I fell in love with writing poetry, and I decided to keep this specialty forever.
I am determined to be crazy about her. When I see a flowing stream, I will say, "The water in the stream is wet, like my childhood playmates."
When I see the vast green space, I will say, "You can see everything from a distance." When I saw the singing birds, I hummed, "Show the treetops, the birds are whistling."
I like these poems very much. Although they are not exquisite, they show my personality. I am happy to swim in poetry.
I am proud to know my major. Like green leaves clinging to branches, like sunshine missing the lake.