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This poem describes what the poet saw and thought when he climbed the Great Wall. The first couplet is an inverted sentence. It should first write "The horse caressing the old city in autumn", pointing out the season of climbing the Great Wall, and then writing "the towers and battlements of the Han family camp in the Qin Dynasty" seen on the Great Wall. The use of Qin and Han camps as the starting point here further shows that the poet faced many mountains and rivers, and his heart traveled through the ages, arousing readers' contemplation of history. What you caress about in "Ma Gaoqiu" is clearly the "old city" that has stood for more than 2,000 years. These two sentences show the poet's changes in feelings about the ancient city from a long time jump, and effectively express the age and majesty of the Great Wall: it has stood for thousands of years and has gone through vicissitudes of life. It is still vast and green, winding under the high autumn sky. , It does not diminish the magnificence of the Qin and Han Dynasties when they looked at the barbarians. From this, we can think of the first sentence of Wang Changling's quatrain "Crossing the Fortress", "The moon is bright in the Qin Dynasty and the Han Dynasty is closed." Wang Changling was thinking of resisting the southern invasion of the barbarians, while Kang Youwei was thinking of the unparalleled great creative spirit of the Chinese nation, so he thought of it. His deep feelings for the motherland are condensed in the description of the scenery of the country. The two middle couplets are scenes, depicting the majesty of the Great Wall. The "whip stone" sentence in the chin couplet describes its height, and the "continuous sky" sentence describes its vastness, describing the vigorous posture and majestic momentum of the Great Wall. Just like a giant pen, soaked in wonderful myths and legends, it outlines the extraordinary majesty of the ancient Great Wall across the space of thousands of miles. The neck couplet describes the ancient Great Wall in a broader context, with neat parallels and vivid outlines of the Great Wall's Ten Thousand Miles Map. Stillness can be seen in the movement, using light brush strokes with bright colors and relaxed mood. The final couplet is the finishing touch and expresses feelings through discussion. Climbing the Great Wall, wandering through the ages and overlooking thousands of miles, the poet no longer thinks of Wang Changling's "quenching Hu" incident of "not teaching Hu Ma to cross the Yin Mountain". What he thinks of is the majestic momentum of the Chinese nation with thousands of years of civilized history. What comes to mind is "Heroes can do amazing things" - that is the great creativity of the Chinese nation. This exclamation that shocked the whole poem echoed the majestic description of the atmosphere of the Great Wall in the poem, and effectively expressed Kang Youwei's feelings that were different from other poets: as a future leader of the "reform faction", his ambition was to create a New heroic career aspects. Because of this, when he overlooks the great Great Wall, he can resonate with the voices of the ancient heroes who created it, and have the strongest roar. The conclusion of "Climbing the Great Wall" is both an admiration that resonates over the majestic Great Wall, and also seems to be a heroic prophecy: it predicts that Kang Youwei will create an "amazing" career in the new era like the heroes of the past.
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The author "When he climbed to the first peak of the Great Wall, he thought that this area has been an important pass since the Han Dynasty, and he couldn't help but feel nostalgic for the ancient times." The long river stretches over the desert at dusk and "Out of the fortress" The two lines of "Mountains and Rivers" describe the magnificent scenery outside the Great Wall and describe the majestic weather in imagination. The two lines of "The Qing Dynasty forts conveyed the beacon silence" and "The sky is clear and the outer border seals" also describe the consolidated border defense in China's strong era. Conveying the heroic feelings of nostalgia for the past. But the style of poetry changes here, and the author points out that the era has gone forever, and there is only "a whip of cold moon, accompanied by the desolate step on the "Juyong" pass, which makes people look back on the past and feel endless nostalgia.
There is fiction and reality in the poem, there is emotion and scenery, and the scenes are blended. The word "heavy" and the word "sigh" are in harmony with each other, implying the author's deep affection for national affairs. This poem's sentence structure is stable and its momentum is vigorous, which fully represents the author's early poetic style. "Climbing the Great Wall" vividly depicts the Great Wall and the important passes of Lulong and Juyong. To the east is the blue sea and mountains, to the west is the setting sun on the Yellow River, with clouds and mountains on the peaks, the air pressure is quiet, the desert is quiet, and the moon shines on Juyong. The picture is broad and magnificent, and the momentum shocks the mountains and rivers.
(Commented by Han Panshan, Vice President of the Hebei Branch of the Chinese Writing Society)