Jiangsu Volume (Proposition Composition)
Some people are just curious in childhood, and some people can keep curious in their lives. Doubt, wisdom, nobility, surprise, happiness, worry, mediocrity ... Every word in the middle may be like a shadow behind curiosity.
"Curiosity" is not less than 8, and I wrote an article.
(3) Requirements: ① Angle selection; (2) Self-determination, except poetry, the choice of style.
Analysis: From the propositional mode, continue the propositional concept of this year's composition topic of Jiangsu college entrance examination: let candidates have something to say and write, and continue to make a big fuss about it in the world, and dig the key points of the "people-oriented" inner world. It cleverly avoids all kinds of expert lectures in the exam, and when it comes to forecasting, such as life, environmental protection, gratitude and other topics, it undoubtedly has profound art. From the perspective of style, this topic is well written, whether in narrative or argumentative. Everyone has curiosity, so as to avoid similar or collapsed language choices.
The candidate at point is moderate, points to a clear proposition, and points out the quiet writing clue: "Curiosity is always accompanied by a beautiful childhood" means that the candidate writes about his own life ",which is the best narrative style of cutting angle", such as success, failure, doubt and mediocrity, so these words are related to curiosity ".This sentence means that from a speculative point of view, the candidate launches a feasibility study and discusses it in writing. At the same time, together, whether writing a narrative or an argumentative paper, it can make the relationship between a question "curious" and "successful, failed, questioned and mediocre", and it is difficult for experts to reduce temperance and not embarrass candidates before the exam.
of course, this question seems simple, but it also means that it is necessary to select exams with depth and difficulty. For example, the examinee should focus on the important influence of "curiosity" in writing rather than in general terms, such as the curiosity of a running account narrative in his life for a certain period of time.
Sichuan volume (topic composition)
Write a composition with no less than 8 words on the topic of "being strong".
The written content of self-determination, style choice and self-ownership must be increased in the topic of children living happily in the range of reform and opening up.
Analysis: A disaster that struck the younger generation near the earthquake-stricken area was deeply shocked. In the past, the pain mainly came from study, but now the disaster is ahead. Extraordinary struggle of life, these people rushed to the disaster relief, the heart of the disaster area? Rye, which was rebuilt after the disaster ... condensed into the national war song. However, is there a more suitable theme than "strong" to awaken a generation? I think this special experience is the best introduction article today.
Of course, the harvest is strong, which does not mean that we can write about earthquakes, only earthquakes. Tenacity has always been the traditional virtue of our nation. There are many things we can learn from, but it is not an open idea. The marking teacher is "aesthetic fatigue". Tao looks like a "peaceful" composition. Only by grasping the essence, broadening the perspective and choosing the appropriate starting point, small and large, it will be possible to introduce new and well-written articles from here, which will be refreshing to the atmosphere.
Fujian's volume (material composition)
Reading the following text is less than writing an 8-word article.
Three men walked into the store, and one man bought a bottle of juice, saying, "I like sweet people and bought a cup of coffee, and said," I like the bittersweet taste. " I bought another bottle of mineral water and said, "I like light mineral water."
the idea of choosing an angle? Writing is self-determined, the style is selected, and the title is self-made; Don't go beyond the content and meaning of the material, it may not be copied without intercropping.
[ Comment]
This year's composition of Fujian Volume is a new material, which is characterized by writing according to the content and meaning of the material, even if the candidate's writing material is within the scope of the topic. So ask clearly the ideas put forward, choose an angle to write "(the three corners of the material"), and let the candidates "determine their own ideas".
The following items should be noted in writing:
Moderation should be accurate. Should we pay attention to materials with cultural significance, clear juice? Coffee? The corresponding relationship between mineral water and the pursuit of life, such as "fruit juice"-"enjoyment" view of life, "coffee"-"enjoyment in struggle" or "enjoyment", "mineral water"-"ordinary life", advocates natural, indifferent and calm attitude towards life.
the display effect is clear. Choose a point of view, it should reveal its own thoughts, for example, I like sweet, criticize the attitude of "enjoying life" and "I like light mineral water, generally celebrating that another exciting example is true", so as to promote this attitude (that is, regardless of the situation, enjoying a living soul in it, life can be a long and interesting one). True water without fragrance, plain and true attitude towards life. The concept, with a prominent theme, profound, meticulous and unique cultural background and knowledge base, is good at using divergent thinking and actively mobilizing. As the materials show, the three people develop horizontally and vertically, so as to see that if we change our thinking, from people's life, "juice" is also like an early and middle-aged person who enjoys "coffee" in his later years, but falls in love with "mineral water".
the choice must be accurate. The selected materials should be inspiring, thought-provoking and moving. Written in a reasonable narrative material, you should seek an appeal to write a discussion, and the selected situation should usually be 1 to 1 representatives, such as "No rain, no sunshine" Su, "My youth who is crazy, especially Wu
> Fourth, the wording should be smart, love can be used as a primer (the first show of your choice), and then quickly turn to the problem of life, not only for "what" ("what"), but also for your own "why". The structural arrangement should be reasonable, such as being included in the past and opening the future to win the favor of marking teachers, and broadening the horizons by virtue of the blending of ancient and modern.