I'm afraid of premature aging in Iraq, and I dare not go back any day. (The words "day and night" are too close to the last sentence, which is too repetitive. Please change it; In the same way, there are flowers and sentences, too many repetitions, for Iraq; Rhyme, use back)
Knowing that flowers go with spring, this force cannot be violated. The sunset flowers go with the spring, but it is too early to say that the flowers have not been thanked, so I changed my mind; Note that the word has withered, and the meaning of this word is similar to that of disability, and it is repeated. Attention is good, this word is already suspected of spelling, so this force cannot be violated. )
I can't bear to leave, but I want to send flowers back. (Being together day and night is the same as the fourth sentence, with the same meaning and the same sentence pattern, but there is no comparison, so it is difficult to leave; Go, rhyme, change)
Keeping spring is lonely, and the world is lonely. (The first sentence is good, and every word is well-written. The second sentence returns from the big time of day and night to the hour, and the time of flowers blooming and falling jumps again and again. Change it. Looking at the previous sentence, we should sigh ourselves, change the world, strengthen loneliness and increase the sense of desolation. )
Guang Xiao is dark at night, and the bright moon does not return. (keep the last sentence unchanged, change Li Mingguang, and increase the sense of darkness relative to the bright moon. )
The morning dew is wet and the sunset glow is accompanied by flowers. (Last night, the first half of the morning and the second half of the night, it was to show the past day by day, but the words were a little messy, comparing the time, but the morning beads were not dusk, and the morning dew turned into sunset; Pan means stone. What does the stone mouth mean? Change your mouth and strengthen your contact with the characters, which means that the characters haven't left after sitting all night. The handwriting is a little ordinary, change partners)
A gust of wind makes a hundred flowers blossom. (and the east wind has started, and a hundred flowers are blooming. This sentence probably comes from this. At this time, turn to the end and do something to change the east wind; If the wind blows, write the result directly in the next sentence, without pointing out that it is the wind, and the words don't rhyme.
Fragrant fragrance wafts with the wind, and I can't sleep all night. (Word for word, with upward meaning, rhyme, change)
Spring is far away, don't worry. (If you use the word "feng" again, three in a row, which is too much, then change it. The word rhymes, change it.)
After the overall reform ...
The flowers in the small garden are furious, and the moonlight and night wind are flying fast.
Afraid of premature aging in Iraq, I dare not go back any day.
Knowing that flowers go with spring, this force cannot be violated.
I can't bear to leave, but I want to send flowers back.
Keeping the loneliness of spring, a person wanders in the world.
Guang Xiao is dark at night, and the bright moon does not return.
The morning dew is wet and the sunset glow is accompanied by flowers.
A gust of wind makes a hundred flowers blossom.
Xiang Xiang was driven by the wind and couldn't sleep all night.
Spring is far away, don't worry.
Because it is an ancient poem, the last rhyme only uses two of the original poem, but the rhyme is not natural enough, but the sentence is well written, so I can't bear to change it. Just keep it.
Love flowers, love flowers (may also include people? ), finally also want to open, this is providence, the original poem is poetic, come on.