Writing comments is a necessary step for teachers to teach composition. Teachers can understand students' writing level through composition, prescribe the right medicine for the existing problems, and understand students' ideological and psychological conditions accordingly, so that teachers can formulate countermeasures and reflect humanistic care. Students know their own shortcomings and writing skills from comments. Faced with the teacher's serious attitude, most students will be moved and have the motivation to write hard and live up to the teacher's expectations.
Critical writing
The writing method of composition evaluation should generally make a pertinent evaluation from the center, material selection, structure, expression, language and writing style of students' works.
1. Center: If there are any digressions, please write according to the requirements of the topic.
2. Material selection: ① Whether it is around the center. (2) Whether it is true and in line with the reality of life. 3 whether it is fresh and interesting.
3. Structure: ① Whether the hierarchical paragraphs are clear. ② Whether the transition is natural. ③ Whether the beginning and the end are coordinated.
4. Expression: ① Does the narrative make things clear and complete? Whether the order of visits is clearly written in landscape writing. (2) The details are appropriate, the important people and things are written in detail, and the unimportant places are simply written.
5. Language: ① Whether the sentences are fluent and accurate, and there are few sick sentences. ② Whether metaphor, parallelism, personification and exaggeration are used. ③ Whether to use beautiful words such as idioms, proverbs, aphorisms, famous sayings and poems; ④ Whether punctuation marks are used properly.
6. Writing: ① Whether the font is neat and there are few typos. (2) Whether the roll surface is neat and clean, and whether there is a small amount of smearing.
Ordinary type
Eyebrow approval
Prompt the advantages and disadvantages of the composition in time to attract the author's attention;
Line batch type
In view of the wording of the article, make sentences, show the attitude of critics with one word, and attract the attention of the author;
General batch type
Comments written for the whole article. When writing this kind of comments, we should try to split them into two parts, affirm the advantages, point out the disadvantages and explain the revision methods. Comment on the writing method, language skills and ideological content of the article. On the basis of comprehensive evaluation of the article, focus on the target, highlight one or two key points, avoid the heavy, and avoid the pain.
Composition evaluation reference:
Narrative class
Elegant and elegant words, vivid scenery. The layout is novel and the text is concise.
Detailed explanation, clear and gratifying. Write a landscape and get down to business.
In good order, the structure is rigorous. The writing is free and easy, and the interest is meaningful.
Light and far away, relaxed, meaningful and subtle. Plain and straightforward, and romantic.
Concise and fluent, with profound implications. Far-reaching, far-reaching, but different.
See through every detail and describe vividly. The content is tortuous and intriguing.
Interesting, very enjoyable to read. The story is compact and gripping.
Smooth and smooth, so real. Rich in content and fluent in writing.
Your leisurely travel and delicate description. Tell the truth and speak freely.
The words are calm and elegant. Narrative lyricism is quite appropriate.
Beautiful writing and vivid scenery. Smooth layout and realistic description.
Many words are redundant and the words are not vivid. The content is poor and there are too many typos.
It's too early for reconciliation. The writing is vigorous and unconventional.
The article is full of emotion and touching. Detailed description and good organization.
Every word, flowing. Delicate and realistic.
The materials are extraordinary and the pen is flying. The meaning between the lines is calm and elegant.
Fresh, smooth and natural. Rich in materials and vivid in words.
Very humorous, relaxed style. Natural, smooth and orderly.
Lyric class
Bright and fresh, quite charming. Smooth and appropriate, wonderful description.
Narrative lyricism is quite appropriate. Incisively and vividly, quite to the point.
The structure is complete, fresh and meaningful. The pen is smart and poetic.
Anger flows in calligraphy. The meaning is wide and the realm is halal.
The wording is elegant and comprehensive. Express it as you want, and your words will be fine.
Bright, cheerful and magnificent. Easy and interesting, quite interesting.
The words are magnificent and the delivery is gratifying. The writing is sophisticated and thoughtful.
Lyric and sincere, in one go. The words are appropriate and the artistic conception is good.
Emotional and interesting events. The true feelings are revealed and touching.
Wen Chang is big and bears haunt it. The words are blunt and the meaning is unclear.
Speak slowly, the language is not clear. This sentence is rough and doesn't express the meaning.
Hastiness and bias are of little significance. The look of happiness shines on the paper.
Improper choice of words, metaphor is irrelevant. Understanding mistakes doesn't matter.
The language is blunt and fails to convey the meaning. The meaning is empty and the sentence is not fluent.