I don't appreciate the translation of "like a dream, the rain blew suddenly last night"

Translation:

Although it rained thinly last night, the wind kept blowing. I slept soundly all night, but I still felt a little drunk after waking up. So she asked the maid who was rolling shutters what was going on in the garden, and she said that the begonia flowers were still the same as yesterday. You know, you know, this season should be lush green leaves and withered red flowers.

Original text:

Last night, it rained suddenly and the wind blew, so I slept soundly and didn't consume wine.

Ask the shutter man, Haitang is still there.

You know what? You know what? It should be green, fat, red and thin.

Said by: Song, Li Qingzhao, "Like a dream, it was stormy last night".

Extended data

Creation background

This work is Li Qingzhao's early work. According to "Li Qingzhao's Concise Chronology" edited by Chen Zumei, this word was written around 1 100 (Song Zhezong Fuyuan three years).

This word's description of flowers after waking up after staying up late euphemistically expresses the author's pity for flowers, fully embodies the author's love for nature and spring, and also reveals his inner anguish.

Famous comments

Modern Wu: This word shows the love of flowers and spring scenery and the unique concern and sensitivity of women. There are only thirty-three words in the whole word, and the question and answer with shutter is written skillfully. The questioner is full of emotion, but the respondent is indifferent, thus forcing out the sentence "Do you know, do you know?", which is flexible and affectionate.

There are skillful words, and "rain is sparse", "sudden wind", "sound sleep" and "residual wine" are all correct sentences; In the phrase "green and fat and red and thin", green leaves and red flowers are common in past poems, but the combination of "red" and "thin" makes Haitang appear sad, refined and innovative in rhetoric.

Modern Wu Xiaoru: It is written in the poem that the word was written by the author in a fresh and elegant way, and it was written in a secret language in the boudoir, so it is right to say that there are many people thrush, so it is absolutely forbidden for a third person to intervene.

Modern Week: A poem, with only six sentences, is like a painting and a dialogue, which also explains the ins and outs of things. This may be a kind of "lens" expression that the conditions of modern film art can do, but it is actually a work created and performed by a female poet 900 years ago. This is not a miracle, but what can it be?