Some people say that life is a glass of wine, brewing the ups and downs of the world; Some people say that life is a song that sings the joys and sorrows of the years; have

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Life is a song.

Once, I always thought I was growing up and mature day by day. I always thought that I had tasted victory and frustration, and felt that I had seen through the world and understood life. It was not until I tasted the ups and downs of life that I suddenly looked back and found that the family friendship that had gone through the storm was still lingering in my heart. At this moment, I suddenly realized that life is a song.

That summer vacation, I sent a classmate to a distant place to study. When he left, I wished him "life is like a song". He smiled and said, "Life is a song." In my death, I also smiled.

The combination of poetry and music is a song, and the cohesion of nature and truth is life. Songs are beautiful and life is beautiful, so songs and life are integrated.

A person's life is like a beating note, jumping endlessly on endless music scores and playing a song of his own life. No one can escape, and no one can break free.

At sunrise and sunset, geese go and return. On the yellow land, our ancestors sang a song that lasted for 5,000 years-this Sang Song Yangtze River Great Wall, this Taishan Yellow River, from ancient times to the present-in which you and I watched the ebb and flow together.

Unforgettable Jing Ke's "strong men are gone forever". This is a sad song of Qin Ting's blood.

Unforgettable Beethoven, deaf ears can still "hold the throat of fate" and play a magnificent symphony of fate. This is a magnificent song of life.

We don't have to live a luxurious life, and we don't have to escape life. We just need to live every minute and sing our own songs of life.

A friend of mine is one of the "Top Ten Singers" on campus, who loves singing more and life more. Therefore, no one can read his misfortune from his happy smiling face and happy songs. Although terminally ill, he always said, "I will finish my song with a smile." This common saying still touches me and inspires me.

Singing alive is a kind of persistence, and singing alive is a kind of pursuit.

Singing can give us laughter or tears, but life can give us the whole song.

Hugo once said, "Life is a mirror. If you smile at it, it will smile back at you. If you cry at it, it will cry at you. " Indeed, life is a sad song for the weak, a hymn for the strong, a pessimist can only sing an elegy, and an enterprising person can always sing a triumph.

The song of life is in full swing. We don't have to sing about wine, and we don't have to cry when we sing. We just need to sing. No matter how life deceives us, we can't be depressed or lost, but we must firmly believe that we are strong and sing our own life songs loudly. In this way, we will always be selfless and fearless, and have no regrets.

Life gives us songs, and songs give us life. Why can't you sing calmly?

Comments on marks

This article has a real feeling and profound thinking about life, and finally scored 56 points. This paper starts with my own growth experience, and then spreads it out vertically and horizontally, summarizing the cases of life like a song at all times and at home and abroad, and emphasizing the importance and necessity of the rise of life. The full text is eloquent and concrete, revealing the profound philosophy of life in the perspective of the deep connotation of life. The content score is 19. From the structural point of view, the article naturally connects after the topic is broken, and echoes back and forth in one go, with a score of 18. From the perspective of development, the article has rich imagination, outstanding literary talent and expressive language.

Everyone really exists in life and must face life, so everyone has something to say. Students' love and attachment to life, gratitude and expectation to life, boredom and helplessness to life, dissatisfaction and resentment to life … can all be expressed in language. The extension of this topic is quite extensive, and divergent thinking can be skillfully used when designing articles: in the face of life, students can feel the grandeur of life and the tolerance of life; It can interpret the beauty of life and convey the cruelty of life; You can draw bright colors and capture the details of life; You can analyze the "personality" of life, and you can also associate the stories in life ... but no matter what kind of material you choose, you must show a clear and concentrated theme. In addition, when writing, students should pay special attention to two sentences in the topic: "What meaningful enlightenment has life given you? What are your unique discoveries and insights in the face of life? " These two sentences are the key to the examination of the topic, because writing an article like Face Life can not only describe the state of life at a time, but also show the thinking and understanding of life. Specifically, if you are writing an argumentative essay, you'd better write "your own feelings" to settle down and return to yourself; When writing a narrative, you can't simply describe other people's lives as a bystander, but you must also "infiltrate" yourself to meet the requirements of the composition.