Although writing modern poetry is not as elegant as writing classical poetry, we should pay attention to the conciseness of language and the artistic conception of poetry. Not all the sentences in poetry are gorgeous, but some simple poems are equally touching. You should also pay attention to certain logic.
For example;
It's still dark
The rain falls gently.
The journey of the heartbroken
The chill surged on the branches, which caused serious damage to the transformation.
A chaotic autumn
I went to late autumn alone.
I sweat, listen to cicadas and write poems of missing. ................
At first glance, there seems to be nothing wrong with this passage, but please pay attention.
Rain, late autumn, gives people the feeling that it must be cold. But "Sweating cicadas" turned that sentence you wrote before into nonsense.
Imagine that you can hear cicadas in late autumn.
Therefore, logic is equally important, and the other is to read more poems written by celebrities, try to figure out the artistic conception in poems and see the tempering of language.
Give another example:
You cried and said .............
A smile appears on your face. ...
Sadness has occupied your heart again.
Your tears, your tears
…………………………
If you write like this, people will definitely say that you have a problem. A person's mood cannot change more than three times in a row. I can't even write: in the third day, the full moon is round, but people are still haggard.
Natural agreement: Only in the middle of the month, that is, the fifteenth day of each month in the lunar calendar, there will be a full moon, and the two days before and after are called string moons. The moon changed from a crescent to a full moon, and now the full moon is a crescent again.
In fact, the secret of writing articles is: practice.