The poet Qi Ji wrote a poem "Early Plum Blossoms". There is a sentence that goes: "In the deep snow in the front village, several branches bloomed last night." Zheng Gu changed "number" to "one" because the title It is called "early plum blossom". If there are several branches in bloom, it means that the flowers have bloomed for a long time and cannot be regarded as "early plum blossom". Qi Ji admired it so much that he respectfully called Zheng Gu "one-character master".
Wang Jia He wrote a poem "Sunny Scenery": "Before the rain, I first saw the stamens among the flowers, but after the rain, there were no flowers at the bottom of the leaves. Bees and butterflies flew over the wall, but I suspected that the spring scenery was in the neighbor's house." Wang Anshi changed "flying" to "one after another" ", because only the busy profile writing can truly make people feel the unique beauty after the rain in late spring.
The refining of verbs is the main content of refining characters in ancient poems. Wang Anshi's "The spring breeze is green again in the south of the Yangtze River" The word "green" in Tao Qian's "See Nanshan leisurely", the word "nong" in Zhang Xian's "clouds break through the moon and flowers make shadows", and the word "noise" in Song Qi's "the red apricot branches are bustling with spring" "The word "Nao" is well known to everyone. The word "Nao" expresses the vigorous spring feeling in the poet's heart, and the word "Nong" expresses the poet's appreciation of the beauty of flower branches dancing in the breeze under the moon. Du Fu's poem: "Sigeng Mountain "The moon spits out, and the moon shines brightly on the building at night." The word "Ming" is an adjective used like a verb, which makes the picture dynamic. What's even better is the word "vomit".
Use function words well, and you can also get relief. Literary style, opening and closing echoes, melodious twists and turns, and the aesthetic effect of enlivening the charm. Du Fu's poem said: "There are Bashu in the country, and the buildings are as high as the Liang." Ye Mengde commented: "Hundreds of miles far and near, thousands of years up and down, only in the Between the words 'you' and '自', you can feel the spirit of the mountains and rivers, and look up to the past and present, all of which can be seen in the words.
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