In normal study, work or life, everyone will inevitably come into contact with the composition bar, and people can achieve the purpose of cultural exchange with the help of the composition bar. What kind of composition can be called an excellent composition? The following is the composition evaluation I compiled for you. Welcome to read the collection.
Composition evaluation 1 1, the full text is fluent in language and free and easy in writing, which is a relatively successful work.
2. After reading your article, it seems that a stream flows in front of my eyes, pure and lovely. I hope you can keep this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.
3, your article is very creative-use the form of geometric proof questions to complete the idea. The full text is very literary!
This composition is novel in material, unique in conception, vivid in language, and reveals fresh life breath and children's interest between the lines.
5. The author has a strong ability to control the situation, and the whole article is written in one go, which gives people a comfortable feeling!
6. We seem to have heard a lot about the fragility of life in peacetime, and it can disappear in an instant. If you walk in the fields and forests, step on fallen leaves and look up at the blue sky, can you feel the breath of life? Yes, the world is beautiful because of life. Life needs to care for each other. This is the theme of your chapter.
7. Deepen the theme by contrast; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love and hate are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply.
8. This paper has chosen a brand-new angle, and let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".
9. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.
10, juvenile life, always writing many absurd stories; There are always many magical dreams in the hearts of teenagers. This essay, like a boat full of dreams, is full of the author's innocence, dreams, yearning and just beginning to mature, and sails far away.
1 1. Pay attention to specific things and develop appropriate imagination, which is success.
12, caring about life and society is not the privilege of adults. Through this "accident", we can see that in your heart, there are not only childlike innocence, books and schools, but also endless concern for social worries. This passage is full of twists and turns, especially the psychological description is very prominent, and the discussion at the end sublimates the theme of the article.
13, the article is detailed, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.
14, the close-up is unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read.
15, the full text has many wonderful sentences, which adds some literary interest to the article.
16, the story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their own identity characteristics. It can be seen that you are a conscientious person in life. The article comes from life, so although the language is not so beautiful, it is really interesting and reasonable.
17, the full text is clear, vivid and compact, and interesting.
18, such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can not help but give people a refreshing feeling. This is really what teachers should learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?
19, the full text is fresh and elegant, kind and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, and it is worth learning.
20. According to the sequence of events, the article describes that … the language is fluent, the level is clear, and it looks very enjoyable from beginning to end.
2 1, the language is appropriate and romantic, and the context is smooth, which shows the image of a bookworm's bosom friend and the affection between "me" and "bosom friend", which is smart and elegant.
22, based on real life, appropriate materials, extremely innovative, clear paragraphs, natural transition, interesting and readable.
At the end of the article, the central sentence is revealed, and the pen is clear, short and powerful.
24, the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but can be detailed and focused.
25. It is really "writing like a god". It seems that you must have read a lot of literary works. The content is so rich that it shows your literary skills. Only by adjusting the materials in a certain logical order will this article be more exciting.
26. The quotation of several common sayings is just right, with nostalgia as the clue. It just reflects your ideology.
27, practical, contains a simple and profound philosophy, exciting to read, passionate.
Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, full of emotion and truth, and it is interesting to read. A large number of spoken English in life is used to make the article more natural and close to the people. The ending is ... clear and complete, implicit and meaningful.
29. The content is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
30. The article integrates feelings into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing feelings, and is good at using metaphors to make the article vivid and concrete.
3 1. Although you can live happily in your own world, the development of society has been globalized, so you should devote yourself to collective life with a brand-new attitude to adapt to the development of society.
32. The full text has a lively rhythm and fresh language, and it is always full of humor and fun to read.
33. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful and hit the floor, which makes people excited and excited.
34. You can associate snow with the pursuit of life. Starting from the details of life, the spirit of innovation is commendable. This article reflects your plain writing style. Who says "boiled water" is not the best drink?
35. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.
It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. People, failure is inevitable, and it is even more valuable to have the courage to face it. I believe it is gold, and there will always be flashes. I hope you can adjust your mind as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer.
37. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and fluent, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
Your writing is as simple and open-minded as your personality. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.
39. The author is clever in conception, good at choosing points, and his writing is ups and downs, which is thought-provoking. The language is lively and interesting. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
40. The article is written in detail, revealing the warmth like sunshine between the lines, which naturally sublimates the theme of the article to a higher level.
4 1. Although writing is not your favorite, you keep writing like a snail at every step, never stopping. Your spirit is really admirable. With your personality, you will definitely break into your own world.
42. Through careful observation, I vividly described ... the article is short but not monotonous, and the language is popular but interesting.
43. As a casual feeling, your article is quick-thinking and full of wishes. The rich life experience and delicate thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form a landscape of your own!
44. You are a very independent and knowledgeable student. I quite agree with you, but it would be even more icing on the cake if the writing arrangement was more compact.
45. The composition material is novel, the idea is wonderful and the language is lively. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
46. This article narrates the events of … in the order of events. The language is fluent, the level is clear, and it is very enjoyable from beginning to end.
47. The full text is hearty, full of joy and expectation, sincere and touching. The beginning was extraordinary.
48. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.
49. The full-text language is fluent and the writing is free and easy, which can be called a relatively successful work.
50. A meticulous description of the characters' language, manners and movements. It is a major feature of this article. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished.
Composition evaluation 2 1, you read widely and accumulated a lot of words. Therefore, when describing the movements and expressions of characters, they can be vividly expressed with appropriate words. The teacher is glad to have a student like you. Keep trying. Your dream as a writer will come true.
2. The article is narrated in children's language, which is natural and simple, just like a clear spring. The finish line played the role of finishing touch.
3. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing. The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
4, it is really "writing like a god." It seems that you must have read a lot of literary works. The content is so rich that it shows your literary skills. Only by adjusting the materials in a certain logical order will this article be more exciting.
5. The article ends with …, which is concise and full of charm.
6. This article takes … as a clue, which is clear and natural. At the same time, through the comparison of specific cases before and after. Attack ..., the language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is readable.
7. There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.
8. The author observes … carefully, describes it delicately, and has vivid language and novel expression. The full-text language is concise and natural in structure. ... the article is well-structured and echoes from beginning to end.
9. The language of the article is fresh and lively, and the description can grasp the main features of things. The picture is short and pithy, and it is worth reading.
10, from this little diary, I can see that you are a careful student, who can capture a little thing in daily life in detail and write your inner feelings in plain language. The picture is short and pithy, and the language is plain, which can arouse the soul.
Composition evaluation 3 1, the content is as dry as dead leaves in autumn, how can people be willing to read it? Read more extracurricular books to ensure that the dead leaves turn green again next spring.
There are many typos like a hornet's nest. I am already a fourth-grade student. How to use pinyin instead of words that can't be written? Is your dictionary sleeping?
3. The author can introduce his lovely xx to readers in the order of orientation, from the teaching area (the giant flower bed of the teaching building) to the sports area (the big playground) at the school gate, which is distinct, selective and focused, and naturally reflects the vibrant atmosphere of the school.
4. The author combines the description of the scenery with the expression of feelings, and the scenery is seamless, showing his incomparable love for xx between the lines of pen and ink. The author focuses on describing the beautiful fountain, the grassy playground and the spacious and bright classroom, so that a beautiful xx can be presented to people.
5. With fresh thoughts, vivid appearance and beautiful writing style, the young author firmly revolves around a green character and shapes the beauty of xx according to the overall layout of the score.
6. Rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification are properly used in this paper, which makes the green vitality of xx in different seasons full of hope and fragrance.
7. The author captures the unique scenery of xx in spring, writes the beauty of xx accurately and aptly by using the rhetorical devices of metaphor, and at the same time, gently praises the hardworking gardener and teacher, and sublimates the theme of the article.
8. The careful investigation of the young author, vivid and meticulous appearance and vivid metaphor personification make people feel immersive after reading it, and also make the author's mind and feelings like xx more natural and full.
9. From beginning to end, the article is fresh and vivid in style, vivid in appearance and combined with news. From the morning fog nearby to the sunrise in the distance, from the leaves in the air to the grass on the ground, from poplar trees to free-flying birds, the layers are distinct and distinct, making people feel like they are in the air.
10, the little author used the essentials of moving point inspection to hold the morning color of xx vividly, and the lines were filled with the little author's love for xx and nature.
1 1. With the help of rich imagination, the article uses rhetorical devices such as personification metaphor to portray, making the language fluent and beautiful and the article vivid.
12 and xx are really beautiful. Your exercises are clear in level and rich in content, and your words are particularly vivid and accurate.
13, the little author wrote about the local school he was familiar with, which combined the scenery and people wonderfully. There are people in the scenery, and the scenery sets people off.
14. In your pen, the scenery of xx in winter is meticulous and the language is fluent. The use of metaphor and personification rhetoric increases the vividness and significance of the article. If you can put the action of the characters into such a scene, the composition will be more colorful!
15. In your pen, the scenery of xx is so beautiful and moving, and the sports are so colorful. I love you too, beautiful xx.
16 The author expressed his love for the school through the scenery of xx itself, which is clear to the central authorities.
17, the author vividly and meticulously grasped the color, shape, fragrance and other characteristics of the landscape, and used various techniques such as metaphor and personification to make people feel the beauty of autumn everywhere.
18, this article is concise and vivid, and the content is really interesting. There are many places in the article that reflect the careful investigation of the little author at ordinary times, which is particularly remarkable in various interesting survival scenes of modeling xx, which makes people feel the joy of xx everywhere and feel immersive when reading it.
19, all the colors are beautiful and life is full of hope. Between the lines, through the appearance of xx in spring, summer, autumn and winter, the author expresses his love for xx's childhood survival.
20. The love for xx is revealed between the lines of the article, and the dynamic stereoscopic perception is used wonderfully, so that xx is integrated into the fourth order of that year. As time goes on, it shows movement and vitality. There are also some young authors who are constantly exploring the unknown, eager for knowledge and loving their motherland, which makes every reader very happy.
2 1, you are like a little painter, painting the beautiful scenery of your xx for everyone to see. The four orders are different, the scenery is different, and the short pen and ink circulation exposes your love for xx, which is great!
22. Your composition and scenery are in harmony, and between the lines is your love for xx. Finally, speak your mind directly and express your main idea: love xx, very good! Beautiful language and a large number of rhetorical devices such as personification vividly show the fourth-order landscape of xx.
23. The author wrote about the busyness and enrichment of xx morning, and also wrote about the beautiful scenery of xx morning. A year's plan lies in spring, and a day's plan lies in morning. On this beautiful morning, we embarked on the journey of life, expressing the author's good wishes to cherish the good times and take a good life path.
24. This article is beautifully written and expressive, and it is a beautiful ode to childhood survival. With expressive style, the author vividly describes the four-sequence scenery in the corner of xx, and deeply recalls the wonderful childhood life spent there.
25. Based on the overall structure of the total score, this paper extracts the key elements of xx, such as trees, flowers, inkstones, etc., so that the fourth-order beauty of xx looks large and small, with distinct levels, which is a good landscape writing exercise.
26. The scenery of the fourth order in XX is really beautiful. Your exercises are clear in level and rich in content, and your words are particularly vivid and accurate.
27. The full text is clear, vivid and compact, and the viewpoints are meaningful. The article expresses its feelings while narrating. Meet at the end to express emotions, which not only takes care of the beginning but also summarizes the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, strike while the iron is hot.
28. The article is meticulous, orderly and vivid, which is a masterpiece. The content of the article is fresh, the layout is fair, smooth and coherent, and naturally accessible. The details are quite ingenious. Extremely rich in skills.
29. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is exquisite and tortuous, which seems to bring the reader into a happy paradise and make people very happy. The full text is easy to understand and meaningful.
30, vivid and meticulous, people can't help but let go of the hand roll. At the end of the article, it is both topical and intriguing.
3 1, the beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, detailed and appropriate.
32. Dealing with the appearance of the scene, the language is concise and accurate, while daydreaming is touching the scene and the scene is naturally integrated. The full text is fresh and elegant, close and euphemistic, simple and not vulgar, which is worth learning.
33. The article has clear clues, prominent themes and is closely focused. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read and reluctant to let go.
34. It is quite innovative to use the scene metaphor at the beginning; Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception.
35. The beginning of the article is fresh and has the effect of pulling one hair and moving the whole body. Let readers have an impression on the characters as soon as they meet. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.
36. The content of this article is vivid, and it feels like having just eaten a piece of fresh milk cake, with endless aftertaste.
37. The article can read fresh and interesting language and the appearance of things. Between the lines, a full childhood is really childlike and full of laughter, which is a masterpiece. Appropriate details and the combination of reality and reality are two characteristics, which are richer in content and reborn.
38. Make full use of the writing method of news combination, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques, and make readers feel as if they are in a fantasy through vivid language description. The praise of the characters at the end is sincere and touching.
39. Your homework is no longer like boiled water. It's a little sweet now. Keep working hard and I will cheer for you!
40, the sentence is not very smooth, like my cousin's face covered with small pimples, reading makes me uncomfortable.
4 1, the focus is not very prominent, just like a water fight, the water splashed everywhere, but the target of the attack could not be found.
42. The handwriting is flying like a dragon and a phoenix. Maybe you want to be a cursive calligrapher?
43. There are too many typos. Just like sesame seeds on sesame cakes, can we try to photograph sesame seeds on sesame cakes?
44. The handwriting is crowded. Aren't you afraid to heat them?
45. The phenomenon of losing words is serious. I wonder if you often break your umbrella in rainy days?
46. From the outside to the inside, this paper introduces the features of the novel. Observe orderly and carefully. The writing is accurate and vivid, arousing many senses, and the content is true and concrete.
47. Write first, then write, then write, and finally write. How clear the writing idea is and how delicate the description is. You see, with appropriate metaphor, vivid and vivid, highlighting the beauty of spring. In addition, the scene is vividly written, highlighting a happy word, which is beautiful, affectionate and wonderful.
48. Actions are rarely written, like branches in autumn, which have no leaves.
49. Your sentence is a dead goldfish in a jar, not alive at all.
Punctuation is polite, like a smooth floor tile.
5 1, full of life, accurate and vivid words and sentences.
52. When describing the scenery, I wrote my own experience and expressed my inner feelings. For example, the surprise of finding the first grass sprouting, the excitement of seeing swallows nesting under their own eaves, the admiration of smelling the fragrance of peach blossoms, and the joy of hearing the teacher announce the spring outing are all inner feelings. While describing the scenery, properly expressing inner feelings and even associations will make the practice more vivid and real, and will also touch others.
53. Write what you see, hear, smell and feel about the beauty of spring into your sports, and make your sports as vivid and beautiful as spring!
Flying kites is children's favorite activity, and the fun is self-evident. Through detailed description, the colorful flying scenes of kites in the sky are displayed.
55. After watching your exercises, we can see a lovely and flawless childlike innocence.
56. Grasp the different characteristics of spring, such as grass, trees and flowers, and paint a vibrant scene of spring in a new order, reflecting my heartfelt joy.
57. Writing a scene captures the characteristics of the scene, describes the blending of the scene, from far to near, from surface to point, and handles it in an orderly way. The articles written are more coherent, and the scenes have different shapes and colors, which captures the characteristics of shapes.
58. In your pen, it looks like a small garden, so full of vitality, and its description is carried out in order, which is easy to read.
59. The metaphor is vivid, vivid and appropriate, and the ontology is similar to the metaphor, which greatly enhances the interest and persuasiveness of the article.
60. Properly use the methods of comparison and comparison to prove the center of the article through the disparity and difference between things.
6 1, seize the opportunity to use parallelism to explain the characteristics of things in many ways, which not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.
Using personification skillfully, the images in the text have the characteristics of human behavior, thoughts and feelings, and reflect the spiritual course of the protagonist in the text from the side.
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