Add the example1a. The subject-predicate collocation is improper.
After the party, her beautiful dancing and beautiful singing still reverberated in my ears. (? Dancing? Can't talk? Ear echo? Collocation)
B. Improper collocation of verbs and objects
By then, what we will see and hear will be the revival of the reading era accompanied by new technologies. (? Do you hear me? Can't talk? Reading age? Collocation)
C. Improper collocation of subject and object
With the approach of the senior high school entrance examination, students' learning attitude and academic performance have been greatly improved. (? Attitude? With what? Improve? Improper collocation. )
D. Improper collocation of modifiers and headwords
Spring has come, and the colorful pear blossoms on the hillside are blooming brightly. (? Colorful? Can't decorate? Pear flower? . )
E. Improper collocation of related words
Only by increasing income can the grain output increase steadily. (? Just? And then what? Only? Improper collocation. )
② Incomplete components: that is, a sentence lacks proper components, which affects the expression of meaning. Lack of subject or object is common. Aunt joined the club? Five good families and advanced individuals? . This sentence lacks an object? Activities? .
(3) Repetition: that is, the sentence elements are redundant, resulting in repetition. There has been an unprecedented upsurge of learning in schools. In this sentence? Never? And then what? Unprecedented means the same, just use one.
Improper word order: that is, the word order of sentences is disordered. The Palace Museum in Beijing exhibited the newly unearthed cultural relics before 2900. The two attributives of this sentence are not in the right order, which will make people misunderstand? Cultural relics? It was unearthed 2900 years ago. Newly unearthed cultural relics before 2900? .
⑤ Mixed sentences: Two sentences are mixed together, resulting in the phenomenon that sentences are not fluent. If you don't study hard, it is conceivable that you may get good grades. This sentence mixes rhetorical questions with judgmental sentences, which destroys the integrity of sentence structure and tone. If you use a rhetorical question, it should be? How can we get good grades? ; If you use a judgment sentence, it should be? Can you imagine the bad grades? .
⑥ Ambiguity: One sentence can express multiple meanings, which makes the listener misunderstand. Xiao Ming and Xiao Zhang's mother went to the shop. Is Xiao Ming or Xiao Ming's mother going to the store? Caused ambiguity.
⑦ illogical
A. contradiction
He is one of many surviving victims. (since? Survival? How can you promise? One of the victims? )
B. inversion of subject and object
For example, ostrovsky's How Steel was Tempered is no stranger to young people in China. The subject is human and the object is thing. The correct logical order should be that people are no strangers to things. )
C. Improper denial
The driver's master should control the speed to prevent the rear-end collision from happening again. (? Prevention? What should it be? Happen again? Should be removed? No? . )
D. Bilateral imbalances
Whether to study hard or not is the key to achieving excellent results. The front is double-sided and the back is single-sided. Get? Add in front? Is it okay? Or remove it? Is it? . )
The common types of ill sentences in the second day of junior high school plus example 2 1. In the following sentences, there is no bad word ().
A. students are full of confidence in whether they can get good grades.
B. As soon as he walked into the playground, he felt a warm atmosphere and a happy smiling face.
C. We should thoroughly implement the central decision-making spirit and speed up the construction of the economic zone on the west side of the Taiwan Strait.
D. the information on the internet is not only rich, but also convenient and fast to find.
2. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().
Over the past 30 years of reform and opening up, our life has undergone earth-shaking changes.
B according to Xinhua news agency reported on June 13, the number of patients with influenza a (H 1N 1) in China decreased by 1.2 times.
C. food safety has become a major issue related to the national economy and people's livelihood.
D. Affected by the financial crisis, about 20,000 to 30,000 large and small factories closed down in Guangdong alone.
3. One of the following sentences is ()
A. Seeing graduation photo in front of him, Xiao Xin couldn't help thinking of the three years when everyone played together and studied at the same table.
B in the face of influenza epidemic, governments at all levels take timely preventive measures to ensure the safety of people's lives.
C. Being able to choose a suitable destination after graduation is a sign of a person's maturity.
Without the help of air, no matter how perfect the wings are, birds will never fly to the blue sky.
4. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ()
A. Maoming in midsummer is a harvest season.
B. Whether students' thinking ability can be cultivated is an important criterion to measure the success of a class.
C. By studying the Letter to Parents on Fire Safety and Caring for Life issued by the school, all our parents have been educated.
D During May Day this year, there were too few trash cans in some scenic spots in our city, which led to tourists littering. In this regard, we believe that the scenic spot management department is not without responsibility.
5. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().
A. In today's era of commodity economy, poetry has lost its former glory and drifted away from us. It is really a rare spiritual enjoyment to read such an inspiring ode to the motherland.
B. He is an informative tabloid edited by his hometown, which is informative and readable. Hundreds of tabloids are printed every month, and they are snapped up by fellow villagers in less than an hour.
C. The language of literary and artistic works is good or bad, not because it uses many gorgeous words and terms of a certain industry, but because its words are used in the right place.
D. He works hard and treats people sincerely. In life and work, he really used his own actions to shape great personality strength, moving and guiding people around him.
6. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().
A. Some people think that scientists are immersed in scientific research all day. It's a bit unreasonable not to ask about family affairs, but the facts are the best explanation of this prejudice.
Investment environment, service quality and the quality of government officials are all important guarantees for the healthy development of regional economy.
The preservation of Dunhuang art treasure house makes it possible for us to understand the growth and development of China art in the past 15600 years.
D Now many primary schools allow students to drink water, go to the toilet and even interrupt the teacher's lecture. These behaviors, which have always been regarded as disciplinary violations, have been corrected.
7. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().
A: Two students from a school played the other day. Bungee jumping? The cause of the accident and the quality of equipment are under investigation.
B. The abuse of loanwords not only destroys the rigor and harmony of Chinese, but also affects the expressive function of Chinese, and dispels the profound connotation of China culture.
C. The main causes of heart failure in the elderly are fatigue, excessive brain use, mental stress, excessive salt and colds.
D. what do you think of us after observing the trial of the rural management contract law? Village official? The legal level has been greatly improved.
8. Among the following sentences, the one that is not bad is ().
A. A lot of facts show that 90? Long-term smokers, memory and olfactory sensitivity are obviously dull and decreased.
B. The flower of professional ethics blooms here, and the delicate petals are stained with the sweat poured by young people and exude the fragrance of young people's hearts.
A recent social survey shows that many online games contain violent plots and pornographic content, which will undoubtedly seriously affect the physical and mental health of teenagers.
D facing five American teams with NBA experience, China didn't get cold feet, but played like a rainbow in the whole game, and finally beat their opponents by three points.
answer
1.D 2。 C 3。 A
4. analysis: answer: b this is a multiple-choice question, asking candidates to choose one without language barriers. The proposition sets up language barriers from three aspects and requires candidates to analyze them. Sentence a is not collocated properly. Maoming? No? Season? , should be changed to? Is midsummer (season) in Maoming a harvest season? . Sentence C is incomplete and has no subject. Should it be removed? Pass? Or? Manufacturing? . Sentence D is inappropriate and should be deleted? No? Or will it? Not without? Change to? No? . Candidates may lose points because of the wrong choice when they don't know the cause of the sick sentence.
5. A six. C 7。 B 8。 C