source
I read it in a night book-Ye Shaoweng.
original text
The rustling leaves send the cold sound, and the autumn wind moves the guests on the river.
I know that children choose to promote weaving, and a lamp fell on the fence at night.
translate
The rustling autumn wind blows the plane leaves, bringing chills; The autumn wind blowing from the river makes me miss my hometown when I am far away from it.
Late at night, a child lit a lamp and looked for and caught crickets by the fence.
Keyword annotation
Rustle: the wind.
Guest feeling: the homesickness of passengers.
Pick: Pick and move.
Promote knitting: commonly known as cricket, and some areas are also called cricket.
Fence: A fence.
Creation background
This is Ye Shaoweng touching the scenery in a foreign land. The migration of seasons and climate and the change of scenery are most likely to cause travelers' homesickness. "Wen Xin Diao Long Looking for a Job" said: "In the Spring and Autumn Period, the Yin and Yang families were miserable, and their hearts were shaken when looking for a job." Being in a foreign land, the author felt autumn in the quiet night and wrote this euphemistic poem.
Appreciation of works 1
This poem was written by a poet who lived in a foreign land and felt autumn in a quiet night, expressing his worries about travel and deep homesickness. Plants and trees are dying, flowers are dying, the autumn wind on the river is chilly, and the leaves are rustling cold. The word "send" in the poem makes people seem to hear the voice of cold bones. ?
This poem puts overlapping onomatopoeia words at the beginning of the sentence, which arouses readers' auditory images from the beginning, produces autumn images, and reflects the silence of autumn night with sound. Then use the word "send" to express movement in silence, and lead to "cold sound" in the rustling of falling leaves, which seems to contain biting cold; The method of hearing causing tactile synaesthesia renders the sadness of the environment.
The second sentence points out "autumn wind". "The wind rises in Leng Yue", and the autumn wind on the river triggers the lonely feelings of travelers. Hans Zhang, a native of A Jin, was an official in Luoyang. Seeing the autumn wind, he resigned and went home because he missed the water shield soup and bass in his hometown. The author of this poem heard the voice of autumn wind during his trip, which touched his feelings and disappointed him. These two sentences use "Wu Ye", "cold sound" and "autumn wind on the river" to describe the cold in autumn, but they are actually used to set off the desolation of the guests' mood. Then the word "move" reveals "guest feelings", and the scene is similar and natural, showing the depth of sadness.
In a few words, from the stadium to the outdoor, there is a long-span jump. These two sentences are upside down, so they should be moved back and forth in the order of meaning. The poet's thoughts were so complicated that he couldn't sleep, so he turned and walked out of the house to dispel the lingering thoughts and leave behind his worries, but the night scene in front of him gave him a brand-new feeling. Isn't the flickering light between hedges in the vast darkness "picking children to promote weaving"? This carefree, lively and naive behavior is in sharp contrast with the poet's sad feelings and depressed mood.
A lamp in the dark night shows fragments of childhood life on the screen of the poet's mind, and the scene in front of him meets the feelings in his heart, which makes the poet fall into deep yearning for his hometown. He compared his "lonely world" with the "crossing the fence" in Yi Deng, and conveyed a homesickness through the scenery, which was linked with the sentence "on the river" and wrapped up the whole article, especially for Qiu Si, which made people daydream.
Poetry shows nostalgia for childhood. The children caught at night to promote knitting reminded the poet of his childhood. Write the voice of autumn wind first, then listen to the feeling of this voice. At the end of the poem, write down what you see outdoors. This poem is fluent in language, distinct in layers, with a turning point in the middle, and sentence breaks and meanings run through it. Poets are good at euphemistically expressing the unspeakable feelings of autumn night travelers through artistic images without falling into the realm of decline. The last word is light and far-reaching and chewy.
Ye Jingyi, a Poem Written by Mei Zhai by Xu Wei in the Southern Song Dynasty: "The sound is like the wind, and the smell is clearer than the dew." ?
Qian Zhongshu's Notes on Selected Poems of the Song Dynasty: "This kind of scenery is exactly what Jiang Kui's Qi Tianle chanted about cricket, saying," Laughing at the fence calls for a lamp, and all the children in the world. "
Appreciation of works ii
Emotional evaluation
1, the author expressed a feeling of homesickness, homesickness and homesickness.
One or two sentences in the poem say that the leaves of trees are flying, the cold sound is blowing, the autumn wind is rustling and the river boat is drifting, which effectively sets off the poet's sad mood of being in a foreign land and wandering around. Three or four sentences describing the life scenes of children playing tricks on crickets with burning lamps will naturally arouse the poet's association. He will remember that his childhood was so naive, romantic, happy and interesting; He will think of the warmth and beauty of his hometown; He will think of the voices and smiles of his relatives and friends, and feel at home, like returning to childhood.
2. Poetry expresses the author's feeling of loneliness in a foreign land and without a fixed place.
Write a sentence or two about the scenery, and use fallen leaves, autumn wind and cold to set off the desolation of wandering and loneliness. A river of autumn water, the sky is dark, and the ears are cold. The poet couldn't sleep all night. He must be depressed and his meaning is not smooth. Write three or four sentences about children catching crickets at night, which is very interesting, cleverly contrasts sadness and shows the loneliness and helplessness of living in a foreign country.
3. Poetry expresses the author's nostalgia for childhood.
Looking at the whole poem, generally speaking, three or four sentences are seen by the poet. Children catch crickets at night with great interest, forgetting the autumn wind and chill, regardless of the fall of trees and the cold in Qiu Jiang, catching crickets at midnight with relish. That kind of obsession, that kind of caution, that kind of ups and downs of sensitivity, are all shown in one gesture. This cheerful and interesting life scene naturally evokes the poet's memories and nostalgia for his childhood. One or two sentences can also be understood in this way. The autumn scenery, accompanied by rustling sounds and swaying leaves, reveals a sense of wandering and inexplicable melancholy, and also reflects the poet's nostalgia and yearning for the carefree childhood living in a foreign country.
Writing method
1, borrowing scenery to express emotion and blending scenes. All four sentences in the poem are about scenery. Write one or two sentences about the natural environment and three or four sentences about life scenes. The fallen trees are rustling, the cold sounds are bursting, and the autumn wind is Qiu Jiang, conveying the feeling of drifting and desolation; Playing tricks on cricket makes the child happy, revealing the meaning of getting carried away and forgetting the fish. A sadness and a joy, set each other off and become interesting, all of which are integrated into the environmental description without trace.
2, dynamic and static combination, with dynamic lining static. Autumn leaves, autumn wind, autumn sounds, Qiu Jiang, autumn lights, Qiu Er, autumn boats and autumn meaning are all vividly written, with light and shadow; Dark as ink, deep and unpredictable, endless darkness, this is quiet writing, quiet and cold, full of melancholy. Whistling wind and naughty children, these dynamic scenes skillfully reflect the deep silence in late autumn, and even arouse people's appreciation of the poet's sad and sleepless heart in the cold and silent night.
3. Contrast the joys and sorrows, and set joy and sadness against each other. One or two sentences describe the scenery, the autumn wind sweeps away the leaves, and it is freezing in the cold, which is a sad scene and conveys sadness; Writing three or four sentences about people, encouraging weaving in the middle of the night, and bright lights shining on the fence are a happy scene, spreading joy. Sadness and joy are mixed, and joy sets off sadness, which shows the loneliness, helplessness and sleeplessness of wandering wanderers.
4. Express your feelings and use allusions in secret. The autumn wind moving on the river secretly uses the allusions of Hans Zhang. According to legend, Hans Zhang, an official living in Luoyang, missed his hometown when he saw the autumn wind, so he resigned and returned to his hometown, but he got his wish. The poem conveys the poet's thoughts and feelings of being far away from home for a long time, unable to return home and missing his family.
5, personification, synaesthesia, add luster. "The rustling leaves send cold sounds, and the autumn wind on the river moves guests' feelings", and "sending" and "moving" reflect feelings in things, giving the leaves and autumn wind a human modality. It seems that these poems of material state and emotion bring readers into an artistic conception of sending cold air and moving Qiu Jiang, which is fascinating and full of melancholy. The rustling leaves send cold sounds skillfully uses synaesthesia, urges the feeling of cold autumn with rustling sounds, and conveys tactile feelings with auditory images, which is meaningful.
6, careful choice of words, "cold" and "pick" vivid. On both sides of the word "cold", there is a chilly and threatening feeling of autumn wind, which means the end of the world is stranded. The word "pick" in the details is very interesting. The child's concentration, sensitivity and delicacy, and the child's breathless observation, surprise and excitement are all in one "pick".
7. The combination of reality and reality embodies virtual reality. The four sentences in the whole poem describe the scenery and characters, and everything you see and hear, whether bright or dark, is realistic. Full of autumn sounds, full of autumn nights, a autumn river and a group of children, just like a photo of the scene, give people the feeling that they have heard their voices, seen their people and been in the environment. This vivid scene skillfully conveys the poet's sad and lonely feelings full of sadness and sleepless nights. Free time in reality (guest feelings), contained in reality, reflected in reality, has endless meanings!
Brief introduction of the author
Ye Shaoweng, a poet in the mid-Southern Song Dynasty, was born in Longquan. The ancestral home is Jian 'an (now Jian 'ou, Fujian), surnamed Li, and the heir is Longquan (now Lishui, Zhejiang) Ye. The year of birth and death is unknown. He used to be a junior official in the imperial court. His knowledge came from Ye Shi, who lived in seclusion for a long time by the Qiantang West Lake. He had close contacts with Zhen and made friends with Ge.