"Add waist to poetry" emphasizes that poetry pays special attention to artistic conception.
"Add Waist to Poems" is a text in the sixth unit of the first volume of the sixth grade Chinese language published by the People's Education Press. This article mainly talks about one day when Su Xiaomei, Su Dongpo and Huang Shangu were discussing the poem "Breeze in the Willows" given by Su Xiaomei. , "Danyue Meihua" adds waist, "waist" refers to the central word of the poem, which makes the poem more beautiful and expressive. This is the "waist" in the poem.
Su Xiaomei thinks that Su Dongpo's "waist". ", "Ying", "Dance" and "Hidden" in Huangshan Valley are not beautiful enough, so I said "The gentle breeze supports the thin willows, and the pale moon loses the plum blossoms." "It can be seen that the pursuit of condensing words and sentences in poems makes us pay special attention to the beautiful sentences and expressive words in poems.
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"Add waist to poems" through adding words The description of the waist is used as a vivid example. The article analyzes the different effects of adding different waists. The words "shake" and "ying" really describe the movement of willows, the brightness of the moon, and the beauty of Huangshan Valley. "Wu" and "Yin" are slightly better, because "Wu" imitates human movements and reflects Liu's posture more vividly; "Yin" is an exaggeration to make the brightness of the moon more prominent.
Finally, write the word "help" and "lose" in Su Xiaomei's words. Fortunately, the personification of "help" is more accurate. It not only describes the gentleness of the wind, the fragility of the willow, but also the intimacy and mutual dependence of the wind and the willow. The gesture is more vivid and appropriate than the word "wu" in Huangshan Valley, and it is more expressive than the word "hidden". It accurately depicts the scene of the moon and plum blossoms merging into one.
This example implicitly expresses the requirement to increase the waist. The "waist" must conform to the emotion of the whole sentence, and beautiful things must use a waist that can express beauty. The "waist" must be vivid, such as the personification method in the article? "It needs to be expressive, for example, the softness of "help" can well show the beauty of willow.