Why can the composition of "want to be a county magistrate" by second-grade pupils become popular? Recently, an essay written by a 9-year-old girl in Changxing County, Zhejiang Province has spread all over the circle of friends and won the admiration of countless netizens, especially police uncles!
On May 4th, a second-grade teacher in a primary school in Changxing County assigned a semi-propositional composition "I want to be when I grow up ...",
Wang, a 9-year-old classmate, finished his composition on this topic. The reason why the composition won the highest score of five stars was because Wang's idea was particularly eye-catching: a little girl who was only nine years old wanted to be a county magistrate when she grew up; The reason for being a county magistrate worries her even more: she actually wants to use power for personal gain, "not letting her father work overtime."
After reading the whole article, you not only feel a stone falling in your heart, but also feel happy: Oh, it turns out that our little friend Wang wants "Dad can have a good rest without working overtime and spend more time with his mother and himself".
After this composition became popular, many media interviews such as People's Daily Online and Xinhua News Agency confirmed that the father written by Wang's friend's composition was not empty at all, and what she wrote in her composition was entirely her own true thoughts!
As far as writing skills are concerned, this composition is really great. Why did it attract readers' attention from the beginning? That's because: the little author came straight to the point and clarified his point of view: to be a county magistrate. According to people's secular point of view, this idea can exist, but it can only be hidden in one's own heart and cannot be announced to the public. It is jaw-dropping for Wang to say openly and openly that he wants to be an "official". What's more, in the second sentence, she went on to say, "If I become a county magistrate, I can not let my father often work overtime", which is blatant "abuse of power for personal gain", and it is even more surprising that people can't get together again!
This suspense setting is really clever, which attracts readers' attention and captures their curiosity. Makes you wonder, is this little girl "crazy"? What does she want? You must read on and try to make things clear.
And when you read the whole composition, you will put a hanging heart down. Ah, so that's it! What a great idea! What a loving, filial, caring and considerate child this is! And in the end, the article also sublimated the theme, not only "don't let dad work overtime", but also "reduce the work pressure for all police uncles!" This is really a nobody, but he cares about the world!
Wang's composition is really a good composition, which meets all the standards of a good composition:
First, the theme is clear, the narrative logic, the language is fluent, and the levels are clear; Second, point the topic at the beginning, set suspense and seize the reader; Third, stick to the theme, unfold the narrative, and be logical and orderly; Fourth, the end of the rebate theme, sublimate the theme, clean and neat; Fifth, rhetorical devices such as repetition and parallelism are used in many places, which are appropriate, catchy to read and have a strong sense of rhythm.
Of course, the advantages, benefits and skills I mentioned above must have never been thought of by Wang's children when they were writing, even for her in Grade Two, because according to the current primary school teaching requirements, she has not started to formally study composition in Grade Two. So, why do Wang Can Yue Ning's children use "writing skills" so skillfully and naturally to write such popular compositions?
This is because composition is a written language, that is, a language recorded in words. In other words, the essence of composition is that. Of course, this "word" not only refers to what you say verbally, but also includes what you think. It is a good composition to say what you think and write what you say.
Therefore, writing a composition should be a natural flow of one's "mind", just a child in Yue Ning, Rainbow, who just "flows" his own ideas in the form of words and writes them on paper.
Ye Zhishan, the son of Ye Shengtao, a famous educator, once mentioned in "My father taught me to learn Chinese": My father never asked him to write a topic, but asked him to write everything he saw, heard and thought.
"Chinese Curriculum Standards for Primary Schools" even points out that "composition requires students to tell the truth, the truth, the truth, and no lies, empty words or cliches." Advocate "to provide favorable conditions and broad space for students to write independently, reduce the constraints on students' writing, and encourage free expression and creative expression." It also emphasizes that "writing teaching should be close to students' reality, so that students are willing to write and express, and guide students to pay attention to reality, love life and express their true feelings." "
These requirements tell us that composition writing is not difficult. Speaking from the heart and writing on paper is a good composition. Wang's composition, a senior two student, is the best example.
The popularity of Wang's children's composition gives our teachers and parents profound enlightenment: don't think that the composition is so mysterious, don't think that children can't write a composition! Composition is written, not taught. The real composition teaching is not to instill the so-called composition elements, methods and skills into children, but to guide children to "flow" their true ideas. If you want your child to write a really good composition, it is very simple to let go of your hands and feet and let your child "write whatever he wants!"
I want to be an angel of love _ If someone asks me, "If you can change, what will you become?" I will not hesitate to answer: "I want to be an angel of love and help people all over the world to be healthy and happy."
"This morning, I flapped my wings and flew to every corner of the world to find people in need.
I fly and fly. Suddenly, I was attracted by a sweet music. There are many people around. I squeezed into the crowd and saw a poor beggar playing the flute.
Halfway through, he stopped, picked up the broken bowl next to him and came to the onlookers. He bent down and respectfully begged people for charity.
People seem satisfied after listening to the music, so they leave one after another.
I thought to myself: if everyone has a heart of compassion, how good it would be! I took out my wand and gently gave him diligence and wisdom to work and create his own happy life.
I continued to fly forward and saw a blind child groping hard and carefully with a cane.
I walked up to him gently and said, "Don't worry, little friend, I will definitely let you see the light again."
"I took out my wand and gently gave him a pair of bright eyes. Now he can see the blue sky, white clouds and colorful world like us.
I flew over one river after another and came to the poor mountainous area.
The children there are sallow and emaciated, lacking clothes and food, let alone studying.
As an angel of love, it is natural to help them.
I took out my wand and touched it gently. Suddenly, all kinds of food and clothes appeared on the ground, and a school and an amusement park were born ... I want this place to get rid of poverty and hunger forever and be full of happiness.
I helped beggars, helped blind children and helped the whole poor mountainous area. I was extremely happy, but I still felt insignificant.
There are still many people in the world who need our help. We should lend a helping hand and try our best to help them.
As an angel of love, it is my greatest wish to make people all over the world happy.
...
What do I want to be? I want to be a bird and come to this place. Make a few phone calls as a greeting.
Look back a few times when you leave and bring some souvenirs.
Laughter and tears, joy and sadness, I don't ask others to keep me, but I stand at the top of the tree and look at you when you are the happiest when you least expect it, and sing affectionately: "Go back to the past and try to do it …" Do you know why? That's because I used to be very happy here.
Finally, I left here and went to one beautiful place after another. I don't want to stay any longer, for fear of staying and wasting time.
Seriously, I am a playful bird. Now, with more classes and more homework, I spend less time playing. This is in direct proportion to the "Bird Language Mathematics Book"! It was not until the beginning of school that my homework came to me. I can't resist its momentum, and I don't know what is tired. One book after another, homework piled up into hills, and one book after another was written. In the sea of books, my figure is getting smaller and smaller, and my mind is full of "x=y=25", twelve books, eleven books ... Oh, go away! Sometimes, I fly in the blue sky with my good friend "Cloud and Wind", get rid of the rope of thoughts and let them go to hell! I kissed Yun's face, patted Feng's back and told them my misfortune. They comforted me: "a hard day will always pass, and I won't know how hard it is until I get something!" " I am a bird. Although the wind is roaring and the clouds are oppressing, I will not shrink back. Gradually, I became brave. When I meet them again, I will not hesitate to rush up and fight for life and death.
I grew up and became an eagle and a soldier in the blue sky.
Go to a higher place, go to the forefront, go to the place I yearn for ... (I hope you are satisfied! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! )
I want to be a ... I want to be a big tree: I want to be a towering tree. One day, I went to my laboratory and made a medicine that can be turned into a plant. I ran to the lawn with this bottle of medicine and drank it. I said, "Let me be a big tree!" " "Soon, I became a big tree.
It often rains a lot in spring. Don't be afraid. When it rains heavily, you can hide under me.
Sometimes, a bird nests on my head and takes good care of his "little baby". You see, the children gave me a little friend-a small tree.
In summer, the weather is very hot. Sometimes, old people play chess under me in the cool.
The child is still playing games under me! In autumn, the weather is a little cold. People put on "thick cotton-padded clothes" for me, and my leaves turned yellow and began to fall.
Gradually, in winter, I lost all my leaves and put on a "white skirt". What's the smell of this white snow? So, I "tasted" the cool and light taste of ice. At this time, I saw many children having snowball fights and skiing ... it is everyone's responsibility to protect flowers and trees.
Because they are also alive.
Write a 600-word composition entitled "What kind of person do I want to be?" I have many things I want to change, but what I want to change most is a small fish.
When I become a small fish, I can swim freely in the water.
In spring, when the snow and ice melt and a hundred flowers blossom, I swim around in the clear stream.
Sometimes I suddenly jump out of the water and look at the lush trees by the stream.
I can also swim to the waterfall and enjoy the beautiful songs played by the spring water next to the waterfall.
In summer, I take a bath in the stream.
The cool stream makes me have more fun with other small fish. I can also catch shrimp with other small fish and taste fresh shrimp.
Autumn is a fruitful season.
Whenever we play in the water, pieces of red leaves bid farewell to Mother Tree and then leave her arms.
I can jump out of the water and press a leaf under the stream to let the stream feel the breath of the forest.
Winter came and the stream froze.
Other friends and I brought the shrimps to eat. After eating, we began to hibernate and have a good sleep until next spring.
It's not bad to be a small fish! ...
What kind of composition do I want to be? 400 words, grade three, all "hey?" Why is there a big hole in the ground? ""it hurts, my * * *! "A puppy fell from the sky.
Because I hate other people's lives, I have long wanted to be a puppy.
Just when I was secretly ecstatic, a hand grabbed my ear and picked me up.
"How much is this dog?" Madam, you have a good eye! Not expensive, 250 yuan.
Ok, I want this puppy.
"So, I was taken home by a middle-aged woman.
There are three puppies in her family.
Are younger than me.
Today, my hostess named me "Little Cute". I like the name, too. I had a big breakfast. Braised ribs are delicious. This is my favorite dish.
In the afternoon, the hostess took our dog for a walk in the People's Park. She also brought my favorite frisbee. I caught the frisbee deftly when the host threw it. As soon as I was happy, the shopkeeper gave me two sausages. Soon, I finished eating. After eating, I played Frisbee with three puppies. As a result, I still got the best. I also have a jelly pudding. I watched. Suddenly, just as I was proud, a speeding car rushed at me and I shouted, "No, help!" " "I woke up and became a person again.
I broke out in a cold sweat. This dream really scared me! By the way, where is this? Let me see. Oh, by the way, I was doing my homework at home just now. How did I get here? My ears are so big, and there are puppies all around, ah! I am a dog, too. I became a puppy. Great! " ...
Summer is coming, what do you want to be? The sky is light blue, which brings peace.
The dog hid in the shade of the tree and suddenly felt very comfortable. The tree became greener, the weather became hotter and hotter, and the air was particularly fresh.
Summer rain washed away the dirt of nature, gasped and splashed! Summer is coming, it's cool and bubbling, and the vegetation is particularly lush. They are competing to open in the pond, giving people a cool feeling. The grass became greener, emitting a faint fragrance, and then gradually cooled down, and the sun shone all over the earth.
Ah! Only at night, "Didi, whenever it rains; Raindrops fell on the roof.
Raindrops hit the ground, transparent summer rain is cool, and summer is coming; When raindrops fall into the water, the flowers become more energetic and people can't open their eyes.
Summer is coming.
The rain stopped.
Fish also rushed out of the water and dripped into the ground to wash away the heat of the weather. Everyone moved a chair in succession, and a bubble immediately rose in the water. Yesterday seemed to be warm spring, and it will become very refreshing. They chatted with fans and fell like a waterfall.
I don't know when it is, it shines brightly and sticks out its long tongue.
Ah, sitting under the big tree to enjoy the cool, today is already a hot summer! Summer is coming, fresh and refreshing.
The pond is full of lotus, which is very cool. The leafy trees provide a shade for people and wash away people's inner irritability. Miss Chun has left.
However, pushing open the window, Miss Xia has walked over with light steps. Summer is coming and the wind is blowing her.
Soft summer rain
I want to be a seven-color flower, because seven-color flowers always bring us joy and smile.
If I really become a colorful flower, I want the first petal to help the teacher. Teachers take care of us very hard every day, and they have to revise their homework at night, so I want to help teachers and share their hard work.
I want to help the disabled, so that they don't dare to face life because they are disabled, and let them know that they are not disabled.
The third petal I want it to protect nature, prevent it from entering the black hole, sprinkle the third petal, and let nature be full of the breath of spring.
I want the fourth petal to do environmental protection work. In the supermarket, the fourth petal will remind people to use shopping bags as little as possible. On the way, he will ask people to throw the garbage into the corresponding trash can.
The fifth petal I want to use to help the children in the disaster area. I want them to learn from bright teachers like us, bring love to the children in the disaster area and lend a helping hand.
The sixth petal I want him to make the world peaceful, so that the world can only laugh without war.
The seventh petal I asked him to let the car reduce exhaust gas. There are more and more cars now. Cars emit a lot of exhaust gas, which is very polluting to the environment. There is less tail gas, the air is fresh and everyone is in good health.
I ran out of the colorful flowers, but I was very happy because I made great contributions to society.
...
I remember one night, my father bought me a Superman disc. I am ecstatic. I took the disc in my father's hand and watched it with relish.
I didn't go to bed until evening.
I couldn't sleep at all, so I started counting sheep: one, two, three, four, five ... Soon, I fell asleep in a daze.
When I woke up, I found myself a superman.
I ran down the stairs quickly and found my parents waiting for me there.
I said to my father, "Look, I have become a superman.
""Stop fooling around, son, and come down for breakfast! "Dad said, I said," really, I really become a superman. If you don't believe me, you can test me.
"Dad said," Well, how about moving a car next door, if possible? "I said confidently," good! No problem, I will show you how powerful I am! " As soon as my voice fell, I rushed out of the door, lifted the car my father had just pointed out and said, "Look, how strong I am!" " "Dad was surprised when he saw it:" Son, you have really become a superman. I am really proud of you. "
"I listened to, the in the mind happy, and hurried to the garden to show off.
Suddenly, I heard a terrible voice: "don't move, son, or I'll shoot!" " "In order to find out what happened, I'm going to have a look.
So, I walked towards the sound.
Ah! It turned out that a robber was stealing, but a child saw this and wanted to call the police. Unexpectedly, the robber found out and wanted to get rid of him.
As soon as I saw the urgency of the matter, I flew over with a loud cry and said loudly to the robber, "How dare you bully the small with the big?" See how I teach you a lesson. "
"So I used fixation to hold them all down, and then tied them up with a rope, so that even if the fixation failed, they could not escape.
I left the robber in front of the police station and left immediately with the children.
I did a good deed. I am so happy that I don't know how to describe it.
At this time, I accidentally tripped over a small stone. After getting up, I found myself lying on the ground.
Ah, I just had a dream, in which I became a superman.
My mother looked at me strangely, so I told my mother everything I dreamed.
Mother said, "Son, Superman is just a scientific fantasy. It can be said that there is no Superman in the world.
If you want to do good for everyone, you must study hard now and be a capable person.
"I listened to my mother and thought she was right. Study hard when you are young, and be a big shot when you grow up.
I want to be a house with a spacious room and a badminton court ... this house can accommodate many victims. When the earthquake comes, my legs will turn into hot wheels, bringing everyone to a safe and beautiful place.
If I enter the teaching system then, the big house can teach you endless knowledge.
If you are hungry, it will be easier. Just say the name of the dish you want to eat on the plate and a hearty meal will appear in front of you. Now you can feast your eyes.
If you want to play computer, as long as you know the computer desk, you don't have to worry. He said to the computer desk, "open sesame, come out quickly." .
At that time, you can have fun ... I really want to be such a changeable room, because it is meaningful to our children and can facilitate people and help those in need.
If someone asked me, "If you could change, what would you be?" I will not hesitate to answer: "I want to be a caring angel and help people all over the world to be healthy and happy." This morning, I flapped my wings and flew to every corner of the world to find people in need. I fly and fly. Suddenly, I was attracted by a sweet music. There are many people around. I squeezed into the crowd and saw a poor beggar playing the flute in the middle. He picked up the broken bowl next to him and walked to the onlookers. He bent down and respectfully begged people for charity. People seemed satisfied after listening to the music, so they left one by one. I think: if only everyone had a compassion! I took out my wand and gently gave him diligence and wisdom to work and create his own happy life. I continued to fly forward and saw a blind child groping hard and carefully with a cane. I walked up to him gently and said, "Don't worry, little friend, I will definitely let you see the light again." I took out my wand and gently gave him a pair of bright eyes. Baiyun, seeing this colorful world, I flew over one river after another and came to a poor mountainous area. The children there are sallow and emaciated, lacking clothes and food, not to mention studying. As a caring angel, it is natural to help them. I took out my wand and touched it gently, and suddenly all kinds of food and clothes appeared on the ground, turning it into a school and an amusement park ... I want this place. Always full of joy. I have helped beggars, helped blind children, and helped the whole poor mountainous area. I am extremely happy inside, but I think it is still insignificant. There are still many people in the world who need our help. We should lend a helping hand and help them as much as possible. As an angel of love, it is my greatest wish to make people all over the world happy. How I want to be a beautiful and lovely bird! When I become a bird, I can fly over mountains, canyons and oceans, fly to the beautiful Xiaoxing 'an Mountains, make friends with the birds there, and build a nest to live in. There are many streams in Xiaoxing 'anling in spring. I can fly to the grass with my friends and catch insects to eat. In summer, I flew into the nest with everyone, enjoyed the cool in the shade, and played and rested with my friends. My companion and I are flying under wild grapes. We let a bird peck the skin of wild grapes and let the juice flow down. My partner and I quickly found a bowl of clean juice from the lawn. Sometimes, the pulp will fall off. Parrots lead everyone to peel off the shell of the stick, take out the pulp and chew it up for everyone, so that everyone can have winter food and the juice of wild grapes can be distributed to everyone, so that everyone can have water to drink. I also went to pick up small pieces with my companions. Build a warm nest, it won't freeze in winter and it won't get wet when it rains. In winter, we hide in a comfortable home together. My friend oriole and I slept in the same nest to rest, pulled the leaves off the twigs, woven a quilt, covered it and enjoyed the snow outside. I put some branches on the nest, and when I got to the roof, I opened a place and opened two small holes to enjoy the snow. A bird flying freely in the blue sky. I dream of becoming an angel. One day, as soon as I opened my eyes, I saw a pair of wings growing on my back and came to angel heaven. There, I will do whatever I want, without doing my homework. Looking down at the world, I feel that the house is very small, like a motionless ant. I flew to a city and saw a big brother bullying my younger brother. I flapped my wings quickly. I picked up a banana peel on the ground and threw it at my big brother's feet. My eldest brother slipped and said in dismay, "I will definitely come back." He touched his injured leg and went home angrily. On a sunny day, my friends and I played games in an amusement park in the clouds. We are playing hide and seek. I flew to my "secret base"-a wooden box. Nobody can find me. I will only tell my best "angel friend" about this "secret base". Because I have a super "secret base" and know nothing about heaven, earth and ghosts, I am called "the master of hide and seek". Draw my best maze at home in rainy days, and then make some useful inventions for human beings, such as automatic rice cookers, multifunctional color changers and full-function automatic super. I will let some friends go to my "angel house" to play until dark, and then lie in bed and sleep. When I woke up, the rain had stopped and we could continue our happy outdoor activities. In fact, I don't want to open my eyes and continue to enjoy my angel world. I am an imaginary child, always wanting to change. Sometimes, I want to be a bird and fly freely in the sky. Sometimes, I want to become a deer and run happily in the vast forest; Sometimes I want to become a small fish and play carefree in the water; Sometimes, I think ... Suddenly one day, I changed my mind. I want to be a drop of clear water without color and taste. Because water is a good friend of mankind. Without water, human beings can't live. But there are still many people who don't cherish water and always waste it in vain. Do not underestimate water. In fact, water is of great use. At home. Mining minerals is inseparable from boiling water. Only when farmers irrigate their fields with water can we get a bumper harvest so that everyone can eat and wear warm clothes. Without water, the world would be full of deserts. Look, how useful water is! Therefore, we must save water in the future and don't waste water! If you don't cherish water, the last drop you see will be your own tears.
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