Only after experiencing ups and downs can I know how valuable you are; only after you have achieved success can you know your greatness; - Thank you, my respected teacher! Below are the comments on the essays on interesting childhood stories that I have collected. Welcome to read and refer to them~
1. It is really "like a god when I write". It seems that you must have read a lot of literature. Such rich content shows your literary skills. It's just that if the materials are adjusted one by one according to certain rules of thinking, this article will be more exciting.
2. After reading your article, it feels like a stream is flowing in front of me, pure and endearing. I hope you can maintain this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.
3. Composition is like being a human being. From your life experience, it can be seen that you are a good and motivated young man. You have your own unique insights into things and have a profound understanding, which is really valuable.
4. Reading your article is really a pleasure. The first is the pleasure of thoughts and feelings, which of course comes from the profound and fresh ideas of your article. As the saying goes, "When you climb a mountain, your feelings will overflow from the mountain; when you look at the sea, your thoughts will overflow from the sea." You are a thoughtful person in life, and you have moved others with your true feelings. This is the greatest success of your composition.
5. Your elegant and refined handwriting reveals your intelligence and wisdom. Striving for stability and being down-to-earth will be the direction of your future writing efforts.
6. Careful conception and profound thinking show that you are constantly growing in the world of writing. The road to writing in the future is still long. I hope you can think hard and continue to innovate.
7. Although writing is not something you like very much, you take every step steadily like a snail, insist on writing, and never stop writing. Your energy is really admirable, and with your personality you will definitely carve out a world of your own.
8. Although you can live happily in your own world, the growth of society has become global. You should invest in collective life with a new attitude and adapt to the growth of society.
9. There are always many fantastic stories written in the life of a young man; there are always many magical yearnings in the heart of a young man. This short article is like a small boat full of dreams, containing the author's innocence, dreams, yearning, and just beginning to mature, heading for the distance
10. The language of the article is very smooth, It also arouses the feelings of teachers. You are the teacher's bosom friend, and I hope that we can learn from each other and pick a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.
11. Sorry, the teacher didn’t understand this paragraph. Are you willing to explain it to the teacher? Thank you.
12. Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. The teacher wants to learn from you. If the material selection of the article is more novel, it will definitely complement the writing. what you think?
13. Great! Your article reproduces the straightforwardness and straightforwardness of Northeastern people, making readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synesthesia is particularly clever. Your writing style is conquering and contagious. Work hard and create glory again!
14. Your article is like a slowly flowing stream, elegant and smooth. The writing is beautiful, the emotions are sincere and delicate, and it has a personal style. I hope you will continue to pick up the waves of life on your writing journey and make your style more perfect!
15. The writing is sharp, with extensive quotations and a solid foundation. Although the analysis of social issues is still somewhat absolute, the article is still touching with its warmth and frankness. Make more efforts to study and think about history books and social commentary. I believe your articles will mature day by day and become more readable!
16. The plot has twists and turns, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curves and beauty of the plot and is fascinating.
17. The plot has strong twists and turns, and unexpected things happen in ordinary life, which can attract readers' attention.
18. The changes in the plot do not fall into the clichés. Occasionally, suspense arises suddenly, and the twists and turns are unexpected. The development of events reflects the author's innovative ideas.
19. The plot develops relatively slowly and lacks a certain ups and downs.
20. The plot changes are bland and lack new ideas.
21. The plot is straightforward, without any suspense, and the narrative is straightforward and like a running account.
22. The process is detailed, but the ending is brief and incomplete. The structure is unreasonable and gives people a feeling of anticlimax.
23. The concept is unreasonable, the content is full of loopholes, and it cannot reflect the reality of life.
24. The plot has ups and downs, the transition is too fast, and it is not coherent and natural enough.
25. You are very good at observing life and can keenly capture meaningful moments; you are a student with great potential.
26. The language of the article is very fluent, and it also expresses the teacher’s feelings. You are the teacher's bosom friend, and I hope that we can learn from each other and pick a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.
27. Sorry, the teacher didn’t understand this paragraph. Are you willing to explain it to the teacher? Thank you.
28. Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. The teacher wants to learn from you. If the material selection of the article is more novel, it will definitely complement the writing. what you think?
29. Great! Your article reproduces the straightforwardness and straightforwardness of Northeastern people, making readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synesthesia is particularly clever.
Your writing is contagious and contagious. Work hard and create greater glories!
30. Careful observation, vivid descriptions and careful selection of materials, clever arrangements and flexible descriptions, relaxed writing styles, correct themes, detailed expressions, novel stories, and clear writing
31. Elegant speaking , the text is vivid and smooth, the lyrical and true narrative is concise, to the point and charming, interesting, fresh and smooth, and natural.
32. The text is vivid, the description is picturesque, the description is subtle, the description is lifelike, the description is profound and vivid, the text is beautiful, the narrative Vivid and profound descriptions, rigorous structure
33. Novel material, sophisticated writing style and rigorous structure, detailed narrative content, fluent writing, free and easy writing, interesting and meaningful layout, novel layout, and concise wording
34. The layers are well-organized and well-structured. The narrative is vivid and interesting. It is sad and touching, and the words are heartfelt. The sentences are touching and the true feelings are revealed, which is deeply touching
35. This article chooses a brand new angle, so that your thoughts can Running freely here is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that through the chaos of worldly affairs, there are always some principles that we can grasp when dealing with the world, so that your thoughts will be deeper, and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".
36. Such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can’t help but give people a refreshing feeling. Teachers should really learn from you. Let us promote each other in future Chinese learning, okay?
37. Articles are like people. Your articles are as simple and open-minded as you are. Your composition skills are very good, which is also the result of your long-term practice. I hope that in the future learning process, you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching and good articles.
38. Writing can speak louder than words. I think articles are a reflection of your soul. The road of life is indeed very tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere to move forward, the crown of success will belong to you.
39. Wen Neng and Qing. You should not regard writing an essay as a burden on yourself, but should record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate writing.
40. It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. As a human being, failure is inevitable, but having the courage to face failure is even more valuable. I believe that gold will always shine. I hope you adjust your mentality as soon as possible and you will find that the sky is bluer.
41. It’s true that “writing is like a god”. It seems that you must have read a lot of literature. Such rich content shows your literary skills. It's just that if the materials are adjusted in a certain logical order, this article will be more exciting.
42. After reading your article, it feels like a stream is flowing in front of me, pure and lovely. I hope you can maintain this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.
43. Composition is like being a human being. From your life experience, we can see that you are a good and motivated young man. You have your own unique insights into things and have a profound understanding, which is really valuable.
44. This article uses specific examples, vivid and beautiful language, and novel and unique writing methods to express sincere praise for the beautiful soul.
45. With devout praises, profound lamentations, true words and true feelings, pouring out joys and sorrows, weighing gains and losses, the young author tailors the class to the needs of the class with the language of a poet and the vision of a philosopher. The whole article is like a sculpture full of artistic courage, broad and deep, strong and vigorous, simple and natural, reflecting the author's superb language control ability, solid mind and keen aura. The exquisite language, rigorous structure, profound thinking, and extensive knowledge are all pleasing to the eye.
46. Xu Pengfei, when the teacher was appreciating your masterpiece today, he was so nervous and excited. It's like being in that fierce competition field. You have a strong sense of patriotism. How could you have woken up from your sweet sleep at midnight to watch this live broadcast if you weren't so young?
47. You read widely and accumulate a lot of words and phrases. Therefore, when describing the characters' movements and expressions, they can be expressed vividly with appropriate words. Teachers are happy to have students like you. Just keep trying. Your dream of becoming a writer will surely come true.