Zhangyan, Funing Middle School, Jiangsu Province
Mu Zi will never forget the sweetness of pears. He felt that his advantage was that he could taste the real taste of pears, which also contributed to his final success.
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Ten years ago today, it was an exciting day for Mu Zi. He received a long-awaited letter of admission to the university.
Mu Zi is from the countryside, and there is only him and his father at home. His mother died a few months after he was born. This family is supported by a few acres of land behind the house, dozens of pear trees and a big cow. Although not rich, Mu Zi lives happily. Every time I pick pears from the tree with my father and prepare to sell them in the market, Mu Zi's heart is always full of sweetness. The sweetness of pears made him unforgettable. He thinks his pears are the sweetest because he can taste the hard work his father has done for them.
Mu Zi felt very heavy about this notice. When he got home, his father was not at home. When Mu Zi's father came in from the outside and took a handkerchief out of his pocket and put it in Mu Zi's hand, he was surprised. Mu Zi felt that the handkerchief was soaked with sweat. Opening the handkerchief, Mu Zi couldn't believe his eyes, which were full of money. Mu Zi asked his father where the money came from, and his father told him, "I sold the scalper, took out all my savings over the years, and finally made up the tuition." Hearing this, Mu Zi felt that this handkerchief was heavier than the pears produced by dozens of pear trees.
The night before school, Mu Zi and his father sat at the back of the house, quietly listening to the rustling of the wind blowing through the pear leaves. Father said that when Mu Zi cried when he was a child, his father carried him here. Hearing the rustling of pear leaves, Mu Zi smiled happily. My father always said that Mu Zi and pear trees seemed to have a close relationship.
The next morning, my father sent Mu Zi to the station in the town. When he left, his father took a bag of pears to Mu Zi. Mu Zi took it and looked at his father's pale hair and wrinkled face. His eyes are moist. ...
After going to college, Mu Zi still can't forget the sweetness of pears. Whenever he encounters any setbacks, he always likes to take a bite of a pear and taste its sweetness slowly, so that his heart will be filled with courage to forge ahead towards his goal.
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Now Mu Zi is the general manager of a big company. In an interview, a reporter asked, "Do you think you can stand out from so many peers? What is the biggest benefit? " Mu Zi's answer surprised everyone: "The biggest advantage of my success today is that it smells like my father's pears."
[analysis]
In this materialistic social transformation period, few people can go to a quiet heart and quietly appreciate the tranquility that "ordinary people touch me the most". The merit of this article lies in its "interest". The author can wash away the worldly noise and impetuousness, and with a clever heart, feel the deep father's love sincerely, sincerely and truly, and internalize it into the driving force for adults to forge ahead on their life journey. This calm heart is particularly excited. Indeed, father's love, like water, always blows pear leaves like the wind, but silently and persistently brings us perennial comfort; Father loves mountains. He will only throw his full love into a pear box and let his daughter appreciate it slowly and carefully. Mu Zi chewed the sweetness of pears in this way, and he also felt the taste of his father's love in one bite. In this chewing, his heart is pulling and rolling, and finally rises from the inexhaustible motive force of forging ahead and sets sail towards his life goal. Rodin once said: "There is no lack of beauty in the world, but a lack of discovery."
Then we might as well say: "It is not the lack of love in the world, but the lack of a smart heart to feel it." Let's wade through the wide and deep river of father's love and walk through the spring, summer, autumn and winter of life ... (Jiang)
Parameter class
Sad Europa
Jun Chen, Funing Middle School, Jiangsu Province
Real Madrid lost, the "Red Devils" lost their halberds, and the "old lady" was dying ... everything seemed to have changed. 2004 is destined to be a year of subversion, a year of unexpected events and the emergence of dark horses.
Maybe it's God's intentional joke, or Athena's special favor. Passion and beauty, individuality and publicity of the European Cup ended in the Greek Cup, and the traditional powers once again suffered bad luck, and the major giants once again suffered nightmares. "How many tears and how much hate, how many storms and how many worries", the most sad thing is those infatuated fans, who are heartbroken and simply don't believe that their beloved team lost. They want to know: "Why have teams with so many advantages failed? Where have all the advantages gone?"
In fact, the reason is very simple: people with advantages do not necessarily cherish it, and those without advantages bravely create miracles.
Sad England fell, although it was worthy of sympathy, but it failed in the end. They have the strength to win the championship. Owen and Rooney on the front line, which one won't let the opponent talk? There is a handsome Beckham in the middle of the road. His curveball is so pleasing to the eye, how many people fall in love with it? But they failed to grasp the advantage, made the same mistake twice, and finally put themselves in a desperate situation.
The gallic rooster also lowered his proud head. They have enough capital to compete with any strong team. They have the genius Zidane and the killer Henry. But they also lost, so miserable, so sad, so sorry. A team without talent is sad, but a team with talent that cannot be cherished is even more sad.
The tenacious Teutonic chariot is aging. At this time, indomitable will and persistent spirit seem to have vanished, like wind and fog. "World Cup runner-up" has become a memory of the past, and the advantages of the past are gone forever?
Take another look! When Deraze looked back at the previous post, the myth was born. A team that has no advantages but is cautious everywhere and always careful has finally created its own advantages.
It's complicated, but you can't get away from life in a ball. I can't help but think of the story again: three travelers were caught in a rainy day, but those who didn't bring anything didn't get wet or fall.
Friend, you should know how to use your advantage, right?
[analysis]
How can energetic high school students not care about loving sports? So it is not surprising that the European Cup and the Olympic Games entered our classmates' compositions. However, how to make good use of these materials is worth thinking about, and simple mechanical listing and superficial narration are not worth taking. It should be said that this article provides an example of the correct use of sports materials. The author's thought does not stop at plane description, but thinks about the internal relations of things from phenomenon to essence in a three-dimensional way. Deducing life from the stadium is rational thinking; Deducing life from competition is the inspiration of the wise. The sentence "life in the ball" leads to the profound theme of the article. (Liu Xiaoye)
This institution is too smart.
Yan Chao from Funing Middle School in Jiangsu Province
There are many people in the Grand View Garden, each with its own personality and characteristics. If you want to say the most sophisticated and intelligent, it must be Wang Xifeng.
Speaking of Xifeng's shrewdness, I'm afraid it's difficult for people to get along with her today. When she was an associate professor in Ningguo House, she kept such a large Ningguo House in good order, which fully showed her talent. After deducting Aunt Zhao's monthly money, she gave the girl a fur coat, which fully showed her shrewdness. Aunt Zhao has no position in the Grand View Garden, so it's nothing to deduct her salary every month. Xiren is Baoyu's "prospective aunt", and Baoyu is the "apple of the eye" of Grandmother Jia. It is natural for Xifeng to make friends with Xiren. As for her ability to make both ends meet, no one can match her. The current Russian president is a first-class master, making Russia "aunt love menstruation", but compared with Feng, it is far from it. Xi-feng treats her servants like evil spirits and her sister-in-law like kindness. She is bold and cautious, but she does not lose everyone's demeanor. She pleased her grandmother, but she did it without leaving a trace.
It is said that smart people can naturally give themselves a happy ending, but the fact is that "cleverness is mistaken by cleverness." Wang Xifeng's shrewdness was exchanged for "the agency was too clever and missed your life." When the old Jia family she used to display her talents and play politics suddenly collapsed like a building, she was also "miserable as a lamp" and finally ended up "alone"
"Smart" can be said to be Xifeng's absolute advantage. Without this advantage, she would not "mix" so well in the Grand View Garden, but her fate would not be so good. People often say that it is difficult to be confused and it is difficult to be confused. But confusion also has its own advantages. If Feng wasn't clever at everything, she wouldn't have come to such a miserable end.
Speaking of the real society, there are quite a few people who are "exhausted" like Xifeng. Cheng and Chen Xitong, who is not a wise man? They are so natural and unrestrained when nothing happens. It's a pity that they are too smart to play politics in such a high position, as if they "have the right not to use it, and it will be invalid when it expires". Too clever, and finally "missed your life."
If a person's advantages are not used well, they will become the shackles of life. Therefore, having advantages may not necessarily lead to success. How to make good use of your own advantages is really a subject worth exploring.
[Opinion] A Dream of Red Mansions is a fantastic book. It seems to contain a complicated society and a tortuous life. If you look at the excellent compositions of the college entrance examination in recent years, there are excellent works written according to A Dream of Red Mansions every year. Around the topic, the author skillfully finds the breakthrough point from A Dream of Red Mansions, and dialectically analyzes the relationship between the advantages of Xifeng and her success or failure, thus making an objective and reasonable interpretation of "all organs are exhausted". At the end, the sentence "A person's advantages are not well utilized, but will become the shackles of life", which is profound and alert, and is actually the language of this article. (Liu Xiaoye)
Fable class
When flowers are unbeaten
Wei Subao of Funing Middle School in Jiangsu Province
The wind stirred the yellow leaves that fell to the ground. Although it is late autumn and early winter, the cold has put on a coat for this remote town.
In the park, only a few quiet people walk in this cold kingdom.
"Mom, look, flowers!" A childish surprise penetrated the sadness of the garden.
"Really? There are such lovely flowers! "
"Just like an angel!"
"Oh, yes, baby."
At this time, several people came along one after another.
"wow! Very beautiful, like a girl. "
"This is the real cold flower."
Everyone's eyes sparkled with tears of envy and praise.
The cold flowers on this branch spread out and opened their sleepy eyes. Obviously, the dream was disturbed, and there was no half smile on her face.
It turned its head back and forth in the wind, trying to find its sister, but it was surrounded by depression. Obviously, it is the darling of luck, and only it retains its beautiful face.
Look at these strange faces in front of you. They either stare at themselves in surprise or surprise. Cold flowers seem to understand something from them and feel a little shy.
It doesn't know why it is so lucky. It seems that fate has long doomed such a day-let it show its noble, gorgeous and dazzling day.
So it stood up straight. It feels like a frosted chrysanthemum, a cold wintersweet, or a saussurea involucrata blooming on a glacier ... It enjoys people's attention and revels in people's praise.
It's still showing itself. It thinks that if its companions are not in a hurry to restrain themselves, they may be just like it now! Now its companion must be very jealous, even ...
"Pa ..." A hand reached over, so it stopped thinking and cut off life.
People walked separately on the blue cobblestone path.
Pick one!