Modern Poetry (or Prose) and Appreciation

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Text: Moonlight in the Lotus Pond

Zhu ziqing

I'm very upset these days. Sitting in the yard to enjoy the cool tonight, I suddenly remembered the lotus pond that passes by every day, here it is.

There must be something else under the full moon. The moon rises gradually, the children's laughter on the road outside the wall,

I will never hear from you again; My wife is patting and skipping in the room, humming a sleeping song in a daze. I slipped on a big shirt and took it with me.

Go out.

Along the lotus pond, there is a winding little cinder road. This is a secluded road; Few people walk during the day, especially at night.

Add loneliness. Around the lotus pond, there are many trees and lush. On the roadside, there are some willows and some strangers.

Name tree. On a moonless night, the road is gloomy and a little scary. Tonight is good, although the moonlight is also

Still dizzy.

I was the only one on the road, walking around with my hands behind my back. This world seems to be mine; I also feel that I am beyond my usual self.

Himself, in another world. I love excitement and peace; Like to live in groups, like to be alone. Just like tonight, one

Under this boundless moon, people can think of everything and nothing, so they feel very free. Riichi during the day

Whatever you want to do or say, you can ignore it now. This is the beauty of being alone; I also benefit from this boundless lotus.

The moonlight is good.

On the winding lotus pond, I look forward to the leaves of Tian Tian. The leaves are high out of the water, like an elegant dancer's skirt.

Among the layers of leaves, some white flowers are scattered, some bloom gracefully, and some are in bud. just as

Pearl after pearl, like a star in the blue sky, like a beauty who just took a bath. The breeze blew, bringing a wisp of fragrance,

Like a faint song from a tall building in the distance. At this time, the leaves and flowers also trembled slightly, like lightning, instantly.

It passed through the lotus pond. The leaves are close side by side, so there are clear wave marks.

Below the leaves is flowing water, which is covered and can't see some colors; Leaves are more exposed to the wind.

Moonlight, like running water, falls quietly on this leaf and flower. A thin layer of blue mist floats in the lotus pond. leaf

Children and flowers seem to have been washed in milk; Like a dream in a sarong. Although it is a full moon, there is light in the sky.

Cloud, so it can't shine; But I think this is just a benefit-deep sleep is indispensable, and a nap has a different flavor.

Yes The moonlight shone through the bushes, and the bushes at the height cast uneven and mottled shadows, but they were like paintings.

On the lotus leaf. The moonlight in the pond is uneven, but the light and shadow have a harmonious melody, such as a famous song played in the Vatican.

Around the lotus pond, there are trees far and near, high and low, and willows are the most. The weight of these trees is equivalent to a lotus pond.

Re-surround; Only on one side of the path, there are some gaps, which seem to be reserved for moonlight. An example of the color of trees is cloudy,

At first glance, it looks like a cloud of smoke; But the abundance of willows can be recognized in the smoke. A distance is faintly visible on the treetops.

Mountain, just a little careless. There are still one or two lamps leaking through the cracks in the tree. What is listless is the eyes of those who are sleepy. this

The most lively time is the cicada in the tree and the frog in the water; But it's theirs, and I have nothing.

I suddenly remembered the matter of picking lotus. Lotus picking is an ancient custom in the south of the Yangtze River. It seems to have a long history, but it flourished in the Six Dynasties.

You can get a rough idea from this poem. Lotus pickers are teenage girls, swinging boats and singing bright songs. choose

Needless to say, there are many people who watch lotus picking. It was a lively season and a romantic season. light

Yuan Di's "Lotus Picking Fu" is well said:

So the demon boy rowed, saying, "Beneficial bird" will return first and pass on its feathers.

Cup; I can move, algae can hang, boats can move and sail. Erqi slim waist bundle element, heartbeat

Take a step forward; In the late spring of long summer, the leaves are tender and the flowers are early, so they are afraid to touch the petticoats and smile, and they are afraid to tilt the boat.

And collect it.

It can be seen that there were wandering scenes at that time. This is really interesting, but unfortunately we are not happy now.

Then I remembered the words in Song of Xizhou:

Lotus is picked in autumn in Nantang, and the lotus is over the head; With his head down, he fiddled with the lotus seeds in the water, which were as green as the lake.

If there are lotus pickers tonight, the lotus here will be considered "over the top"; I only see some shadows of running water, yes.

I can't. This makes me really miss Jiangnan. -thinking like this, I suddenly looked up and felt that it was my own door;

Gently pushed the door in, there was no sound, and my wife had slept for a long time.

Beijing Tsinghua University Campus, July 1927

Appreciation: a paragraph at the beginning of the article tells the reader the temporary mood of "I"; In the second paragraph, only a few simple strokes are used to outline the outline around the lotus pond, giving a clear impression; Go straight to the third paragraph and write about the beauty of solitude in the lotus pond. The moonlight in the lotus pond, which the author really described with great efforts, began in the fourth paragraph. He wrote the shapes, colors and smells of moonlight, lotus leaves, lotus flowers and lotus flowers very skillfully. It was not until the fifth paragraph that moonlight was written: moonlight is like running water. Leaves and flowers are dreaming in the soft moonlight. Sometimes the moonlight is covered by faint clouds, and sometimes the moonlight drops mottled shadows through the shadows of trees. Hazy moonlight not only quietly sprinkled on the lotus pond, but also quietly sprinkled on the surrounding Woods and distant mountains. In the silence of such a moonlit night, we are gloomy and really terrible. At this time, the author probably felt too quiet, and then wrote that cicadas croak and frogs croak. When you hear the cries of "cicada, cicada" and "pavilion, pavilion, pavilion", the air that has almost condensed around you will suddenly come to life, making people feel alive. This realm is beautiful, and the style of writing is also distinct. However, if we are not at leisure, it is difficult to understand the realm of this poem. We usually work nervously for a day, and after a night's meal, although we can't help going for a walk where there are trees and flowers, our minds are always restless, and the things during the day are still hovering in our minds, leaving and coming again. Even if we walk through the lotus pond in the moonlight and see pink or white lotus flowers, we may only think of lotus seeds and tender lotus roots, but we rarely have the author's meticulous interest. This varies from person to person, and there is nothing strange about it.

After writing about the silence of the lotus pond on a moonlit night, the author suddenly turned to writing about cicadas and frogs. This kind of writing is about what the predecessors called "waves". After falling down together, he found that "I" was caused by a night trip to the lotus pond. That "I" is from Jiangnan, so I naturally thought of the lotus picking scene in my hometown in Jiangnan. The author here borrows the words of the ancients to express his feelings. The quoted "Xizhou Qu" is a folk song, a "Xizhou Tune", the original 160 words. For the full text, please refer to Guo Maoqian's Yuefu Poems (Volume 72). The Fu of Picking Lotus is not the full text. Please refer to Volume 82 of Literature and Art Collection. Author Liang Yuandi, whose real name is Xiao Yi, was a famous imperial writer in Qi and Liang Dynasties. Fu is a parallel style, paying attention to duality and syllables, such as "female, Xu", "cup, open" and "early, awkward", which is called foot rhyme. The stork head, boat, boat and boat in this article are actually the same thing. In order to avoid monotony or because of syllable relationship, ancient people often like to use words with different meanings. A "feather cup" is a kind of wine glass. The reader will understand after reading it carefully. In the last line of Moonlight on the Lotus Pond, the author wrote: "Push in the door gently", which is consistent with the beginning of "dash out the door" and has an explanation for the readers. Otherwise, that "I" will have to sleep under the lotus pond tree.

The author has always been particular about language and writing. As far as the wording and sentences of this essay are concerned, it is unambiguous at all. In sentences, function words can be saved, sentences are fluent, and Europeanized languages are used less. Therefore, sentences appear cleaner and more refined. It seems that the author also likes to use adjectives with overlapping adjectives, such as faint, Tian Tian, graceful, affectionate, far and near, high and low, and vague. Some words, such as "Tian Tian" and "Tingting", were originally words of ancient songs. The author tried to make the past serve the present by turning over old and new clothes. Whether the translation is good or not can be studied One advantage of using overlapping words is that it will make the writing elegant and comfortable, and will not make people feel anxious and constrained when reading. Naturally, if used properly, too much will make sentences look loose and weak. This is a question of Chinese literacy, by the way, to attract the attention of beginners. Some people insist that this is skill, yes, but don't be too superstitious about skill. I think the result of repeated revisions can produce skills.

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