Why do I really feel that the poems published by many people seem artificial? I am really not out of jealousy. I really want to read good modern poetry.

Modern poetry has become very personalized. Some people write not to please others, but to reflect themselves and introspect themselves. As for artificiality, this is something that can easily happen in the process of writing poetry. If you want to write well, you have to learn some techniques. In fact, it is more skillful than clumsy. Sometimes a clear sentence becomes poetic after being broken up: for example, a plain sentence: "I went to the street." Buying groceries, the price of groceries has gone up again." The sentence fragment is: "I / went to the street to buy groceries, and the price of groceries / has gone up again today." The sentence structure can also be recombined into a non-punctuated form: "Buy." The price of vegetables/today I went to the street/has increased/the price of vegetables." Among them, "the price of vegetables" is obscure and does not conform to the Chinese language, but the poem is unbridled, so to speak. But these are not good poems after all. They are sincere poems even if they are written from the heart, no matter how clear they are. For example, the son cries for his mother at the grave:...My mother is used to hearing my son's voice, so why shouldn't she? ...I have some very naive ideas, please give me some advice.

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