Show ambition with things, praise people with things. To sum up, in a word, only by reading more and remembering more and understanding the meaning can we not fall to the point of "using the book as soon as it is used".
For example, an online composition: North. winter
String moon. Neon.
The first snow began to drift away. Sitting alone behind the curtain of the snow fog, listening to the sound of snow falling.
The falling dead leaves were quickly covered with snow, disappeared like a grain of dust and sank with my memory. It seems that every winter is spent like this, curling up in my warm cabin, lighting a curling lamp, listening to music, drinking steaming tea, reading my favorite books and watching the wind, frost, rain and snow slide past the window year after year.
I would like to live in my castle like this and watch the years pass quietly, like water. I don't know if the traces of time are hung on my face and engraved in my heart.
I know that one day, my eyes are no longer as clear as snowflakes. After years of heavy snow, will you still remember the woman behind the snow and the heart of the past as snow?
Looking up at the pedestrians on the road, everyone is in a hurry. The solstice of winter has not yet arrived, and the cold at this moment is not biting. I think a person walking on the road, looking at the leaves that will not fall, will make me feel a little sad, feel the warmth of home, and involuntarily speed up my steps.
Reminds me of the ancient poem "Chai Men smells dogs barking, and the snow at night returns to people". Thinking of this, I can't help laughing, not at others, but at myself.
Sitting in the room all day thinking, vague, many scenes have never been experienced and will never be realized, but inexplicably familiar and frightened. As if I had wings in my heart, I flew around for me through time and space.
It turns out that imagination can be so real or so absurd. I suddenly remembered an old song many years ago: put away your emotions, leave your memory blank, forget the past you once had, and never say love again ... I like these naive old songs, and all my troubles were solved in a few words.
How many words can be realized in the ethereal promise of that year? I don't know and I can't prove it. All I know is that it will never bring the slightest excitement or dizziness, just like fireworks in the night sky. Beauty only belongs to her for a moment, the wind blows away, the prosperity is gone, and everything is empty.
Moonlight and snow shadow rolled into the window, sprinkled on the table by the window, sprinkled on my forehead, and nourished my soul. Fingertips danced again, pouring out her loneliness.
This is just a game and a dream. Only the rules of this game are impermanent. This dream can see the other side, but can't swim. This play is wonderful. It should be staged when it should be staged, and it should end when it should be finished.
This game is very helpless, from clear to fuzzy, from spring flowers to autumn dew. Like a wisp of wind, a Jing Xue, ups and downs at will, I don't know where to go, I don't know where to go.
"Speak, speak; What's the hurry between going and coming? " Mr. Zhu Ziqing's "Hurry" made me sigh. It turns out that everything is doomed to be in a hurry, and I will never catch up with it. Poetry is a flower that never dies in the field of literature and a colorful treasure.
She has an intriguing unique style-free and easy poetry, implicit poetry, elegant poetry, gloomy poetry, bold poetry, graceful poetry ... Poetry is the essence of literature and the epitome of life. Poetry expresses ambition.
Because poetry itself focuses on reflecting the poet's character and ambition, the taste of poetry depends more on the value of the ambition expressed in the poem. Both Cao Cao's "Short Songs" and Lu You's "The Book of Wrath" reflect Cao Cao's mood of accepting talents in order to realize the political ideal of reunifying China, or express the author's feelings of vowing to serve the country.
No wonder Mr. Zhu Ziqing praised "expressing ambition through poetry" as a "pioneering program" in our poetry circle. Poetry is beautiful because of emotion, and poetry is often deeply attached to the realm of poetry. As the saying goes, "Poetry takes emotion as poetry, emotion is sad, and emotion is happy."
Whether it is Du Fu's Ascending the Mountain or Gong Zizhen's Poems on the Sea, the former expresses the poet's complex feelings of long-term wandering, old illness and loneliness, while the latter shows the poet's optimistic thoughts before opening up the atmosphere. There are countless examples of this, which shows that "the job of poetry should be to express emotions."
Everyone loves reading poetry. Reading poetry focuses on understanding poetry. Only when you taste with your heart and feel with your feelings can you truly appreciate the extraordinary rhyme! In my opinion, spring is the beginning of all seasons. From spring and summer to autumn and winter, year after year, cycle after cycle.
"If winter comes, can spring be far behind?" Whenever it comes to the last season of the year-winter, I will think of this sentence and eagerly look forward to the arrival of spring. I like spring. In spring, everything recovers, and the grass grows more and more lush, showing a thriving and vibrant scene everywhere. From a distance, it feels light green. When you look closer, you can't see any green. This is probably what Han Yu said, "The grass is green from a distance." I like spring. Spring represents green, but green represents vitality and vigor, represents vigorous vitality and represents the coming of spring. I like spring. I always feel comfortable when the misty spring rain falls from the sky. Especially after the spring rain, the air was fresh and the rainbow smiled. There is an agricultural proverb about sunny rain forecast in China, like "The first day falls, the second day falls, the third day falls, and the third day falls." & gt As the beginning of the four seasons, spring is bound to reappear in front of us with a brand-new look.
If you want to write a poetic article well, you must: 1. Select carefully. The essence of the accumulation of ancient poetry is well said: "Reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "accumulating thin hair." Only by accumulating rich language materials can we "accumulate thick and thin hair" and "write like a god".
However, we find that in the process of "accumulation", especially in the new curriculum standards, Chinese accumulation is strongly advocated to improve students' Chinese literacy, and many teachers begin to name good words, sentences and famous paragraphs.
2. How to write ancient poems with famous articles is the essence of China culture. It is a literary genre that reflects social life and expresses thoughts and feelings with highly concise language, rich imagination, strong sense of rhythm and rhythmic beauty.
It is the oldest and most basic literary form in the world. Famous sentences in ancient poetry are widely circulated and are outstanding literary essence.
Ancient poems and famous sentences that can be widely circulated from ancient times to the present are all cultural examples that have been honed, stood the test and accepted by people through the long river of history. The reason why it is enduring is not only because of its concise language and beautiful phonology, but also because it is worth learning from in terms of material selection, writing and skills.
From the content and materials, it can be divided into narrative, scenery description, lyricism, ambition and reason ... from the writing methods and skills, it can be divided into metaphor, emotional expression, exaggeration and realism ... It has its own characteristics and is not the same. In a sense, a poem is an outline of an article.
Therefore, the systematic training of ancient poetry and famous sentences is to contact and accumulate all kinds of writing materials and learn to master all kinds of writing methods and skills. The improvement of students' writing ability can be seen.
First, reading ancient poems and famous sentences, accumulating material articles, lack of nutrition and dryness are common problems of most modern students. The reason is that students lack accumulation.
You cannot make a silk purse out of a sow's ear. How can a student write beautiful articles without ink in his stomach? As the quintessence of ancient literature —— Famous ancient poems and sentences. Language has not only experienced many storms, but also has gorgeous rhetoric and rich content, such as writing scenery, taking notes, reasoning and so on.
It is the best material for students' language accumulation. With rich accumulation, there will be something to say and feelings to express.
As the saying goes, accumulation can make you rich. So I take advantage of the position where students collect honey books, and ask students to copy ten famous ancient poems and sentences every day for students to read and recite.
After a period of time, students have accumulated many famous sentences, laying a good foundation for practice. Second, the exchange of poetry and prose has been accumulated by students who practice writing. If they can't express and use it, it is equivalent to a blank sheet of paper, which has no meaning.
How to let students learn to express themselves? First of all, let the students understand the meaning of the famous ancient poems they read. In order to make students better understand the contents of famous ancient poems and sentences, teachers should expand the relevant contents of famous ancient poems and sentences, such as the author, writing background, the poet's mood at that time, allusions about famous ancient poems and sentences and so on. After students deeply understand its meaning, they can carry out multi-angle training.
1, the images in ancient poems and famous sentences are well-defined, but there are few descriptions of images, and there are still many gaps, including images and emotions. This provides rich writing materials for students' practice.
Teachers can use this as an organic supplement to students' compositions and practice writing selectively. When practicing writing, in order to make students understand poetry more deeply, teachers can provide students with rich information about famous sentences.
After students understand the connotation of poetry, let them practice, expand, rewrite and write their thoughts on a poem from various angles, so as to give students the freedom to exert their imagination. To some extent, it solves the problem of what students write.
In addition, it is necessary for students to expand the famous sentences of ancient poetry, which also reduces the difficulty of writing and avoids the phenomenon that students' sentences are not fluent. After long-term training, students will fly their imagination, be full of interest, enter the realm of poetry, feel their feelings and write beautiful articles.
2. Give the students a paragraph and let them sum it up with a famous ancient poem that they have accumulated. The coverage of students' exercises is getting wider and wider. It is difficult to adapt to the practice of other genres if we only stay on the basis of expanding the famous sentences of ancient poems.
To improve students' writing level and Chinese literacy, students should not only accumulate a large number of good words and sentences, but also learn to use them on the basis of understanding. Let the students sum up a period of training with the ancient poems they have learned, so that the students can understand how to use them.
Summarizing a passage from real life is actually telling students that we can use this famous saying under such circumstances. Over time, when students describe a picture, they will naturally think of this ancient poem sentence, avoiding lengthy and tedious narration and making students' exercises clear and concise.
3. The infiltration of methods can lead famous sentences in ancient poetry to be widely circulated, not only because of gorgeous and concise rhetoric and bright ideas, but also because of the author's superb writing methods and skills, which directly affect the charm of ancient poetry and the development direction of China literature. How to teach composition under the new curriculum, how to teach composition for the sake of teaching composition, how to let students "express freely" and how to let students express freely.
Writing methods and skills are indispensable. Every famous sentence in classical ancient poetry has its own unique expression.
A sentence is the unit of an article. It is of positive significance for students to carefully ponder the writing rules and skills of famous ancient poems and sentences and apply them to their own compositions. For example: 1, holding something to express your ambition "Once you climb to the top of the mountain, you will see that other mountains look short under the sky."
This poem comes from "Looking at Yue" written by Du Fu when he was about twenty-five. At that time, he was broad-minded and broad-minded.
Being at the foot of Yuelu Mountain and climbing to the top of Yuelu Mountain, his writing style is even more powerful. Although there is no "peak", the true colors of Mount Tai have fallen into the eye.
It expresses the poet's ambition to climb upward without fear of difficulties, and shows his indomitable character and lofty political ambition. Through learning, students can understand that they can express their aspirations and ambitions under the guise of things, which is very helpful to solve the disadvantages of students' straightforward composition and lack of implicit beauty.
2. Write a landscape: "The red river wins the fire at sunrise, and the riverside is as green as blue." This sentence vividly interprets the spring scenery in the south of the Yangtze River, highlights the bright colors of the river flowers and red and green rivers, and gives people a dazzling impression.
Among them, there are contrasts between the same color and different colors, which fully shows the author's good coloring skills. It can be seen that the article describing the scenery should grasp the characteristics of things, choose appropriately, and grasp the bright colors, which can be compared or contrasted, thus setting off the beauty of the scenery.
3. Lyricism by scenery often tells students that the description of the environment is a portrayal of the state of mind, and the feelings of * * * can be expressed with the help of scenery. But when students operate by themselves, it is the return of feelings and things. And the names of ancient poems.
3. How to apply poetry to composition, which can be used when describing scenery; Can be used when expressing exclamation; It can be used to summarize the central idea of the article.
Show ambition with things, praise people with things. To sum up, in a word, only by reading more and remembering more and understanding the meaning can we not fall to the point of "using the book as soon as it is used".
For example, an online composition: North. winter
String moon. Neon.
The first snow began to drift away. Sitting alone behind the curtain of the snow fog, listening to the sound of snow falling.
The falling dead leaves were quickly covered with snow, disappeared like a grain of dust and sank with my memory. It seems that every winter is spent like this, curling up in my warm cabin, lighting a curling lamp, listening to music, drinking steaming tea, reading my favorite books and watching the wind, frost, rain and snow slide past the window year after year.
I would like to live in my castle like this and watch the years pass quietly, like water. I don't know if the traces of time are hung on my face and engraved in my heart.
I know that one day, my eyes are no longer as clear as snowflakes. After years of heavy snow, will you still remember the woman behind the snow and the heart of the past as snow?
Looking up at the pedestrians on the road, everyone is in a hurry. The solstice of winter has not yet arrived, and the cold at this moment is not biting. I think a person walking on the road, looking at the leaves that will not fall, will make me feel a little sad, feel the warmth of home, and involuntarily speed up my steps.
Reminds me of the ancient poem "Chai Men smells dogs barking, and the snow at night returns to people". Thinking of this, I can't help laughing, not at others, but at myself.
Sitting in the room all day thinking, vague, many scenes have never been experienced and will never be realized, but inexplicably familiar and frightened. As if I had wings in my heart, I flew around for me through time and space.
It turns out that imagination can be so real or so absurd. I suddenly remembered an old song many years ago: put away your emotions, leave your memory blank, forget the past you once had, and never say love again ... I like these naive old songs, and all my troubles were solved in a few words.
How many words can be realized in the ethereal promise of that year? I don't know and I can't prove it. All I know is that it will never bring the slightest excitement or dizziness, just like fireworks in the night sky. Beauty only belongs to her for a moment, the wind blows away, the prosperity is gone, and everything is empty.
Moonlight and snow shadow rolled into the window, sprinkled on the table by the window, sprinkled on my forehead, and nourished my soul. Fingertips danced again, pouring out her loneliness.
This is just a game and a dream. Only the rules of this game are impermanent. This dream can see the other side, but can't swim. This play is wonderful. It should be staged when it should be staged, and it should end when it should be finished.
This game is very helpless, from clear to fuzzy, from spring flowers to autumn dew. Like a wisp of wind, a Jing Xue, ups and downs at will, I don't know where to go, I don't know where to go.
"Speak, speak; What's the hurry between going and coming? " Mr. Zhu Ziqing's "Hurry" made me sigh. It turns out that everything is doomed to be in a hurry, and I will never catch up with it. Poetry is a flower that never dies in the field of literature and a colorful treasure.
She has an intriguing unique style-free and easy poetry, implicit poetry, elegant poetry, gloomy poetry, bold poetry, graceful poetry ... Poetry is the essence of literature and the epitome of life. Poetry expresses ambition.
Because poetry itself focuses on reflecting the poet's character and ambition, the taste of poetry depends more on the value of the ambition expressed in the poem. Both Cao Cao's "Short Songs" and Lu You's "The Book of Wrath" reflect Cao Cao's mood of accepting talents in order to realize the political ideal of reunifying China, or express the author's feelings of vowing to serve the country.
No wonder Mr. Zhu Ziqing praised "expressing ambition through poetry" as a "pioneering program" in our poetry circle. Poetry is beautiful because of emotion, and poetry is often deeply attached to the realm of poetry. As the saying goes, "Poetry takes emotion as poetry, emotion is sad, and emotion is happy."
Whether it is Du Fu's Ascending the Mountain or Gong Zizhen's Poems on the Sea, the former expresses the poet's complex feelings of long-term wandering, old illness and loneliness, while the latter shows the poet's optimistic thoughts before opening up the atmosphere. There are countless examples of this, which shows that "the job of poetry should be to express emotions."
Everyone loves reading poetry. Reading poetry focuses on understanding poetry. Only when you taste with your heart and feel with your feelings can you truly appreciate the extraordinary rhyme! In my opinion, spring is the beginning of all seasons. From spring and summer to autumn and winter, year after year, cycle after cycle.
"If winter comes, can spring be far behind?" Whenever it comes to the last season of the year-winter, I will think of this sentence and eagerly look forward to the arrival of spring. I like spring. In spring, everything recovers, and the grass grows more and more lush, showing a thriving and vibrant scene everywhere. From a distance, it feels light green. When you look closer, you can't see any green. This is probably what Han Yu said, "The grass is green from a distance." I like spring. Spring represents green, but green represents vitality and vigor, represents vigorous vitality and represents the coming of spring. I like spring. I always feel comfortable when the misty spring rain falls from the sky. Especially after the spring rain, the air was fresh and the rainbow smiled. There is an agricultural proverb about sunny rain forecast in China, like "The first day falls, the second day falls, the third day falls, and the third day falls." & gt As the beginning of the four seasons, spring is bound to reappear in front of us with a brand-new look.
If you want to write a poetic article well, you must: 1. Select carefully. The essence of the accumulation of ancient poetry is well said: "Reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "accumulating thin hair." Only by accumulating rich language materials can we "accumulate thick and thin hair" and "write like a god".
However, we find that in the process of "accumulation", especially in the new curriculum standards, language accumulation is strongly advocated to improve students' Chinese literacy today, many teachers begin to put good words, sentences and famous paragraphs in one go.
4. How to use ancient poetry flexibly to write a composition? In fact, I always divide poetry into several words, such as Wen's complaint that "the sky is blue like water, and the night is light and the clouds are light."
It can be written as:
"The blue sky is like water, and the sky is clear in Wan Li. Is this a dream or an illusion? Jathyapple has floated into my eyes and integrated into my heart. "
Simply put, it is expanding sentences, expanding sentences.
But if you want to quote, you can change the sentence pattern on the basis of parallelism and repetition.
For example:
Is that the sound of a pipa? Even before she played, we could feel her feelings. (From Pipa)
Or the helpless voice of "saying yes"? (From a Song Yuan, I can't remember it clearly)
Or is my horse braying again and again? (Excerpted from Li Bai's Farewell to Friends)
Another silence of "no need to sing a song"? I don't remember where it came from. It's a poem anyway. )
There can be more changes, but it must be something similar, which is a bit hard to think about.
I am a junior high school student. If you are a high school student or even a college student, you should know more. Just bring it in yourself (* _ *).
In addition,
If the article wants to be archaic, you just need to reflect the archaism between the lines as much as possible, and you don't have to quote it.
The higher realm we are pursuing is just like the nocturne of E-Dasheng Tang Dynasty. Not one sentence is completely quoted, but every sentence is quoted from the classics, with allusions! If you can take advantage of this, you will be strong ~
I hope I can help you ~
5. Make good use of the poem 7- 1=0 in writing, using mathematical equations as the topic, implying the importance of "sincerity" in seven backpacks, removing "sincerity" and losing others such as "beauty" and "money".
Similarly, "1>; The topic "6" takes the special inequality in mathematics as the topic, and also emphasizes that the "1" backpack is more important than the other six backpacks. Sincerely, Xiu De and Xiu De are modeled after the famous sentence "Quiet to cultivate one's morality, frugal to cultivate one's morality"
Because the topic of "honesty" is the combination of "honesty" and "faith", both of which are the foundation of human existence in the world and the moral self-discipline and consciousness dominated by the soul, the topic of "honesty to cultivate one's morality and faith to cultivate one's morality" well illustrates the importance of "honesty" to a person's moral perfection. In short, this topic quoted a lyric from Friends sung by Emil Wakin Chau: "Friends walk together all their lives ... in a word, all their lives."
The song "Friends" is widely sung, in which "It's a word for life" highlights the frankness between friends, meaning "a promise is as good as a thousand dollars" and "a word from a gentleman is a promise, but it's hard to catch up with it". Honesty, the bottom line of being a man, is the minimum principle of treating people with things in traditional morality. The ancients said, "People don't trust and don't know what to do."
This means that if people are dishonest, I am afraid they are not "people" in the true sense. "Honesty is the bottom line for people" expresses this meaning by metaphor. This title is very good.
Honesty in life is precious. We all know petofi's poem "Life is precious, but love is more expensive". In poetry, "sincerity" means "truth". Using pun rhetoric, this title skillfully turns "truth" into "honesty", which shows the author's wit and flexibility. Carrying a backpack of integrity, walking through the title of a lifetime can be described as straightforward.
Didn't that young man throw away the "honest" backpack? The author seems to be saying: no! Let "sincerity" accompany you all your life. Similar good topics are "Ferry Life with Honesty" and "How Far Can We Go Without Honesty".
Clearly understand my heart. This topic, like the above "In a word, all my life", is a lyric that we are very familiar with. This "bright" heart is a heart that abides by integrity and never lies or cheats.
The white flowers in my hand. This is a city without you. I gradually believe that fate has brought us to meet, meet and separate again and again.
Because we are flowers falling in the wind. Flowers bloom and fade.
But your slender fingers still seem to haunt me. The warm skin I feel.
And your promise. Your eyes cover me like the tide.
Walking for a long time. We have nowhere to stay.
Raindrops in the night hit my face coldly. Parting in the hazy time.
You lean down gently. Gently.
I just want to open in your palm like a flower. Pure white.
Aromatic. It is also silent and sad.
Just bloom for you and you can see it in an instant.
You can see my purity and gloom. In the dark, you see the girl in gorgeous clothes.
Walking alone for the beauty of narcissism. You sang her a song.
Your singing is very lonely. Every parting is a person without tears.
What we leave each other is the sound of the wind blowing. I just want your calm and warm hands.
Hold me tight. Even if we say goodbye.
The moment you let me go. I feel desperate again.
You make me a simple and happy girl. This is a pure white flower.
It is briefly bright in the shadow of time. Let's meet and leave.
Our fierce and decadent commitment. Love has disillusioned us again and again, but at this moment, your hand holds me tightly.
In the crowd, I am your fragile and white girl. Your little baby.
When you leaned over and kissed my hair, I smiled at you gently and helplessly. Did I tell you that I like your silence?
Calm and intense. Obsessed with decadence
This is our way. Who else will understand you like me?
Or someone who understands me like you do. This is a city without you.
Without your smile and eyes. I am used to squinting at you in the sun.
I am used to writing to you when it rains. Get used to a simple and quiet life.
Get used to waiting for your long-distance call late at night. In this city, I am a free and wandering fish.
Living in the clear water in my imagination. Lonely and beautiful.
I didn't expect it to be so far forever. I can't believe it will last so long.
In the crowd, you held my hand. You are a gentle and simple person.
You are very determined. You know I believe you.
Believe in your gentleness. Your pain.
Believe in all this. The promise you gave me.
What you want to give me is long-term and forever. If I could die like a flower in your hand.
Or die in my silent disillusionment. Fireworks in the wind at this moment, you are mine.
My lovely child. Your eyelashes are the green leaves of the spring branches.
I want to touch them gently with my fingers. Moisten them with my warm tears.
They are mine. You say.
Every part of you. Everything you have.
It's all mine. Your deep voice doesn't seem to belong to this noisy world.
At night, it flies to the place where it can stay like a wandering bird. In a distant city.
You are a man with a beautiful face. Open your soft soul to me.
It was two children in the middle of the night. Stupid and lovely child.
Tender infatuation and need. Pain.
Luxury. This is our way.
You say. Because we are people who can fall in love violently.
Because of the darkness and wildness hidden inside. Because I no longer believe in love.
Like a beautiful fireworks blooming in the whole sky. So bright.
It's so warm Gradually extinguished into cold dust in the wind.
But we are happy. Happy and sinking.
Is it the destruction before the end of the world? Have we met? We are unknown and easily disillusioned.
Sometimes very sensitive. And numb.
Need the ultimate feeling. So it will be ruthless.
But this is the most hopeless touching you have given me. We want it so badly.
I like it very much. Baby, I want to take you home.
You say. Your voice touched me in the dark.
Love is desperate. Your promise is very warm.
Let's watch the fireworks. Hold my hand gently in the wind.
Don't let me see parting. Ambiguous, I long for it.