Yu Guangzhong
In childhood
Homesickness is a small stamp.
I'm at this end
Mom is over there.
When I grow up
Homesickness is a narrow ticket.
I'm at this end
The bride is over there.
We'll talk about it later.
Homesickness is a low grave.
I am outside
Mom's inside.
But now
Homesickness is a shallow strait.
I'm at this end
The mainland is over there
Just like the poem "Homesickness", it contains feelings.
Stamp is an image, and the boat tickets, stamps, graves and so on in the poem are all images, all of which are entrusted with homesickness.
A stamp in that youth, a boat ticket in that youth, and even the future grave all contain the poet's homesickness for Qian Qian's thousands of overseas wanderers.
Before the four images of "stamp", "boat ticket", "grave" and "strait", the revised text is as follows:
Adjectives-small, narrow, short and shallow.
Using overlapping words in the same position makes the whole poem low and depressed, as if complaining.
All poems reflect homesickness separated by the strait. From childhood to adulthood, with the growth of the poet, the homesickness is constantly changing, but the essence is the yearning for the land, the mainland, the hometown, the relatives, and the unforgettable feelings.