Poetry:
Qingpingle country house
Author Xin Qiji, Song Dynasty
The thatched roof of the hut is low and small, and the stream is covered with green grass.
Drunk Wu local drunk, gentle voice, white-haired old man who is it?
The eldest son is weeding in the bean field on the east side of the stream, and the second son is busy knitting chicken cages.
My favorite is my youngest son, who is lying in the grass, peeling the lotus just picked.
Rewrite the article:
In the afternoon, I walked slowly with a leisurely mood and accidentally saw a low hut. Behind the hut are green and straight bamboos and rolling mountains, revealing the quiet atmosphere of the countryside. There is a stream beside the hut. The river is clear and transparent, and all the fish in it can be seen clearly. The river looks sparkling in the sunlight.
A breeze blew, causing ripples on the river. There are several beautiful lotus flowers on the stream, some of which are in full bloom; Some are in bud; Everything else seems to be put down. White inside and pink inside, like a shy girl with a veil on her face. There are clumps of green grass beside the stream, which grow very luxuriantly. It is more beautiful and lovely against the backdrop of streams and lotus flowers.
There is an old couple with white hair in front of the hut. They just had a few drinks. From their red faces, we can see that they are all a little drunk. They are together, talking intimately in Wu dialect, and the second son next to them puts in a few words from time to time!
The old couple's eldest son is desperately weeding in the bean field on the east side of the stream. How hard he works! The second son is not idle, and is carefully weaving a chicken coop with bamboo and grass, very focused. The youngest son, not yet an adult, knows nothing. He could only lie on the side of the stream and tease the fish naughtily, peeling the lotus while eating and shaking his feet. Really cute!
What a happy family! I was deeply intoxicated, just standing there, unwilling to leave for a long time …
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Override method:
1, change the style: the ideological content of the original is basically unchanged, and most of them just focus on changing the form of the original. For example, ancient poems are rewritten into words, poems are rewritten into narratives, and narratives are rewritten into expository texts; This novel has been adapted into a play.
2. Change the style: change the classical Chinese into vernacular Chinese; Change the structure, change the sequence of flashbacks, and reorganize the material;
3. Change the person: the first person is changed to the third person, and the third person is changed to the first person.
4. Change the sentence pattern: enlarge the sentence. Abbreviations, etc.
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Sogou encyclopedia-rewrite
Most of the beautiful West Lake is surrounded by mountains. Overlapping green hills hold the West Lake in their arms. There are countless pavilions, carved beams and painted buildings, and the West Lake cruise ship sings and dances day and night. Visiting the West Lake all day, drinking and having fun, and the warm spring breeze blew these ancient poems "titled Lin 'an House" into a composition.
Sleepy, how can you remember the lost northern territory and the reduced old capital! In their eyes, Hangzhou is Bianzhou, no different. Lin 'an Mansion is a political satire poem by Lin Sheng, a poet in the Southern Song Dynasty, and it is also the author's only representative work. This poem is written for the dark reality of the Southern Song Dynasty. It poured out people's indignation and expressed the poet's deep concern for the fate of the country and the nation.
Most of the beautiful West Lake is surrounded by mountains. Overlapping green hills hold the West Lake in their arms, and there are countless pavilions carved with beams and painted buildings. The West Lake cruise ship sings and dances day and night. Traveling around the West Lake all day, drinking and having fun, the warm spring breeze makes these tourists sleepy, how can they remember the lost northern territory and the degraded old capital! In their eyes, Hangzhou is Bianzhou, no different.
This is a poem written on the wall of a hotel in Lin 'an. This is a political satire. The appellation of Lin 'an House shows the society at that time. In AD 1 126, the Jin people captured Bianliang, the capital of the Northern Song Dynasty, and captured two emperors, Huizong and Qinzong. The territory of the Central Plains was completely occupied by the Jin people. Zhao Gou fled to the south of the Yangtze River and ascended the throne in Lin 'an, which is known as the Southern Song Dynasty. Instead of accepting the painful lesson of national subjugation in the Northern Song Dynasty, the small court in the Southern Song Dynasty became angry from embarrassment and tried to strengthen itself. The rulers did not want to recover the lost land in the Central Plains, but begged for peace, surrendered to the outside world, and brutally persecuted Yue Fei and other patriots at home. Politically corrupt and incompetent, dignitaries indulge in debauchery and pleasure. This poem is written for this dark reality. It pours out the indignation pent up in the hearts of the broad masses of people, and also expresses the poet's deep concern for the fate of the country and the nation.
3. How to rewrite ancient poetry is called peeling poetry.
I have written this kind of words, as follows: There are several kinds of interesting poems, which are very special. They peeled and boned the poems of their predecessors and made a new poem of their own. This kind of poem is peeled. It refers to using the methods of abridgement, addition, inversion, adjustment or imitation to change the sentences or expressions in the poems, put new wine in old bottles, and endow them with new contents, so as to produce sharp contrast, combine Zhuang and harmony, laugh and curse, and be humorous.
Generally, it is for humor, satire or other meanings, and it is full of fun to use the ancient to satirize the present in order to achieve the purpose of venting or lashing. Although peeled poems are scripts, good peeled poems often have other artistic conception, which is not inferior to the original poems, and some artistic conception is even higher than the original poems.
It belongs to the series of miscellaneous poems. Skimming poetry not only attracts some poetry lovers, but also some people who write poems like it.
Since ancient times, countless people have written skinning poems and skinning poems. They either laugh and curse, or criticize the shortcomings of the times, or express their thoughts directly, or attack by innuendo. Their techniques are changeable and interesting, which makes people laugh and meditate.
According to different writing techniques, skinned poems can be divided into several types, such as addition and subtraction, changing words, reversing words or adjusting words, parody and so on. According to its artistic conception, it can be divided into two kinds: according to the original poetic artistic conception and contrary poetic artistic conception.
First, add the word peeling method. This kind of peeled poem refers to the method of adding words on the basis of the original poem to make it a new poem. Zhang Huaiqing is best at writing this kind of poem.
According to Sue's written records
Li Yifu's original poem goes like this: "Carve the moon into a singing fan, and cut the clouds into dancing clothes. Self-pity back to Xueying to take Luochuan back.
Lazy is the mandarin duck quilt, ashamed is the tortoise shell bed. Don't worry about the spring breeze, but also look for incense in secret places. "
Seeing that his poems were good, Zhang added two words to each of the first four sentences and changed them into his own seven-line: "Love makes the moon a song fan and the clouds cut into dance clothes." Look in the mirror and feel sorry for Xueying. I will take Luochuan back then. "
This poem is ingeniously revised and highly skilled. What a master at copying other people's articles. The above example is that the new poem with the words peeled off is the same as the original poem, and another example with the opposite meaning after the words were added: Wang Jingwei was arrested for assassinating Regent Dai Feng in his early years and wrote a poem: "Singing the city generously, calmly being a prisoner of Chu."
Draw a knife into the urn for quick success and instant benefit, at the expense of teenagers "Later, for the sake of glory, Wang Ching-wei traitorously surrendered to the Japanese and became a running dog of the Japanese.
Mr. Chen Jianxun published a peeled poem in the newspaper Gai Wang Ching-wei's Poems: "At that time, I sang Yan poems generously, and I was willing to be a Chu prisoner calmly. I hate that I didn't lead the knife into the crash, and I won't be ashamed of the young people's heads. "
This anti-Italian poem completely stripped Wang of his hypocrisy and exposed his ugliness. It can be called a poem-peeling work. Second, the method of deleting words and peeling. This kind of peeled poem refers to deleting the original poem with one or several words on the basis of the original poem, thus making it a new poem or word.
There are also several ways to write skinning poems with minus sign. A) The positions of subtraction are the same and the number of words is the same.
This kind of peeled poem is often a seven-character poem. After deleting words, it becomes a five-character new poem, which has the same or opposite meaning to the original poem. "It rains in the Qingming period, and pedestrians on the road want to break their souls.
Excuse me, where is the restaurant? The shepherd boy shakes his fingers in Xinghua Village. This is the poem Qingming by Du Mu, a famous poet in the Tang Dynasty.
Later generations subtracted the first two words of each sentence and became a five-character poem: "It rains from time to time, and pedestrians want to break their souls. Where is the restaurant? Shake your finger at Xinghua Village. "
During the reign of Emperor Xuanzong of the Tang Dynasty, this Jinshi became the examiner in the examination of the Wei government. He once wrote a poem on the wall of the examination room, indicating that he wanted to be a decent examiner: "The buttonwood leaves are full of shade, and the Zhumen examination room is deep. I worked hard in the past, and I will not be responsible today. "
But his actual behavior is not like what the poem says, but who pays bribes is the main one. So a scholar removed the first two words of each sentence of his poem and stripped it into a stripped poem with the opposite meaning: "The fallen leaves fall in the shade of the courtyard, and the courtyard of Zhumen is deep."
I used to work hard, but today I am negative. "It can be described as hitting the nail on the head, peeling its skin and seeing its bones.
B) The positions of subtraction are different, but the number of words is the same. Take Du Mu's Tomb-Sweeping Day as an example. Later generations removed the last word of each sentence, the fifth word of the second sentence, the last word of the third sentence, and the sixth word of the fourth sentence, and became a six-character poem: "It rained in succession during the Qingming Festival, and pedestrians died on the road.
Excuse me, where is the restaurant? The shepherd boy pointed to Xingzi Village. "It is still a masterpiece of an era. Some people remove the last two words of the first sentence and the first two words of the second to fourth sentences, and it becomes a five-character poem: "It rains a lot during the Qingming Festival, and pedestrians want to die.
where is the restaurant？ Shake your fingers in Xinghua Village. "This song not only changed the rhyme of the first sentence, but also gave a comprehensive review of this peeling poem. C) Change the original poem into other forms of literary works by reducing words.
There are always many anecdotes about celebrities, especially those of the ancients. The ancients liked talented people and beautiful women, so legends about them were endless.
Jie Jin, a gifted scholar in Ming Dynasty, was very clever when he was young. It rained once when I was a child, and I accidentally somersaulted and fell on the muddy road. The children in the village all burst out laughing when they saw it.
When Jie Jin got up, he casually recited a jingle: "Spring rain is as expensive as oil, and it falls to the ground. Falling down and solving a bachelor's degree and laughing down a bunch of cows "makes this group of children laugh and cry." "
After his youth, his talent became more famous, and he was also famous in the past. There are many fans all over the world, even today's Yongle Emperor has become his fans. Once, someone gave Yongle a fan, and Yongle liked it very much, so he asked Jie Jin to write poems according to the inscription on the fan.
Jie Jin deserves to be a generation of celebrities and wizards. He knew that the artistic conception was the same as that of Liangzhou Ci written by Wang Zhihuan, a poet in the Tang Dynasty. Without thinking, he waved his hand and said, "The Yellow River is an isolated city of Wan Ren Mountain, far from the white clouds. Why bother to complain about the willow, the spring breeze is only Yumenguan. "
During the inspection, it was found that the word "between" in the first sentence was omitted due to a momentary negligence. At this time, a minister next to him also found this mistake, and immediately began to play "Yongle Dadian", and said Jie Jin's "Turns out to be".
4. The composition rewrites the ancient poem "Farewell to Meng Haoran in Yangzhou on the Yellow Crane Tower" [The composition rewrites the ancient poem "Farewell to Meng Haoran in Yangzhou on the Yellow Crane Tower"] In the spring of March, flowers were everywhere in Wuhan, and orchids were not in full bloom. There has been a faint scent in the morning breeze, and the air is particularly fresh. The composition rewrites the ancient poem "On the way to send Meng Haoran to Yangzhou on the Yellow Crane Tower". Meng, do you really want to go? Li Bai said, Meng Haoran said, I will go to Yangzhou when you are finished. The grapes have dried into raisins. Li Bai laughed and dried into raisins, delicious! Meng Haoran got on the boat and said to Li Bai, I will wait for you in Yangzhou. Li Bai responded: OK, I'll come to you as soon as I'm finished. In the fourth grade of primary school, I wrote a composition rewriting the ancient poem "The Yellow Crane Tower Farewell Meng Haoran to Yangzhou". The boat slowly began to paddle, and Meng Haoran added: Don't forget to come to Yangzhou to find me after you finish! Li Bai said: Don't worry, I won't forget it. When I get to Yangzhou, we'll have a good drink. Meng Haoran said: OK. As the boat went farther and farther, Meng Haoran seemed to want to say something, but he couldn't hear it. Li Bai can't send Meng Haoran to Yangzhou, he can only watch. Meng Haoran's boat should have disappeared, but Li Bai still stood there and waited for a while, and the birds sang before he came to his senses.
5. Rewriting the composition of the ancient poem "Wandering Son" In the Tang Dynasty, in a hut in a small village far from Beijing, a mother sewed clothes for her son under a dim oil lamp, and his son read a book under the lamp.
This son is Meng Jiao. He is going to Beijing to take the exam. His mother is sewing clothes for him. He thinks the exam is coming soon. His son doesn't know when he will come back. Meng Mu is absorbed in sewing clothes for his children. She sewed stitch by stitch. I don't know how long the thread took, nor how many stitches she sewed.
Meng Mu's eyes are bad, her hands are pierced with many tiny blood holes, and she is still bleeding, but she is still sewing clothes. At this time, Meng Jiao, who was sitting on the side, saw her mother's bleeding finger and couldn't help but go forward and persuade: "Mom, don't sew clothes for me again! Please teach me, or let me sew my own clothes! " "Then what should I do? I sew your clothes because I'm afraid your clothes will be torn on the way to Beijing, and it's not easy to mend them. You are going to Beijing to catch the exam soon. You have to prepare for school, how can you waste time so easily? " Meng Jiao saw his mother's scarred hands and bloodshot eyes with mixed feelings. He wrote such a poem: thread in the hands of a loving mother, making clothes for her wayward son.
Before leaving, I had a stitch for fear that my son would come back late and his clothes would be damaged. Who can say that a filial child like the weak can repay his mother's love like the sunshine in spring?