New content is the shining point of an article. To make it shine, you must:
1. Don’t follow what others say.
A few years ago, there was an essay on the topic of "love". One of our classmates boldly wrote down his tragic life experience on paper in the essay. This essay won the sympathy of the marking teacher for its "tragic" , get high scores.
Unfortunately, many young people are affected by it. If they encounter similar topics, they will not hesitate to hurt themselves, hoping to deceive the teacher's tears and get high marks. Who knows that our teachers have already seen it? I'm annoyed. Instead of giving high marks, they think today's students are unreasonable and immoral.
One year's high school entrance examination essay was based on the topic of "cooperation", and one candidate broke away from the stereotype. He caught prey on the spot, used others to throw paper balls, and covered it with his feet. Several classmates cooperated sincerely and deceived. Using the invigilator as material, I wrote an article with twists and turns and received full marks. This method of seeking differences within the same is worth learning.
2. Have a sense of the times.
This approach is just like our politics teachers studying current affairs politics in the high school entrance examination. How to find out the content to be tested among many events and achieve steady victory?
So, this requires wisdom, and the same is true for composition.
For example, if we write on the topic of "environment", some of our students will soon think of the practical issue of "cherishing life and protecting health" that is currently advocated, so they write about the lingering wind and sand swallowing in the form of fables. Crescent Moon (Crescent Moon Spring), wind and sand fill the oasis (Lop Nur). The article depicts a fictional Fengsha with a flamboyant personality, who is unscrupulous and tramples on life. Let readers realize that valuing the environment means valuing health, and valuing health means valuing life.
2. New style.
In the past, most of our compositions used three paragraphs: "a good beginning, a bad middle, and a good ending." With the advancement of the new curriculum reform in various curriculum reform pilot areas and the main participation of students, candidates' personalities have been promoted, their thinking has been broadened, and their styles have been displayed to the public in a new look.
For example, if you write an essay on the topic of "love".
One candidate used a parallelism to start his essay. The article was majestic and deeply shocked the readers' hearts.
In addition, some students also appeared in the form of practical essays. For example, write a contract, a letter, a speech, etc. to show your deep love and thoughts.
In 2004, a candidate from Hunan gave a speech, which was refreshing. The article begins with a story to introduce the topic of "family education", then lists various wrong practices that parents have in educating their children, profoundly points out the harmfulness of this kind of family education, and ends with an appeal to express the author's opinions. , highly contagious.
3. Language self.
The marking teachers all have certain literary qualities and like to read and write articles in their spare time. If you quote a whole paragraph of beautiful sentences written by others in the article, and these sentences happen to be well known to our teachers, the consequences are self-evident.
When Gorky wrote a long poem "Song of the Old Oak", he made great efforts and read a lot of Italian and British poetry. In order to make the poems "beautiful", he selected many poems from the Italian and British poems he had read and wrote them into "The Song of the Old Oak". Then he happily sent the poem to the famous writer Korolenko, but unexpectedly , after Korolenko read the poem, he only had one reply: "Please use your own words and write what you see!"
It is indeed good, what he narrates is what he wants to narrate, and the lyrical What you want to express is what you want to express, what you want to express is the emotion you want to express, so you must use your own words. Only in this way can the writing of the article be natural, the emotions can be revealed, and the readers can be moved.
To sum up,
In order to get high scores in the composition of the high school entrance examination, candidates must seek differences from the same, seek strangeness from the same, seek strangeness from the same, and seek the same from the same. Seeking refinement.
Show the article to the marking teacher in a "different", "weird", "strange" and "excellent" way. Only in this way can the article shine brightly and win the laurels in the examination room!