Teacher, I wrote a poem. Can you give me some advice? Please leave no room for any shortcomings.

Grass on the road

Dance colorful dance steps (dance steps can't be danced)

Life-giving Spring Breeze and Rain —— The Beneficial Influence of Education

Moisten the vast land

The long wicker waved its noble swordsmanship.

Song of Xia Chan

The beautiful aftertaste decorated the summer.

The ground is covered with maple leaves.

Record their sincere thoughts.

autumn leave

In the cool breeze, I made this pair of bosom friends.

Tall pine trees

Show the power between snow and wind

Winter gave way to spring.

All the storms will pass.

Before that, it was—

keep one's patience

(Some words are not properly collocated, and the seasons turn unnatural, lacking a little rhythmic beauty)

Modify:

Grass by the roadside

Accompanied by colorful dance steps

Longing for spring breeze and rain

Long wicker

Dance a beautiful sword flower

Looking forward to the song of Xia Chan

The ground is covered with maple leaves.

Record sincere thoughts

Make a world of mortals confidant.

Tall pine trees

Proud of the power of snow.

Leave an infinite sigh.

Winter gave way to spring.

All the storms will pass.

Before that, it was—

keep one's patience