Go to Yunshan, south of Beijiang River, and watch the Pearl River tour east of Lotus. It's too white at first, so it can be refined when you go. The word lotus is too repetitive and procrastinating, and the two monosyllabic words have exactly the same meaning. The word "pearl water" is invented and its meaning is not clear. You can use "white dew", which means fog on the river. )
Use the greed of spring to ease the mind and cultivate ordinary people in the martial arts temple. The word "liquid" is superfluous. You can add an adjective before the measure, and change the next sentence of Wugong Temple to Gongmiao. Zi' an is ambiguous. Whether you or the ancients, the words are accurate. Improper use of words is usually political and military, and it is derogatory for ordinary people to rhyme and hurt meaning. )
Under the green fields, winds and rainbows, thousands of families in Shimen shine. The meaning of this sentence is good, the rainbow can be changed into a rainbow. Shimen is a scene in Guangzhou, which has nothing to do with greedy springs. Moreover, this phrase is similar to idioms, and idioms are forbidden in poetry. Wan Huhou usually refers to a general term, referring to a high official, and specifically refers to a person who is afraid that there will be no one before him. )
The hidden history of the secretary desk still exists today, and the heart of a pure child is flush with Aquilaria Island. (The secretariat is hidden, and the secretariat is hidden. It is better to be concise and repetitive. For example, Tao Yuanming is the magistrate of Pengze County, or Ling Tao for short. However, these two sentences have a turning point and a clever ending. Today refers to the purity of the next sentence, and the purity of the heart can be linked with the first sentence, which means that Wu Yinzhi's spirit is integrated into this landscape, just like the pearl water on the river is dispersed here, which is both a human being and a reality. )
Generally speaking, this poem has both advantages and disadvantages. But it can't be said that it is the seven laws. Each of the seven laws has its own meter, and this article is a mess. Measurement is not a difficult task. You have good knowledge of writing. Master it, master it, and you will go further. You can find detailed information on the Internet. In addition, pay attention to the accumulation of vocabulary and sentences, and don't just pay attention to the poetic shape of the work, regardless of every inch of details and feelings. This is not conducive to personal progress. . . In addition, it is not good for you to post this poem in Baidu Encyclopedia as an entry of "greedy for spring". First of all, it can't be used as a searcher to understand a little bit of information about greedy spring, and it can't be placed in an encyclopedia instead of a rigorous discussion. You should find it funny that there will be greater progress in the future. I mean, you should delete it.