About the author:
Name: Jipule
Gender: Female
Constellation: Pisces
Blood type: type B.
Hobbies: eating snacks. Write poetry. Write fairy tales.
smell
Put your nose together in autumn.
The sun has exposed grass and leaves, and cotton wants to bloom in the shape of plum blossoms and clouds.
In autumn, a pumpkin with a windy nose lights an orange lantern, and a wax gourd sleeps in a green pillow.
Cricket, jump
Grasshopper, jump
I am too drunk to open my eyes in autumn.
Deep, deep? breathe
Then, it gently dragged through the wet long skirt.
I want to paint the sun green.
I want to paint the sun green.
Shine on you, shine on me
Turn sadness into roses
Spread the white petals, emitting a burst of fragrance, and walk over.
Inadvertently touched the cool dew.
You can't walk too slowly.
Heart, if something is lost.
I asked
I asked my imaginary lover
What is eternity?
I asked my imaginary enemy.
How to forgive each other?
Because everything is fleeting, who can be as pure as a child and as tough as a child forever?
The lotus under such a big lotus leaf! Lotus! Bear your lotus! One night, the girl's eyes were as sad and transparent as moonlight. She is wearing a green skirt and walking back and forth. I hear the dazzling sunshine of underwater wings in her shadow, which often makes me think. It seems to have glass, transparent wings, a diamond, four-corner thumbtacks pressed on your fingers, gold powder and green butterflies decorated with wild chrysanthemums. Children in dark rooms in the wilderness-restless singing fantasies can give birth to wings. Riding on the green and cool wind, in the trembling that no one can appreciate, I dropped a drop of dream light from the tip of my blade. Sunlight quivers on the eyelashes of plants like a big butterfly. Time passes in the depths of eternity. I am the master of the world at this moment. The earth is as gentle as the soul of a sheep. The violin sounded and the air was filled with sadness. No fate tells me.
Take me away! Take me away! At the end of time, in the eternal depths-wings burst and splash: but my heart is beautiful and sad, broken leaves will not be so green forever, and will turn yellow slowly like stationery. The yellow wind will take it to your place and rub it gently on the ground, making you feel excited. You pick up one that is crisp in the sun, as if time is so light and crisp. What is the deep blue of beauty and lust? Sparks on candles, bang! Fall out of a hole in the night sky. Will beautiful women stop on the moon and paint green to lend firefly lanterns? Charm shines on the thin and cool wings, shake your wings and fly! Loneliness is wine. You don't drink dew and purple morning glory, you pick up cups and cups of wheat. In May, the ears of wheat on your golden eyelashes swaying in the breeze should be collected, and the throat without sobs should be collected. Say goodbye to suffering and misfortune. A grain of wheat has a dead heart when it boils. No one can stop it? No one can stop it? ) infinite sadness in the moonlight, a small group of wheat
The wheat has been cut-the wheat has fallen into the harvest bag, and the earth is bare and thirsty. How does pomegranate wrap itself in the night sky? How does it paint itself red and yellow? Why is it called pomegranate? Nobody knows that pomegranate's mouth is a bird's mouth. Birds can't talk The mouth of a bird singing pomegranate is also the mouth of a petal. The autumn wind in the sky brought bright red kissing pomegranates, flames and dancing trees. Pomegranate is a flower that loves you. Stop it! Song of the cuckoo! The cuckoo is singing! The cuckoo is singing! Goo goo goo goo-! Goo goo goo goo-! Do I love you so much? Before you wake up, I turned into a leaf and put a green awning on the branches above you. Grasshopper-like light jumps into your face. The river changed from a big river to a snake and slipped away. The cuckoo is singing! The cuckoo is singing! Goo goo! Goo goo!
Are you the only one with a crystal heart? Your silver-gray hair hangs in the sky, soft and wet, and it can't be tied up. Hold up an umbrella and put it on your temple. I have my eyes, too. It's a sponge sky, and I can't bear any more weight. You are vague to me:-"Tears are silent." We are silent in front of you, and we are embarrassed to say a silent compliment in front of you. Night always comes first at dawn, and some things remain in yesterday. We feel sorry for you with messy hair, slightly dark eyes and bags under your eyes, but you are as relaxed as a leaf shaking off dew. In the golden sunshine, the pigeon whistle bursts with the sorrowful shadow of everything, stinging the hearts of passers-by. Spring in summer comes earlier than us. Dear people, I should be laughed at. I should feel world-weary and slightly humiliated. The sun shone on the forest path for a long time.
Wheat, Poem 2: Dear Wheat
Zhou Tao
Teaching: deep alley
What does "dear" mean?
Intimate and affectionate.
Who else can we call "honey"?
Mom and Dad
Teacher friend
Favorite animals and plants
Your favorite artistic image
Dear wheat
Zhou Tao
Zhou Tao, born in 1956, is a soldier, a famous poet and essayist in China. Born in Shanxi, he was enlightened in Beijing, and the teenager moved to Xinjiang with his father. Hours are naughty and free and easy. He is good at arts and sports, and once served as a table tennis player in the provincial team. He showed his literary talent for a long time, loved reading and writing, and finally embarked on the road of literature, made outstanding achievements in poetry and prose creation, and became a contemporary master of China.
First reading perception
What is your deepest feeling when you read this article?
The wheat written by the author is beautiful. Please use the sentences in the article to talk about the beauty of wheat.
The true beauty of simplicity, softness and noiseless.
The profound beauty created by the cooperation between heaven and earth.
Sad color and harmonious beauty of perfect form
Read the situation carefully
What thoughts and feelings does the article contain?
Annotation method
1, taste the words in the sentence and try to figure out the author's feelings;
2. Analyze the rhetorical method, expression, sentence characteristics, writing and structure of the article, and try to figure out the author's feelings. Praise, lament, cherish, admire
Intensive reading and understanding
Read paragraphs 1 1 and 12 carefully, and then answer:
Is this article just praising wheat and calling on human beings to cherish and praise wheat?
What does the author really want to praise?
What kind of life sentiment did the article give you? Please combine the full text and write in philosophical sentences.
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It is a praise for simple, true, sad and profound wheat; It is also a tribute to those who live as ordinary as wheat; It is also a tribute to the nature represented by wheat and living with human beings.
Wheat, Poetry Part III: Kissing Wheat and Talking about Poetry Writing
On Poetry Writing from the Prose Collection Kissing Wheat
Poetry writing is a kind of writing about life, emotion and wisdom. The so-called poetic prose is actually a vivid and peaceful expression of all things in nature and human life, a purification of thoughts and emotions full of kindness to nature and awe of life, and a reflection on the human spiritual world. Poetry writing is a new field. It is free to talk, awaken the soul, fit the spirit, pursue happiness and realize self. That is to make writing a poem of life.
Combined with years of writing practice, I think that to write a poetic prose, we must solve the following three problems. The first question is how to judge the topic, the second question is how to open the mind, and the third question is how to make the language beautiful. Let's talk about these three issues separately.
Examining the topic is the first step and prerequisite for writing a good poetic prose. We should correctly understand the meaning of the topic and firmly grasp the key words in the topic. For example, the topic of the composition is "the choice of mind", and the key words of this topic are mind and choice. The word "heart" is extremely critical, involving thoughts, emotions, morality and ethics, and refers to people's spiritual choice. When reviewing the questions, we must make clear the limited scope of the questions.
P228 "Miss Autumn White in Autumn" turns autumn white.
Topic composition can also be written as poetic beauty. We should not only look for keywords from the materials, hints, requirements or precautions given by the proposer, but also relate all the contents provided by the proposer to try to figure out the proposer's intention.
I once read a passage that someone said that China people can build machines? No, can Chinese produce economic benefits? "No", what's the use of Chinese? "Useless" Chinese is useless, but Chinese is spiritual, so useless use is great use. This topic is about Chinese. It is wrong to think that Chinese is useless just by looking at the first few sentences. You can understand it by linking everything before and after. This topic means that Chinese is of great use. Students, what do you think is the function of Chinese? )
I wrote an article on this topic called "Useless is Great Use" P 16 1, which was written from the development of Chinese, the humanistic spirit contained in Chinese and its great role. The rise and fall of Chinese is a big issue related to a country and a nation. A nation
It is terrible for a race to lose its land. What is even more frightening is that a race has lost its cultural identity and soul. To keep the blood of China people is to keep the blood of the Chinese nation.
Next, let's discuss the second question.
How to open the train of thought of the article? First of all, we should have a humanistic mentality, no matter what the topic of the composition is, no matter whether it is natural science or social science, but we should change constantly and establish a humanistic mentality. What we write must be related to people's behavior, people's thoughts and feelings, and people's ethics. There are two ways to open the train of thought of the article; The first method is to open your mind from the perspective of time and place, and skillfully "link" different life scenes of people at different times and places to express a theme. When I conceived the article "Lights, Flowers with Tall Spiritual Branches", I wrote three life scenes. The first life scene was when I was not in school, listening to adult stories under the oil lamp opened my eyes. The second life scene is that I went to school, sat under the lampblack machine and was accompanied by my parents to review my lessons. The third life scene is that I have gone to work and insist on reading and writing with a desk lamp. The second method is to be happy from the perspective of time, place, scene, event and actor. When I wrote the article Dignity, I focused on the different deeds of two characters. The first is the story of Su Wu herding sheep, and the other is the scene of Wen Tianxiang writing Song Zhengqi in his cell. In this way, around the theme, different scenes, different people and different events that can express the theme are juxtaposed into segments, and a string of red beads has been achieved. A red line is the theme. Beads are character events.
When your mind is wide open and you conceive an article, how can you make the ordinary things in your life extraordinary? You can change the time. For example, when writing Perseverance, the Character I Seek, a candidate wrote that before the college entrance examination, before dawn every day, when the students were still sleeping, he and his father went to the fields to collect wheat. Cutting wheat is a common thing for him and his father, but it is unusual to write about it at dawn the day before the college entrance examination. You can also make ordinary things extraordinary by changing the place where things happen. When a candidate was writing "Taste and Fashion", he wrote that a group of farmers were dancing on a Little Square, and the square was covered with pebbles and colored lights. It's common to dance fitness dance, but it's unusual and fashionable for a group of farmers to dance around crops in the square.
When you conceive an article, how do you start? At the beginning of poetic prose, you can write the environment in which the characters appear first, so that there is a kind of beauty with a secluded winding path and implicit implication at the beginning. If it is a topic composition, you can use the content of the topic material to lead to the beginning of the article. essay
The ending should correspond to the beginning of the article, echo from beginning to end, express the theme of the article, write out the universal significance of the theme of the article to human survival and development, and sublimate the theme. When I was writing the article "Another name of art is medicine", I ended it like this: "P 157 Our artists cured themselves and human suffering with their lives and blood in the art palace. They encourage human beings to live optimistically for happiness, happiness and freedom, continue to overcome darkness and confusion with rational strength and open mind, meet the sunrise and sunset every day, devote themselves to the cause beneficial to people's hearts, continue to dream and create, and continue to be a responsible person to society. The artist saved his own life while saving himself. "
Finally, let's discuss the third question.
How to make the language beautiful and impress readers?
Poetic language has poetic beauty and should be full of wit, charm, poetry and agility. Therefore, you can't write too realistically, and you can't write space. You must integrate things, scenery, emotion, reason, interest, taste and environment into one, which is both similar in shape and spirit, as well as true, unreal and harmonious in Zhuang, with the meaning beyond painting and simplicity.
The first method is to increase literary talent by quoting or using classical languages such as poems, famous sentences and proverbs.
The second method is to use rhetorical devices such as metaphor, personification and parallelism to write things vividly, vividly and vividly, and pay attention to the transformation between image thinking and abstract thinking. Image things can be expressed in abstract sentences, and abstract things can be expressed in image sentences.
When I was writing "Kissing Wheat", I wrote a passage like this: "The autumn sun shines on the fields, and the cultivated fields reveal rich skin. With the sonorous steps of his father's arm waving, wheat grains fell into the ground through the air in late autumn. A golden rain in the field sparkled in the autumn sun. Father's face was full of smiles, and he gave the wheat to the home of life. If a seed wants not to lose itself, it must return to the home of life, move towards loose and moist soil and absorb the gentle fragrance of the earth. Moistened by the autumn rain, the green sword pierced the dark soil and pointed to the sky, and the tender green buds poked their heads out. They live together in a crowded way, unfold in a grand form, and show the meaning of life with collective strength.
The third method is to carve the characters by means of expression description, action description, language description and psychological description according to the needs, and describe the event scene with vivid and accurate language to achieve "painting in the text".
For example, when writing the article "Rice", there was a passage that read: "My father walked into the field with a seedling handle as big as a pagoda, bowed the pole, wiped the sweat from his forehead with his sleeves, lifted the seedling handle, drew a beautiful arc in the air, and the seedlings stood in the paddy field with a bang. Mother grabbed the handle of the seedling, tore the straw from its waist, split it in two, held half of the seedling in her left hand, and then twisted it nimbly with her thumb, forefinger and middle finger. The seedlings were separated one by one, quickly caught by her right hand, and then inserted into the paddy field. Mother's right and left hands cooperate very tacitly, and the splash raised by her fingers never stops when transplanting rice. In the land where my mother moved, green seedlings stood in rows, neat and even, like a green carpet. "
The fourth method is that the language should be full of true feelings. Language has temperature and can warm people. Language is bright and can illuminate people. When writing an article, students should choose people and things that touch you in line with the meaning of the topic. In this way, there will be your heartbeat and breathing between the lines of the article, and there will be your blood. Such an article is an article with context. Only from your heart can you enter the reader's heart.
In the article "Roses in April", I wrote a passage like this: "Under every lonely lamp, our literary workers spent decades collecting gold dust particles in life and forging them into their own golden roses-novels, poems and essays. These overwhelming torrent of articles generously endowed me with the incomparable truth, goodness, beauty, sublimity and significance between heaven and earth. This generous gift makes my heart clear and hot. An extremely pure desire to express and vent makes me fidgety. Let me make a golden rose for you, for me and for all those who advocate truth, goodness and beauty! "
The fifth method is to write your own unique thinking, especially the reflection on the human spiritual world. We should use vivid and accurate language to describe things, form artistic conception, put people in the situation created by language, and integrate their emotions, interests and feelings into the language. We often look up at the bright moon in the sky. Bathing in the moonlight and staring at the bright moon, students, what will you think of?
I wrote in P 178 "Heart of the Moon through the ages": "The bright moon I look up to has been roaming in the sky for 5,000 years. It spanned the Qin and Han Dynasties, the Tang, Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing Dynasties, bathed in the surging Yangtze River and the rolling Yellow River. How many people's eyes and souls have it illuminated? Li Bai said: "Today people don't see Gu Yue, but this month they took photos of the ancients." Zhang said:
"Who sees the first sight of the moon by the river, Jiang Yuezhao at the beginning of the year." Su Dongpo said, "When will there be a bright moon? Ask for wine. " Moonlight is a flat and even recitation in Li Qingzhao's words; Moonlight flows on the strings of A Bing's "Two Springs Reflecting the Moon"; Mr. Zhu Ziqing, lotus pond? Holding the moon, we step by step into the depths of the years, and our mood is getting heavier. This round of eternal bright moon shining on the earth is probably the bosom friend people are looking for when their thoughts and feelings are difficult to solve and they feel relieved. Modern people happen to coincide with the ancients. They talk to the moon, borrow light from the moon, and borrow light from themselves. Moonlight is both poetic and philosophical. We snuggled up to the moon and my arms to keep warm. "
Students may all like lotus flowers. Throughout the ages, countless literati wrote poems and songs for lotus flowers. So why do so many people like lotus flowers? Have you thought about this question?
Thinking about this question, I gave the answer in P29 "Lotus of Purity": "The germination and blooming of lotus gives people a bodhi consciousness. Under the clear water, there is a dirty mire. A lotus flower breaks through the thick night and blooms beautiful notes from the pollution. Lotus seems to bloom in the dream of heaven, and they ignore the mud around them. What kind of tempering should our hearts go through before we can open a clean lotus? Can we, like lotus, find wisdom from this world full of beauty and turbidity with a clear heart? If we have the wisdom of lotus, we can realize from all the troubles and sorrows. All the troubles and trifles can make us feel its meaning and value, and let our hearts bloom from the dust. "
The beauty of poetry has the power of morality, thinking, wisdom, emotion and beauty, which can make readers, including the marking teacher, fall in love at first sight, impress the teacher's heart and naturally get high marks.
Let's stop here today. Finally, I wish the students progress in their studies and get good grades in the exam. Thank you all.