Learn to try to write children's poems by yourself, and the works written are both literary and ideological. Full of children's innocence, children's interest and children's rich imagination, it has the beauty of language, content, structure and phonology, and can arouse the emotions of itself and its companions. How can we children write our own children's poems? What you write is only close to the life of you and your companions, making them easy to understand and love to read. Please see "Dirty Hands": If you have dirty hands, you should get steamed bread; Shantou felt dirty, so he turned his head. Have a pair of dirty hands, used to hold dolls; The doll thinks he is dirty and doesn't like him. These dirty hands, turn on the tap; Wash, wash and make a pair of small white hands. Big steamed bread, smile, doll, nod; Everyone likes him and wants to be friends with him. Tell you and your partner: pay attention to hygiene from an early age! Isn't it a true portrayal of our own lives? Look at Little Grasshopper again: Little grasshopper, learn to jump high and jump on the green grass. With a snap of his leg, his foot changed shape. "Nobody jumps as high as me!" "When the grass shakes, it falls down and a big bag falls on its head. You see, as long as your friends recite this poem, they will definitely associate this little grasshopper in nature with many proud "little grasshoppers" in life. Pride goes before a fall. When they read the sentence "a big blue bag fell on their heads", they will feel very humorous and laugh. Therefore, writing children's poems well is inseparable from life, and children's poems should be close to their own lives. Second, children's poetry should pay attention to the vivid image of language. You see, "Little Grasshopper" mainly depicts the image through action descriptions, such as "jumping up and down" to describe the ability of small grasshoppers, "jumping up and down" and "jumping up and down", which vividly depicts a small grasshopper who is complacent just after some achievements. " Fall "depicts the embarrassment and absurdity of the proud hero being punished." The exaggerated detail description of the last sentence "A big blue bag fell on my head" makes a good mockery of this image and is very interesting for children. Let's look at the following poem: "Spring" What is spring? The swallow said that spring is a warm mud nest; The duckling said that spring is a jubilant river; The little bee said that spring is a sweet flower; The little goat said that spring is a green grass slope ... the children said that spring is everyone's joy! In this poem, the author uses anthropomorphic rhetoric to let the small animals closely related to spring tell their feelings about spring. The author uses a lot of beautiful adjectives to describe spring as beautiful, warm and happy from the perspectives of body feeling, smell and vision! The use of parallelism makes the work catchy to read. Let's look at the mountains again, which is also anthropomorphic: I want to play with the sun during the day and invite the moon to play at night, but I am not tall, so I have to watch the sun during the day and the moon at night, and then look at another poem that also describes spring-"Spring is coming": the running water on the eaves,/ticking,/thawing river water,/clattering,/duckling in the pond. In this poem, the author uses a large number of onomatopoeic words and disyllabic words, skillfully combining the aesthetic feeling of sound with emotion, and expressing the author's strong love for spring. Third, children's poetry should pay attention to the healthy and upward ideological theme. Children's poems are read by your peers, and only works with healthy and progressive themes will be liked by your friends, so as to cultivate sentiment and get education in reading aloud. Please read Woodpecker: In the Forest, Toto Toto, Woodpecker, Peck, Kill Pests for Trees, Catch and Catch, which shows the excellent quality of Woodpecker's diligence in killing pests for the people, and its ideological content is positive. However, although Shanliwa is true and full of childlike interest, her ideological content is not so healthy: she is naturally a rogue Shanliwa after reading it. The skirt and nose are muddy. At that time, when the moon was there, it would be nice to steal melons in the field. A poet in the Qing Dynasty wrote a digital children's poem Ode to the Sparrow, which is not only interesting to read, but also has the right theme-ridiculing the sparrow for no reason! One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight and ninety have all eaten thousands of royal millet. How many phoenixes are there And "Sunset" shows love for mother: Sunset is a beautiful piece of cloth. If I can cut it, I must make a beautiful dress for my mother!
To sum up, being close to one's own life is the source of writing children's poems, vivid language is the flesh and blood of children's poems, and the healthy and uplifting theme is the soul of children's poems. Please enjoy the following four children's poems carefully! Comment on the last song and see where it is. I believe you have this level! Sunset Sunset is an apple. Gluttonous people eat sunset at night [analysis] _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ [Resolution] _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ It floated out of my window. [resolution] _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
Mother's hair shines like summer grass. How beautiful!
Dad's hair \ like autumn grass \ grandma's hair \ like winter grass \ is dyed white by snowflakes [Comment]: The author thinks of the hair of four families and the grass of four seasons, which is really rich! "So tender!" "How beautiful!" The use of these two exclamations, as well as the quilt sentences of "blown dry by autumn wind" and "dyed white by snowflakes", makes this little poem interesting! There are certain methods to write children's own poems, but there is no definite method. As long as you are inspired, interested and literary, as long as you master the above points, you will become an excellent little poet! Pick up the pen in your hand, write a poem of your own and be a little "Li Bai"!