Spring is here, the drizzle is like silk, and the poplar trees greedily suck the spring dew, really like a naughty child. Spring is here, and everything revives. Here are the essays and comments about spring that I have compiled for you. I hope it will be helpful to you! Spring is here essay part 1
Winter has passed, and we are welcoming again. Here comes the beautiful spring. Everything begins to revive. The bare mountains turned green, as if they were covered with a green coat. There is a stream in front of the mountain. There are ducks swimming happily in the stream, like small boats moving forward in the water; there are also small fish swimming around in the water, like divers swimming in the water. Looking further ahead is a green grassland with colorful flowers in the grass. There are also willow trees and peach trees. The branches of the willow tree flutter in the wind, like a spring girl's hair. The peach trees were blooming with pink peach blossoms, and those peach blossoms seemed to say to us: "Spring is coming." In the sky, the wild geese flew back neatly in a herringbone queue.
Ah! Spring is so charming!
Teacher comment: The young author is a good boy who loves life and nature. His love for spring is revealed between the lines! "Like a bird "A small boat", "Like a diver", "Like a spring girl's hair" and other metaphors are used appropriately and rich in imagination to write about the beauty of spring.
Spring is coming composition part 2
Spring is coming!
We children took off our heavy cotton-padded clothes, rushed out of the house and ran to the fields, Go find spring. Spring is like a shy little girl, covering up and hiding. We searched carefully, searched...
The grass poked its head out from the ground. Are those the eyebrows of spring? One or two early blooming wild flowers, are those the eyes of spring? The trees are sprouting little buds, are those the notes of spring? The thawing creek is tinkling, aren't those the sounds of spring?
Spring is here, we see her, we hear her , we smell her, we touch her. She swings playfully on the willow branches, she swings freely on the tail of the kite, she smiles happily on the buds of peach blossoms and apricot blossoms; she keeps calling in the mouths of magpies and cuckoos; we step on On the fresh green lawn, the soft and warm spring breeze caressed our cheeks, making it warm.
Sister Lightning shines with dazzling white lights, like wielding a sharp sword to attack the ugliness in the world, and seems to illuminate the path of growth for all things that are growing up; boom, boom, Rumble, it was the spring thunder rolling on the earth. He seemed to be running, shouting: "Spring is coming! Spring is coming!" Father Lei seemed to be beating drums in the air again, and he also cheered for the resurrection of all things: "How beautiful it is. Nature! Don’t I have a share of the credit for this?”
I love spring - after the rain has passed and the sky has cleared, a gorgeous rainbow hangs in the sky, and the trees are covered with new green clothes, in twos and threes. The little bird stood on the branch and sang "chirp", as if praising the beautiful scenery of nature after the rain, and also seemed to say: "Spring is here! I love the beautiful spring!"
Teacher's comment: This is a very beautiful article describing scenery. The young author uses personification throughout the article to capture the characteristics of spring scenery and describe it vividly and lively. "The grass peeks out from the ground. Are those the eyebrows of spring? One or two early blooming wild flowers are the eyes of spring, right? The trees are sprouting little buds. Are those the notes of spring? The thawing little Ding-ding-ding-dong-dong, is that the sound of the piano in spring?" The author uses parallelism and vivid metaphors to describe the characteristics of the resurgence of all things in spring. It is very vivid, the language is very contagious, and full of childlike innocence. Spring is Coming Composition Part 3
A gust of spring breeze sends away Grandpa Winter and welcomes Sister Chun. Sister Chun put on new clothes for the earth that had been sleeping all winter.
The grass on the meadow sprouted, and they rushed to say hello to Sister Chun.
The willow trees by the river also sprouted new buds, dancing in the spring breeze.
The flowers on the roadside are also in full bloom. There are yellow jasmine flowers, white apricot flowers, and pink peach blossoms. Looks stunning.
In the distant fields, wheat, neatly dressed in new green clothes, lined up in rows, as if to welcome Sister Chun.
Sister Chun awakens the whole earth and makes all things vibrant.
I like Sister Chun and this beautiful season.
Teacher’s comment: This scene-writing article personifies spring and gives it life. It appears lively and the language of the whole text is fluent. The metaphor "Mai is dressed in neat new green clothes, lined up in rows, as if welcoming Sister Chun" is bold and novel. The wording of "Dancing lightly" is accurate and vivid, vividly describing the dynamic spring breeze. This is a successful work and worth recommending.