When I first read this article, I felt extraordinary. After I read it carefully, I found it more exquisite.
This article narrates Su Shi's visit to Chibi with his guests, and the full text is very smooth.
I think the scenery in the article is well described: "The moon rises on the East Mountain and wanders between bullfights. The white dew crosses the river,
water meets the sky. Let the boat be floating on the river of mangwubianji, across the vast expanse of the river. The vastness is like feng Xu's wind, and I don't know where it ends; It' s like being independent, feathering and becoming immortal. " In just a few words, it summarizes all the surrounding scenes, which makes readers feel immersive, and at the same time, the sentences are combined with long and short, catchy and harmonious.
This article of Su Shi is similar to his previous works, that is, the author's own emotional changes. Studying Su Shi's previous works, whether poems or articles, no matter whether the author's mood is good or bad at first, he will eventually be relieved and try his best to convince himself to get rid of his hardships and get happiness for the time being!
For example, his "Water Tune Song Tou" begins with "When will there be a bright moon? Ask the sky for wine ",a poem full of romanticism, shows the author's happy mood, but then" I want to go home by the wind, lest I be too cold at the top ",and my mood suddenly falls into the abyss; And after that? He began to comfort himself again, saying that "people have joys and sorrows, and the moon is full of rain or shine, and this matter is ancient and difficult to complete." In the end, he was suddenly enlightened and said the famous sentence "I hope people will live for a long time, and the cicadas will be thousands of miles away", and his unhappiness in his heart will be relieved.
so is this article. At first, the author was very happy when he saw the beautiful scenery of Chibi, and even sang it. However, when singing and singing, "the beauty is far away from the sky", the author unconsciously shows a kind of sadness, and a feeling of hard-to-reward ambition secretly emerges in the author's heart. Then, the voice of the guest's flute "is whining: such as resentment, such as crying; The lingering sound is endless, which adds a sense of sadness and makes the author's mood decline all the way. But he didn't get depressed, but straightened his clothes and began to argue in the preparatory course, not only to convince the guests, but also to convince himself to let go. "Gai will watch it from its changers, and heaven and earth can't be a moment; If you look at it from its unchangeable point of view, then everything is endless to me. And what do you envy? "The author finally got rid of it and gained temporary happiness and freedom.
Of course, such feelings are closely related to Su Shi's own life experience.
Su Shi's official career is not smooth, he has been demoted many times, not appreciated, and his life experience has fallen. It stands to reason that such a person should have been unable to stand the world for a long time, let alone think that Su Shi is traveling in the mountains and rivers like this. Su Shi, on the other hand, put up with it, because he was proficient in Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism, and integrated them properly, bringing out the best in each other. 2. write a 4-word composition in the first paragraph of
A Fang Gong Fu
A Fang Gong Fu written by Du Mu, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, occupies a place in the history of China literature with its high ideological content and artistic achievements, and has become a literary and colorful article.
Epang Palace, the name of Qin Gong, is located in the southwest of Xi 'an, Shaanxi Province. After Qin Shihuang unified
the six countries, he thought that the palace in Xianyang, the capital, was too small, so he built a large-scale project. In 212 BC, more than 7, people died, and Epang Palace was built in the south of Weishui
. "First, make the front hall
room, with 5 steps from east to west and 5 feet from north to south, and
it can seat 1, people. Before the palace was built, the state of Qin perished. Xiang Yu invaded Xianyang and
set fire to it. Afang, you are still near.
"It's near to Xianyang, and it's called Afang"
(Yan Shigu's note in The Biography of Hanshu Jia Shan). It is also said that it is named because of its shape of "four rooms and wide rooms" (there are curved eaves at the corners of it). Du Mu said in
Introduction to Confidante Articles that "Baoli (the year of Tang Jing
) was a big palace with a wide range of sounds and sounds, so it was
written as Epang Palace Fu." (Collected Works of Fan Chuan
Volume 16) It can be seen that this poem was written by Qin Jingtang, with the purpose of satirizing and remonstrating with this poem, hoping
that Tang Jingzong and Li Zhan would learn from the
historical fact of the Qin Dynasty's self-destruction, so as not to repeat the
story. "Epang Palace Fu" is not about nostalgia,
but about reality. The poet, with his rich
magnificent imagination and bold and peculiar exaggeration
as a giant pen, did his best to describe and render things
, and suddenly, a palace that covered more than 3 miles stood in front of readers
. To some extent, Epang Palace was made by Epang Palace Fu. Therefore, if
this is the case, you have to marvel at the poet's unique description and rendering of Epang Palace and his superb artistic expression.
Fu, as a style, has its own
specific writing norms. Liu Xie's "Wen Xin Diao
Long Quan Fu" said: "Those who give it, spread the
prose, and write the will with objects." That is to say,
Fu needs to describe the characteristics of objective things in detail, and do its best to lay out exaggerated things, so as to achieve the writing purpose of
borrowing scenery to express emotion and expressing ambition
. The so-called "paving" is to develop the
internal characteristics of things as detailed as possible. 3. Comment on the article (composition) on Red Cliff Fu
{Appreciation of the former Red Cliff Fu}
Paragraph 1, write about the night tour of Red Cliff. The author "swims with guests under the Red Cliff" and plunges into the embrace of nature, enjoying the beauty of breeze, dew, mountains, flowing water, moonlight and skylight. When I was in the mood, I casually recited the first chapter of The Book of Songs, The Moon Comes Out. Shu Yao corrected it, and his heart was sad. " Compare the bright moon to a beautiful woman with a good figure, and look forward to her Ran Ran rising. Responding to the poem "The Moon Comes Out", "Little Yan, the moon rises from the East Mountain and lingers between bullfights." And leads to the following self-made song cloud by the author: "Looking at beauty and loving heaven", which is consistent in emotion and style. The word "wandering" vividly depicts that the soft moonlight seems to be extremely attached and affectionate to tourists. Under the bright moonlight, the white fog enveloped the river, and the sky and water became one piece, which is the so-called "autumn water * * * sky is one color" (Wang Bo's Preface to Tengwang Pavilion). At this time, tourists are open-minded, comfortable and unrestrained, so they are "like a reed, and they are at a loss", and they are floating with the waves on a boat, just like flying in the wind in space, leaving the world leisurely and detached; It's like flying into a fairyland with wings. The vast river and free and easy mind leap out of the author's pen, and the joy of boating is beyond words. This is a section of this article that describes the scenery of "boating" in a positive way, expressing emotion with the scene, blending feelings into the scene, and the scene is good.
in the second paragraph, the writer's joy of drinking and singing and the sad flute sound of the guests. The author is extremely happy to drink, and sings, in order to express his disappointment and frustration of thinking about "beauty". The "beauty" mentioned here is actually the embodiment of the author's ideal and all good things. The song said, "Gui Gui is like a blue oar, striking the sky and tracing the streamer. I am pregnant, and I hope that the beauty will be one side. " This lyric all uses the meaning of "Chu Ci Shao Si Ming": "Looking forward to the beauty and looking forward to the future, and singing a magnificent song in the breeze", and embodies the content of "reciting the poem of the bright moon and singing a gentle and graceful chapter" above. I can't see it because I want to be beautiful, and I have already expressed my frustration and sadness. In addition, the guest plays the Dong Xiao, and according to its song, the tone of the Xiao is sad and resentful. "If the resentment is like longing, it is like crying, and the lingering sound is like a wisp", which actually attracts the dragon hidden in the ravine to dance, making the widow who is alone in the lonely boat weep. A tune of Dong Xiao is mournful and tactful, and its sad tone is touching, which causes the author's feelings to change suddenly, from joy to sadness, and the article is ups and downs because of it.
in the third paragraph, write the guest's exclamation about the shortness and impermanence of life. This section is endowed with historical sites instead of natural scenery of Chibi. The host asked "What is natural", and the guests answered with the historical sites in Chibi, and the arts and sciences turned to nature. But the article is not about Chen Qi, but uses two questions. First of all, based on Cao Cao's "Short Songs", I asked: "Is this not a poem by Cao Mengde?" He also won with the mountains and rivers in front of him and asked, "Is this not because Meng Dezhi is trapped in Zhou Lang?" Two questions made the article stir again. Then, it recounts the past when Cao Cao broke Jingzhou and forced Liu Cong to surrender. At that time, the mighty Cao Jun descended from Jiangling along the river, and the warships were connected thousands of miles, and the flags covered the sky. Cao Caozhi is full of pride, cocky, drinking on the river at the bow, and writing poems horizontally, which can be described as "the hero of the world"! Where is he now? Heroes like Cao Cao are only prominent for a while, not to mention our generation! Therefore, now I can only sigh the shortness of my life, envy the endless flow of the river, and hope to intersect with the gods and be with the bright moon. However, all these are unrealistic fantasies, which is why the sadness and sorrow are conveyed through the flute. The guest's answer shows a nihilistic thought and a negative outlook on life, which is one aspect of Su Shi's revealing his thoughts through the guest's mouth.
In the fourth paragraph, Su Shi stated his views on the impermanence of the guest's life, so as to understand the other side. The guest once "envied the infinity of the Yangtze River" and wished to "embrace the bright moon and end up long". Su Shi took the river and the bright moon as metaphors, and put forward that "the dead are like this, but they have never been there;" Those who are surplus and deficiency are like that, and those who die are not ebbing and flowing. If you look at things from the perspective of change, the existence of heaven and earth is only a blink of an eye; If you look at it from the same point of view, things and human beings are endless, so why envy the river, the bright moon and heaven and earth! Naturally, there is no need to "mourn my life for a moment"! This shows Su Shi's open-minded outlook on the world and life. He is in favor of looking at the problem from multiple angles rather than absolutizing it. Therefore, he can maintain an open-minded, detached, optimistic and adaptive mental state in the face of adversity, and can get rid of the impermanence of life and treat life rationally. Then, the author further explains that everything between heaven and earth has its own owner and individuals can't force it. So what is all for us? The breeze on the river is audible, the bright moon in the mountains is colorful, the mountains are endless, the wind and the moon are eternal, the world is selfless, and the music is entertaining. We can just wander around and enjoy ourselves. This situation is due to Li Bai's "Xiangyang Song": "The breeze and the bright moon don't need a penny to buy, and Yushan is not pushed by people", and then it is deepened.
In the fifth paragraph, after listening to the author's talk, the writer turned grief into joy and drank heartily. "I don't know that the East is white because of the pillow in the boat." Looking after the beginning, I write about the joy of traveling and enjoying, but as for forgetting the gains and losses, I am detached from the realm.
Fang Bao, an ancient prose writer in Qing Dynasty, commented on this article, saying: "What you see is unique, but the literary environment is unattainable, and the good reason is that you are idle and open, your chest is free of sundries, your touch is full, and you are full of consideration. I don't know why. Only others can't imitate it, even if Zi Zhan is more aware of it, he can't be so adaptable and smooth. " (Quoted from A Compilation of Commentaries on Ancient Literary Words) Su Shi expresses his magnanimous mind through various artistic techniques. Only by forgetting his gains and losses and being magnanimous can he write "Poem on the Red Wall" with an unattainable literary environment. 4. How to use Red Cliff Fu for composition topic < P > Material mining: The list of materials "Red Cliff Fu" narrates his night trip to Chibi in the form of prose, describes the beautiful scenery at night and the comfortable mood of boating on the river and drinking and composing poems, reveals two contradictory aspects of his thoughts through the form of "subject-object question and answer", discusses the philosophy of cosmic life, and shows the author's contempt for political persecution and pursuit of ideals.
Fu on the Red Wall gives people a different kind of enjoyment: the breeze, the bright moon, drinking, composing poems and singing, and the harmony between the cave and the flute makes the whole text full of poetic and picturesque feelings, as if it had entered a wonderful mythological realm. In such a state, Su Shi's feelings of depression and injustice after being demoted are not felt at all, which is the beauty of Red Cliff Fu. When you are alive, you should learn to be open-minded and live smartly.
personal enmity, you take it seriously, it will crush you; It is better to enjoy "the breeze on the river, the bright moon in the mountains" and "fluttering like a world of independence, feathering and reaching the fairy". Because Su Zi treats the gains and losses like this: "Between heaven and earth, everything has its own owner, and if it is not mine, I will take it."
I don't envy others; I didn't get it, and I don't regret it. I am so philosophical about the gains and losses of life, which makes "Red Cliff Fu" bring us pure enjoyment. I can't see the injustice in the article, but what is full of eyes is "the breeze on the river and the bright moon in the mountains". Writing materials 1. Does the guest know the husband's water and the moon? The deceased is like this, but he has never been there; Those who are full of deficiency are like that, while those who die are not ebbing and flowing.
Gai will look at it from its own changes, then heaven and earth can't be in an instant; If you look at it from its unchangeable point of view, then things and I will be endless, but why envy it! Besides, between heaven and earth, everything has its own owner, and if it is not mine, I will take it for nothing. However, the breeze on the river and the bright moon in the mountains, which are heard by the ears, are beautiful when they meet, and they are inexhaustible, which is the endless hiding of the creator, and the place for me and my son is suitable.
2. Su Shi's life was full of ups and downs. However, wherever he went, his name would resound in the hearts of people there. His "Let's live in a misty rain" tells the eternal truth, and makes people know how to face people, things and things around them with a cheerful, tolerant and open-minded heart. Let people know to challenge life with gratitude and open mind.
Su Shi suffered political persecution and was relegated to Huangzhou. "The Yangtze River knows the beauty of fish around the contour, and the bamboo is even fragrant in the mountains." The fresh fish in the water and the new bamboo shoots in the mountains ... all the scenery in Jiangcheng brought great comfort to Su Shi, who was frustrated politically.
Su Shi stood in front of the Red Cliff, overlooking the picturesque landscape, like a Kansai man, holding an iron plate, shouting loudly "river of no return, the waves are exhausted, the romantic figures of the ages", "Surging the waves and rolling up thousands of piles of snow" and "Life is like a dream, and one statue is still on the moon". On a quiet night on July 16th, I swam in a boat on the surface of the Yangtze River under the Red Cliff and wrote down the poems on the front and back of the red cliff that shocked the ancient and modern times.
whether it is poetry or fu, it is his calmness after the storm and the most sincere confession in his heart. The material activates you, one person, and travels all over the world; You, your ambition is hard to be rewarded, and you can only rely on words.
being demoted repeatedly can't defeat his faith; The difficult world has created his bold poems. His masterpiece, unintentional, has nothing to say.
nostalgia for the past hurts the present, only to serve the country; On history and metaphysics, men's true colors can be revealed. You turn suffering into ink, relegation into a pen, and write one bold and broad-minded poem after another.
It's you, gazing at Lushan Mountain, and telling the philosophy of "I don't know the true face of Lushan Mountain, but I am only in this mountain"; It is you who, looking at the sky from afar, sang the spirit of "looking at the northwest and shooting wolves"; It's you, drinking the bright moon and singing it out.