An additional 200 sentences for high school Chinese students! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! On May 4, a large-scale poetry reading of "Red Proverbs" was held at the National Center for the Performing Arts in

An additional 200 sentences for high school Chinese students! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! On May 4, a large-scale poetry reading of "Red Proverbs" was held at the National Center for the Performing Arts in Beijing.

The first clause can be understood as an existential sentence or a subjectless clause, which does not require a subject. "May 4th" is an adverbial of time. When placed at the beginning of a sentence, the preposition "in" can be omitted. The linguistic problem in this sentence is that the adverbial "through... art" is inappropriate.

Don’t you think the original sentence is awkward to read like this? The mistake is not the lack of a subject.

The modification of the answer actually eliminates the error of this adverbial, and the subject still exists.

There are many ways to modify this question, such as

"Performance" should be added after "through the superb recitation art of many famous performing artists"