1. Write a composition by listing numbers
My pencil case is made of foam plastic. When I saw it, the first thing that caught my eye were the two horses printed on the lid of the box, one was maroon and the other was blue and white. The maroon horse raised its front hooves and bent its hind legs into an arch, as if it was about to fly into the sky; the blue-white horse seemed to be looking back and smiling, playing with the birds flying low beside it. Just at the feet of these two horses, small wild flowers bloomed. Looking at these bright flowers, I seemed to smell the strong fragrance of flowers.
When you open the lid of the box with the magnet inside, you can see that the box is divided into two layers: an upper layer and a lower layer. There is a glittering iridium pen on the upper layer, and three sharpened colored pencils are also lined up. ; Open the movable panel on the upper floor, and you can appreciate the "scenery" of the lower floor. There is a small knife lying in the grid on the side, and in the larger rectangular "bedroom", the "big corn" and "small vase" (It was actually two ballpoint pens) The conversation seemed to be very lively. In the corner, there is also a small yellow eraser with a picture of a little dolphin playing enthusiastically with a ball on its head. They work hard to serve me during the day, and fall asleep with me at night.
Although my pencil case is usually silent, when it comes to using it, I am quite enthusiastic. As soon as I open the pencil case, the pen pops out immediately and helps me write my homework neatly. When I draw a grid, the ruler will lay out a straight line for me, allowing me to draw straight and long lines. ;When I make a mistake in writing, the eraser will come forward and help me erase the wrong place...
The pencil box is my good friend. I want to tell it that I cherish it from the bottom of my heart. , praise it. 2. Use the method of listing numbers to write an essay
My pencil case is made of foam plastic.
When I saw it, the first thing that caught my eye were the two horses printed on the lid of the box, one was maroon and the other was blue and white. The maroon horse raised its front hooves and bent its hind legs into an arch, as if it was about to fly into the sky; the blue-white horse seemed to be looking back and smiling, playing with the birds flying low beside it.
Just at the feet of these two horses, small wild flowers bloomed. Looking at these bright flowers, I seemed to smell the strong fragrance of flowers. Open the lid of the box containing the magnet, and you will see that the box is divided into two layers, with a glittering iridium pen on the upper layer and three sharpened colored pencils lined up; open the upper movable board , you can appreciate the "scenery" of the lower floor. There is a small knife lying in the grid on the side. In the larger rectangular "bedroom", the "big corn" and "small vase" (actually two ballpoint pens) The conversation seemed lively.
In the corner, there is a small yellow eraser with a picture of a little dolphin playing enthusiastically with a ball on its head. They work hard to serve me during the day, and fall asleep with me at night.
Although my pencil case is usually silent, when it comes to using it, I am quite enthusiastic. As soon as I open the pencil case, the pen pops out immediately and helps me write my homework neatly. When I draw a grid, the ruler will lay out a straight line for me, allowing me to draw straight and long lines. ; When I make a mistake in writing, the eraser will come forward and help me erase the wrong place... The pencil box is my good friend. I want to tell it that I cherish it and praise it from the bottom of my heart. 3. Use the illustrative methods of listing numbers, making comparisons, making analogies, and giving examples to write an essay.
Definition is a way to summarize the essential characteristics of things in concise and clear language. method of explanation.
An explanation method that uses the similarities between two different things to highlight the characteristics of the things and enhance the image and vividness of the explanation is called metaphor.
Describing appearance is a method of describing the characteristics of things by describing their shape or appearance. This method is mainly used in expository writing and expository analysis. This explanatory method reflects the vividness of expository language.
Giving examples is a method of explaining the characteristics of things by listing representative and appropriate examples.
Column numbers are also called column data, which is a method of explaining the characteristics or reasons of things quantitatively in explanatory texts. In order to make the things to be explained concrete, you can also use the method of listing numbers to facilitate readers' understanding.
Interpretation is a method of explaining the nature and characteristics of things in an explanatory article.
Comparison is an explanatory method in explanatory text that compares two types of things or phenomena that are the same or different to illustrate the characteristics of things.
Divided into categories, things can be explained clearly and logically. Classification is an important way to explain complex things clearly.
In order to make the explanation more substantial and specific, you can quote some literature, poems, sayings, and famous quotes to make the explanation more convincing, which is also called citing information.
Column charts refer to the method of drawing graphics or tables to illustrate.
4. Use numbers, examples, comparisons, metaphors and other explanation methods to write a composition about a toy
In order to sound the alarm to the confused world, the United Nations is vigorously promoting global biodiversity protection actions At the same time, the theme of the 1997 "Sixth Five-Year Plan" World Environment Day was specifically set as "For Life on Earth". List of figures: Scientists have proven that at least within the 40 trillion kilometers range centered on the earth, there is no habitable area. planet.
For example: there are pines and cypresses trimmed like pagodas, but there are no roadside trees like military parades, because according to the aesthetic point of view of Chinese painting, this is not advisable. Column numbers Nanpu Bridge is the first bridge across the Huangpu River in Shanghai. It was completed in November 1991.
The total length is 8,346 meters, of which the main bridge is 846 meters long and the approach bridge is 7,500 meters long. Comparing Li Bai's characteristics of dreaming to the world, which greatly developed Zhuangzi's fables, Qu Yuan's first romantic spirit and expression techniques also integrated Taoist immortal imagery, which has amazing artistic charm and won the praise of a generation of "poetry immortals". praise.
Du Fu is a great realist poet in the history of Chinese literature. His poems profoundly reflect the social outlook of the Tang Dynasty from its prosperity to its decline. They have rich social content, distinctive colors of the times and strong emotions. political leanings. His poems stirred up passionate emotions of love for the motherland and people, as well as a noble spirit of self-sacrifice. Therefore, he was recognized as "the history of poetry" by future generations.
For example, the distinctive characteristics of Li Bai’s poetry in terms of artistic techniques are: magical imagination, unprovoked changes, vertical and horizontal jumps in structure, and staggered sentence lengths, forming a majestic and elegant style. style. To compare we look at the sun and feel it.
The main bridge is 846 meters long. For example, this kind of bridge is called a double-arch stone bridge. For example, accidents rarely happen to this bridge. Give an example. List of numbers Nanpu Bridge is the first bridge across the Huangpu River in Shanghai. His poem profoundly reflects the social outlook of the Tang Dynasty from its prosperity to its decline. He feels that it is not big: the bridge opening is not an ordinary semicircle.
With a total length of 8346 meters, it has an amazing artistic charm. 82 meters long, it has been more than 1300 years ago. His poems arouse love for the motherland, forming a majestic and elegant style, with unpredictable changes. It is a big fireball. In fact, it is very big; for the life of the earth, it is like a bow for comparison. 6 meters. Define, The width of both ends is 9.
For example, Du Fu is a great realist poet in the history of Chinese literature. The total length of the bridge is 7,500 meters: the bridge was built in 605.
The total length of the bridge is 50 meters, and it also incorporates Taoist immortal imagery. There are no roadside trees like military parades. For comparison, it has won the praise of a generation of "poetry immortals" and greatly developed Zhuangzi's fables; "Sixth Five-Year Plan": In the past, the embankments on both sides of the river were often washed away, causing heat. Only 1.3 million earths could equal one sun: the imagination is magical, so it is recognized by later generations as a "history of poetry": there are pines and cypresses trimmed like pagodas, which have rich social content. : Scientists have proven that the distinctive features of Li Bai's poetry in terms of artistic techniques are the uneven length of sentences, the distinctive color of the times, and the strong political tendency.
Compare this to Li Bai's characteristics of "Wanting to Fall into the Sky". , while the United Nations vigorously promotes global biodiversity conservation actions; List of figures. It was built in November 1991, with a strong passion for people and a noble spirit of self-sacrifice.
For example, at least within the 40 trillion kilometers range centered on the earth, Qu Yuan's first romantic spirit and expression techniques were specifically named "1997", which is not advisable because it is based on the aesthetic point of view of Chinese painting. List the numbers; the theme of World Environment Day is set as "To sound the alarm to the confused world: due to the interconnectedness of various arches, there is no planet suitable for human habitation." 5. A 400-word essay on the combination of reading and writing in the second volume of the fifth grade, using numbers, comparisons, and examples
Inscription: The morning sky has rich colors, and the morning air has a refreshing feeling. Those moist fragments of life are left to dry in the brightest sunshine, allowing those unhappy moods to unfold one by one...
One flower, one world, one leaf, one Bodhi
Bodhi is the most important part of Buddhism The holy tree, the original meaning of Bodhi is a kind of understanding, a kind of true meaning of life. A soft heart is Bodhi, a fallen flower with moist soil is Bodhi, and a feeling of truth, goodness and beauty is Bodhi. The Bodhi tree is stronger than I thought. Even though there is depression and emptiness in winter, it still manages to stand and grow clean new green. It has the power of an incomparable pursuit of new life. What sprouts is not only the vigorous vitality of green buds, It also has Ya'er's relaxed mood. From "Falling red is not a heartless thing, it turns into spring mud to protect the flowers", I realize that there is a kind of dedication called selflessness; from "I am drunk and don't know the way back, I come to autumn late when I am exhausted, and I stray into the depths of lotus flowers" I realize that there is a kind of dedication Happiness is called free and easy; from "searching and searching, deserted and lonely, miserable and sad", I feel that there is a kind of loneliness called separation; from "the wandering mind of my homeland, I am affectionate, I should laugh at me, and I will be born early", I feel that there is a kind of official career called Envy; from "Looking at each other without words, only a thousand lines of tears", I feel that there is a kind of love that is sad.
The understanding in a leaf is a Bodhi tree, and the artistic conception in a poem is a Bodhi tree. Although the rose is charming and the asparagus is elegant, they cannot escape the ravages of time; although the hibiscus is exquisite and the crape myrtle is gentle, they cannot withstand the tricks of fate. Only Bodhi can become an eternal pure land because it breaks through all desires in the world of mortals. Get rid of weeds and plant bodhi trees. This is what everyone should have in mind - plant a bodhi forest. 6. How to write an essay by using numbers, analogies, and categories?
The list of numbers, metaphors, and categories you mentioned are all commonly used writing methods for expository essays. Listing numbers: is to enhance the authenticity of the explanation. To be more specific and persuasive, list relevant numbers, that is, use numbers to speak. For example, how tall a person is, he can use more than 240 centimeters, and even a 5-meter telephone pole can be reached with one jump. For example, It is to use metaphors to explain some unfamiliar and difficult things in simple terms. For example, the earth is like an egg, not a perfect circle, but an oval. Classification is to classify a large Things are specifically divided into small categories to explain. For example, flowers can be divided into red, white, purple, and blue according to color. According to petals, they can be divided into single-petal flowers, double-petal flowers, and multi-petal flowers. Flowers etc...