1, grasp the images in the words and appreciate the artistic techniques such as overlapping words.
2. Understand the poet's life and appreciate the emotional connotation in his poems.
Teaching emphasis: appreciate the artistic techniques such as overlapping words, and appreciate the emotional connotation in words.
Difficulties in teaching: Through comparative reading, we can deeply understand the poet's emotional world.
Teaching process design:
First, import:
Li Qingzhao is a famous poetess in Chinese history. Her talent is outstanding, and she has written countless wonderful words in her life, which makes us remember them vividly. It is said that Li Qingzhao was deeply guilty of being childless all her life, but her husband Zhao Mingcheng said? Poetry is our child, and The Story of the Stone is the crystallization of our life. ? It shows the deep affection between husband and wife, and because of this, after her husband's death, Li Qingzhao felt even more lonely, and her life in her later years was desolate and helpless. Today we are going to study her later work, The Sound is Slow.
Second, clear objectives:
Let's take a look at the learning objectives and learning difficulties of this lesson first.
Third, reading perception:
1. First of all, please read aloud, pay attention to the correct pronunciation, and read the cadence of the poem.
2, individual students read aloud
The teacher and the students commented together and suggested two aspects: pronunciation and rhythm. )
Teacher: What kind of emotion did the poet write in this word? What is the emotional tone?
Health: the emotion of poetry is concentrated in one? Worried? Word, this is also the word of this word. The emotional tone of this word is sad, desolate and sad.
Teacher: How should I read it?
Health: I speak very slowly and have a low tone, which makes me feel sad and sad to read.
3. Free reading experience: Let's convey the deep sadness of the poetess with a low tone and slow speech speed.
4, individual students reading:
* * * Evaluate teachers and students in terms of speaking speed and intonation.
Fourth, reading appreciation:
(a), the poet? Worried? Where is the performance?
1. What image does the poet use to write? Worried? what's up Find out the relevant sentences from the words and say them.
(1), light wine, gale: three glasses of light wine, how can it be worse than his lateness and gale?
It's about the poet's depression, but he can't resist the sudden cold wind in the evening.
Teacher: Why? Light wine? Instead of. Hard liquor?
Health: It's not that the wine is weak, but that the sadness is too heavy and strong, and the wine can't suppress the sadness. The taste of wine is naturally weak, and strong wine has become light wine. One? Light? The text shows how miserable the author is in his later years.
What's in Drunk Flowers? Undead, the curtain rolls west wind, and people are thinner than yellow flowers? Sentence; In Ma Zhiyuan's Tianjingsha Qiu Si? The ancient road, the west wind, the thin horse, the sunset, the heartbroken man? Sentence. Visible,? West wind? It's autumn wind, which means sadness.
Blackboard writing: light wine, strong wind
(2) Hongyan: Guo Yan is also sad, but that's an old acquaintance.
Teacher:? Goose? What's the significance in poetry?
Health: Wild geese are migratory birds. Going to Qiu Lai in spring always affects the wanderer's homesickness, representing the meaning of missing home and people. The poet is sad to see the wild goose flying south, because it comes from the poet's hometown, right? Old acquaintance? , can not help but arouse the poet's homesickness.
Teacher: Why? Old acquaintance?
Health: The wild goose evokes the author's memories of the past. Who sent the brocade book, the wild goose returned, and the moon was full of the west building? Sentence. Hongyan, who once conveyed her love for her and her husband, is still there, but the husband who received the letter is gone. Written by Wulingchun? Things are people, not everything, and tears flow first. ? So I can't help but feel sad when I see geese thinking of people.
Blackboard writing: Hongyan
(3) Yellow flowers: Yellow flowers are piled all over the floor, haggard and damaged. Who can pick them now?
Teacher: Some people think? Yellow flowers piled up all over the floor? It means chrysanthemums are in full bloom. Haggard and damaged? Refers to the poet himself; Others think? Yellow flowers piled up all over the floor? You mean flowers are scattered all over the floor. Haggard and damaged? Also refers to chrysanthemum withering. what do you think?
Health: Described as haggard, I wrote about my inner exhaustion. I don't want to see flowers because I am in a bad mood. Although it is worth a lot of chrysanthemums, I don't want to take it off and enjoy it. Drunk flower songs: don't forget your form, the curtain rolls west wind, and people are thinner than yellow flowers. ?
Blackboard writing: yellow flowers
(4) Indus, drizzle: Indus drizzles and drips at dusk.
? A phoenix tree leaves, the world knows autumn? . Sycamore leaves were the earliest. Autumn comes as soon as the plane leaves fall. ? Indus? In the poet's pen, there has always been desolation.
What's in Su Shi's operator? The curved hook moon hangs on the sparse buttonwood; In the dead of night, the water from the water clock has been dripping. It kept wandering among the cold branches, but refused to perch on any tree, and finally landed alone on the cold shoal. ? Sentence; Is it also in Li Yu's Meet You Huan? Alone in the west wing, the bright moon is like a hook, and the lonely phoenix tree deep courtyard locks the clear autumn? Sentence. Visible,
And then what? Rain in Mao Mao? Gradually, it is a sound that can only be heard in an extremely quiet environment. This little autumn rain hitting the leaves can only make the poets more depressed, lonely and desolate. These raindrops did not fall on the tree, but on the poet's heart. Du Muyou? Mourning day, drizzle like tears; Pedestrians on the road want to die. ? This sentence, visible? Rain? It is a symbol of sadness and anxiety. And here, will this person? Indus? And then what? Rain in Mao Mao? The superposition of images makes sadness and desolation more intense.
It says on the blackboard: Indus drizzle.
2. Besides expressing sadness implicitly and euphemistically through these images, what other sentences directly express feelings in the words?
(1), searching, cold and cheerless, miserable.
The use of the first 14 reduplicated words has been called a wonderful sentence by critics in past dynasties. Where is the beauty? Please talk about your opinion?
A, there is phonological beauty: if it is changed to? Looking for, barren, miserable? Is it okay? Why?
Increase the beauty of phonology, sound harmonious and catchy, right? Like pouring pearls, big and small, into a plate of jade? Sense of'. Memories of Zhu Ziqing's Moonlight on the Lotus Pond? On the winding lotus pond, I can see Tian Tian's leaves. They are high in the water, just like the skirts of elegant dancers. ?
B, write your mind step by step: the superposition of words can increase semantics and aggravate the expression of emotions. ? Looking for what? Just search, and then what? Looking for it? Just going back and forth, looking again and again, I don't know how many times. The kind of loss that is lost and can't be found anywhere is deeply expressed. ? Cold and cheerless focus on the loneliness of the environment, and? Cold and clear? You not only wrote about the cold and cheerless environment, but also wrote about the inner bitterness, thus transitioning to? Sad and painful? The inner sadness, pain, sadness, desolation and misery are hard to see. Poet? Worried? To the extreme.
C, chisel marks without axe: people have always had a high evaluation of the use of reduplicated words in words. Zhang, a literary critic in the Southern Song Dynasty, commented on Li Qingzhao's "slow voice" in Gui: Yi Anqiu's word "slow voice"? Looking around, lonely and sad. ? This is a sword dancer in Gong Sundaniang. There is no incompetent person in this dynasty who has not produced fourteen words. After Dieyun:? The phoenix tree is raining and dripping at dusk. ? And make overlapping word, no axe chisel marks. Not for writing, but for emotion, which naturally flows from the heart. What if it's replaced by? Miss miss, melancholy, sadness? Is it okay?
(2) This time, what a sad sentence!
Here, the author simplifies the complex, turns the many into the few, and puts all the bitterness, loneliness, helplessness and countless thoughts in one sentence? What a sad sentence? On the contrary ? Worried? What kind of mood is there outside the words? I can't express it clearly in words!
This abrupt writing is the most wonderful, leaving readers with a broad imagination space, which makes people memorable.
(2) Why do poets worry? Based on the understanding of the poet's life and writing background.
About the author: Li Qingzhao (1084-1151), a native of Zhangqiu, Jinan (present-day Shandong), was named Yi 'an Jushi. Song, the representative figure of graceful and restrained ci school. His father, Li, is a minister of rites such as Wailang and is proficient in classics and history. Her mother is the granddaughter of the top scholar Wang, and she is knowledgeable. Good at writing and writing? . Li Qingzhao was influenced by good family education and literature and art since childhood, and she was an outstanding poetess in the history of China literature. At the age of eighteen, she married Zhao Mingcheng, the son of Prime Minister Tingzhi Zhao. Zhao Mingcheng loves epigraphy and has a high literary accomplishment. After marriage, they live a happy and harmonious life, and the couple often sing poems together. In his early years, he lived comfortably and devoted himself to the collection and arrangement of calligraphy and painting stones with her husband Zhao Mingcheng. Nomads from the Central Plains, living in the south, are in a lonely situation. In his lyrics, he wrote more about his leisure life in the early stage, lamented his life experience in the later stage, and was sentimental, which also revealed his nostalgia for the Central Plains. In form, it makes good use of line drawing, forms its own school and has beautiful language. On Ci's Harmony, Shang Ya and Advocacy? Isn't it just a sentence? Say, against the method of poetry. There are not many poems left, and some are old and generous, which is different from their style of ci. There are Yi 'an Jushi Collection and Yi 'an Ci, which have been lost. Later generations have a collection of Yu Shu's ci. There is a collection of Li Qingzhao's school notes today.
Writing background: The Sound Slow is a work of Li Qingzhao in his later years. In the second year of Jingkang (1 127), the Jin army invaded and the Northern Song Dynasty perished. Soon after the south, her like-minded husband died of illness, and when she fled in the south, she lost the stone paintings and calligraphy collected by her husband and wife for half her life. This series of blows made her taste the pain of national destruction and displacement. In this context, she wrote this word.
Compared with her early works, this poem by Li Qingzhao has undergone great changes in emotional connotation. Losing her husband, the poet deeply felt the loneliness of the world and the boredom of life, and everything in the past lost its meaning and bright colors. This poem was written on the occasion of the country's ruin and death, which revealed the poet's lonely and helpless situation and depressed life, and entrusted him with his deep thoughts on his home country, which was deeply branded with the times.
This is a true portrayal of the poet's emotional course and a symbol of the suffering of the times.
The sorrow of living alone, the pain of losing a husband, the pain of being displaced, and the hatred of death.
Summary: These direct lyric sentences we just analyzed are profound in every word and sad in every sentence. And those images with profound cultural connotations put the poet's? Worried? Visualization, vividness and concreteness. Chew these words, feel the poet's feelings and open your heart. Accompanied by music, let's read it together and feel this beautiful artistic conception. (Play music with Lin Hai's pipa)
A comparative reading of verbs (short for verb);
Read the following poem "A Piece of Plum" and compare Li Qingzhao's different melancholy thoughts before and after crossing the south.
A cluster of plum blossoms
Lotus root is fragrant, and jade is lingering in autumn. Gently untie Luo Shang and go to Lan alone. Who sent the brocade book? The word goose returns, and the moon is full of the west building.
Flowers bloom and fall, and flowing water gurgles. One kind of lovesickness, two places of leisure. There is no way to eliminate this situation, only frown and mind.
Read aloud and think: What's the difference between these two words?
Early stage: children's emotional worries, leisure worries and private worries are fresh and bright.
A touch of homesickness, a hope, a delicate and deep boudoir feeling in the young woman's period, a clear and lively sadness.
Later period: the pain of national subjugation, deep sorrow, great love, depression and sentimentality.
Strong sadness about death and parting, hopelessness, widowhood for thousands of years, desolation, loneliness, nostalgia, sadness and sadness.
Verb (abbreviation for verb) recitation
Li Qingzhao's emotional world is unique, and so is her artistic expression. She brought us into a pure and beautiful world through her unique and delicate feelings.
Finally, let's sing "Slow Voice" together with this wonderful enjoyment.
Conclusion of intransitive verbs
A glass of residual wine, a fallen leaf, a wild goose singing, a drop of autumn rain and a solitary lamp can turn stone into gold, giving it a strong appeal. Li Qingzhao's "The Sound Slow" uses a variety of images, uses the artistic technique of lyricism and scene blending, and creates a lonely and lost atmosphere for us with clear language and scattered and harmonious rhythm. Reading, we seem to hear the rain dripping in front of the steps, the lonely geese in the sky, the fallen leaves of the phoenix tree, and the lonely lights at dusk. Undoubtedly this is a kind of beauty, a kind of literary beauty!
Seven, blackboard design: