There is a crystal clear stream beside the grass, and there is a small hut beside the stream. Although it is a bit shabby, the beautiful scenery around it adds a bit of interest to this hut. The grass is green, the flowers are in full bloom and the water is gurgling. Everything is calm. It seems that someone in the hut is teasing each other drunk, and there are bursts of laughter. It sounds like a southern accent, and the voice is calm. It turned out to be a white-haired couple in the room.
The eldest son of the old couple was weeding in the bean field east of the stream in the scorching sun. He smiled for a while while calculating how much he could get from such labor, and looked good. The second son couldn't help seeing his eldest brother working so hard. He is busy knitting chicken coops and selling them in the market. He can also earn some money, buy some supplements for his parents and books for his brother. The youngest son is naughty and lovely, and his movements and appearance are extremely pleasing. He is too young to do farm work, so he has to step on the grass in the flat grass at the head of the stream, lie on it, leisurely eat fresh lotus leaves and live a good life with his beautiful family.
Composition 2: "Qingpingle Village Residence" (story) is 500 words a day, in Wan Li, Wan Li. Being an official was framed by traitors, but he stopped being an official. Xin Qiji, a great poet, lived in seclusion in a remote mountain village in Jiangxi, wrote lyrics in his room, thought hard, but had no clue, so he went out to play. Walking, Wu local a drunken voice was introduced into her eardrum. He was curious: Who is so free? Following the sound, I saw a low hut, bathed in the summer sunshine. Under Mao's eaves, an old white-haired couple are chatting affectionately with a hip flask in front of them. How carefree! Near the hut, there is a stream, which is full of lotus flowers, emitting a refreshing fragrance. Under the green lotus leaves, fish and shrimp chase and play in groups! The stream is covered with green weeds, which makes it more vibrant under the sunlight.
The old couple have three sons. Looking up, the eldest son was weeding in the field east of the stream. He is happy to see a bumper harvest in sight! The second son, who is young and weak, is knitting a chicken coop and is going to take it to the market tomorrow to sell some money to subsidize his family. My favorite is my youngest son. He is so naughty. She is lying on the opposite side of the stream, peeling the lotus just picked!
Seeing all this, Xin Qiji couldn't help but have a long passage to say, but because he didn't bring a pen and paper, he could only write on the ground with branches:
Qingpingle villager ju
The eaves are low and small,
Green grass by the stream.
Drunk and charming,
Who has white hair?
The big-eared hoe fights west and east,
Zhong Er is knitting a chicken coop;
I like children and scoundrels best,
Lying on the stream peeling lotus flowers.
Fifth grade of Zhujiang primary school: writing superman
Composition 3: Qingpingle Villagers' Residence (Story) 500 words Qingpingle Villagers' Residence (Story)
One day, the sun was shining and there were no clouds in Wan Li. Being an official was framed by traitors, but he stopped being an official. Xin Qiji, a great poet, lived in seclusion in a remote mountain village in Jiangxi, wrote lyrics in his room, thought hard, but had no clue, so he went out to play. Walking, Wu local a drunken voice was introduced into her eardrum. He was curious: Who is so free? Following the sound, I saw a low hut, bathed in the summer sunshine. Under Mao's eaves, an old white-haired couple are chatting affectionately with a hip flask in front of them. How carefree! Near the hut, there is a stream, which is full of lotus flowers, emitting a refreshing fragrance. Under the green lotus leaves, fish and shrimp chase and play in groups! The stream is covered with green weeds, which makes it more vibrant under the sunlight.
The old couple have three sons. Looking up, the eldest son was weeding in the field east of the stream. Seeing a bumper harvest in sight, he is happy! The second son, who is young and weak, is knitting a chicken coop and is going to take it to the market tomorrow to sell some money to subsidize his family. My favorite is my youngest son. He is so naughty. She is lying on the opposite side of the stream, peeling the lotus just picked!
Seeing all this, Xin Qiji couldn't help but have a long passage to say, but because he didn't bring a pen and paper, he could only write on the ground with branches:
Qingpingle villager ju
The eaves are low and small,
Green grass by the stream.
Drunk and charming,
Who has white hair?
The big-eared hoe fights west and east,
Zhong Er is knitting a chicken coop;
I like children and scoundrels best,
Lying on the stream peeling lotus flowers.
Fifth grade of Zhujiang primary school: writing superman
Composition 4: "The Story Adapted from Qingpingle Village House" 400 words The story adapted from Qingpingle Village House has a family by the stream. A family of five lives in an old and shabby hut. There is an old couple with white hair in front of the hut. They just had a few drinks. It can be seen from their red faces that they are all a little drunk and laughing together. Laughter came from the room. Behind the hut are lush bamboo forests and rolling mountains, revealing the quiet atmosphere of the countryside. There is a stream beside the hut. The river is clear and transparent, and all the fish in it can be seen clearly. The eldest son of the old couple went to the bean field on the east side of the stream to weed with a hoe and a straw hat. The air outside is fresh and the grass is green beside the stream. There are green lotus leaves in the stream, and some still have lotus leaves. The chicken is cackling, and the Buddha is saying, "Where is our home?" ? The second son is knitting a chicken coop with his fastest speed. Knitting, knitting, I'm almost finished. The chicken seems to know that Er Zi is knitting a coop for them, so it flies around Er Zi and sometimes pecks his little feet in a friendly way. As for the youngest son, he knows nothing. He can only lie on the side of the stream, playfully teasing the fish, peeling lotus flowers for his parents and brothers to eat, and nagging "One, two, three ..." The way he shakes his little feet is really cute! What a happy family this is!
Composition 5: "The Story of Qingpingle Village Residence" 600 words The hot summer has quietly arrived, and a lush forest on the rolling hills in the distance is like a green velvet umbrella, full of vitality. Grass is like a green carpet on the ground. At the edge of the low hut, a crystal clear stream flows slowly. The vines on the grass roof seem to have drawn some lace for the grass house, which is very beautiful.
In a low hut, an old white-haired couple met a happy event today and just drank some wine. They were drunk and chatted leisurely in the local dialect. I only heard the old man say to the old woman, "How good our life is now! You gave me three sons who are sensible, obedient and filial. They won't let us do anything, we have to bear it ourselves. The day before yesterday, my eldest son bought me a pair of shoes. Didn't my second son buy you a thin coat that day? This kind of enjoyment is more immortal than a fairy! " "Yes, I thought when I first gave birth to my son, I didn't eat anything or wear anything. Now, I live a life of windbreaker and food, quiet and carefree. If three sons marry three hardworking and considerate daughters-in-law, life will be more enjoyable at that time! And the children and grandchildren are full, and I can give you the' fishing classics'! " Grandma said with a beautiful daydream. The eldest son was weeding in the bean field, sweating like a pig. The second son saw that the chicken coop at home was broken again, so he quickly prepared the bamboo strips and covers of the chicken coop and knitted them wholeheartedly. A flock of chickens and ducks surrounded him and said, "Yeah! We have a new house to live in! Thank you! " The youngest son was naughty and lovely, and then he ran to find his eldest brother. "Brother, let me help you!" ""while playing, don't make trouble, you stepped on my little bean sprouts. "Then I ran to find my second brother." Second brother, let me help you! ""go, go, don't make trouble. "He had no choice but to catch fish in the stream. Later, he was really too busy to come, so he had to lie on the ground and peel the lotus. The old couple smiled knowingly when they saw this photo.
What a happy and harmonious family of five!
Hu Xiaoxue, Yingjing County, Ya 'an, Sichuan, Grade 5: Wang
Composition 6: 500-word story about the change of Qingpingle village house In the afternoon, I walked slowly with a leisurely mood and accidentally saw a low thatched cottage. Behind the thatched cottage are verdant bamboo forests and rolling mountains, revealing the quiet atmosphere of the countryside. There is a stream beside the hut. The stream is clear and transparent, and all the fish in the stream can be seen clearly. Under the sunlight, the stream looks sparkling. A breeze blew, causing ripples on the stream. There are several beautiful lotus flowers on the stream, some of which are in full bloom; Some are in bud; Some seem to be put out, white inside and pink inside, like a girl wearing a veil.
There are clumps of green grass beside the stream, which grow very luxuriantly, and it is even more green and lovely against the backdrop of the stream and lotus flowers. On the eaves, a pair of birds sang beautiful and moving songs with silvery voices.
There is an old white-haired couple next to the hut. They just had a few drinks. From their red faces, we can see that they are slightly drunk, leaning together and having intimate conversations in Wudi dialect. Next to the second son also interrupt a few words from time to time!
The eldest son is desperately weeding in the bean field east of the stream. How hard he works! The second son is not idle, and he is carefully weaving a chicken coop with bamboo and grass, which is very focused. The youngest son, who is not yet an adult, knows nothing and can't help anything. He could only lie on the edge of the stream, playfully teasing the small fish, peeling the lotus flowers and shaking his feet. Really cute!
What a happy family! I was deeply intoxicated. ...
Composition 7: The 500-word feature of Qingpingle Village Residence (story) cannot be reproduced for one day without permission. The sun is shining and there are no clouds in Wan Li. Being an official was framed by traitors, but he stopped being an official. Xin Qiji, a great poet, lived in seclusion in a remote mountain village in Jiangxi, wrote lyrics in his room, thought hard, but had no clue, so he went out to play. Walking, Wu local a drunken voice was introduced into her eardrum. He was curious: Who is so free? Following the sound, I saw a low hut, bathed in the summer sunshine. Under Mao's eaves, an old white-haired couple are chatting affectionately with a hip flask in front of them. How carefree! Near the hut, there is a stream, which is full of lotus flowers, emitting a refreshing fragrance. Under the green lotus leaves, fish and shrimp chase and play in groups! The stream is covered with green weeds, which makes it more vibrant under the sunlight. The old couple have three sons. Looking up, the eldest son was weeding in the field east of the stream. He is happy to see a bumper harvest in sight! The second son, who is young and weak, is knitting a chicken coop and is going to take it to the market tomorrow to sell some money to subsidize his family. My favorite is my youngest son. He is so naughty. She is lying on the opposite side of the stream, peeling the lotus just picked! Seeing all this, Xin Qiji couldn't help burning with anger, but because he didn't bring a pen and paper, he could only write on the ground with branches: "Qingpingle Village House" has low eaves and green grass on the stream. When you are drunk, your voice is charming and your hair is white. The big boy hoes beans and flows east, while the middle boy weaves chicken cages; I like children and scoundrels best, lying on the head of the stream peeling lotus flowers. ? Fifth grade of Zhujiang primary school: writing superman
Composition 8:700 words "The Story of Qingpingle Village" is full of dazzling green and vitality in a tyrannical summer day. The mountains in the distance are faintly visible, and a clear stream nearby flows slowly, as if singing beautiful music. The stream is crystal clear, the Bai Lianhua is in full bloom in the center, and the small fish in the water swim and play happily under the lotus leaves; Others jump out of the water from time to time, splashing one after another. Looking up at the blue sky, there are a few dazzling lights that make you unable to open your eyes. Waves of breezes with flowers are blowing head-on. Breathing this fragrant air will make people feel refreshed and relaxed. (Wang Shucun. . mcqyy..)
On one side of the stream, there is a remote and beautiful mountain village in the south of the Yangtze River. There is a harmonious and beautiful family in the village. Although there is a humble hut, a family of five lives happily. Look! Through the window, there is a loving old couple sitting in the room. They raised their glasses and drank, with smiles on their faces and endless happiness in their eyes. There seems to be some drunkenness on her red face, speaking Wu dialect. I only heard the old man say in a hoarse voice, "It's a Wonderful Life now! The banker has a bumper harvest in autumn and drinks some wine together in winter. " "yes! We have three sons, the eldest and the second are filial, smart and sensible, and the youngest is cute and naughty. " The old lady smiled knowingly and looked out of the window at her three sons.
Although the summer is hot and the sun is like fire, as the eldest son, the boss is still weeding in the bean field on the east side of the stream, and his face is sweating like a broken pearl. Is it necessary to wipe his shoulder with a towel and then try again?
The second son wove a chicken coop with wooden strips in the shade. When he was not careful, the stick cut his finger. He just wiped it casually and picked up the chicken coop that was about to be completed.
Nothing is more pleasing than that naughty and lovely little son. Look! He is lying on the head of the stream, with two little feet up, peeling the lotus with chubby little hands, regardless of stuffing one or two into his mouth!
What a warm and happy peasant family this is! This is also a quiet life for many people with dysmenorrhea!
Grade 5, Xinmin Primary School, Jiangmen, Guangdong: Xu Shuncai
Composition 9: "Qingpingle Village Residence" 500 words The light of the sky keeps flashing. The sun shines gently on the earth, and its wandering light is everywhere. Golden light dispels haze, dispels cold and illuminates everyone's heart. In the midsummer morning, the lake is slightly hot, and the mirror-like water surface reflects the scorching sun and the green branches and leaves, and cicadas echo among the treetops ... "cicadas! Know! "
Next to a clear stream, a couple stood in a low hut. The black hair on their heads has turned into silver hair. The white-haired couple are talking and laughing with a drunken southern accent. The stream is green, and even the sand, stone, fish and shrimp in the water can be seen clearly. Along the direction of the water flow to the east, a young man in his prime is ploughing and weeding in the bean field with a hoe, and the buds are thriving happily. The fruit of hard work is the fruit of young people's labor. Colorful butterflies fly freely in the air like rainbows. They are so free, they can fly as high as they want, as low as they want, where they want to land, and where they want to land on the flowers. Who is this young man? He is the eldest son of the white-haired couple. Next to him is the second son of a white-haired couple. What is he doing? It turned out that he was weaving a chicken nest! My favorite is my youngest son. He is sitting by the stream playing, peeling green lotus leaves and playing with water. A few drops of crystal dew are falling slowly from the leaves. ...
This is the true meaning of freedom and the happiness of the country.
Grade 6: Cai Zhuoxuan
20 13 teaching design of qingpingle villagers' residence open class
I. teaching material analysis
(A), a brief analysis of teaching materials
Qing Ping Le Cun Ju is the text of Unit 7, Book 9 of Primary Chinese published by Jiangsu Education Publishing House, and it is also the last text of this book. Through the description of the fresh and beautiful, simple and quiet environment in the countryside and the description of Weng Tuo and his three sons, the poet's thoughts and feelings of loving the quiet and peaceful life in the countryside are expressed.
(B), teaching objectives
1. To learn three new words in this lesson, you must read three words, such as "Wengtuo", "Liepi" and "Lotus".
2. Understand the meanings of "Weng", "rogue" and "love each other" according to the illustrations in the textbook and the contact context. Grasp the general meaning of words with the help of textbook illustrations.
3. Be able to read and recite the text correctly, fluently and emotionally.
4. Imagine the pastoral scenery described in the lyrics and feel the tranquility and beauty of rural life. Feel the poet's feelings.
(C), the focus of teaching
1, reading poetry with emotion, reading the charm of poetry.
2. The combination of ci and painting, through imagination and other strategies, experience the ci realm and feel the tranquility and beauty of rural life.
(D) Teaching difficulties
Understand the meanings of words such as "like each other", "rogue" and "cheat", and imagine the scenes described by the words.
(5) Teaching time
One class hour
Second, the design concept
1, read ancient poems, and let students experience the beauty of language, rhythm and artistic conception of ancient poems.
2. Return the classroom to the students and let them become the masters of classroom learning.
3. The implementation of multiple evaluation, students are the object and subject of evaluation.
Third, the teaching process:
(A), understanding the poet
Writing on the blackboard: Xin Qiji. Do you know Xin Qiji? (Summary) Students answered and added appropriately: Xin Qiji is not only a famous poet, but also a brave general. In the era when Xin Qiji lived, Jin Bing occupied the north, and Xin Qiji joined the army against Jin Bing. But later, he was framed by the capitulators and sent to Shangrao village in the south. During this period, he wrote several articles describing the rural scenery, and the text we are going to learn today was written at that time. )
Design concept: the classroom is open to both ends, and students come into the classroom with questions or information, which can not only test the students' preview, but also provide the necessary background introduction for the whole word teaching. )
(B), the introduction of the topic
1, blackboard title, students' books are empty.
2. Introduce the titles of the words and ask the students to read the titles of the text. Summarize the main points of reading good words: there is an appropriate pause between the inscription and the topic; Don't speak too fast. )
3. What do you think of when you see the topic of "village residence"? Students exchange their impressions or imaginary village houses. )
4. Transition: So what is the village house written by Xin Qiji? Invite students to read poems freely. Requirements are: correct pronunciation and clear sentences.
(3) Correct pronunciation and understand sentences.
1, students are free to read the whole word. (Requirements: Correct pronunciation and understanding of sentences. )
2. Communicate the pronunciation of some difficult words. Read the words correctly and put them in the sentence. Weng Wei's feeling after reading is nasal; Focus on reading polyphonic words; Lotus focuses on understanding the necessity of changing the tone for rhyme. )
3. Say the students' names to read the whole word.
Design concept: the correct pronunciation of each word is the premise of reading poetry. Pronunciation teaching should focus on teaching students according to "characters". Phonetic teaching is not isolated. It should embody the principle that words cannot be separated from words and words cannot be separated from sentences. )
(D), the rhythm of reading good words
1, the sentence "Drunk Wu Yinxiang is beautiful" is divided into rhymes, so that students can get a preliminary understanding of the law of rhythm division in poetry through comparison.
2. Show the words with good rhythm, and the teacher will demonstrate the reading and guide the students to evaluate the teacher's reading. (Focus on the rhythm. )
3. Cooperative reading between teachers and students. The teacher reads the topic, boys read one sentence and girls read another.
4. Students show and read separately.
Design concept: one of the goals of classroom teaching is knowledge and skills, so that students can master the skills of poetry segmentation and performance through comparison and identification. This teaching process is the result of students' autonomous learning under the guidance of teachers. )
(5) Reading comprehension and experiencing poetic context.
1, read the whole word silently and circle the words that can see Weng's feelings. On the basis of students' communication, the word "drunk" is summed up.
2. Read the words with the word "drunk" together to guide students to understand Weng Wei's meaning.
3. Ask the main question: Why is Weng Xu intoxicated?
4. Students read, think and communicate.
(1), the eldest son in the east of the stream in addition to the grass in the bean sprouts, experience the eldest son's hard work.
(2) The second son was knitting a chicken coop, and he realized his ability.
(3) Guide the students to look at the illustrations, imagine the younger son peeling the lotus, and experience the cuteness and naughty of the younger son. Understand the feeling of the word "rogue" in the context.
(4) Role-playing, talking with Weng, and experiencing Weng's inner happiness and happiness.
Summary: What kind of Family of Five have you read? (blackboard writing: intoxicating harmony. )
Design concept: Poetry teaching is actually "reduction", which reduces abstract words to vivid images and guides students to reduce words to "painting" or "characters" (dialogue between characters). The process of reduction is the process of understanding poetry as a whole and the process of thinking in images and training. )
(5) Reading is intoxicated by the beautiful scenery. Guide the students to restore the text of the scenery to the picture and realize that the scenery of the village is quiet and beautiful. On the basis of perception, guide the reading of beautiful scenery. (writing on the blackboard: the scenery is beautiful when you are drunk. )
(6) Naming the residential map of the village.
(7), thinking: As a general who once mounted a horse to kill the enemy, why did the author not describe the soldiers who resisted gold, but described such a quiet and beautiful rural life? Guide students to understand the author's feelings and yearn for a quiet and peaceful country life. )
Design concept: Poetry emphasizes images, without which there is no aesthetics. Poetry emphasizes emotion. There is no art without emotion, and imagination is a bridge between imagination and emotion. Imagination reduces the image to a painting, so as to "enter the painting". Only by entering the painting can we realize the feelings contained in the poem, which is called entering the painting. )
(6), chanting, reciting
1, transition: Seeing such a beautiful village map, it is not only Weng Wei who is intoxicated, but also the author and us. Do you want to read this word better?
2. Recalling the scenes of reciting on TV, teachers and students summed up the characteristics of reciting: rhythm, charm and shaking their heads.
3. Students chant, perform and recite the relay race.
4. Students can recite freely.
5. The ancients said that there are pictures in poems and poems in paintings. Ask the students to look at the illustrations by name and restore them to words. (Reciting)
6, the whole class recited together.
(Design concept: Because the language of ancient poetry is very particular about speech speed and intonation, recitation is read according to the characteristics of syllable arrangement of the work, which can fully show the original musical characteristics of the work. )
(7) Summarize the full text and start the migration.
1, summary: Today, we met a harmonious and happy family of five and enjoyed a peaceful and beautiful rural map together.
2. Song Ci is a bright pearl in the splendid culture of ancient China, and Xin Qiji's Ci is a masterpiece of Song Ci. Find Xin Qiji's words to read after class.
Recommended words: "Yong Yule? Jingkou Gubeiting Nostalgia "
"Hidden Long Yin? Deng healthy Yangxin pavilion
3. Homework design: (You can choose according to your own teaching)
(1), rewriting "Qingpingle Village", requires that the pictures described in words should be written specifically, the artistic conception of words should be written, and the topic should be drawn up by yourself.
(2) Appreciate Xin Qiji's other words, appreciate the charm of the author's words, walk into the author's heart and understand the author's thoughts and feelings.
(Design concept: extend the poet's other works to increase students' sensitivity to different language styles; Second, it can deepen students' understanding of the text content and grasp the author's writing style. After a class, students leave the classroom with many new problems or tasks, and the end of classroom teaching becomes a question mark and ellipsis, which is not only an extension of tasks, but also a continuation of emotions and learning. )
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