Rain Lane describes the narrow and gloomy rain lane, lonely travelers wandering in the rain lane, and girls as sad as cloves, giving people a hazy and profound aesthetic feeling. Some people interpret these images as a microcosm of the dark society at that time, or as people who failed in the revolution and hazy and intermittent hopes. The following is the original and appreciation of Rain Lane compiled by Bian Xiao.
Alleys in the rain
Author: Dai Wangshu
Holding an oil-paper umbrella alone
Wandering in the long, long
Lonely rain lane
I hope to see
Like cloves.
A girl with a grudge.
She does.
Clove-like color
Lilac fragrance
Lilac sadness
Mourn in the rain
Sad and confused
She lingers in this lonely rain lane
Hold an oil-paper umbrella
Like me
Like me.
Walk quietly
Cold desert, melancholy, and melancholy.
She approached quietly.
Get close and throw again.
Breathing eyes
She floated by.
well
As sad and confused as a dream.
Floating like a dream
Dingxiangyuan
I missed this girl.
She walked away silently, walked away.
A ramshackle hedge.
Walk through this rainy path
In the sad song of rain
Remove her color.
Scattered her fragrance.
Disappeared, even hers
Breathing eyes
Lavender melancholy
Holding an oil-paper umbrella alone
Wandering in the long, long
Lonely rain lane
I hope to float over.
Like cloves.
A girl with a grudge.
Literary thoughts
The summer of 1927 produced by Rain Lane was the darkest time in the history of China. The bloody slaughter of revolutionaries by reactionaries caused a white terror that enveloped the whole country. Young people who enthusiastically responded to the revolution suddenly fell from the climax of the fire into the abyss of the night. Some of them can't find the future of revolution. They are lost in pain, they long for new hope in disappointment, and they expect beautiful rainbows floating in the haze.
Rain Lane reflects the mentality of some progressive young people. Dai Wangshu was only twenty-one or twenty-two years old when he wrote this poem. 1927 In March, he was arrested and detained by the reactionary authorities for propagating the revolution. "Four? After the "December 12th" coup, he lived in seclusion in Songjiang, Jiangsu Province, chewing "China people's distress in this era" in loneliness. ("Wang Shucao? Preface)
Poems such as Rain Lane written by him at this time are naturally full of feelings of hesitation, disappointment, sadness and pain. This feeling of hesitation and sadness can't be said to be a pure personal lament, but a projection of the darkness of reality and the disillusionment of ideals in the poet's heart.
Rain Lane reproduces the typical voices in the hearts of these young people with short lyrical singing. Here we really can't hear the description of real suffering, and we can't hear the cry against the darkness. This is a deep confession, a confession of disappointment. However, from this kind of reflection and introspection, can't we clearly see the pain and pursuit of some young people after their disillusionment? The pain of losing good hope flows in the poem. Even the young people at that time were not so easily deceived. People don't want to wander in the rain lane forever after watching Rain Lane.
People will hate this rainy lane and long to get out of it and go to a wide and bright place without rain and sadness.
Famous comments
Dai Wangshu's poem "Rain Lane" was published in the 8th issue of Novel Monthly, Volume 19. Editor Ye's evaluation of Rain Lane is: Rain Lane "opens a new era for the final syllable of new poetry."
In his letter to Dai Wangshu, Zhu Xiang praised my memory. In this paper, he spoke highly of Rain Lane, saying that it is "perfect in syllable", "similar to Annabel Lee of Poe" and "not inferior to the long and short sentences of Tang Dynasty in syllable"
Bian mentioned this poem in Preface to Dai Wangshu's Poems. He said: "Rain Lane reads like an expansion or dilution of the modern vernacular version of the old poem' Lilacs are sad in the rain'. A resounding melody, a smooth rhythm, each paragraph is exactly six lines, and each line has different lengths. Generally speaking, it is carried out in seven poems, and a rhyme is repeated at regular intervals. The accustomed images and overused words make the success of this poem simple and vague. "
Rain Lane is the poet's "self-liberation" to cover up the ugly truth with a beautiful "imagination", and it is "deceiving himself and readers with some gorgeous illusion like soap bubbles". Apart from the artistic beauty of harmonious melody, it is "worthless in content"
Make an appreciative comment
Rain Lane creates a lyrical artistic conception with strong symbolic color. Here, the poet metaphorically described the dark and dreary social reality at that time as a narrow and lonely "rain lane". There is no sound, no joy, no sunshine here. The poet himself is such a lonely person, wandering in the rain lane.
He has good hopes in loneliness. I hope there is a beautiful ideal in front of me. The "lilac-like" girl described by the poet is a symbol of this beautiful ideal.
However, the poet knows that this beautiful ideal is difficult to realize. She is as full of sadness and melancholy as herself, fleeting and drifting away like a dream. What is left is only the poet himself who is still wandering in the dark reality, and the hope that the dream that cannot be realized generally floats away.
Expanding Reading: Reflections on Rain Lane
I still remember the day when I first met her, and the wind was light and the clouds were light. March, like fireworks, is fleeting. Lilacs bloomed romantically, and the fragrance came to her face, and she burst into tears.
The rain is ticking in Mao Mao. You can't look up at the long alley made of bluestone slabs. From the first time we met, I kept seeing her in my mind. Holding an oil-paper umbrella, looking at her sad eyes, walking quietly, quietly pursuing, looking forward to meeting this girl as sad as lilac in this lonely rain lane.
What if it weren't for family feud? With the screams of relatives, it may not be easy for everyone to suffer so much. Maybe everyone can tie the knot in a fragrant season like other lovers. But now, all this has become an imagination.
Guys, can you not be brave? Then you can hide in the street weakly, regardless of other people's gossip and pointing fingers. Only when everyone supports each other can we grow old hand in hand in this splendid alley.
I know you've left with your parents, but it's not easy to get out when I have you? F In this alley, I told myself that I had forgotten you a thousand times. I can't breathe the gas in the same city as you, and I can't appreciate your aura. The lilacs are blooming again. In the shadow of the old woman, your worried eyes are projected in your memory, blurring the tranquility of the past. If possible, I hope that the road of life will only meet and fall in love at first sight.
Walking in the rain lane, I miss you, waiting to meet you.
The surface is wet, so it is not clear whether it is precipitation or not. Tears.
Oil umbrella gathers rain, and it also condenses every time I miss you. The night is long and the moon sets.
I seem to see you approaching me with sadness and resentment, and silently spit out a sentence-I have been wronged by you in this life, and I will miss you in the next life. Your sighing eyes burned me, and I cried when I heard the wind and rain. You left quietly, left. I whisper behind your back, hoping for a heart and a head.
Remember you, remember your lilac face, remember your noble beauty.
I only hate these years, too soon.
Blame only the rainy lane, can it last forever?
Rain lane teaching plan
First, import
In the previous stage, we have learned Wen Yiduo's discovery and Guo Moruo's praise of the sun. These two poems are patriotic poems with strong feelings. Today we are going to learn a poem with a completely different style ―― Rain Lane by Dai Wangshu.
Second, the author introduces.
Dai Wangshu, formerly known as Dai Chaoshi, also known as Daimen Dog, 1905, was born in Hangzhou. 1April, 929, the first book of poetry "My Memory" was published, and his famous work "Rain Lane" was included in this book of poetry. 1August 933, published by Wang Shucao. 1August, 948, The Disaster Years was published, leaving 92 poems in his life. Rain Lane, written in 1928, is the poet's early masterpiece. It is a symbolic poem with both musical beauty and hazy beauty. After the publication of this poem, Dai Wangshu gained the reputation of "Poet in Rain Lane".
Third, read the poem aloud and talk about your initial impression after reading it. You can combine the first two poems.
What is the greatest feature of this poem? Clear: hazy. The whole poem is shrouded in a hazy artistic conception. What images (or scenes) did the author use to create this hazy artistic conception?
Clear: One * * * is six, mainly three images (landscapes). The first one is an oil-paper umbrella. This is a real rain gear, which the author didn't describe in detail. Give readers room for imagination. The advantage of this writing is that on the one hand, it will avoid usurping the role of the host and falling into the conventional mode. On the other hand, it left a dreamy artistic conception of rain and oil umbrella. Because the oil-paper umbrella itself has the characteristics of retro, nostalgia, mystery and fog. And it is well combined with the rain lane. Time is in late spring, lonely rain, plus a cold, sad atmosphere, holding an umbrella to dissipate the soul independently. Strange images can be produced in a unique environment.
The second is the rain lane. When I was young, the author lived at No.8, Tower 2 Lane, Hangzhou. His primary school and middle school all take that long bluestone road. This is a beautiful artistic conception. The alley is deep and quiet, and the drizzle makes the artistic conception full of hazy beauty. (Combined with my own experience in living in Hutong)
The third kind is lilac. The obscure artistic conception of the whole poem comes from the word "clove" Good things are always associated with girls. Lilac-like girl, lilac-like sadness, why choose lilac?
Qing: lilacs are knot-shaped, with lilac or white flowers in late spring. In China's classical poems, lilacs symbolize beauty, purity and sadness. The poem "Lilac-like Hatred Girl" in Rain Lane comes from Li Jing's poem "Lilac Empty Sorrow in the Rain" ("Paving Broken Sand and Washing Creek Sand"). The whole word is:
Hand-rolled pearls hook jade, heavy building locks according to the previous spring resentment.
When the flowers fall in the wind, who is the master?
Jade birds don't spread the news beyond the clouds, and lilacs are empty and sad in the rain.
Looking back at the Three Gorges in the blue waves, you can catch up with the sky.
Li Shangyin has a poem: bananas do not show lilac knots, but are alone in the same spring breeze. Lilacs bloom in late spring, and poets often hurt spring in the face of lilacs, saying that lilacs are troubles. Lilacs are white or purple, and the color is not frivolous. Often win the favor of incorruptible poets. In a word, clove is a trinity symbol of beauty, nobility and sadness. Lilacs in the rain add a lot of sadness and sadness. Moreover, lilacs are beautiful, but they fade easily. Therefore, the girl symbolized by lilac is also easy to disappear and leave.
Another image in the poem is the fence. The wall is crumbling, giving people a sad atmosphere. Another image is "me" and that girl. Except for six images, they are all words that express emotions, actions and states. These images together constitute the hazy and detached artistic conception of the whole poem.
Fourth, analyze the symbolic meaning of girls.
In the poem, the girl like lilac is an important image, and images such as rain lane, oiled paper umbrella and lilac are all used to express female images. So what does the "Lilac Girl" in the poem symbolize?
Qing: In the poem, I "wander" in the lonely rain lane, "hoping to meet a girl who is the same color/fragrance as lilac", but at the same time, this girl is slightly sad, just as the author said, "lilac-like sadness". Her mood is the same as "I", as if it were the shadow of "I". The author hopes that she can find a way out, that she can find a way out, but even this last hope is gone. "Disappeared her color, dispelled her fragrance, and even dispelled her sighing eyes." And "I" still lingered in this rainy lane, hoping to float past a/lilac/sad girl. "The poet wrote the girl like lilac as elegant, beautiful, ethereal and sad, which made this rain lane contain rich contents, symbolizing the poet's belief and pursuit of ideals, life and beautiful things, and also showing emptiness, disillusionment and emotion. Rain Lane is a painful song of the poet's lonely heart. The poet turned a beautiful life into a lilac-like girl. The poet clearly saw her, but he couldn't get close to her, coming like a dream and leaving like a dream.
The Artistic Features of verb (Verb)
1. Change the grammatical structure and realize the transformation from prose to poetry through clever combination.
The magic of Rain Lane lies in the author's wonderful ability to cut long prose sentences, which naturally forms modern poetry with both form and spirit. Take the first section as an example: wandering alone in a long, lonely rain lane with an oil-paper umbrella, hoping to meet a girl with a lilac-like knot, and this arrangement becomes prose. Poets write poems by breaking the grammatical structure of prose, and poems can be cut freely. The original relatively complete semantic combination is based on certain poetic standards. In this poem, the poet follows the principle of pronunciation and emphasizes the rhythm and tone of pronunciation. The rhythm has long and short pauses, and the poem pays more attention to the structure of pronunciation.
2. The syllable characteristics of Rain Lane
It can be said that the magical effect of rhyme and rhythm in Rain Lane is the most outstanding achievement of this poem.
Overall rhythm: soothing and melodious
The line number of 1 is basically three lines, which has a soothing and melodious effect with the sound quality of poetic language.
Every word is placed at the beginning of the poem. The pause duration of metrical poems should be basically the same, while the pause between lines is slightly longer and the pause between paragraphs is slightly longer. The word "Rain Lane" was put at the beginning, which lengthened the rhyme of the word from the beginning and played an important and soothing role.
3. The ingenious use of repeated sentence patterns. Taking the third quarter as an example, the coherent sentence patterns in the fourth quarter, such as "like me", "like me", "like a dream" and "like a dream", can be said to be a clever extension of poetry, which has formed the effect of repeated singing of poetry and made reading have the progressive effect of momentum-focus-leap forward. The best use of repetitive art is the representative work "Dream Seeker" in Dai Wangshu's second poetry collection "Wang Shucao", such as "Dreams will bloom/dreams will bloom beautiful flowers" and "Nine years to climb an iceberg/nine years to sail". The first and second paragraphs of Rain Lane also show repetition, which makes the rhythm of the poem appear neat and harmonious.
Overlapping use of four words
Sometimes in the same line of a poem, such as "long, long", sometimes in the separation of two lines of a poem, such as "sorrow, sorrow and hesitation", and sometimes in the separation of stanzas, such as "hesitation" between the second and third stanzas.
The overlapping of words makes the same time repeat, thus forming a soothing and melodious rhythm. Rain Lane is flexible and full of vitality in the use of syllables.
2. The rhythm of poetry
Rain Lane has ***7 paragraphs, each with 6 lines, and each line has 2 to 3 times of "Ang". Such as rain lane, long, wandering, girl, fragrance and so on appear repeatedly between the lines of poetry, forming a long melody, and this sound quality is well integrated with the poet's pursuit of deep and ethereal artistic conception and sad wandering mood. This is why syllables should be soothing and melodious. The external form of poetry serves the artistic conception and content of poetry.
3. Not only the rhyme ending of "Ang" and the soothing melody of syllables are used to add the profound emptiness of artistic conception, but also the rhetorical parallelism is used to add the profound emptiness of artistic conception.
The phrase "lilac-like color/lilac-like fragrance/lilac-like sadness" is parallelism. These words have the same number of words and similar structures. Lilac girl is portrayed by parallelism as very charming, but with a touch of sadness, which shows the poet's pursuit of a beautiful ideal, but the ideal is difficult to realize. At the same time, repeated recitation also enhances the musical beauty of poetry and creates a profound and ethereal artistic conception.
3. Words used in poetry.
Rain alley also has its own characteristics in the use of words. It uses a large number of disyllabic words with strong feelings, such as loneliness, sadness, cold, sigh, sadness, depression and sadness, to express the poet's hazy and sentimental poetry.
Wandering, fragrant and melancholy, these two-syllable rhyming words themselves represent rhyme and rhythm, and they are skillfully placed between the lines of poetry, forming a delicate, beautiful, soothing and ethereal artistic conception.