Pay attention to methods and angles when writing a composition, and don't make it so dry. For example, when writing people, we should pay attention to the description of appearance, movements, language and psychology, and when writing scenery, we should pay attention to the changes of the shape and color of the scenery, and at the same time learn to change the writing of the scenery and combine the dynamic and static scenery. Attention should be paid to the combination of situations in composition. "All landscape words are sentimental words" and so on. Pay attention to writing skills when writing, such as the use of some rhetorical devices, such as the beginning and end, try to be novel and end with famous words; Frequently quoting some poems can enhance the cultural connotation of our composition; Start with a clever story to arouse readers' interest in reading; Starting with a parallelism sentence can enhance the momentum of the article; Start with an inscription or end with a postscript, and so on.
2. How to write a good composition is the embodiment of the comprehensive level of Chinese. But for many students (including me at the beginning), I always feel that the composition is very profound and difficult to write. Actually, it's not. I think it is not difficult to write a good composition as long as you pay attention to the following points and persevere, and often practice writing.
The first is the accumulation of words. Writing requires good words and sentences to be literary and attractive. An article, no matter how wonderful it is without good words and witty sentences, is also dull and tasteless. How can we attract people and make them appreciate it? You wrote this article for nothing. In the usual study, Teacher Li of our class pays great attention to this aspect of education and guidance. I also pay great attention to this when reading articles and books.
The second aspect is observation. Writing a composition is not confined in a room, but observed and experienced in real life. Because life is the source of writing! Some people, he went out to "observe", just glanced at it and ignored the details. Therefore, the composition written is just an outline, and there are no main points or details at all. Therefore, when observing, we should pay attention to it and be careful, so as to write a unique and good composition. I remember when I went out, my father often pointed and asked questions to get my attention and thinking.
Third, read more extracurricular books. This is an important channel for accumulating words and the key to writing a composition. Including books ordered at home and various books in bookstores. As long as I have time, I will go to the bookstore to read all kinds of extracurricular books. Of course, you can't write a perfect composition just by reading. The key is to accumulate, remember and use it well. Only in this way can we achieve the goal of "serving others and serving me", so that when writing a composition, we can do whatever we want and write freely.
3. How to write a good composition? First, choose a good angle to do a question. First of all, read the material carefully and summarize the angles that can be written. From the words of "that man" in the material, we can sum up the following angles: 1, let the wings of the soul fly, 2, do not rely on the gifts of others, 3, do not complain about God's injustice, and 4, God is fair. From the same wing, different animals have different uses, which can be summarized as: 5. People walk out of the road, 6. Each man is the architect of his own fate. You can also talk about the idea of adapting to the environment, surviving and developing in a harsh environment and achieving success. Then choose the most relevant and familiar content to write from multiple angles, so that it will be handy to write. I drew up an eye-catching, vivid and vivid topic for Ji Min's composition "Intention". Second, the structural arrangement should be reasonable. The structure of the material composition should consist of at least three parts, namely, summarizing the arguments of the reading material, analyzing the arguments with practice, and summarizing the full text to emphasize the viewpoints. The reading part should be concise and clear, and it is forbidden to copy the original text. Connecting with the actual part is the focus of the full text, so it should be written in detail. At the end, summarize the full text, and take care of the materials and topics. Concise and to the point. Third, use rhetoric to express beauty. A good article should not only have a correct point of view and a reasonable structure, but also have beautiful language. Using metaphors in an article will make it more attractive. Using personification in an article will make the language lively, interesting and full of vitality. Using parallelism in the article will make the article more verve. An article should use rhetoric and choose words carefully. It will add a lot of bright colors to the article. Fourth, words should be infectious. As the saying goes, a person's kindness, cruelty, humility, arrogance, elegance and rudeness will be reflected in his articles. Do you want your article to infect people with kindness, humility and elegance? Then don't write questions with fierce, arrogant and rude meanings into the article. After reading a composition with neat copying and fluent sentences, people will think that the author is a serious and responsible person. The marking teacher always gives more points. For a scribbled article, it is natural to treat it coldly or even reprimand it. Is the text infectious and plagiarized? The second is to write for materials, including topic composition, reading composition and painting composition (topics, articles and pictures are all materials). The characteristic of material writing is that candidates read the material first, and then put forward their own composition according to the material. Writing materials is the highlight of the composition of the senior high school entrance examination over the years, so it is the focus of composition review; When candidates do this kind of composition in previous years, it is easy to deviate from the topic, so it is also the difficulty of composition review. When the key points and difficulties are broken, other types of composition will be solved. How to write a good composition for the material? .
4. How to write a good composition is a process of understanding the world, self and creative expression, an important way of language expression and communication, and a comprehensive embodiment of students' cognitive level and language expression ability. After understanding this meaning, let's talk about how to write a good composition. To write a good composition, you can try the following: 1, read more books. Middle school students should not only learn the knowledge of Chinese textbooks well, but also do a lot of reading after class, reading books, newspapers and magazines, reading famous books, reading one or two literary works every semester and reading a famous book every week. Because reading can constantly broaden your horizons, improve your understanding, cultivate your sentiment, enrich your composition content, and more importantly, improve your writing ability. Therefore, when reading, we should learn how the author chooses materials, how to make sentences with words, how to arrange materials, how to express his feelings and so on. By reading and accumulating language, writing methods, writing contents and model essays, the writing level can be improved. The ancients said, "Reading is like breaking thousands of books, and writing is like being divine". That's the truth. 2. Observe more. Develop the habit of careful observation. To write a good composition, you must first have written materials, which requires a rich life and more practice. Except school life. You should also take part in more social activities, such as visiting, visiting, traveling, watching TV and working. , is the original source of accumulated ingredients. In activities, we should see more, look carefully and see the whole, grasp the characteristics of things, and be a conscientious person in life. Only in this way can we write a composition with content and be concrete and vivid. Cultivating the habit of careful observation is one of the basic conditions for writing a good composition. 3. Think more. On the one hand, we should think from "reading more" and "reading more" and constantly improve our cognitive level and reference ability. For example, when observing in life or activities, think about what these phenomena mean, what they mean and what they mean. This requires us to carefully observe the things around us with our own eyes, not only to see the superficial phenomena of things, but also to understand the essence of things. When writing people's notes in this way, there will be a certain depth. On the other hand, you should think more before writing, so that you can write well. When writing a composition, people should not only know what they have written, but also know the author's thoughts, feelings and intentions. This is to think about what materials to choose for a good article, how to arrange these materials, how to use words and expressions, all of which must be thought out before writing. If you can pay attention to the above aspects in your study, coupled with the habit of writing often and writing logistics, your composition level will definitely improve quickly. We should also pay attention to the following points in writing: (1) Examine the topic and stick to the theme. One of the taboos of composition is digression, and examination of the topic is a key step to prevent digression. When reviewing questions, we must pay attention to the types of questions, which are generally regular. For more formal topics, we should pay attention to their "bias", such as "people who cherish time as gold", and "cherish time as gold" is the title; The topic of verb-object should focus on its "object", such as "the sun is new every day" and "new" is the title; The topic of coordinates should revolve around its "relationship", such as "time? Life; Elliptic topics should be omitted; Such as "brought by modern technology"; Demand-oriented topics should grasp their requirements and so on. (2) The content is substantial and not empty. People should be vivid, things should be specific, scenes should be vivid and things should be accurate. The composition must be "truth, truth, truth". (3) The structure is reasonable and not chaotic. Writing a composition must have a beginning, an end and a middle. The proportion of each part must be symmetrical, as the ancients said-"crested, streaked, leopard tail." Namely: the beginning is small and beautiful, fascinating; The middle is full and convincing; The ending is short and powerful, infecting people. (4) Language fluency. " Writing is talking with a pen "is very reasonable. The language should be fluent, one is that the author's thinking should be clear, and the other is that it should be revised repeatedly. When the composition is finished, you must have a look, read it and correct the inconsistencies. No matter what genre of composition, the language should be concise. You can try this at ordinary times, bring your own original composition, and delete it from the language without considering the material selection to see if you can delete a quarter or even a third of the length. If you practice this several times, your language ability is likely to improve significantly. (5) write neatly and seek beauty. Handwriting is the face of composition and can't be ignored. You must make some time to practice at ordinary times. There are two things to do in the examination room: first, leave enough time for the composition (generally accounting for 45%-50% of the examination time); Second, we should pay enough attention to handwriting. Every word we write should be regarded as the face of the work. This is to show yourself in front of others, especially the marking teacher, and strive to write every word easily, neatly and beautifully. In fact, solving the problem of forgetting words is very simple, mainly relying on your serious efforts. Phonetics and glyphs in Chinese learning belong to basic knowledge and are also the basis of Chinese learning. Maybe you already know a lot of words, but sometimes you forget to write them, which only shows that your knowledge is not solid enough and your learning attitude is not serious enough. In addition, Chinese learning is not limited to the classroom, it has always been around us. Prepare a small notebook, record the words that you can't write or the words that are easy to make mistakes, read more books, record the words and sentences that you think are good, and read them regularly. Over time, I think you will gain something.
5. How to write a better composition? There are mainly two rhetorical devices, personification and metaphor. I know all this. When writing scenery, we should use personification and pay attention to the appropriate metaphor of the scenery. For example, it is said that flowers are girls, but they cannot be * * *. Therefore, it is necessary to describe and compare the characteristics of the scenery, and you can also express your feelings with things. For example, simply: "Look how bright plum blossoms stand proudly in the cold winter. (Then come straight to the point) He is not afraid of the cold, but he still reflects a color for this white winter. What a noble quality. " Rhetoric is not essential when writing. The main thing is not to let the content be empty, and not just express your feelings directly. Start with the details, describe the paragraphs you want the other person to know most, and don't write long speeches. For example, "at the moment when the gunshots rang, his eyes were still so firm. This is full of yearning and loyalty to the new China. Blood stained the floor, but his stalwart body still didn't fall. " Instead of simply "he died with honor"
We should also use the method of comparison more, and show the quality we want to express through the comparison between the two. For example, "I glanced at that dirty beggar disdainfully. He must be a liar. I thought to myself, just throw him a piece of change when you buy something. " Unexpectedly, I accidentally fell out with a fifty. I didn't notice. "Sir, you dropped your money." When I turned around, I found the beggar smiling at me. Only then did I find out how warm this smile is. In this sentence, the beggar's dirty appearance is in sharp contrast with his kind heart, which embodies the beggar's good quality of helping others and not coveting interests, and criticizes his short-sightedness and judging people by their appearances.
Finally, finish what you started. At the beginning, I suggest flashback, and put some endings of "be careful not to write all endings" at the beginning of the sentence, which is more attractive. Don't start with that blank again, it's degenerated. Also, the main idea of the article must not appear at the beginning. In the end, the most important thing is to ask questions, and nothing else.
6. How can I write a better composition and provide you with some writing methods, which I hope will help you:
First, observe carefully.
Careful observation is the golden key to improve the writing level. The article is the product of objective things reflected in the author's mind. To reflect the object, you don't have to observe the objective things carefully. Only by careful observation can we find broken jade from the mineral deposits of life phenomena and grab the shining treasure from the mixed sediment. If you don't master "observation", the golden key to open the door, the "iron gate limit" of the composition will definitely be impossible.
Second, read more books
Extensive reading is the premise of improving the level of composition. To write a good article, you must read more books. "Reading is like a million volumes, and writing is like a god." "I am familiar with three Tang poems, I can't write poems and I can't sing." Mr. Lu Xun also advocates reading more books. "You must pick many flowers like bees, so that you can brew honey. If you bite in one place, your income will be limited and boring. " We emphasize that we should not only read more, but also read selectively, and even more, understand the structural skills and language characteristics of the articles we read, and master the composition from them, so as to be more profound and diverse.
Third, clever selection of materials.
Careful selection is an accelerator to improve the level of composition. The requirement of material selection is novelty. The so-called novelty means that the batch should choose something that ordinary people have never touched, or turn a blind eye to it with profound meaning. Once the author writes in a book, it will make people think deeply about exciting materials. The angle of material selection should be small, we should see the big picture from the small place and write the materials in everyone's eyes instead of what everyone wrote. To this end, we must compare, analyze and synthesize various materials in our minds, remove the rough and extract the fine, and transform and process them. Only in this way can the materials be novel. And this kind of positive thinking and repeated deliberation is very helpful to improve the level of composition.
Fourth, practice writing often.
Regular writing practice is the key to improve writing level. Want to enter the door of composition, make continuous progress, and more importantly, practice more. As the saying goes, "it is better to write one than to read ten articles." This tells the truth that writing practice produces true knowledge. After learning an article, we understand the structural methods and writing characteristics of the article, so we must learn to use these knowledge and methods to practice and make it our writing ability. In fact, we can all practice writing after learning the first text. However, fragment practice is a good way to practice writing, which takes a short time and achieves the purpose of practicing writing. Keeping a diary is also an effective way to practice writing. Keep a diary every day, and then the Russian foundation will be solid.
Fifth, review frequently
Repeated revision is a catalyst to improve the level of composition. Revision is an essential step in composition and an effective measure to improve the quality of composition. The predecessors said well, "the article is never tired of changing." "The article has changed." Cao Xueqin wrote a dream of red mansions, read it for ten years, added and deleted it five times, and Tolstoy's War and Peace was revised seven times. Mr. Lu Xun advocated that "it is not a pity to read it at least twice after deciding and try to delete unnecessary words, sentences and paragraphs." It can be seen that article revision generally refers to the process from the first draft to the final draft. When repairing, we should do five things: whether the text is fluent, whether the theme is clear, whether the structure is compact and whether the language is beautiful. In short, "the article has changed." Generally speaking, the article is always getting better and better, so we should work hard on "revision".
7. How to write a better composition? You should write a composition like a personal experience, which will be very real.
If you can get involved in writing, you will write better. Let me show you some skills.
First, accumulating rich composition materials is the primary condition for writing a good composition. Many experts in writing are quick-thinking, and the important reason is that they have a rich library of materials in their brains. They can write articles with ease and make ends meet.
If students want to write a good composition, they must make great efforts to accumulate composition materials. Writer Qin Mu said: "A writer should have three warehouses: a direct material warehouse containing materials obtained from life; One indirect warehouse contains materials from books and materials, and the other is a warehouse that collects people's languages on a daily basis.
With these three kinds, it is easier to write. "The first two warehouses mentioned in this passage are exactly what students should need to write a good composition.
1. The best way to accumulate "life materials" is to keep an observation diary. The common problem for students to keep diaries is a running account. I am too lazy to write because I feel boring.
I suggest you write according to the method taught by Mr. Lao She: "You should carefully observe the character and characteristics of Lao Wang or Lao Li around you, pay attention at any time, write it down at any time ... remember it every day and form a habit." A gust of wind blows, you write it down; You can also write down the next shower, because you don't know what day it is, and you need to describe a gust of wind or shower in your work. Without this accumulation, there will be no money. "
|2, accumulate "materials from books", on the one hand, combine reading and writing in Chinese class through classroom reading; On the other hand, we should rely on extracurricular reading and insist on writing abstract reading notes. If each excerpt uses a piece of paper, it is a reading card.
As the saying goes, "a good memory is not as good as a bad writing." No matter how strong the memory is, after a long time, there are always some things that will be forgotten.
If you extract what you think is wonderful when reading, you can not only avoid forgetting, but also facilitate reading. The so-called "wonderful content" worth refining.
It is related to readers' interests, hobbies, level, needs and other factors, and there is no unified standard. Generally speaking, wonderful aphorisms, vivid descriptions, novel and profound viewpoints, lively and interesting dialogues and even beautiful words can be classified and extracted.
In order to facilitate future reference, it is also necessary to indicate the source of materials after the original excerpt. Many students have written excerpts or reading notes, but not many insist on writing.
Unfortunately, a useful job fell by the wayside. According to statistics, Marx wrote Das Kapital and wrote 1500 kinds of "abstracts". Lenin wrote philosophical notes and directly quoted dozens of philosophical works.
Like a revolutionary teacher, insisting on writing abstract reading notes will make you smart, full and rich, and make you think quickly when writing in the future. Second, the training and improvement of writing ability is not a one-off event, which requires long-term planning. Therefore, we should arrange the order of composition training.
What is the most reasonable order? From the growth of many writers, we have seen colorful "sequences", and it is still difficult to say which is the universal truth. The following is the training sequence of "seven before seven after", which may be a common meaning. Please refer to your own situation.
1 Practice writing narrative and descriptive articles first, and then practice writing explanatory and argumentative papers. Practice writing your own personal experience first, and then practice writing what others tell you. 3. Pay attention to training observation and accumulation first, and then pay attention to training analysis and expression.
Practice writing simple things first, and then practice writing complex things. 5. Don't be limited by the "frame" of writing, let go of the courage of writing; Then according to the basic requirements and characteristics of different articles, standardized training is carried out.
6 "Imitate" first, and write an article drawing a gourd according to the same pattern; After "creation", write novel and unique articles. 7 First, make the article as long as possible, emphasizing expansion and dissemination; After that, try to write a short essay, paying attention to conciseness.
The above "seven before seven after" conforms to the law of people's understanding of things, from concrete to abstract, and the law of ability training, from low to high, from clumsy to skilled. As for when or to what extent as the first and second boundaries, this is another problem that cannot be "one size fits all" and must be analyzed in detail.
It's not bad if some students arrange the above seven first and then seven alternately and repeatedly, such as imitating creation and then imitating creation. Third, we should develop good writing habits. After students enter junior high school from primary school, composition training has embarked on a new course, and special attention should be paid to cultivating their good writing habits.
From the writing experience of the winning students in the composition competition, we summarized the following seven good writing habits for students' reference. 1 The habit of "writing a little every day".
Many award-winning students said that their composition won the prize because they insisted on keeping a diary. If there is more time, they will write more, and if there is less time, they will write less, even if it is as few as dozens of words. This is really an experience.
As the saying goes, "Never leave your fist, never leave your mouth". Writing every day can make your writing more dexterous and accumulate a lot of composition materials. 2. The habit of "thinking through the whole article and writing an outline of the composition".
Don't write a composition unless you know what to write in the next paragraph. You must conceive the whole article and fix the "framework" of the conceived composition in the form of an outline. People who have been engaged in writing for a long time also have an outline before they start writing, but some hide the outline in their stomachs and call it a "draft by heart."
3 the habit of "reciting the first draft of the article". In ancient times, there was a habit of "singing" and "humming" when writing poems, because there were many problems that could not be "read" or read aloud.
If you are in the examination room, you can only read silently to find out whether the sentence is fluent, whether the tone is coherent, whether the context is fluent and whether the phonology is harmonious. 4. The habit of "seriously modifying".
The ancients said, "An article is never tired of changing", which is the golden advice of writing a good article and the experience of all article experts. Without this habit, it is almost impossible to write a good article.
5 "Don't tell lies" habit. Any good article must be the expression of the author's true feelings, and any falsehood can't fool the reader's eyes.
If students begin to learn to write, they are terminally ill, and there is almost no hope of improvement in the future of composition. 6 "Don't write hard, force yourself to write" habit.
Lu Xun said, if you can't write, don't write hard. Of course it's right, because it's difficult.
8. How to write a composition is better. There are a few points for your reference.
Interest. Interested in everything, such as writing, where interest comes from. Inspired by other people's works, from their own sense of accomplishment. Pressure from various exams.
Reading. Reading more American literature can cultivate your ability and interest in studying American literature. You can get inspiration from writing.
Accumulate. Collect articles that you think are beautiful and recognized by everyone for your daily appreciation and reference when writing.
Practice usually take time to practice, please comment and modify.
Inspiration. I like writing, sometimes I feel good about myself, but sometimes I can't write. The main reason is that there was no inspiration at that time. My inspiration is to conceive the structure, language, layout and details of the article after reading other beautiful articles, or after drinking, or when I am happy and interested, and sometimes when I wake up at night. . . . . I suggest you also find your own writing inspiration. Find your own inspiration for writing, and write as soon as you have inspiration. But be careful: don't write when you are not inspired. Even if I did, it wouldn't be so good.
I wish you a good article, and I wish you an interest in writing and a good habit.