Modification of defective sentences means modifying words and sentences with obvious grammatical defects to make the sentences smooth, correct and more complete without changing the meaning expressed in the original sentence. What are the types and modifications of common wrong sentences? Below are the types and modifications of common wrong sentences that I have compiled. Welcome to appreciate the types and modifications of common wrong sentences 1
(1) Improper collocation
Improper collocation of sentence components includes improper collocation of subject and predicate, improper collocation of verb and object, improper collocation of attributive, adverbial, complement and central phrase, and improper collocation of related words. For example:
①The spring breeze blows in waves, the branches sway, the moonlight and tree shadows sway together, making a rustling sound. (The subject and predicate are not matched properly, and "moonlight" does not make a sound.)
② Before liberation, the money earned by my father and brother was not enough to support the family. (Inappropriate matching of object and object, "support" can only be people, not "life".)
③ At this conference, a wide range of opinions were exchanged on the issue of wages. (The improper matching of the modifier and the central phrase does not mean that the opinions are widespread, but that the scope of the exchange is broad. It should be changed to "extensive exchange of opinions".)
④ If our middle school students lack the spirit of innovation, they cannot Adapt to the requirements of the knowledge economy era. (The related words are not collocated properly, so ? Ye? should be changed to ? Jiji?.)
(2) Incomplete components
Incomplete components, common ones include missing subject, missing predicate, and missing object and necessary qualifying words. For example:
① This lecture by a special teacher has inspired everyone a lot. (The subject is missing, and prepositions or preposition structures are often used, turning the original subject into an adverbial. The words "pass" or "right" should be removed.)
② He actively participated in the handling of social disaster accidents and resolved them Risk, responsibility for stabilizing social life. (There is a lack of predicate, so add “commitment” before “participate”)
③ As long as you are diligent and willing to endure hardship, no problem will be difficult for you. (Lack of an object, add ?determination? after ?willing to endure hardship?)
④Bacteria are harmful. (If necessary restrictive words are missing, some? should be added.)
(3) Redundant repetition
The sentence structure is complete and the meaning of the sentence is clear, but unnecessary words are still used to make the sentence. The component is also called redundancy. Common situations include: first, repetition of grammatical components; second, semantic stacking. For example:
①Ten players are playing fiercely on the basketball court. (The predicate is repeated, should it be deleted? Hit?)
② In fact, this is an overthinking idea. (The meaning is piled up, "thinking" means thinking, and "thoughts" should be deleted.)
③ Approaching the beautiful Danyang Middle School, I stopped to admire it. (The meaning of "stop" and "stop" are repeated, delete one).
(4) Improper word order
Improper word order is diverse and needs to be flexibly analyzed in conjunction with semantics, language structure, etc. Common situations include: improper arrangement of words before and after; reversed positions of modifiers and central words; improper word order of multi-level modifiers; inconsistent with language habits; improper placement of related words. For example:
①The document provides detailed provisions and profound explanations of some issues in the economic field from a theoretical and policy perspective. (The words are arranged in an inappropriate order. "Profound explanation" should refer to "theory", and "detailed regulations" should refer to "policy".) ② my country's cotton production is now more than self-sufficient. (The positions of the attributive and the central verb are reversed, and should be changed to "produced cotton?")
③Many teachers in the lounge talked enthusiastically with him yesterday. (The word order of multi-layered adverbials is inappropriate. The preposition phrase describing the object is usually close to the central phrase. It should be changed to? Talk to him enthusiastically?)
④This song is very popular among music lovers of. (The word order is unconventional. You should move the word "doubled" to the front of "vast".)
⑤ If there are problems with the ideas in a work, then even if the writing is very good, it will be useless. ("Even" should be moved before "words". According to the original sentence, it becomes that only words are necessary, not works.)
(5) Mixed sentence patterns
Sentence patterns Mixing means mixing two meanings or two sentence patterns into one sentence, resulting in confusing structure and unclear meaning. For example: ① It is the people's responsibility to provide opinions to the government. (The two sentences "we give advice to the government" and "it is the people's responsibility to give advice to the government" are put together, and "we" should be deleted.)
②After listening to his report, It was a great inspiration and education for me. (The two sentence patterns are mixed together: "His report inspired me a lot" and "After listening to his report, I was greatly inspired and educated". You should choose one of them.)
(6) Sentence ambiguity
The so-called ambiguous sentence refers to a sentence that has lost its certainty and can be understood this way or that way. For example: ①The director, deputy director and other bureau leaders attended the commendation meeting. (It is not clear whether the leaders of other bureaus are leaders of their own bureau or other bureaus.
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②The Palestinian guerrillas were well prepared for their attack on Israel. (Is it? Palestinian guerrillas attacking Israel? Or? Israel attacking Palestinian guerrillas?, it is unclear)
③ The entire canal has been surveyed for 144 miles. (It did not say how long the whole canal is. If the total length is 144 miles, then 144 miles is only a part of the whole canal, so we cannot say "completed". We should say "now the whole canal has been surveyed for 144 miles.")
< p>④ Introducing an authoritative work in the Philippines. (It can be interpreted as "introducing an authoritative work" or "introducing the Philippines". If the author means the latter, "a" should be mentioned at the beginning of the sentence.)(7 ) Unreasonable
Unreasonable refers to expressions that either violate people's logical thinking, or violate objective reality, or are inconsistent, or ignore one thing and ignore the other, resulting in unreasonableness. For example:
①He was one of the many victims who survived. (Since "escaped", naturally he did not die, how can he be said to be "one of the victims"? It should be changed to "how many people died, he was the one who survived.")
②Again The smooth implementation of employment projects is an important condition for maintaining social stability. (Can it include both positive and negative meanings? It can only be said that the smooth implementation of the re-employment project is an important condition for maintaining social stability.), but it cannot be said that the smooth implementation of the re-employment project is also an important condition for maintaining social stability. Conditions. ?
(8) Improper use of words
Improper use of words includes improper use of parts of speech, improper use of word meanings, improper use of emotional colors, etc. For example: ①This test. Whether it will succeed or not is still doubtful (the verb? doubt? is misused as a noun and should be changed to? doubt?)
② Everyone is very warm and friendly to me (the preposition is used improperly to express the relationship between people. For the relationship between each other, you can only use "for", not "for".)
③His father is still alive at the age of 83, and he is in good spirits. Age, inconsistency, wording errors) Types and modifications of common defective sentences 2
⒈ Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical defect is ()
A. In today's products In the economic era, when poetry has lost its past glory and is gradually moving away from us, it is a rare spiritual enjoyment to read such an inspiring hymn to the motherland.
B. He is the editor-in-chief of his hometown. The rich information tabloid has a large amount of information and is highly readable. After it is printed every month, hundreds of copies of the tabloid are requested by fellow villagers.
C. Literary and artistic works. The quality of language does not lie in the use of a lot of fancy words or the terminology of a certain industry, but in the proper use of words.
D. He is serious in his work and sincere in his treatment of others. , in life and work, he has indeed used his actions to shape a huge personality, touching and guiding the people around him.
⒉ Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical errors is ()
A. Some people think that it is a bit unhuman for scientists to immerse themselves in scientific research all day long and not care about family affairs. However, the facts are the best illustration of this prejudice.
B. The investment environment is good. The quality of services and the quality of government officials are all important guarantees for the healthy development of the regional economy
C. The preservation of the Dunhuang art treasure house makes it possible for us to understand the 1500-6000 The growth and development of Chinese art in the coming years.
D. Many primary schools now allow students to drink water, use the toilet, and even interrupt during the teacher’s lectures. These behaviors that have always been regarded as violations of discipline have been corrected.
⒊Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical errors is ()
A. A few days ago, two students from a certain school broke their skulls while playing bungee jumping. The cause of the accident and the equipment The quality problem is under investigation.
B. The misuse of foreign words not only destroys the rigor and harmony of Chinese language and characters, affects the expression of Chinese language, but also dissolves the profound and rich connotation of Chinese culture.
C. The main causes of heart failure in the elderly are fatigue, excessive brain use, mental stress, too much salt, colds, etc.
D. After observing this court hearing on the Rural Business Contract Law, the legal level of us "village officials" has been greatly improved.
⒋Among the following sentences, the one with no grammatical errors is ()
A. A large number of facts show that 90-year-old long-term smokers have significantly slowed down memory and olfactory sensitivity.
B. The flower of professional ethics has bloomed here. The delicate petals are stained with sweat poured by young people, exuding the fragrance of young people's hearts.
C. A recent social survey shows that many online games contain violent plots and pornographic content, which will undoubtedly seriously affect the physical and mental health of young people.
D. Facing an American team with five players with NBA playing experience, the Chinese team was not timid. They played with great momentum throughout the game and finally defeated their opponents with a three-point advantage.
⒌ Among the following sentences, the one with the wrong language is ()
A. If some big countries do not change their arrogant attitude in dealing with international issues, then who It is also difficult to predict whether there will ever be peace in this world.
B. Now, I see the villagers who have been away for many years, the stone and thatch huts unique to the mountainous areas that I have been used to living in since I was a child, the rugged streets, and the familiar loveliness. The local accent.
C. If some major countries do not change their arrogant attitude in dealing with international issues, then no one can predict whether there will be a day of peace in the world.
D. Usually, before surgery for brain tumor patients, doctors need to obtain scanned images of their brains to determine the location of the tumor and understand the condition of blood vessels near the tumor.
⒍Among the following sentences, the one with the wrong language is ()
A. Through this community work, she prefers to participate in youth volunteer activities
B. Only when we believe in our own abilities can we be confident before various tests.
C. What a monster a dog is to a sparrow!
D. The state, society, schools and families must ensure that children of school age accept their obligations according to law The right to education.
⒎Among the following sentences, the one with the most grammatical errors is ()
A. Chunhui Middle School carried out an activity to talk about "Chang'e flying to the moon" when Chang'e-1 was successfully launched.
B. Before and after the Spring Festival this year, major media reported in detail the touching stories of fighting against ice and snow disasters.
C. The problem of employment difficulties for college graduates has aroused great concern from the whole society
D. The disaster relief team is in the harsh environment of constant aftershocks, cut off transportation and poor communication. They move forward tenaciously, and every life regains its vitality because of their arrival.
⒏Point out the grammatical errors in the following sentences and revise them.
⑴Li Ming’s composition has a rigorous structure and fluent language. It was awarded the first prize in the national composition competition.
⑵The paintings are simple and bright, with a breath of youth, and they have always been popular with everyone.
⑶For your personal safety, please do not use your left hand to start home appliances, just to be safe.
⑷The Chinese people were one of the first countries to agree to the establishment of the United Nations.
⒐The following passage is excerpted from a middle school student’s homework. The underlined sentence contains a grammatical defect. Please revise it and write the correct one below.
It was a bright and sunny day with thousands of miles of white clouds. That day, our family came to Jigong Mountain, which is very popular among Xinyang people. There are thousands of miles of mountains there, and they are like a giant dragon hovering over the earth. There are several tour groups visiting here today. We first came to the lake to watch the turquoise water and the small fish swimming in the water. Then we climbed over another mountain and came to a big river. We suddenly felt relaxed and seemed to have forgotten all our worries.
Reference answers:
⒈A
⒉C
⒊B
⒋C
⒌B
⒍A
⒎C
⒏⑴ Confuses the relationship between passive and active, just replace it with "passive". ⑵ Improper matching, "painting" is visible but not audible; just replace "like" with "favorite". ⑶ Please do not use your left hand to start home appliances. It is illogical to be safe. The first thing you should be careful about is to be safe. Replace "just in case" with "just in case". ⑷The subject "Chinese people" does not match the object "country", so delete "people".
⒐It was a sunny day and there were several tourist groups visiting here today.⒑⑴The word order is inappropriate. Not only? but also the content should be reversed. It can be changed to? Not only can we further improve the urban infrastructure, but also Can it improve the taste of citizens’ spiritual life? ⑵ Improper matching. Delete the high and low digits of ? or add ? or not after ? success or change ? success to ? success or failure. ⑶Delete "Participate", or change it to "Participate in creating activities".