So, how can we make the theme of the article profound? In addition to the repeated refinement and in-depth excavation of the theme itself, there are also rules to follow in writing skills. One of the methods that are easy to learn and have good results is to sublimate the theme at the end. How to sublimate the theme of the article at the end of the composition? Here are some common methods for your reference.
First, from small to large. At the end of the article, the small-scale things written in front are promoted to a larger scope, thus sublimating the theme of the article.
Let's enjoy the once sensational Homesickness by Yu Guangzhong, a famous poet in Taiwan Province. The content of the poem is: "When I was a child/homesickness was a small stamp/I was here/my mother grew up there/homesickness was a narrow boat ticket/I was here/my bride was there/homesickness was a short grave/I was outside/my mother was inside/homesickness is now a shallow strait/I am here/the mainland is there."
The first three sections are about the writer's thoughts about his relatives and hometown, and the fourth section is about his thoughts about his motherland, which combines personal "grievances" with the situation of his home country at that time. Obviously, from relatives, hometown to the motherland is a process of "from small to large", which makes the artistic conception of poetry suddenly clear and effectively sublimates the theme.
Second, from things to people. In the first part of the article, something is described and portrayed from two aspects of form and spirit, while in the last part, the praise of this kind of thing is transferred to the praise of people with similar personalities to sublimate the theme of the article.
Yang Shuo's masterpiece "Litchi Honey" successfully used this method. The author first vividly described and highly praised the spirit of hard struggle and selfless dedication of bees, and then naturally transferred the praise of bees to the working people with the spirit of bees, subtly sublimating the theme.
Third, follow the crowd. The first part of the article takes a person (or thing) as the specific writing object, highlighting this person's quality, personality, habits and so on. (or the characteristics of things), and at the end, it is expanded to praise (or condemn) all people (or things with this characteristic) with this quality, personality, habits, etc.
For example, in Zhu De's Memories of My Mother, the first part of the text uses a lot of pen and ink, highlighting the essential characteristics of mothers: strong and unyielding personality and the habit of thrift. At the end, the author wrote: "Mother is an ordinary person, and she is only one of the millions of working people in China, but it is these millions who created and created the history of China ..." The author expanded from praising her mother to praising the working people with her essential characteristics, and her feelings were sublimated here.
Fourth, engage in reason. The article first tells a specific event, and finally reveals or implies the profound philosophy contained in it.
Events are the cornerstone and support of philosophy, and philosophy is the deepening and sublimation of the core of events. Although the philosophy at the end occupies a small space, it often makes an ordinary little thing intriguing and shining, which has the effect of making the finishing point.
Morton hunt's "treading on thin ice" (the first volume of Chinese for the seventh grade of People's Education Edition) describes in detail the escape experience of "I" when I was a child, and at the end sublimates the experience of this escape that my father taught me: "Don't think about the rocks far below, but focus on the first small step, and take the next step after this step until I get to the place I want." We must pay attention to sublimating the theme in this way: first, "reason" should naturally arise from "things" and never leave the event to make empty comments; Second, "reason" should be universal, novel and profound, not one-sided and superficial, and should adopt the old tune. There are five ways to sublimate the theme of a composition. The sublimation of Sun Weibin's theme in Bird's Nest Middle School in honghu city, Hubei Province refers to the gradual deepening of the theme of the article, which means that the author's ideological realm has risen from the appearance of the things described to a new height, thus highlighting the key to the aesthetic value and cognitive value of the article.
Excellent works will always work hard on the sublimation of the theme. Common ways to sublimate the theme are: 1. Horizontal layout method is a method of using horizontal thinking, grasping some similar and related materials, arranging according to their internal relations, and finally sublimating the composition topic.
For example, an excellent composition "Touched by Yourself" (Yan Min) has nine touches horizontally, six of which constitute a picture, and three of them are touched at one stroke. Six touches are for a person's consideration, filial piety, autonomy, tolerance, kindness and courage. Each stroke reflects the character of "I" from one side and one angle, and the theme of composition has basically emerged.
But the little author is not satisfied with this, but on the basis of arrangement, he uses "young and frivolous often moves me!" This sentence sublimates the theme. If there is no colorful arrangement in front, the sublimation of the theme of the composition will not be strong.
Second, the analogy mining method is a method to dig the theme to a deeper level through analogy association. The author is required to find out the similarities between what he has written and what he wants to express, make analogy and association, and link the basic ideas of the article with profound philosophy, thus raising the theme of the article to a new height.
For example, Jia Pingwa wrote in his essay Horizon that when I was a child, I rode my bike again and again to pursue the distant horizon, but the horizon was like a mystery. Every time I thought I was chasing it, I would appear in a distant place. It is precisely because of this that I am more attracted to pursue it.
The author connects the pursuit of the horizon of nature with the pursuit of the ideal of life by analogy, and skillfully connects the two, and finds the innovative theme of "always pursuing the horizon, solving this mystery, and life will be full of freshness, fun, struggle and endless energy" Third, the method of contrast matting is to compare many things with another thing by contrast matting, so that many things can contrast matting for another thing, thus improving the image of the things written and subliming the main content of the article.
Zong Pu's fairy tale Hua Yu first describes the excitement when flowers bloom. Many flowers, such as elm leaves, roses, peony, peach blossoms and winter jasmine, are more expensive than Beauty under the Moon. Finally, it wrote that a little boy picked February orchids and gave them to his teacher. The article takes many flowers as the foreshadowing, which reflects the silence of February Orchid.
2. How to sublimate the theme when writing a composition The author extracts inductive methods from classic reading articles, which are listed as follows, hoping to help students improve their writing ability: First, sublimate the theme from the outside to the inside by revealing the essence. For example, at a place, I squatted down and carried my mother, and my wife squatted down and carried my son. Although my mother is very tall, she is very thin, which is unnatural. Although my son is very fat, he is young and naturally light. However, my wife and I walk slowly, steadily and carefully, as if what I carry on my back and what she carries add up to the whole world. (Mo Huaiqi's "Travel") It shows that in Mo Huaiqi's "Travel", it is very common for a family to go to a difficult place, and two middle-aged people in the family are carrying an old man and a young man respectively. The author reveals that middle-aged people should have the life responsibility of "connecting the past with the future" and "respecting the old and loving the young". This reveals the profound essence behind the appearance and promotes the theme of the article. Second, from point to surface, sublimate the universal theme. For example, the more firsts in life, the more colorful life will be. May you cherish your first time. (Zhou Sushan's "It's good for the first time") There is a universality between things and people. If we can reveal the universal law of human society from point to point, from a specific person to a thing in our composition, the theme of the article will be sublimated. Doing all kinds of things for the first time has risen to many firsts in life, which greatly enriches our reading experience from the individual to the whole, and the theme of the article will be sublimated. By analogy, sublimate the theme of the article. Trust, for example, often creates a beautiful realm. Feng Jicai's Pearl Bird shows that things are always similar, and some laws between other things are also applicable to human society. If we can find the rules when describing other things and extract them to regulate the behavior between people, this is the sublimation from one to another. The author of Feng Jicai's Pearl Bird described the process of raising birds. The author didn't interfere with the birds and let them gradually trust themselves. The bird began to dare to approach people, and finally fell asleep on the author's shoulder confidently and boldly. Birds trust people, and this trust creates a beautiful realm. The author thinks of personnel from this "bird affair", thus sending out the feeling that "trust often creates a beautiful realm" This refined philosophy is not only applicable to people and birds. More suitable for people. This sublimates the theme. Fourth, from the specific personnel sublimation to the general principles of dealing with people. For example, I have repeatedly found that whenever I feel depressed and frustrated, I can cope with everything as long as I remember the experience I learned on that small cliff a long time ago. I remind myself not to think about the rocks far below, but to focus on the first small step and take this step before taking the next step. Until I get where I want to go. (morton hunt's "Step by Step") Explain: From specific personnel to the universal principles of human life, this is what is often said. Writing this kind of article, the most taboo practical, but want to see rather critical. Morton hunt's "Take One Step at a Time" is about a trivial matter, from childhood, he was sickly. It is impossible for me to go down on my own, but my father told me not to run into the rocks far below, just take one step at a time. One step at a time, I finally succeeded in climbing down the cliff. This is a concrete thing, but at the end of the article, the author jumped out of this small matter and talked about how people should look at it. The author thinks that the same is true of dealing with difficulties. As long as the difficulties are greatly reduced and one small difficulty is overcome at a time, small victories can be accumulated into great victories, thus achieving lifelong success. Fifth, individuals contact the country and sublimate from personal destiny to national destiny. For example, homesickness is now a shallow strait. I am here and there in this continent (homesickness in Yu Guangzhong). This is the last paragraph of Yu Guangzhong's homesickness. The author chooses four images to vividly explain what homesickness is. Although these images are touching, without this last verse, poetry always seems not atmospheric enough. In the last section, the author turns personal anxiety about missing relatives in his hometown into sadness that the people of Taiwan Province Province can't be unified with the mainland of the motherland, which makes a qualitative leap in the theme of poetry and completes the sublimation of the theme between self and self. Students may want to think more deeply in their writing so that they can
3. How to sublimate the topic of composition The author extracts inductive methods from classic reading articles, which are listed as follows, hoping to help students improve their writing ability:
First, from the outside to the inside, sublimate the theme by revealing the essence.
For example, at a place, I squatted down to carry my mother, and my wife squatted down to carry my son. Although my mother is tall, she is thin and naturally not heavy; Although my son is fat, he is young and naturally light. But my wife and I walk slowly, steadily and carefully, as if what I carry and what she carries add up to the whole world.
(Mo Huaiqi's Walking)
Commentary: In Mo Huaiqi's Go, it is common for a family to go to difficult places. Two middle-aged people in the family carry an old man and a young man on their backs. Backing others is a kind of appearance, but through this appearance, the author reveals that middle-aged people should have the life responsibility of "connecting the past with the future" and "respecting the old and loving the young", so as to reveal the profound essence behind the appearance and promote the theme of the article.
Second, from point to surface, sublimate the theme by revealing universality.
For example, the more firsts in life, the more colorful life will be. May you cherish your first time.
(Zhou Sushan's "It's good for the first time")
Description: Life is always composed of specific events and individuals, and there is a universality between events and people. If we can reveal the universal law of human society from point to point, from a specific person to a thing in our composition, the theme of the article will be sublimated. The first time is really good. From the wonderful feeling of doing all kinds of things for the first time to many firsts in life, it greatly enriches our reading experience and sublimates the theme of the article from the individual to the whole.
Third, from this to that, draw inferences and sublimate the theme of the article.
For example, trust often creates a beautiful realm. (Feng Jicai's Pearl Bird)
Explanation: Things are always similar, and some laws between other things are also applicable to human society. If we can find the rules when describing other things and refine them to regulate the behavior between people, it is the sublimation of this and that.
In Feng Jicai's Pearl Bird, the author describes the process of raising birds. The author does not interfere with the birds, so that they gradually trust themselves. Birds began to dare to approach people, and finally even fell asleep on the author's shoulder confidently and boldly. Birds trust people, and this trust has created a beautiful realm. The author thinks of personnel from this "bird incident", and thus sends out the refined philosophy that "trust often creates a beautiful realm", which is not only applicable to people and birds, but also to people. This sublimates the theme.
Fourth, from specific personnel to the general principle of being a man.
For example, I have found time and time again that whenever I feel depressed about the boundless future, I can cope with everything as long as I remember the experience I learned on that small cliff a long time ago. I remind myself not to think about the rocks far below, but to focus on that first small step, take this step, and then take the next step until I get to where I want to go. (morton hunt's Step by Step)
Note: From the specific personnel to the truth of being a man, this is what is often said: see the big with the small and talk about the big truth. Writing this kind of article, the most taboo practical, but want to see rather critical.
Morton hunt's "Take a Step, Take a Step" is about a small matter. He was sickly since childhood, and ventured to climb a high cliff to get down on his own. In my opinion, this is an impossible task, but my father told me not to run into the rocks far below, just take one step at a time. I finally succeeded in climbing down the cliff step by step. This is a concrete matter, but at the end of the article, the author jumps out of this small matter and talks about how people should treat difficulties. Judging from the experience of this small matter, the author thinks that the same is true of dealing with difficulties. As long as we minimize the difficulties and overcome one small difficulty at a time, we can accumulate small victories into great victories, thus achieving lifelong success.
Five, by the individual contact with the country, from personal destiny to national destiny.
For example, now
Homesickness is a shallow strait.
I'm at this end
The mainland is over there
(Yu Guangzhong's homesickness)
Commentary: This is the last paragraph of Yu Guangzhong's homesickness. In this poem, the author chooses four images to vividly explain what homesickness is. Although these images are touching, without this last sentence, poetry always seems not atmospheric enough. In the last section, the author turns personal anxiety about missing relatives in his hometown into sadness that the people of Taiwan Province Province can't be unified with the mainland of the motherland, which makes a qualitative leap in the theme of poetry and completes the sublimation of the theme between self and self.
Students may wish to think deeply in their writing, so that our composition can sublimate the theme at the end, make it ideological and send valuable spiritual wealth to readers.
4. How to sublimate the composition The author extracts inductive methods from classic reading articles, which are listed as follows, hoping to help students improve their writing ability: First, sublimate the theme by revealing the essence. For example, at a place, I squatted down to carry my mother, and my wife squatted down to carry her son. My mother is tall, but thin and natural. Although my son is very fat, he is young and naturally light. However, my wife and I walk slowly, steadily and carefully, as if what I carry on my back and what she carries add up to the whole world. (Mo Huaiqi's "Travel") It shows that in Mo Huaiqi's "Travel", it is very common for a family to go to a difficult place, and two middle-aged people in the family are carrying an old man and a young man respectively. The author reveals that middle-aged people should have the life responsibility of "connecting the past with the future" and "respecting the old and loving the young". This reveals the profound essence behind the appearance and promotes the theme of the article. Second, from point to surface, through revealing the universal theme of sublimation. For example, the more firsts in life, the more colorful life will be. May you cherish your first time. It shows that life is always made up of concrete things and individuals, and there is a universality between things and people. If we can reveal the universal law of human society from point to point in our composition through specific people and things, the theme of the article will be sublimated. It's good for the first time, from the good feeling of doing all kinds of things for the first time to many firsts in life, greatly enriched our reading experience from the individual to the whole, and the theme of the article was sublimated. Third, this and that, by analogy, sublimated the theme of the article. Trust, for example, often creates a beautiful realm. Feng Jicai's Pearl Bird shows that things are always similar, and some laws between other things are also applicable to human society. If we can find the rules when describing other things and extract them to regulate the behavior between people, it will be the sublimation of this and that. In Feng Jicai's Pearl Bird, the author describes the process of raising birds. The author didn't interfere with the bird and let it gradually trust itself. The bird began to dare to approach people, and finally fell asleep on the author's shoulder confidently and boldly. Birds trust people, and this trust creates a beautiful realm. The author thinks of personnel from this "bird incident", thus emitting the feeling of "trusting and creating a beautiful realm" This refined philosophy is not only applicable to people and birds. More suitable for people. This leads to the theme. Fourth, from the specific personnel sublimation to the general principle of being a man. For example, I have repeatedly found that whenever I feel depressed and frustrated, I can cope with everything as long as I remember what I learned on that small cliff a long time ago. I reminded myself not to think about the rocks far below, but to focus on the first small step and take this step before walking. Until I get where I want to go. (morton hunt's "Take it one step at a time") illustrates that it is often said to upgrade from specific personnel to general principles of dealing with people. Writing this kind of article, the most taboo practical, but want to see a little knowledge, rather critical. Morton hunt's "Take One Step at a Time" is about a trivial matter. It is impossible for me to go down on my own, but my father told me not to run into the rocks far below, just take one step at a time. One step at a time, I finally succeeded in climbing down the cliff. This is a concrete thing, but at the end of the article, the author jumps out of the little thing itself. Let's talk about how people should treat difficulties. Judging from the experience of this small matter, the author thinks that the same is true of dealing with difficulties. As long as the difficulties are minimized, every time a small difficulty is overcome, a small victory can be accumulated into a big victory, thus achieving lifelong success. Five, by the individual contact with the country, from personal destiny to national destiny. For example, homesickness is a shallow strait now, and I am here and there (homesickness in Yu Guangzhong). This is the last paragraph of Yu Guangzhong's homesickness. In this poem, the author chooses four images to vividly explain what homesickness is. Although these images are touching, without this last verse, the poem always seems not atmospheric enough. In the last section, the author's personal worry about missing his relatives in his hometown rose to the sadness that the people of Taiwan Province Province could not be unified with the mainland of the motherland, which made the theme of the poem leap qualitatively and the poem also sublimated between self and self. Students may wish to think deeply in their writing, so that our composition can sublimate the theme at the end, make it ideological and send valuable spiritual wealth to readers.
5. How to sublimate the theme at the end of the composition When talking about the end, the ancients often used the "leopard tail" as the standard, meaning that the brushwork at the end should be concise, bright and clean, just like the leopard tail sweeping, loud and powerful, giving readers room to chew.
Please look at the full-text ending skills of the recent senior high school entrance examination. Tip 1: echo from beginning to end, highlighting the main idea (1) It is said that the ship of life can not be separated from the ideal sail, and that the ideal of life is for the ideal life, and the happiest time in the ideal life is the dream flower season.
At the end of the flower season, I hope I can always remember the good words of the sages: the ship of life cannot be separated from the ideal sail. The ideal of life is for the ideal life.
(Selected from the full text of the senior high school entrance examination in Huzhou and Jingzhou) Tips: Echo from beginning to end is one of the most practical methods in the examination room composition. Generally, the author puts forward the center of the article at the beginning, and then emphasizes it again at the end, taking care of the beginning, so as to make the center of the article stand out clearly. You see, in the above example, the little author used the way of echoing from beginning to end, and highlighted the theme of the article with beautiful poetic language-the happiest time in an ideal life is the flower season of dreams.
(1) has a kind of brilliance that hangs over the spiritual home of the Chinese nation; There is a flame that dances on the Olympic Mountain of the national soul; There is a kind of flame that warms the distant feelings of civilization, and that is friendliness! (End) We can't lose confidence in fighting ugliness because of repeated injuries, because we need to protect our spiritual fire-friendliness! (Selected from the full text of "The Fire of the Guardian Spirit" in Henan senior high school entrance examination) Tips: This is the beginning and end of an argumentative paper in the examination room. Compared with the above example, this example is concise and lively. The argument is put forward at the beginning, the question enters quickly, and it is repeated at the end, which echoes the beginning and strengthens the strength of the argument. Secret 2: Speak from the heart, call for action, bring love to others, to children who are out of school, to lonely old people … to everyone around you.
When you give your love to others, you also get great happiness. I believe that as long as everyone gives a love, the world will become a beautiful world.
2 1 century, we are the spring of the motherland, we are not parents, enthusiasm is our character. We don't need to abide by those rules and regulations, break the old rules and regulations, let the passion in our hearts burn more fiercely, string our laughter and love together, and let the whole world be shrouded in love. Laugh as much as you want, cry hysterically if you want, don't suppress yourself, don't let that old concept bind you, don't change yourself casually, please remember my famous saying: "I am me, give me a little sunshine, and it will be so brilliant."
(Selected from the full text of "Give a Little Sunshine So Brilliant" in the senior high school entrance examination in Fujian Province) Skills: The composition in the examination room pays attention to sincere feelings, and it is necessary to write your own call for truth, goodness and beauty, and lash out at the false, evil and ugly. This kind of emotion is not limited to oneself, but also can be a sincere call at the end of the article, calling on everyone to pursue truth, goodness and beauty together and lash out at the false, evil and ugly together.
The above little author sincerely calls, and every word is heartfelt, which shows his yearning for a better future. In the second paragraph, the little author spoke enthusiastically, with full personality and undisguised expression. He issued a sincere call to all his peers, effectively highlighting the theme and giving readers a strong spiritual shock.
Tip 3: Ask clever questions and introduce natural colors, natural smells, natural tastes and natural beauty, all of which come from nature. Nature is great.
It's amazing. It is so close to life, so tight.
Tasting nature is not the same as tasting life. Tips: A good article, carefully chosen, has endless implications, should be philosophical and enlightening. Just like enjoying a beautiful piece of music, although the music is over, the lingering sound leaves endless charm.
You see, in the above paragraph, the author skillfully asks questions at the end, which makes readers think and deepens the meaning of the article. It embodies the profundity and uniqueness of the author's thinking.
Different words have different influences, different angles have different horizons, different ha ha mirrors have different images, different moods have different actions, different flowers have different scents and shapes, and different evaluations make children have different fates. Why do you want to let your narrow perspective unfairly evaluate and hurt a person, why do you want to put out the candlelight in the wind, and why do you want all children to become a model without personality carved in a mold? (Selected from the full text of "Me in the Haha Mirror" in the senior high school entrance examination in Hubei Province) Tips: At the end of this paragraph, I expressed my views on the teacher's comments. First of all, I explained in the form of parallelism that every student has his own personality, and the teacher doesn't have to erase the students' personality. Finally, it ends with a question, which inspires people's thinking and deepens the connotation of the article.
Tip 4: quote a beautiful sentence, colorful "wild fragrance is rich, beautiful wood is beautiful, wind and frost are noble and pure, and the truth comes out." In the past 15 years, life taught me to give up! For my ideal, for more people to learn, I must give up! Thinking of this, I remembered a famous saying: "There are many books around me. As long as I find them, I will definitely learn a lot ..." (selected from the full text of Shaanxi senior high school entrance examination "Reading People Around Me") Tomorrow Song said: "Tomorrow is tomorrow, and there will be many tomorrow. I waited for tomorrow, and everything was in vain. Zola said: "Life is only two and a half minutes, one minute is a smile, one minute is a sigh, one minute is love ..." In my opinion, when I was intoxicated with gfd, who praised my mother, that minute of smile was not forced. After that minute of sigh, it is no longer a sigh, but a transfer of love. My mother conveyed her love for life. I'm so forgetful ... (selected from the full text of Intoxication, the senior high school entrance examination in Jilin Province) Skill: There are many famous sayings in ancient and modern China and abroad. At the end of the composition, if you can quote them skillfully, it will definitely add a lot of color to the article.
Here are a few examples, quoting poems and famous sayings respectively, which not only increases literary talent, but also deepens the artistic conception of the article. The effect is very good, and students should learn from it. In addition, the quotation range.