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Elegance Skill One: Try to be poetic
A good review is an activator, which can wake up sleeping students; It can make confidence and ambition bloom as brightly as cherry blossoms; It can make people whose hearts are like a dry well and can't stimulate any waves, and the fountain of the soul gushes and becomes a vast sea. A bad comment is a kind of refrigerant and a dose of paralyzing medicine, which can make the ignited fire fall into icehouse to taste the biting of ice and sing with the Millennium ice: "Cold, cold, cold ..."; It can turn the heart river like the flowing water of the Yangtze River into a black dead pool. Even if Mount Tai is put into use, there may not be a ripple.
The author uses various figures of speech to give full play to the positive role of poetic image appreciation education in the process of students' growth.
elegant skill 2: use famous sayings skillfully
friends, life is colorful. Perhaps "it's raining hard" will make you feel extremely sad, and "a thousand miles of bright moon" will make you feel relaxed and happy, but only "don't rejoice in things, don't grieve for yourself" is the true meaning of life. With the ambition of "once climbing to the top of the peek, one would see, the other mountains all appear dwarfs under the sky.", it will definitely be "and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea".
The article describes how to deal with setbacks and pains, depression and hesitation in life. At the end, the famous sentences of Fan Zhongyan, Du Fu and Li Bai are used to encourage readers, which are the finishing touch, full of philosophy and endless aftertaste.
elegant skill 3: philosophical sublimation
once frustrated, you will have a deeper understanding of life; After suffering, you will understand the meaning of success; Once you fail, you will also cherish the meaning of happiness a hundred times.
With concise and philosophical language, this paper expounds the views and understanding of happiness, which gives people enlightenment.
elegant skill 4: make good use of rhetoric
There is an endless abyss in front of you, and you are fearless in your heart, a contempt for the rugged rocks, an aversion to darkness and a desire for the sublimation of life. A heart full of strength turns into a fast pace; You fall, you fly, you shed tears, and that rumbling sound is your cry! In the face of you, someone started to write down the praise of "Flying down three thousands of feet, suspecting that the Milky Way has set for nine days".
Here, the author freely and flexibly uses personification, metaphor, parallelism, quotation and other figures of speech to portray Waterfall as a tenacious warrior, which makes people feel the charm of language.
elegant skill 5: use more imagination
"1" is an Optimus Prime, integrity and indomitable backbone. So we have the awe-inspiring righteousness of "who has never died in life since ancient times, leaving the heart of Dan to shine on the history"; With the heroic courage of "I laugh at the sky from the horizontal knife, and stay in the two Kunlun mountains"; .....
"2" is a beautiful swan with impeccable beauty. Thus, we have a little rendering of "an apricot coming out of the wall"; With the "know it, know it, it should be green, fat, red and thin" begonia after the rain ... < P > "3" is an ear, it is listening. Listening to infinite sadness, listening to sad talk. So we have the sadness and helplessness of "looking for it, being cold and clear, miserable and miserable"; .....
The author's novel and romantic imagination makes people applaud. A few seemingly ordinary numbers seem to be spiritual and full of poetry in the author's pen.
Elegant Skill 6: Use lyricism
The fallen leaves on the tree of life slowly fall, only to find that time has put 14 rings on it inadvertently; Wide is my joy; Narrow is my sadness. Every ring tells me that I am one year older.
There is a faint sadness between the lines, which is the confusion in my growing season? Or nostalgia for the lost time? The author expressed his feelings in prose-like language, which was really touching to read.
elegant skill 7: borrowing the text skillfully
Chinese is the majestic Kunlun Mountain, the dew on the grass that refuses to drip for a long time, and the peony in the old capital of the ancient city; Language is the silent Leng Yue, the quiet lotus pond, the fishing boat in the monstrous white waves outside Qinhuangdao, the egrets in the blue sky, the ten thousand white sails on the side of the sunken boat, and the bright future of the mountain after heavy water recovery. After diving into the nature full of snow and pear blossoms, let's take the gondola to find its answer in life. ("Leng Xiang flies to Chinese")
It is a refreshing thing for people, things and scenery in the text to enter the composition. With the help of the wings of association and imagination, the author integrates the personnel scenes from Mao Zedong's poems, Whitman's Leaves of Grass, Liu Yong's Yulinling, Zhu Ziqing's Moonlight on the Lotus Pond, Du Fu's poems and Zhu Ziqing's Venice into his composition, which seems to be harmonious. Of course, the author doesn't quote directly, but through artistic treatment, which is just like the elegant words used in ancient times. The original text or the original poem is condensed into a language or phrase, so that readers can know at a glance which text people and things are used, thus making the article elegant and bookish, elegant and generous.
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elegant skills are used to conceive and write articles, which are actually very easy to operate. Practical exercise of elegant skills: Search.
Using relevant skills to plan and structure the whole article can be divided into three steps: material preparation, outline conception and writing.
Material preparation:
1. After seeing the topic, try your best to search for cultural materials related to the topic in your mind.
Please think: What famous poems about "seeking" can you think of? Can you think of any poets who have written about "seeking" in their works?
2. If you think of many poems or writers about "seeking", think again, can you make a sequence in chronological order?
3. after the time sequence comes out, can you get the same theme according to different "searches"?
4. extract the sentences with strong generality as "inscriptions" or as the introduction of the first part, so as to construct a rich cultural atmosphere. (Example 2 is the beginning of a famous sentence in Su Dongpo's Niannujiao)
5. In chronological order, use the poet's "seeking" sentence as the beginning of each section (at least three sections), and then express your evaluation of the poet's "seeking". When expressing, you should consider using even sentences, parallel sentences and scattered sentences, and use some that are quaint and still have modern vitality. (the full text is constructed in chronological order, and the article has a sense of historical depth. )
6. At the end of the article, use the compressed parallelism to sum up lyrically (article 2 uses this method). Be sure to express your views on "seeking" and your attitude towards "seeking" by poets (poets).
an example of an outline:
qu yuan's "seeking": the road is long, but it's Xiu Yuan, so I will go up and down to seek for the future of Chu.
Li He's "seeking": searching for chapters and extracting sentences, old carving insects, xiao yue hanging a jade bow as a curtain. -Seeking the poet's own ideal.
Li Qingzhao's "seeking": searching, cold and clear, sad and miserable. -Looking for a way out of personal life.
Xin Qiji's "search": the crowd searched for her for thousands of Baidu, and suddenly looking back, the man was in the dim light. -Looking for like-minded people.
Mao Zedong's "seeking": Who is in charge of ups and downs in the vast land? -Ask who will control the future of the country.
main idea: no matter where you are, everyone has his own pursuit. The pursuit of realm depends on a person's thoughts, times and life experiences. What kind of pursuit should we make today and what kind of life path should we look for?
The method is not complicated, and the training is easy to get in place. As long as teachers give more guidance at ordinary times, students' writing language can reach the elegant beauty of being highly refined, elegant and unique, antique and memorable.