-the integrated teaching design of "three poems" in grade nine.
Teaching objectives
1. Experience the author's emotions through various forms of reading aloud.
2. Sort out the emotional trajectories of the three authors and compare their writing similarities and differences.
3. Read the poet, read yourself and learn a positive attitude towards life from poetry.
teaching process
First, say demotion and read epigrams.
Demotion means that ancient officials were demoted or exiled to places far away from the capital. In the long feudal society of China, countless officials were relegated and exiled. Yu wrote in his "Cultural Journey" that there is an extremely dazzling history in the history of China that can be called "the culture of demoting officials". Demoted officials fell out of favor, and lonely tragic consciousness climbed into my heart. In this way, there are articles and poems. Let's read the poems related to relegation first.
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One is to move guests to Changsha, and the other is to see West Chang 'an.
The Jade Emperor blows the Yellow Crane Tower, and plum blossoms fall into the river in May.
Heartbroken homesickness, more birds cry in red hibiscus flowers.
Where is the hometown in the northwest? See the moon in the southeast.
There is no place to be sad, and it depends on the quiet flowers to comfort the guests.
These relegated poems were written by different writers in different times, but they have a common feeling-the sadness of relegation. Try to send this sad experience back between the lines of the poem and read it again.
Similarly, three poets wrote:
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One day, I will ride the wind and waves, sail straight up and cross the deep sea.
Qian Fan is on the side of the sunken ship, and Wan Muchun is in front of the sick tree.
People have joys and sorrows, and the moon has ups and downs. This matter is old and difficult.
I hope people will live long and be beautiful in Wan Li.
These sentences come from three poems we are going to learn today. These three poems were all written during the poet's demotion. Please put yourself in the situation of poetry and speak and read poetry in your own language.
Ex.: One day, I can ride the long wind to break the vast waves and sail the vast sea!
Guiding students to speak and read emotionally, talking with teachers and students, and explaining in a language familiar to students after speaking and reading will arouse students' interest, deepen their impressions and understand emotions.
Presupposition: "One day, I will ride the wind and waves, sail and sail across the deep sea", in the words of students: I am confident, I am successful!
"Qian Fan is on the side of the sunken ship, and Wan Muchun is in front of the sick tree", which means I can work hard and I can do it!
"People have joys and sorrows, and the moon has ups and downs. This matter has existed since ancient times and is difficult to achieve. " In network language, it's no big deal how beautiful the world is.
Read these poems again, boys and girls read them again, boys read the first sentence, girls read them again, and then continue reading.
Second, manage the trajectory and realize emotion.
1. The students read boldly, confidently and optimistically. When they were demoted, they had the same depression, sadness and sadness as other demoted officials. So how do they become optimistic and heroic through sadness? Please understand the poem independently with the text notes, and then sort out the emotional changes of the three poets, and try to express and compare them with line drawing. What are the similarities between the three poems in expressing emotions?
Presupposition: The emotions in the three poems have experienced from low to high, from low to high, from melancholy to broad-minded optimism.
Guide the students to read three poems aloud, and indicate the ups and downs of emotions with gestures while reading. Free reading. Show and read.
2. Understand the background.
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Difficult to go: In 742 AD (the first year of Tianbao), Li Bai was called to Beijing as an academician. He is just a clever man who wants to do great things like Guan Zhong, Sean and Zhuge Liang. However, after entering Beijing, he did not get the reuse of Tang Xuanzong. He was only asked to write some poems for entertainment while singing and dancing, and was slandered by the dignitaries. Two years later, he was "repaid" and expelled from Chang' an in disguise. Li Bai was forced to leave Beijing, and all his friends came to see him off. There was no hope for the official position, and he felt the hardship of finding a job and wrote this article "Difficult to Go" with indignation.
"Yangzhou's First Meeting to Enjoy Lotte": During Yongzhenyuan's reign (805), Liu Yuxi participated in the reform of Wang Group, and after his failure, he was demoted as an official for more than 20 years. In the second year of Tang Jingzong Baoli (826), Liu Yuxi met Bai Juyi in Yangzhou. At the banquet, Bai Juyi wrote "Give Liu 28 Drunk", expressing deep sympathy for Liu Yuxi's repeated relegation and incompetence. Liu Yuxi thanked him for this poem.
Water Tune: Written in the 9th year of Xining, Song Shenzong (1076), Su Shi went around as an official for freedom because of his different political views from Wang Anshi, a political reformer in power. He once asked to be transferred to a place near Su Zhe to be an official, so that his brothers could get together more. After arriving in Michigan, this wish still cannot be realized. This Mid-Autumn Festival, the poet faced the bright moon, and his heart surged, so he wrote this famous article with a brush.
Contrast: Which poet's relegation and sadness are the most touching? How does the poet express his sadness?
Guide students to understand poetry deeply.
Follow-up: Which two poets have similar descriptions of sadness?
Default: Li Bai highlights his inner sadness with diversified contrast. The scene of "pure wine price, a pot of gold cups with 10,000 coppers, and a jade plate with a shame of 10,000 yuan" is in great contrast with the behavior of "I throw a stick cup, but I can't eat or drink", which greatly exaggerates the splendor and richness of the banquet to highlight the poet's anguish;
The contrast between "drawn sword" and "vacancy", when the ancients mentioned "sword", they often associated with ambition. "So he dusted off the iron coat, shone like snow, and waved his dagger from the jade handle in a dance of stars and steel" in the Old General by Wang Wei in the Tang Dynasty, depicting the patriotic enthusiasm of veterans who voluntarily killed the enemy and served the country; Hu Lingzhu's "Youth Journey" depicts the heroic image of a teenager and the lofty sentiments of recovering lost land and defending the country. Xin Qiji, a poet in the Southern Song Dynasty, wrote "Looking at the clouds in the northwest, leaning on Wan Li, needing a long sword" to express his ambition to recover the lost land in the north. Li Bai's "sword drawing" means to serve the country. Compared with "at a loss", it highlights his sadness and depression.
"Want to cross" and "want to climb" are in contrast to "frozen river" and "snow is falling all over the mountain", and subjective wishes are in contrast to objective obstacles.
Liu Yuxi used time and space prepositions and allusions to express his inner sadness. "Bashan Chushui" and "Twenty-three Years" come from the beginning of the sentence, highlighting the remoteness of the relegated land and the long time of relegation. The objective statement reveals infinite bitterness and sadness; Clever use of allusions to express feelings and moods that have been degraded for a long time is sad.
Su Shi used psychological contradiction and behavior description to describe depression and sadness. "I want to go home by the wind" can be seen in the real world, it is difficult to send away and I am eager to get rid of it. "I'm afraid of beautiful buildings, and it's too cold up there." "What is it like?" It expresses the psychology of hesitation, contradiction and pain. Dancing to Find the Shadow, writing the lonely reality. "There should be no hate. Why do you want to leave each other? " Depression turned into doubt and poured out.
Summary: Both Li Bai and Liu Yuxi use allusions to express their distress and sadness, while both Li Bai and Su Shi use psychology and behavior to express them.
Third, read poetry and get to know poets.
Read the poem again. Boys and girls read separately, girls read poorly, and boys have high confidence in reading poets.
Poetry is personality, and behind every poem stands a vivid life. The same heroic optimism, different mental journey; The same relegation and sadness are written in different ways. From the emotional expressions of the three poets from sadness to heroism, can you read their different personality characteristics?
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I can read their personality characteristics from Li Bai/Liu Yuxi/Su Shi's description of ….
From Su Shi's struggle against the contradiction between heaven and earth to his understanding of "this matter is too old to be complete", we can see that he is good at self-persuasion, reconciliation with life and has a harmonious, understanding and detached attitude towards life.
Presupposition: Li Bai compares the style of writing to cause emotional ups and downs, showing emotional ups and downs. From one extreme to the other, we can understand the romantic, free and easy, super confident personality characteristics.
Liu Yuxi's emotions are suppressed first and then promoted. After stating the bitterness and resentment of relegation, he did not have any sad words or decadent words. He described himself as a "sunken ship" and a "sick tree", and wrote that Qian Fan is competitive, and everything is emerging, which contains the spirit of rejuvenating and moving forward. In Depression and Boldness, we can read Liu Yuxi's open-minded, optimistic, firm and stubborn character.
Summary: Among the ancient poets in China, two people were appraised as "immortals", one was Li Bai and the other was Su Shi. Ye Jiaying thinks that the difference between them is that Li Bai is a "fairy and a man", that is, he was born a genius without any restrictions and unfortunately fell into the world. Su Shi is an immortal. No matter in any setbacks and hardships, he can see the world from another angle and get rid of suffering. Liu Yuxi is called a "poet". He went through all the hardships, but he didn't change his original intention and insisted on himself. The three poets also experienced relegation and sadness, but they interpreted different optimism and heroism for us.
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Li Bai is optimistic because _ _ _ _
Rachel is optimistic because _ _ _ _
Su Shi is optimistic because _ _ _ _ _
Default value:
Li Bai is optimistic because of self-confidence, Liu Yuxi is optimistic because of persistence, and Su Shi is optimistic because of mastery.
Fourth, the soul of understanding poetry, the heart of learning poetry
1. There is a column called "Reading Poems for You", and today we will hold an issue. Please choose a poem that you think is the best and favorite, and give it to your friends, relatives or other people you think need by recitation, so that she/he can draw energy from the poem.
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I want to give _ _ _ _ to _ _ _ and hope he/she _ _ _.
Guide students to speak and recite, and deeply grasp the connotation of poetry.
2. Read and complete the course.
Today we learned these three poems and met three poets. Whether they are poets, poets, or Su Xian, who is known as a "genius literary master", their lives have experienced ups and downs and sadness, not to mention ordinary people like us. No one's life is smooth sailing, and ups and downs are inevitable. When you encounter bumps and difficulties, you should keep a ray of sunshine in your heart. This sunshine is Li Bai's confidence, and Liu Yuxi's insistence is Su Shi's understanding. If the heart is sunny, why not! Approaching the heart of poetry and understanding the soul of poetry, let's end this lesson in reading.
(The screen shows that boys and girls read aphorisms repeatedly.)
People have joys and sorrows, and the moon has ups and downs. This matter is old and difficult.
Qian Fan is on the side of the sunken ship, and Wan Muchun is in front of the sick tree.
One day, I will ride the wind and waves, sail straight up and cross the deep sea.