I copied a super invincible modern poem, and the teacher asked me to change it, but I won't change it. Can you help me change it? There is another land.

There is another land

always peaceful and quiet

There is another life

always unyielding and persistent

Even in the face of threats

even if we go into darkness, we still

won't mind the difficulties of life

won't mind the helplessness of life

because

there is a path

people on the road.